2025届新高考英语冲刺复习 英语读后续写提分技能及典题例析

2025届新高考英语冲刺复习

英语读后续写提分技能及其点题例析人物情感描写高分技巧目录

Canyouwritedowntheexpressionsofemotionsforthemind-map?

happysadafraidnervousangrysurprisedthankfulmovedtiredsatisfiedHowdoyoufeel?Mind-map：Emotions

▲情感形容词的后缀常有：-ed(人，感到...的),-ing(物，令人..的),-ful/-less(人/物,...的)1.happy:happy,delighted,cheerful,excited/exciting,thrilled,shoutwithjoy2.sad:sad,heart-broken,upset,disappointed,depressed/frustrated,sorrowful,desperate,tearsstreamingdownone’scheek(泪流满面)…3.afraid:afraid,scared,frightened,fearful,palmsaresweating(手心出汗)…Mind-map：Emotions4.nervous:nervous,anxious,worried,stressed,stressful(令人有压力的)5.angry:angry,mad,bad-temered,loseone'stemper(发火),burnwithanger(怒火中烧)6.surprised:surprised/surprising,amazed/amazing,astonished/shocked(震惊的)

7.thankful:thankful,grateful,thanksbfor8.moved:moved/moving,touched/touching9.tired:tired,exhausted10.satisfied:satisfied,pleased,content11.relaxed:relaxed,takeiteasy,relieved12.hopeful：hopeful,withhopeinone'seyes,hopeless(无希望的)13.determined:determined,firm,haveawill/haveastrongmind(意志坚定)14.quiet：quiet,silent,calm15.brave:brave,fearless,couragoushopeful型：hopeful,withhopeinone'seyes,hopeless(无希望的)情感描写技巧1.be/feel/become+adj.(系表结构)2.Feeling+adj，主+谓+宾(非谓语短语，作原因/伴随状语)3.adj+adj,主+谓+宾（形容词短语，作原因/伴随状语）4.形容词+ly→副词（修饰动词/形容词/副词/介词短语/句子）5.with+n.（介词短语，作原因/伴随状语）技巧1.be/feel/become+adj.(系表结构)2.听到那个坏消息，她很伤心。He_________________andsweet.wasveryhappy1.他又高兴又甜蜜。

Hearingthebadnews,she

________________.feltverysad3.天黑了，她非常担心她儿子的安全,情不自禁哭了。she______________________aboutherson'ssafetywhenitwasdark,andcouldn'thelpcrying.feltveryworried技巧2.Feeling+adj，主+谓+宾(非谓语短语,作原因/伴随状语)1.他感到很激动，立刻拿出手机，迫不及待地告诉他的朋友这次经历。shewentonherway,_______________,andsoonmetanoldmanontheroad.

feelingupset2.她不开心地继续赶路，不久就在路上遇到一位老人。

_________________,hetookouthisphoneatonce,eagertotellhisfriendstheexperience.FeelingexcitedWangPengsatinhisemptyrestaurant,

_____________________.feelingveryfrustrated/depressed3.王鹏坐在空荡荡的饭店里面，感到非常沮丧。

技巧3.adj,主+谓+宾（形容词短语，作原因/伴随状语）3.难过但不恐惧，他决定要改变这一切。Wefinallyarrivedatourdestination，______________．tiredandhungry2.我们终于到达了目的地，又累又饿.

Heartbrokenbutfearless_________________,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.

1.

吓坏了，埃利和我尝试了所有我们知道的防御熊的行动。Frighted/Terrified_______________________________,hedecidedtoturneverythingaround.技巧4.形容词+ly→副词（修饰动词/形容词/副词/介词短语/句子）1.他高兴地笑了，露出了一排洁白整齐的牙齿。______________,IhadtaughtAnthonytosewwhenhewas13,whenhestillrespectedme.Luckily/Fortunately2.幸运地,在安东尼13岁时我已经教过他缝纫,那时他还在崇拜我.He_____________,revealingarowofwhite

andeventeeth.smiledhappily技巧5.with/in+n.（介词短语）2.“但是我知道他刚才就在那儿。”露茜说，眼里带着泪水。Shelookedatme________________.1.她惊奇地看着我。"ButIknowhewas,"saidLucy,___________inhereyes.withtearsinamazement如insurprise/amazement,withjoy/tears/worry(忧虑)典题分析文本分析part11.Haveyoueverheardanythinginterestingaboutthebankrobber?2.Whatwillyoudoifyoumeetabankrobber?AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.AshewalkedalongParkAvenueneartheFirstNationalBank,heheardthesoundofsomeonetryingtostartacar.Hetriedagainandagainbutcouldn’tgetthecarmoving.Arthurturnedandlookedinsideatthefaceofayoungmanwholookedworried.Arthurstoppedandasked,“Itlookslikeyou’vegotaproblem,”Arthursaid. 01“I’mafraidso.I’minabighurryandIcan’tstartmycar.”“IstheresomethingIcandotohelp?”Arthurasked.Theyoungmanlookedatthetwosuitcasesinthebackseatandthensaid,“Thanks.Ifyou’resureitwouldn’tbetoomuchtrouble,youcouldhelpmegetthesesuitcasesintoataxi.”0203“Notroubleatall.I’dbegladtohelp.”

Theyoungmangotoutandtookoneofthesuitcasesfromthebackseat.Afterplacingitontheground,heturnedtogettheotherone.JustasArthurpickedupthefirstsuitcaseandstartedwalking,heheardthelongloudnoiseofanalarm.Itwasfromthebank.Therehadbeenarobbery(抢劫)!040506ParkAvenuehadbeenquietamomentbefore.Nowtheairwasfilledwiththesoundofthealarmandtheshoutsofpeoplerunningfromalldirections.Carsstoppedandthepassengersjoinedthecrowdinfrontofthebank.Peopleaskedeachother,“Whathappened?”Buteveryonehadadifferentanswer.07Arthur,stillcarryingthesuitcase,turnedtolookatthebankandwalkedrightintotheyoungwomaninfrontofhim.Shelookedatthesuitcaseandthenathim.Arthurwassurprised.“Whyisshelookingatmelikethat?”Hethought.“Thesuitcase!

ShethinksI’mthebankthief!”0809Arthurlookedaroundatthecrowdofpeople.Hebecamefrightened,andwithoutanotherthought,hestartedtorun.10着急介词in+名词indangerinneedintroubleinabighurry单词大师WordMasterjustas单词大师WordMaster正当，好像单词大师WordMaster正当我开始觉得自己永远都好不

了了的时候，我的病开始好转了。JustasIstartedtothinkthatIwasnevergoingtogetwell,theillnessbegantorecede.充满befilledwith单词大师WordMasterTheboy’seyesfilledwithtears.单词大师WordMaster篇章大师PassagePerson

AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.记叙文文体一般过去时时态第三人称人称篇章大师PassagePerson

Nowtheairwasfilledwiththesoundofthealarmandtheshoutsofpeoplerunningfromalldirections.Carsstoppedandthepassengersjoinedthecrowdinfrontofthebank.Peopleaskedeachother,“Whathappened?”Buteveryonehadadifferentanswer.语言描写

：“Whathappened?”

篇章大师PassagePerson环境描写：wasfilledwiththesoundofthealarmandtheshoutsofpeople

Nowtheairwasfilledwiththesoundofthealarmandtheshoutsofpeoplerunningfromalldirections.Carsstoppedandthepassengersjoinedthecrowdinfrontofthebank.Peopleaskedeachother,“Whathappened?”Buteveryonehadadifferentanswer.篇章大师PassagePerson隐含线索：carsstopped,joinedthecrowinfrontofthebank,adifferentanswer

Nowtheairwasfilledwiththesoundofthealarmandtheshoutsofpeoplerunningfromalldirections.Carsstoppedandthepassengersjoinedthecrowdinfrontofthebank.Peopleaskedeachother,“Whathappened?”Buteveryonehadadifferentanswer.篇章大师PassagePerson事件：Arthur的危机是被误会为bankthief

Nowtheairwasfilledwiththesoundofthealarmandtheshoutsofpeoplerunningfromalldirections.Carsstoppedandthepassengersjoinedthecrowdinfrontofthebank.Peopleaskedeachother,“Whathappened?”Buteveryonehadadifferentanswer.一个有趣的并且难忘的经历人与社会阅读小组长（DiscussionLeader)人物分析情节发展主题语境主旨Rereadthestoryandfigureouttheplot.Onhiswaytowork,Arthurhelpedtheyoungmanwhohadgotaproblem.Arthuragreedtohelptheyoungmancarrythesuitcase.Arthurheardthealarm,lookedaroundatthecrowdofpeopleandstartedtorun.frightened续写部分续写部分本文情节线setting环境risingaction发展fallingaction结局climax高潮人物时间地点Arthur在去上班的路上帮助一个年轻人拿箱子

银行发生抢劫，警铃大响Arthur拿着箱子看着周围人群开始奔跑kindnervousterrified本文情节线setting环境risingaction发展fallingaction结局climax高潮人物时间地点Arthur在去上班的路上帮助一个年轻人拿箱子

银行发生抢劫，警铃大响Arthur拿着箱子看着周围人群开始奔跑kindnervousterrifiedresolution解决ending尾声续写部分续写部分篇章概括者SummarizerArthur在上班的路上遇到了一个需要帮助的年轻人。在他帮助这个年轻人拿箱子的时候，突然旁边的银行发出警报声，Arthur看着聚集的人群，拿着箱子就跑。然后？Onthewaytowork,Arthurmetayoungmanwhoneededahand.WhileArthurwascarryingthesuitcasefortheyoungman,suddenly,thelongloudnoiseofanalarmbrokeoutfromthebank.Seeingthecrowdgathering,Arthurwassofrightenedthatheranawaywithoutanotherthought.Then...ArthurArthurturnedandlookedinsideatthefaceofayoungmanwholookedworried.Arthurstoppedandasked,“Itlookslikeyou’vegotaproblem,”Arthursaid.warm-heartedArthur“IstheresomethingIcandotohelp?”Arthurasked.“Notroubleatall.I’dbegladtohelp.”positivewarm-heartedtheyoungmanNeartheFirstNationalBank,heheardthesoundofsomeonetryingtostartacar.Hetriedagainandagainbutcouldn’tgetthecarmoving.beintroubleanxioustheyoungmanTheyoungmanlookedatthetwosuitcasesinthebackseatandthensaid,“Thanks.Ifyou’resureitwouldn’tbetoomuchtrouble,youcouldhelpmegetthesesuitcasesintoataxi.”anxiouspolitethepeopleCarsstoppedandthepassengersjoinedthecrowdinfrontofthebank.Peopleaskedeachother,“Whathappened?”Buteveryonehadadifferentanswer.curiousthepeopleTheyoungwomaninfrontofhim,shelookedatthesuitcaseandthenathim.suspiciousMydad“Don’tbe

late

forsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’t

getlost!”carefulcautious写作构架part2平行性延续性三种叙述模式交叉性浙江省高考真题2020年1月Paragraph2：ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur...Paragraph1：Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”01stoppedataxiandwentinto02realizedthattheyoungmanmightbethebankrobber03continuedrunningfasterParagraph1：Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”PlotDesign04askedthetaxidrivertogotothepolicestationParagraph1Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”However,Arthurcontinuedrunningfasterjustasrealizingtheyoungmanfollowingbehindwastherealbankrobber.Arthurstoppedataxiandwentintoitfleetly.Heaskedthetaxidrivertogotothepolicestationasfastaspossibleandtoldthedriver

whathadhappened.平行叙述01020304Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”However,Arthurcontinuedrunningfasterjustasrealizingtheyoungmanfollowingbehindwastherealbankrobber.Arthurstoppedataxiandwentintoitfleetly.Heaskedthetaxidrivertogotothepolicestationasfastaspossibleandtoldthedriverwhathadhappened.浙江省高考真题2020年1月Paragraph2：ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur...Paragraph1：Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardtheyoungmanshoutingbehind,“Stop,stop!”01rushedoutofthetaxiandrantothepoliceoffice02thepolicegottoknowwhathadhappenedtohim.03Arthursmiledattheyoungmanandpassedhimhissuitcase.Paragraph2：ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur...PlotDesignParagraph2ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthurrushedoutofthetaxiandrantothepoliceofficestraightly.There,thepolicegottoknowwhathadhappenedtohim.

Arthurreturnedtothespot,accompaniedbythepolice.Thepolicefoundtheyoungmanwhowassurroundedbythepeople.Afterhearingtheyoungman’sstates,everyonewasrelievedthattheyoungmenwasnotthebankrobberandtheloudnoiseofthealarm

wasincorrectlymadebythebank’ssystem.Arthursmiledattheyoungmanandpassedhimhissuitcase.延续性叙述010203ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur...rushedoutofthetaxiandrantothepoliceofficestraightly.There,thepolicegottoknowwhathadhappenedtohim.Arthurreturnedtothespot,accompaniedbythepolice.Thepolicefoundtheyoungmanwhowassurroundedbythepeople.延续性叙述0102030405ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthePoliceStationandArthur...rushedoutofthetaxiandrantothepoliceofficestraightly.There,thepolicegottoknowwhathadhappenedtohim.Arthurreturnedtothespot,accompaniedbythepolice.Thepolicefoundtheyoungmanwhowassurroundedbythepeople.Afterhearingtheyoungman’sstates,everyonewasrelievedthattheyoungmenwasnotthebankrobberandtheloudnoiseofthealarm

wasincorrectlymadebythebank’ssystem.Arthursmiledattheyoungmanandpassedhimhissuitcase..润色批改part3词汇润色wentintothetaxifleetly---rolledontoitand

slammedthedoorshut.Inaflurryofactivities,Arthurstoppedataxi,rolled

ontoitandslammedthedoorshut.一般动词细节动词词汇润色

---andsaid:

“Hurryup!

Policestation,

please.”

---stammered,“Please....thepolicestation,...

hurryup!”---utter以口发出声音

一般动词细节动词词汇润色

hecouldhardlyutteracompletesentence,

but

stammered,“Please....thepolicestation,...hurryup!”一般动词细节动词词汇润色

tellthestorytothepoliceofficer

—

narratedthe

wholestorytothepoliceofficer

narratedthewhole

storytothepoliceofficeringreatdetail.

narrate更好的表达了细节表达—Arthur着急把所

有发生的事情讲出来一般动词细节动词词汇润色

---foundtheyoungman---recognizedtheyoungman

---thepolice,Arthurreturnedtothespotwherethe

incidenthappenedandimmediatelyrecognizedthe

youngmanwhohesuspectedwasthebankrobber.一般动词细节动词词汇润色着急(连贯的身体动作)Inaflurryofactivities,Arthurstoppedataxi,

rolledontoitandslammedthedoorshut.情绪状态身体表征词汇润色着急(动作表明着急紧张)

Runninginsidewithoutpausingforbreath,Arthurnarratedthewholestorytothepoliceofficeringreatdetail.......保持了正片续写文章的情绪和节奏。情绪状态身体表征词汇润色形式主语：Itsuddenlydawnedonhimthat强调：Itwasonlyafterthetaxiscreechedforward,leavingtheyoungmanfarbehind,thatArthurcaughthisbreath.状语从句单一状语多样状语词汇润色独立主格：Lipsquiveringandfacemusclestwitching,hecouldhardlyutteracompletesentence,butstammered,…定语从句：

...

recognizedtheyoungman

...

whohesuspectedwasthebankrobber.状语从句单一状语多样状语Paragraph1Ashewasrunning,Arthurheardyoungmanshoutingbehind.【1】However,Arthurignoreditandcontinuedrunningatfullspeed,holdingthesuitcasetightly.【2】Itsuddenlydawnedonhimthattheyoungmanfollowingbehindmightbetherealbankrobber.【3】Inaflurryofactivities,Arthurstoppedataxi,rolledontoitandslammedthedoorshut.【4】Lipsquiveringandfacemusclestwitching,hecouldhardlyutteracompletesentence,butstammered,“Please....thepolicestation,...hurryup!”【5】Itwasonlyafterthetaxiscreechedforward,leavingtheyoungmanfarbehind,thatArthurcaughthisbreathandtoldthedriverwhathadhappenedjustnow.细节动词ignored/continued/holdtightly表明Arthur着急离开，而且有点紧张身体表征holdingthesuitcasetightly描写出Arthur紧张的情绪。多样状语atfullspeed(介词短语.)/

tightly(adv.)However,Arthurignoreditandcontinuedrunningatfullspeed,holdingthesuitcasetightly.Paragraph101细节动词rolledontoit/slammedthedoorshut一系列的动作表明着急紧张身体表征rollontoit描写Arthur很着急多样状语inaflurryofactivities(介词短语)Itsuddenlydawnedonhimthattheyoungmanfollowingbehindmightbetherealbankrobber.Inaflurryofactivities,Arthurstoppedataxi,rolledontoitandslammedthedoorshut.Paragraph102细节动词utterasentence/stammered写出了Arthur着急和紧张害怕的情绪身体表征Lipsquiveringandfacemusclestwitching通过面部的描述，加强他的着急紧张情绪多样状语Lipsquiveringandfacemusclestwitching(独立主格)Lipsquiveringandfacemusclestwitching,hecouldhardlyutteracompletesentence,butstammered,“Please....thepolicestation,...hurryup!”Paragraph104细节动词screechedforward动态动作和文章表达的紧张感一致身体表征caughthisbreath对于上文的紧张和着急的进一步加强多样状语Itwasonlyafter...(强调句)Itwasonlyafterthetaxiscreechedforward,leavingtheyoungmanfarbehind,thatArthurcaughthisbreathandtoldthedriverwhathadhappenedjustnow.Paragraph105Paragraph2ThetaxistoppedinfrontofthepolicestationandArthurjumpedoutofthetaxi.【1】Runninginsidewithoutpausingforbreath,

Arthurnarratedthewholestorytothepoliceofficeringreatdetail.【2】Accompaniedbythepolice,Arthurreturnedtothespotwheretheincidenthappenedandimmediatelyrecognizedtheyoungmanwhohesuspectedwasthebankrobber.【3】Itisnotuntiltheyhearingtheyoungman’sexplantionthateveryoneknewtheyoungmenwasinnocentandthealarminthebankwasactuallyfalselytriggered.【4】Smilingapologeticallyattheyoungman,Arthurpassedhimhissuitcase.细节动词narrated相比

say,tell

等更生动，并且和句尾的介词短语呼应，详细的描述了发生的事情身体表征Runninginsidewithoutpausingforbreath描写出Arthur着急的情绪多样状语ingreatdetail(介词短语)Runninginsidewithoutpausingforbreath,

Arthurnarratedthewholestorytothepoliceofficeringreatdetail.Paragraph201细节动词recognized/suspected表明到了现场对于之前认为这个男人是窃贼的迟疑身体表征immediatelyrecogized副词增强了动词的意义多样状语accompaniedbythepolice(分词短语)Accompaniedbythepolice,Arthurreturnedtothespotwheretheincidenthappenedandimmediatelyrecognizedtheyoungmanwhohesuspectedwasthebankrobber.Paragraph202细节动词smile/pass最后误解解除，Arthur微笑着把手提包还给了年轻人。身体表征smilingapologetical