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HomeworkReviewwhat’sbeenlearntinclass.ContinuewritingthestoryofMaryandherparentscaughtinflood.(atleast150words)pleasehandinyourworkbeforethefirsteveningstudyonWednesday.StoryPlotWhyWhatHowWhoWhen&WhereSettingCharactersReadingMaryandherparentsOnarainyday,intheirhouseTrappedintheirhousebyastorm?Thecitytheylivedinwasflooded.TheplotlineMaryandherparentsweretrappedathomebyastorm.Maryandherparentshadnoideawhattodo.Marywantedtoleavebutherparentsthoughtitwasdangerous.
?●Learningabout
thelanguageDialogues“Mum,Dad,”saidMarysuddenly,“Ithinkweshouldleavehererightaway!”“No,”saidDad.“It’stoolate!Theradiosaysthecityhasalreadybeenflooded.”“Wecandriveourcarthroughthefloodwater!Let’sjustleave!I’mreallyscared!”criedMary.“Wecan’tdothat,honey,”explainedMum,“otherwisethemovingwatercouldwashthecaraway.”“Don’topenthedoor!”
shoutedMumandDadatthesametime.“Thewatermayfloodin!”“Mary,don’tworry.Everything’sgoingtobeOK,”shesaidsoftly,tryingherbesttocomfortMary.Hervoicewascalm,butMarycouldtellshewasworriedtoo.Morespecificwordstoreplacesaycry,explain,shout,scream,yell,roar,whisper,add,continue,remark,repeat,complain,warn,reply,apologize,comfort,beg,refuse,answer,cheer…DescriptionsofscenesIthadbeenrainingnon-stopforthreedays.Thewindroaredandtherainbeatontheroofandwindows.Thesuddensilenceinthehouseseemedtomakethewindandrainmorefrighteningoutside.ThefunctionsofscenedescriptionsSpecifythesettingCreatetensionMovetheplotforwardDescriptionsofactionsMarywaslookingthroughthewindowsattheendlessrainoutside.Marywalkedtothedoor.Shewascurioustoseehowmuchwatertherewasoutside.Dadwaslisteningtoaweatherreportontheradio,whileMumwasputtingtheirimportantdocumentsanddisastersuppliesintoabag.Dadmovedthedinnertableagainstthedoor,incasethefloodwaterforcedthedooropen.MumwavedtoMarytositonthesofa.Withoutsayingasingleword,Dadwalkedtothesofa,satdownandhuggedhiswifeanddaughter.TipsondescribingactionsUsespecificverbs.Useverbchainstoshowaseriesofactions.NowcontinueyourstoryaboutMary'sfamilycaughtinaflood.Caughtinaflood(PartII)Afterabriefdiscussion,MumandDaddecidedtheyshouldstayinthehouse.
Theythoughtitwouldbereallydangeroustotrytowalkthroughthewatertogettohigherground.“Mary,we’llhavetogoupstairsandwaitthere,”saidMum.“OK,Mum.Ifthat’swhatyouthinkisbest,”Maryreplieduncertainly.Sotheywentupstairsandwaited.Downstairs,waterfloodingintothelivingroomandkitchen.Allthreeofthemwerenervous,butatleasttheyhaddisastersupplies,includingfoodanddrinkingwater.SampleFinally,therainstopped,butMaryandherfamilycouldnotleavewhilethehousewasstillflooded.Theylistenedtotheradioandlearntthatrescueworkersinboatswerecomingtorescuepeoplewhoweretrappedintheirhomes.Theywaitedforaboattoarriveattheirhouse.Theirhomehadbeenbadlydamaged,buttheywereallhappytobealive.SamplePracticeContinuewritingonpage53
(同步导练).(atleast150words)三、写作训练阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。EveryonelikesthebeautifulCinderella,butIliketheuglystepsister继姐.Thesidewalk人行道wasfilledwithshoppers购物的人asmymotherandIhurried匆忙tothedepartmentstore商店.Iraised抬起myneck脖子foralookattheholidaywindowdisplay陈列,butattheageofsixIwastoosmalltoseearoundthegrown-upswiththeirwintercoatsandpackages包.Whenatlastwereachedthestore,Istoodwithmyeyeswidened大.“Look.Mother,"Ishouted,pressing压myhandsagainsttheglass,“Cinderella.”Beforemyeyeswasthemostbeautifuldoll洋娃娃Ihadeverseen!Sheworeafairy童话princess公主suit套装madeofshiningredsilk.IknewifIlifted掀起herskirtIwouldfindhercrystal水晶shoes.Thetiny小tiara(冠状头饰)fastened固定tohersilky丝滑的goldenhairshone发光.“Ifonlysheweremine,"Idreamed.“We'dhaveteaparties茶话会,sharesecretsanddancewithahandsomeprince王子.”Buttomydisappointment失望,mymotherguided引meawayfromthewindow,explaining解释thatsheandmyfathercouldnotafford支付suchanexpensivedoll.“ButtherewillbeaveryspecialgiftunderthetreeforyouonChristmasmorning,Madge,"shesaid.“Ipromise."LaterthatweekIleaned靠against在Mother'ssewing缝纫machine机,watchingtheneedle针flash闪烁upanddown.“Bet打赌youdon'tknowwhatthisis!"shejoked,holdingup举起thecloth布formetosee.“MyChristmasdoll!”Iyelled喊道.Itwasstillintheearlystages阶段butIcouldmakeout辨认出thehead,neckandbody.“Somuchtomysurprise!"MotherlaughedasIdancedaroundtheroom,alreadypretending假装CinderellaandIwereattheball舞会.Itwouldn'tbelongnow.Myexcitementgrewwitheachpassingday与日俱增.Mothercontinuedtoworkonthedoll,andwheneverIwalkedintotheroomshewouldhide藏itunderapillow枕头.Icouldtell辨别byhersmilethatshewaspleased高兴的withherprogress进步.OnChristmasmormingIjumpedoutofbed,randownthehall大厅andquicklyarrivedatthelivingroom客厅wheretheChristmastreewasplaced.StoryPlotWhyWhatWhoWhen&WhereSettingCharactersMadgeandhermomonachristmasdaytheirhouseMommadeadollforher.MadgelovesabeatifulCinderelladollTheplotlineMadgelovestheCinderelladollonthediaplay,momcan’taffordit.OnChristmasmorning,MadgeexcitedlyrantolivingroomwhereChristmastreeplacedMommakesthedollbyherselfandhidesthedollunderapillowwhenMadgecomestoroom.
?Paragraph1There,underneaththetree,wasabeautifullypackedgiftbox.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2ButIcouldseeMotherwatchingme,withaneagerlookonherface._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________EveryonelikesthebeautifulCinderella,butIliketheuglystepsisterParagraph1There,underneaththetree,wasabeautifullypackedgiftbox.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Insideitwasthe“doll"
Iexpected.Iopenedit,holdingmybreath.However,tomydisappointment,itwastotallydifferentfromtheonewesawatthestore.Shehadasimpleface,andworeaplainskirt.Herblackwoollenhairwaspulledbackinatighttie,withnoshinytiaraatall.ShewasnothinglikeCinderella;shelookedmoreliketheuglystepsister.Paragraph2ButIcouldseeMotherwatchingme,withaneagerlookonherface.
IknewthatMotherworkedhardonmyChristmasdollandshewouldbesadifIdidn'tlikeit.Tryingtohidemydisappointment,Irushedacrosstheroom,yelling,“Iloveher!Iloveher!"ThenIburiedmyfaceinthedoll'sskirt.Istoodthereforalongmomentandheardmymothersighwithrelief.Fortherestoftheday,Imademyselfcarrythathomelydolleverywhere.Ieven“fed”herwithpartofmyChristmasdinner.MothertoldmeatonepointthatshewassogladIlikedher!PracticeBecauseIwasfailinginschoolwhenIcametolivewithKate,she
wasverystrictaboutmy
homework.______________________________________________________________________________________
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