2021-2022学年高中英语短文续写一练习(含解析)新人教版必修2

短文续写一

1、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进展续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

Weallcouldsaythatwehavebaddaystoendureaswegothroughlife,but

whatdoesittaketohaveareallygoodday?

Somewouldsuggestthatadaywouldbegreatifeverythingtheydidturned

outwell,ortheygotexactlywhattheyneeded.Ontheotherhand,haveyouever

thoughtthatwhatyoumaygivesomeoneelsemaybethebestdayyoueverhadespecially

whenyouputsomeoneelse'swell-beingorhappinessfirstonyourlist?

Thereisspecialwarmthavailabletoyouandthatwarmthcancomefroma

helpinghand,doingasmallfavorforatotalstranger,orevenasmile.

IrecalladayrecentlywhenIhadtogotothehospitalforanappointment

because1wasn,tfeelingwellandmydoctorsentmetoaspecialisttotryand

determinethecause.

AsIdrovetothehospital,Iadmittedlywasfeelinggloomyandcertainly

wasn'tontopofmygame.AsIapproachedthehospital,Ibeganmysearchfora

parkingspol,aspotthatwashardtocomewitheveryoneelsetryingtodothesame

thing.Ifinallyfoundaspotnottoofarfromtheentrancetothehospital.

AsIgotoutandbroughtmychangeoutofmypocket,Inoticedamanlooking

somewhatupsetstandinginfrontofaparkingmetertwocarsaway.Heseemedtobe

searchinghispocketsforwhat1supposedwaschangeforthemeter.

Although,Ireallydidn,tfeelthatgreat,IthoughtthatIshouldatleast

goovertohimandfindoutifIcouldhelphim.AsIapproachedhim,heturnedto

lookatme,feelingatalossnotknowingwhattodo.Iaskedhimifhehadaproblem

Icouldhelpwith,andhesaid,wilhuulhesilalion,thathehadnochangeatall

becauseheleftitinhishouseonlythinkingaboutvisitinghissickwife.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写局部分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Facedwithsuchasituation,Ireachedintomypocket.

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ThefunnythingwasthatIfeltalotbrighter,andasmallsmilecameto

myface.

2、阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进展续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

Haveyoueverhadtoovercomeanextremechallengeinyourlife?

Myteenageyearshadbeeninsane.FromschooIworktoathletics,Ihadalways

beenrunningaround.Everythingwassodifficult.

ThroughoutmyhecticteenageyearsIhavebeenfacedwithmanyextreme

challengesthathaverequiredextremefocusandhardworktoovercome.Ifithadn,t

beenforhardwork,noneofthesechallengesthatIfacedwouldhavebeenconquered.

Twoyearsago,whenIwasafreshmaninhighschool,Idealtwithanextremely

significantinjury.ThistookplaceinmytennistournamentinJanuaty.Intheclimax

ofmymatch,Ijoltedmybacktotheleftandsoonafterfeltasharp,painfulshock

runthroughmyspine.IknewatthatdifficultmomentIseriouslyinjuredmyback.

Iwasrushedoffthecourtandmyparentsmadeanappointmentwithanorthopedist

（矫形外科医生）forthenextmorning.

Iwalkedintotheofficeextremelynervousandsufferingfromexcruciating

pain.MytennisseasonforschoolstartedinthreemonthsandIabsolutelyneeded

tobuildupthestrength.

Afterabouttwentyminutesofwaitingintheoffice,whichfeltlikean

eternity,thedoctorwalkedintoexaminemyX-rays.Withasorrowfulface,thedoctor

lookedintomineandmymother'seyesandsaid,Thereisa50/50chancethatLucas

willbeabletoparticipateinthisyearnstennisseason.LucasbrokehisL5vertebrae

inhislowerback.〃MyheartdroppedandIfeltasadnesscomeoverme.Thedoctor

saidthatIwouldbesittingoutofphysicalaclivilyfortwoandahalftothree

months.

Thosethreemonthswerethelongestthreemonthsofmylife.Iwassoeager

togetbacktopracticesfortheseason.Everyday,Iwouldthinkabouthowitwas

goingtobewhenIwasfullyhealthy.Iaskedmyself,〃AmIgoingtobeoutofshape?

ShouldIevenplaythisyear?Iprobablywon，thaveasuccessfulseason.〃

Fromthatdreadfuldayon,IdecidedthatIwasgoingtoputinthework

tobebackintopformandhaveasuccessfulseason.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写局部分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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AfterIgotthe'allclear"frommyorthopedist1wasgoingtogettowork.

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Myhardworkprovedtobeveryeffective.

3、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进展续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

IamSadie.Iloveoceans,especiallytheonenearmygrandma'shousewith

beautifulshells.Why?That'swhatIamabouttotellyou.

Itallstartedwhenmyparentsdivorcedafewweeksago.Ihadremainedsilent

sincethen.SomymotherdecidedtosendmetoFloridatolivewithmygrandma.

OnthewaytomygrandmaJshouse,mymothersaid,“Sadie,Iknowwearenot

thebestfamilyyoucanhaveandItrulyapologize.Ijustdonotknowhowtobe

amother.Butremember,Sadie,whateverhappened,Idoloveyou.〃Thesewordsmade

mesadder.

Whenwearrived,Grandmatoldmetogoupstairsandunpackmythingswhile

shespoketomymother.WhenIsawablueandgreenpaintedroomwithahugewindow

andacomfortablebed,Ithought,MovingtoFloridamightnotbethatbad.〃I

comfortedmy-selfasIwalkedtowardsthewindow.Iopenedthecurtainsandsaw

sky-bluewavesslowlywashingawaythesandonthebeachandseabirdsflyingin

theclearsky.Theoceanwasonlyafewhundredmetersawayfromhere.

Aftermymotherleft,Grandmasoftlytouchedmyshoulder,“Iwanttotake

youtotheplaceIcalled,theBigBlue).AndIthinkyoumightlikeit・〃(Iguess

youcouldknowwhereitis.)

BeforeIsteppedonthesandIcouldsmelltheocean.Togetherweenjoyed

thesunsetwithawholelotofyellowandorange.Suddenlyshepickedoutthemost

beautifulshellIhadeverseeninmylife.Itwasalmostgold,shininginthesunlight.

Icouldn'tmovemyeyesoffit.

注意：

1.所续写短文的同数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写局部分为两段,每段的开头语已为你好；

4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键短语

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“WanttoknowhowIgetthroughmyparents,divorce?”Grandmaasked.

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z，Thebeautifulshellsheregavemethecouragetoliveon,〃Grandmasaid.

4、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进展续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

Jamieranoutofhishousealongthestreettowardhisbuilding.Theabandoned

buildingstherewerehisplayground.

Jamiemovedawoodenboardfromthedoortooneofthebuildings.Hecrawled

inside.Therewasbrokenglassonthefloor.Jamiewentdownthestairstothe

basement.Itwasevendarkerdownthere,anddamp.Thebuildingswereneartheriver.

Sometimeswaterfloodedin.He'dneverfoundanythingaliveuntilhefoundSharon.

“Sharon,I'mhere!"Jamiecalled."Ibroughtacandle,Ino.Vmgoingto

1ightitsoIcanseeyoubetter.

Jamietookoutamatchandlitthecandle.Asoftcircleoflightlitupthe

darkness.

“ComeoverherewhereIcanseeyou,〃Jamiesaid."Pleasedon,tbeafraid.

I'mnotafraid.Itoldyouthat.,z

Thecreatureslithered（滑行）intothelight.ItwasaboutJamie,ssize.

Itsheadandbodywerecoveredwithdarkgreenscales（鳞片）.Inthelightofthe

candle,thescalesshonelikediamonds.Thecreature?seyesglowedred,suddenly,

likehotcoals.Itsnostrils（鼻孔）flared,givingoffheat.Jamiestared.Hethought

hehadneverseenanythingsobeautiful.That'swhyhe'ddecidedtocallthe

creatureSharon.Hewantedtogiveabeautifulnametohisnewpet.

“Gee,Sharon,"hesaid,“Iwishyoucouldtalk.Idon,tknowifyou

understandmeornot.AndI,dreallylikeyoutotellmehowyougothere.

Thecreaturedidn,tanswer.ItjustlookedatJamie.Itsmouthopened

slightlyandsomethingwhitegleamed.Jamiethoughtitwassmiling.

“Well,〃saidJamie,“Ihopeyou'rehungry.Ibroughtyouachicken

sandwich.

Thecreaturelookeddownatthesandwich,thinkingaboutsomethingelse,but

madenomovetoeatit.

"I'11justleavethefoodhereforyou,〃Jamiesighed."IwishIcouldstay.

ButIhavetogo.Momisonmycaserightnow.I'dhelpher.I'11comebacktomorrow

afterschool."

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写局部分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Jamieturnedtogo.

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WhenJamiegothome,hismotherlookedangry.

5、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进展续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

WhenIwastenIwassuddenlyverysad,forIhadtomovefromtheonlyhome

Ihadeverknown.Mywholelifehadbeenspentinthatbigoldhousewhichsawthe

laughterandtearsoffourgenerations.

Whenthefinaldaycame,Irantothefrontofthehouseandsatalone,crying.

SuddenlyIfeltahandrestonmyshoulder.Ilookeduptoseemygrandfather."It

isn,teasy,isit,Billy?”hesaidsoftly,sittingdownonthestepsbesideme.

“Grandpa,〃IrepliedhowcanIeversaygoodbyetoyouandallmyfriends?”

uGoodbyeissuchasadword,，zhesaid.〃Itseemstoofinal,toocool,which

hasonethingincommon:sadness.〃

Hegentlytookmyhandinhis."Comewithme,myfriend,〃hewhispered.

Wewalked,handinhand,tohisfavoriteplaceinthefrontyard,wherethere

wasahugeredrosebush一hisbelovedrosebush.

〃Whatdoyouseehere,Billy?”heasked.

Ilookedattheflowers,notknowingwhattosay,seesomething

beautiful,Grandpa.〃

“Itisn'tjusttherosesthatarebeautiful,Billy.It'sthatspecialplace

inyourheartthatmakesthemso.〃Hiseyesmetmineagain."Billy,Iplantedthese

rosesalongtimeago—beforeyourmotherwasevenadream.Iputthemintothesoil

thedaymyfirstsonwasbom.ItwasmywayofsayingthankyoutoGod.Thatboy's

namewasBilly.Iusedtowatchhimpickrosesforhismother.

Isawmygrandfather'stears.Ihadneverseenhimcrybefore.Hisvoice

becamehoarse（嘶哑的）.

“Onedayaterriblewarcame,andmyson,likesomanysons,wentawayto

fightagreatevil.HeandIwalkedtothetrainstationtogether...Threemonlhs

lateratelegramcame.MysonhaddiedinItaly.AllIcouldthinkofwasthatthe

lastthingIsaytohiminhislifewasgoodbye.，z

注意：

1.所续写短文的同数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写局部分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Grandpaslowlystoodup.

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Soonmygrandfatherbecameseriouslyill.

6、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进展续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

TommyandMicklewalkedalongthebeach,lookingforanadventure.Theyjoked

thatsomedaytheywouldfindatalkingfishoramermaidorabottlewithatreasure

mapinside.Sofartheyhadonlyfoundshellsandrocksandseaweed.Todaywas

differentthough.Theboysfeltexcited.

Seacrabsscamperedontherocks,uponesideanddowntheother.Theywere

quickandlively.Thetidedidn,tseemtoeverwashthemaway.ThenTommysawafish.

Itwastrappedonthebeach,justfloppingaround.

〃Canittalk?''Mickleasked.

“Itlookslikeanyotherfish,“Tommysaid.Hepickeditupgentlyand

carriedittothewater.

“Doyouthinkitwillgrantusanywishes?”Micklelaughed.

Theboyswatchedasthesilverfishspedoffthroughthowater."No.Maybe

nexttime”,Tommygrinned.

Asthetwofriendswalkedfartherdownthebeachtheycameuponabottle.

Itwasgreenwithacorkinthemouth.

“Ourluckwillchange.Doesithaveamaporagenieinside?”Micklejoked.

Micklereacheddownandpickedupthebottle.Herubbedit.Nothinghappened.

Hepulledonthecork.Nothinghappened.Heshookit.Nothinghappened.

“Trythecorkagain.Ibetthegenieiswaitingforustoreleasehim.Or

we'llfindatreasuremapandhavearealadventure,Tommyexclaimed.

Mickletuggedagainonthecork.Hewiggleditbackandforth.Hetwisted

itaroundandaround.Finallyitpoppedoutwithoutbreaking.Mickleshookthebottle.

Nothingcameout.Lookinginsidehecouldn,tseeanything.Tommylookedtooandshook

hishead.Empty.

“It'sjustanoldwinebottle,“Tommycomplained.Hegrabbedthebottle

andtosseditbackontothesand.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写局部分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Thebottlehitarockandshatteredintomanypieces.

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Thetwoboysranafterit.

7、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进展续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

Everyyearonmybirthday,fromthetime1turned12,awhitegardeniawas

deliveredtomyhouseinBethesda,Maryland.Nocardornotecamewithit.Calls

tothefloristwerealwaysinvain-itwasacashpurchase.AfterawhileIstopped

Iryingtodiscoverthesendersidentityandwasjustdelightedinthebeautyand

fragranceofthatmagical,perfectwhiteflowerplacedinsoftpinktissuepaper.

However,Ineverstoppedimaginingwhotheanonymousgivermightbe.Mymother

contributedtotheseimaginings.Andatthattime,she'daskmeiftherewassomeone

forwhomIhaddoneaspecialkindnessshowingappreciation.Asaleenagea,Ihad

morefunimaginingthatitmightbeaboyIfellinloveoronewhohiidnoticed

meeventhoughIdidn,tknowhim.

WhenIwas17,aboybrokemyheart.Thenighthecalledforthelasttime,

Icriedmyselftosleep.WhenIawokeinthemorning,therewasalineofwordson

mymirrorinredlipstick.IthoughtaboutthatquotationfromEmersonforalong

time,anduntilmyhearthealedandwenttogettheglasscleaned,mymotherknew

everythingwasallrightagain.Onemonthbeforemyhighschoolgraduation,myfather

diedofaheartattack.Myfeelingsrangedfromgrieftoabandonment,fearand

overwhelminganger;mydadwasmissingsomeofthemostimportanteventsinmylife.

Ibecamecompletelyuninterestedinmycominggraduation,theplayandtheprom.

Butmymother,inthemidstofherowngrief,wouldnothearofmyskippinganyof

thosethings.

Thedaybeforemyfatherdied,mymotherandIhadgoneshoppingforaprom

dress.We'dfoundaspectacular,andimpressiveone,withyardsandyardsofdotted

Swissinred,whiteandblue.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写局部分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Itmademefeellikeafilmstar,butitwasthewrongsize.

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Shealwayslovedherchildrenalltheway.

8、阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进展续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

Alexstaredthroughthecabinwindowatthedarkness.Soonhisdadwouldcall

him."We'reready,Dadsaidashecameinfromtheporch."Grabyourrod."

Alexturnedawayfromthewindowandslowlypickeduphisfishingrod.

“Weshouldhavedonethisbefore,''Dadsaid.’'Let'sgocatching

abigone!Maybewecanseesomerareinsectsandanimals,suchasfirefliesand

whippoorwills!’'Dadpickeduphistacklebox,rod,andbaitcanfromtheporch.

Theywalkeddownthehilltowardthelake.TheonlythingAlexcouldseewas

thecircleofweedsandrocksattheirfeet.

Insectvoicesfilledhisears.Hundredsofbugswaitedinthedarktoattack.

“Mosquitoes,''Dadsaid."Ibroughtsomespraytokeepthemoff.〃

SuddenlysomethingrushedpastAlex'shead.Hegasped."Whatwasthat?”

aProbablyabat,〃Dadsaid.

“Willbatsbeflyingaroundourheadsthewholetime?”"Thisistheirtime

tobeoutcatchinginsects,''Dadexplained."Theywon,thurtyou."Hepushed

theboatoffthegravelandjumpedin.

Dadrowedtothemiddleofthelakeandstopped."We'11justlettheboat

driftforawhile.Keeptheflashlightinthebottomoftheboat.Thefishwon*t

biteiftheyseelightflashingaround.WhenweVedonebaitingourhooks,we'11turn

thelightoff.〃

Leaningdowntogetclosertothelight,Alextriedtothreadawormonhis

hook,buthecouldn,tseemtoworkhisfingersright.Sowhatifthewormwasonly

partlyonthehook?Hedidn,twanttofishanyway.Hedidn,tevenwanttobehere.

Dadswitchedofftheflashlight,andthenightfelloverthemlikeaheavy

cape."Ican'tseeanything,"Alexsaidweakly.

uThemoon,shalffull.Itgivesussomelight,“Dadsaid.

Alexlookedup.Surelyenough,therewasthemoon.Andhecouldseethe

shorelineandthedarkformsoftrees.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写局部分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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Lookingintothetreesontheshore,Alexnoticedtinypointsoflight

twinklingthere.

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DadtookasandwichfromhisjacketpocketandhandedittoAlex.

答案

1答案:

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Facedwithsuchasituation,Ireachedintomypocket.SoonIpulledoutsome

changeandgaveittohim,withouthesitationandsavingasingleword,Iwenton

towardscompletingmyownbusiness.Asyouknow,IhadanappoinCmenl,foraresponse,

IturnedonmvheelandsaidtohimasIwaswalkingaway,“Haveagoodday.〃

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ThefunnythingwasthatIfeltalotbrighter,andasmallsmilecameto

myface.And1seemedtowalkjustalittlequicker.Iwaswalkingawaywhenhecalled

out〃thankyousomuch"farbehind.Honestly,Ididn'tevenexpecthimtosay

anything.ItwassatisfyingenoughtoknowthatIhadmadeasimplegesturetohelp

someoneelsewhoneededalittlehand,alittlehelp.However,itbroughttomyface

asmile.Itdoesn'ttakemuchtolendthoseinneedahelpinghand;abigpayoff

iswhatyougetinreturn.Moreimportantly,withsuchwarmthcatchingon,oursociety

willbecomemoreandmoreharmoniousandcomfortable.(164words)

2答案：

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AfterIgotthe"allclear，'frommyorthopedistIwasgoingtogettowork.

PracticosweregoingtostartintwoweeksandIwasdeterminedtogetbackonthe

court.Myhungerforsuccessmademeplayandworkoutfortwohoursevendaybefore

theseason.Throughpractices,IwouldhitthegymandtrytobuildupIheslrenglh

thatIhadbeforetheinjury.

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Myhardworkprovedtobeveryeffective.Ihadthemostsuccessfulseason

ofmycareer.Imadeittothefinals.AlthoughItrulywantedtowin,Iknewthat

itwasagreataccomplishmentformetobeinthatpositionevennotinthefirst

place.TheinjurywasalmostagoodthingbecauseIprovedtomyselfthatIamcapable

ofachievinggoalsthatIstrivefor,throughhardworkofcourse.Thatseasonwas

byfarthemostrewardingseasonofmycareer.Ifeltsoaccomplishedattheend

oftheseason.Hardworkalwayspaysoff.(154words)

3答案：

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“WanttoknowhowIgetthroughmyparents'divorce?”Grandmaasked.She

smiledtomeandcontinued,“Inthosedays,Ifeltverysorrowfulbecauseneither

ofmyparentscaredaboutme,whichmademewanttoendmylife.Butfinally,Ididn't

dolikethat.Inordertokilltime,Ialwayswenttothebeach(Icalledit，the

BigBlue').Muchtomysurprise,Ifoundthatthereweresuchbeautifulshellson

thebeach”.

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〃Thebeaulifulshellsheregavemethecouragetoliveon,〃Grandmasaid.

“Honey,youarestillhappy.Althoughyourparentsdivorced,thevbothloveyou.

Yourmotherrangmethismorning,tellingmethatyouloveoceans.Therefore,I

broughtyouhere.AlsoIhopeyoucangetinspirationandcourage.Hearingthis

Ilookedupattheblueskyandthevastsea.Suddenly,Ifeltalittlerelaxedand

natural,andheldthefirmbeliefthatImustcheerup,justlikethemostbeautiful

shell,fullofcolor.(150words)

标准范文

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“WanttoknowhowIgetthroughmyparents，divorce?”Grandmaasked.Seeing

menoddingcuriously,shecontinued,“Ifeltextremelypainfulasyoumightbenow.

1don，tknowwhytheyseparatedfromeachother.1askedmymotherthereasonsfor

divorceoverandoveragain.Butshewouldn，ttellme,whichmademefeelevenmore

depressed.ThenIthoughtof'theBigBlue'.AtthatmomentIwantedtoendmy

lifehere.ButIdidn,t.〃

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Thebeautifulshellsheregavemethecouragetoliveont〃Grandmasaid.

“Justnow,yourmothertoldmethatyoulikeoceans.SoIbroughtyouhere.AndI

hopeyoucanseethecouragetoo."Ilookedcarefullyatthemostbeautifulshell

inmygrandma'shand,thenthevastoceanandthebluesky.OnlythendidIunderstand

thebeautyandmeaningoflife.MovingtoFloridawasnotbadatall!

(156words)

4答案：

高分范文

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Jamieturnedtoso.Hewalkedbackslowlvalongthebasementfloor.The

creatureraiseditsheadandwatchedhimcarefully,and

itsmouthopenedslightlyandaseriesofbubblescameoutswiftly.Itlookedas

ifitwastalkingalot.AfterJamiedisappearedinthedistance,thecreature

slitheredbackintoitscorner.

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WhenJamiegothome,hismotherlookedangry.Shegrabbedhim,and

asked,“Oh,myGod!Annoyingguy,andvou'reallright.Wherehavevoubeen?You

mademesoworried!Why,justlastweekalittleboydisappearedonhiswayhome

fromschool."However,hereallydidn，tlisten,insteadheseemedtobethinking

aboutsomethingelse."Mommy,whynotbuyapetforme?I'mlonely,soIranout.〃

Hearingthis,Jamie'smothersmiledbyherself."Okay,okay,I'11thinkaboutit

seriously,butyouhavetopromisetotakegoodcareofyourpel.Youdoneeda

playmate.Jamiehuggedhismotherhappily.〃Oh,thanks.Mom.V11tellSharon

thegoodnewsimmediately!Jamierushedout.(170words)

标准范文

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Jamieturnedtogo.Thecreaturewatchedhim,anditsmouthopenedslightly.

Itlookedlikesmiling.Th。croaturislithoindbackintoitscomer.Hemadehisway

carefullyacrosstheslipperybasementfloor.Jamiehurriedalongthestreettoward

hisbuilding.

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WhenJamiegothome,hismotherlookedangry.Wherehaveyoubeen,young

man?Now,getintothatroomofyoursandcleanitup.''ButJamiewasn'treally

listening.Heseemedtobethinkingaboutsomethingelse."Well,therearenokids

ofmyageinthisbuilding.That'swhyIgooutsomuch.IfIhadapettoplay

with,rdtakecareofit,too.CanIhaveapet,please?”Jamie,smotherlaughed

inspiteofherself.’'Okay,okay,“shesaidsmiling."Iguessyoudoneeda

playmate.Ijusthopeitisn,ttoodirty."Jamiehuggedhismotheraroundthewaist.

〃0h,thanks,Mom.I'llgogetSharonrightnow.Iknowyou'11likeher!”Jamie

disappearedagain.

(158words)

5答案：

高分范文

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Grandpaslowlystoodup.Hesaid,“Myfriend,pleaseneversay,goodbye

forever,andnevergiveintovoursadnessandloneliness.Instead

lifeisuncertain,andonlywhenyoufirstsaidhellotoafriendareyourjoyand

happinessofthosetimesworthcherishing.Pleaseleavethatspecialhelloinyour

heart.〃

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Soonmygrandfatherbecameseriouslyill.Threemonthslater,doctorsfinally

announcedthathislifewasabouttoend.4Hischildrentookturnstotakecare

ofhimandsaygoodbye.Heaskedhiskidstomovehisbednexttothewindow,through

whichhecouldseehisbelovedros。bush.Eventually,I,ashisoldestgrandchild,

wasassignedtosaygoodbyetohim."Hello,Grandpa,“Isniffed.Hiseyesslowly

opened,“Hello,Billy,don,tsob・"Hesmiled.But1wasoutofcontrol,cryingoutside.

Anunclecametotellmethatmygrandfatherhadpassedaway.However,hisdeepwords

willnevergoaway.(151words)

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Grandpaslowlystoodup."Don'teversaygoodbye,Billy.Don*tevergivein

tothesadnessandtheloneliness.InsteadIwantyoutorememberthejoyandthe

happinessofthosetimeswhenyoufirstsaidhellotoafriend.Takethatspecial

helloandlockitinyourheart.〃

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Soonmygrandfatherbecameseriouslyill.Whenhereturnedfromthehospital

threemonthslaterhewantedhisbednexttothewindow,fromwherehecouldsee

hisbelovedrosebush.Thenthefamilywascalledhome.Itwasdecidedthathis

grandchildrenwouldbeallowedtosaytheirgoodbyestohimonebyone."Hello,

Grandpa,Iwhispered.Hiseyesslowlyopened,“Hello,myfriend,hesaid,with

asmile.Eventuallymygrandfatherdied.RememberingGrandpayswords,Ikeptin

myinnerheartthosespecialfeelingsthathadmadeupourfriendship.Suddenlyand

truly,Iknewwhathehadmeantaboutneversayinggoodbye—justrefusingtogive

intothesadness.(155words)

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Thebottlehitarockandshatteredintomanypieces.BothTommyandMickle

gaspedastheysawal