Unit+3+The+world+online+Integrated+skills高中英语译林版(2020)必修第三册

英语应用文写作英语应用文日记演讲稿通知推荐信感谢信求职信慰问信求助信投诉信建议信道歉信邀请信誊写查单词拼写、时态主谓一致等①用过渡词(句)连接句子和段落②首尾段审体裁、人称、时态抓住要点扩展要点应用文写作Aletterofadvice高考应用文写作之建议信

写作步骤:1.审怎么审题？

建议信特点及写作步骤题型特点：建议信是针对某事或某个问题向收信人提出建议和忠告的信件，建议信通常简明扼要，目的明确，具有合理性和说服性。写作思路与框架：“三段式”第一段：写信背景+写信目的第二段：提出具体建议及理由第三段：表达本人愿望①Thinking(审题）②Outlining（列提纲,写要点）③Expanding（扩词成句）④Linking（连句成篇）⑤Polishing（润色定稿）HowtoWriteacomposition假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter告诉你，他目前玩手机上瘾，成了“手机控”，影响了学习和生活，他发邮件向你求助。请你用英文回复邮件，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.具体建议；3.美好祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Thinking(审题）Step1Para.1开头Para.2正文Para.3结尾Outlining（列出提纲，写要点）Step2要点二要点一表示理解并给予安慰+写信目的建议及原因表达愿望

正文：建议及原因Outlining（列出提纲，写要点）Step22.培养专注的习惯;Cultivateahabitofconcentration;1.认真规划自己的时间；Planyourtimecarefully;

3.探索其他的活动，例如跑步、阅读等。Exploreotheractivities,suchasrunningandreading.

知道你目前对手机上瘾，这影响了你的学习和生活，我写信是为了提供一些实用的建议来帮助你克服这个挑战。Knowingthatyouareaddictedtosmartphones/youareasmartphoneaddict,whichisimpactingyourstudiesanddailylife,I’mwritingtooffersomepracticalsuggestionstohelpyouovercomethischallenge.Para1（Beginning）Expanding(扩词成句）Step31.Firstly,Ithinkyoushouldplanyourtimecarefully.2.Secondly,youneedtocultivateahabitofconcentration.3.Thirdly/Lastbutnotleast,youcanexploreotheractivities,suchasrunningandsinging.Para2：建议及原因Expanding(扩词成句）Step3

Para.3（Ending）Expanding(扩词成句）Step3Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardingtoyourreply.首先，……Tobeginwith,…Firstly…其次，……Secondly/ThirdlyWhat’smore,…Inaddition,…最后，……Finally/Lastbutnotleast,…Linking(连句成篇）Step4添加合适的过渡词：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter告诉你，他目前玩手机上瘾，成了“手机控”，影响了学习和生活，他发邮件向你求助。请你用英文回复邮件，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.具体建议；3.美好祝愿。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Thinking(审题）Step1DearPeter,Knowingthat

,I’m

writing

to

offersomepracticalsuggestionstohelpyouovercomethischallenge.Firstly,Ithinkyoushould

（建议1）

.（建议1相关的做法及原因）Secondly,youneed

（建议2）

.（建议2相关的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneed

to

（建议3）

.（建议3相关的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHuaDearPeter,

Firstly,

Ithinkyoushouldplanyourtimecarefully.Itwillbeagoodchoicetomakealistofallthehomeworkyouhavetodo.Thiswilltellyouhowmuchfreetimeyoucanmakegooduseofyoursmartphone.Secondly,

youneedtocultivateahabitofconcentration.Thirdly/Lastbutnotleast,youcanexploreotheractivities,suchasrunningandreading.Itcannotonlydistractyoufromyoursmartphonebutalsoenrichyourlifeandexpandyourhorizon.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHuaPolishing(润色定稿）Step5

Knowingthatyouareaddictedtosmartphones/youareasmartphoneaddict,whichisimpactingyourstudiesanddailylife,I’mwritingtooffersomepracticalsuggestionstohelpyouovercomethischallenge.假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Simon写信告诉你他沉迷于打篮球，每天花很多时间打球，结果家庭作业不能准时上交。父母和老师很不满，要他放弃这个爱好，他很生气。根据以下提示，请你就Simon的问题给他提一些有用的建议。1.认真计划好自己的时间；2.不要放弃自己的爱好，也不要忘记学习；3.保持学习和爱好之间的平衡。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Thinking(审题）Step1DearSimon,Knowingthat

,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you’dbetter

（建议1）

.（建议1相关的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

（建议2）

.（建议2相关的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

（建议3）

.（建议3相关的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHuaDearSimon,

Firstly,Ithinkyoushouldplanyourtimecarefully.Itwillbeagoodchoicetomakealistofallthehomeworkyouhavetodo.Thiswilltellyouhowmuchfreetimeyoucanhavetoplaybasketball.Secondly,don’tgiveupyourhobbiesanddonotforgetaboutyourstudy,either.Thirdly/Lastbutnotleast,

youshouldkeepabalancebetweenyourstudyandhobbies.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHuaPolishing(润色定稿）Step5Thankyouforyourletter.Yousayyouspendmuchtimeplayingbasketball,soyoudon’thaveenoughtimetodoyourhomework.Iamwritingtogivesomeadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack来信向你求助，说进入高中后因为考试压力大。晚上常要难以入睡或半夜易醒，睡眼问题对健康和学习产生了不良影响。请你用英语给他写一封回信，内容包括：1.表示理解和安慰；2.提出至少2条建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJack,Knowingthat

,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you’dbetter

（建议1）

.（建议1相关的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

（建议2）

.（建议2相关的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

（建议3）

.（建议3相关的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHuaDearJack,Knowingthatyouarehavingtroublegettingagoodnight’ssleepasaresultofstressfromexams,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you'dbetterhaveabalancedlifestylewiththerightattitude.Gotobedandwakearoundthesametimeeachdayandavoiddrinksthatmaykeepyoufromsleeping,suchascoffeeandtea.Secondly,clearyourheadofstressandworryfromyourdaybeforebedtime.Lastbutnottheleast,an

examisjustawaytofindtheweaknessesinyourlearningprocess.Therefore,youdon'thavetoworrytoomuchabouttheresults.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHua

假如你是李华，你的网友英国交换生Lily正在中国学习汉语。她发邮件向你诉说了她的困扰：不适应新的学习环境，很孤独。请给她回复邮件，内容包括：表示理解给予安慰；2.提出建议并给出理由注意：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯1、交换生anexchangestudent;2、做某事很困难：havetroubledoingsth./haveproblemsdoingsth;3、适应新的学习环境：adapttothenewlearningenvironment;4、很孤独：Youfeellonely.（Youarealone你很孤单）DearLily,Knowingthat

,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you’dbetter

（建议1）

.（建议1相关的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

（建议2）

.（建议2相关的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

（建议3）

.（建议3相关的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHuaDearLily,

Knowingthatyouhavetroubleadaptingtothenewlearningenvironment,Iamwritingtogiveyousomeadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,youshouldplanyourtime/takeadvantageof/makethemostofyourtimesothat

youwilladapttothenewlearningenvironmenteasily.Itwillbeagoodchoicetomakealistofallthehomeworkyouhavetodo.Afterquicklyfinishingyourhomework,youwillhavetimetodowhatyouwanttodo.Secondly,youneedtomakesomefriends,withwhomyoucanshareyourfeelings.Don’tbeafraidtotalktoothers.Theyarefriendlyandwillingtohelpyou.What’smore,youaresupposedtouseadictionarythatcanhelpyouunderstandsomeunfamiliarwords.Lastbutnotleast,askyourteachersandclassmatesforhelp,goouttovisitsomeplacesandenjoyChinesefood,whichwillhelpmesuittothenewenvironmentquickly.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua假如你是李华，你的英国朋友San发来Email说，考试临近时，他总会感到焦虑，请你给他回复，内容主要包括：1.向Sam表示问候和安慰。2.提出建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearSan,Knowingthat

,I’m

writing

to

give

yousome

advice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,you’dbetter

（建议1）

.（建议1相关的做法及原因）Secondly,youshould

（建议2）

.（建议2相关的做法及原因）Lastbutnottheleast,youneedto

（建议3）

.（建议3相关的做法及原因）Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,LiHua28DearSan,Knowingthatyoufeelanxiousbeforeexams,I’mwritingtogiveyousomeadvice.Herearesomesuggestionsthatmaybehelpful.Firstly,youshouldplanyourtime.Onlyinthiswaycanyouarrangetimeefficientlyandknowhowlongasinglereviewingtaskwilltake.Ifyoucanreviewalltheknowledge,youwon’tbesoconcerned.Secondly,youneedtokeepapositiveattitude.Thatistosay,youneedtohaveconfidenceinyourselfandlookateverythingpositively.Thirdly,itisadvisableforyoutolistentomusic,takeexerciseandcommunicatewithyourfriends,whichhelpsyoutogetridofpressure.Inaddition,clearyourheadofstressandworryfromyourdaybeforebedtime.Lastbutnotleast,anexamisjustawaytofindtheweaknessesinyourlearningprocess.Therefore,youdon'thavetoworrytoomuchabouttheresults.Ihopemyadvicewillbeofsomevaluetoyou.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua读后续写好难不想写看不懂不会写无从下手看到读后续写的你“两个读，一个写”一读前文理情节二读段首续发展三写后文重表达“读”什么？(5W1H)When

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