Unit1Whatsthematter？八年级英语下册单元写作深度指导（人教版）（学生版）

Unit1What’sthematter？单元写作指导与演练近三年考情分析话题考查热度“健康和急救”描述某人存在的健康问题及给出合理建议本单元的写作任务是会写针对健康问题提出合理化建议的短文。在写作过程中，要求同学们熟悉人体部位的表述，掌握描述人体的不适等健康问题。要注意关键词语的正确使用，并能够针对健康问题运用情态动词should和shouldn’t提出更加正确、具体和深入的合理化建议。写作目标能表达生活中存在的健康问题，并就这些提出建议；能描述意外伤害事故，并给出合理的应对措施。1.1.能用＂have...＂表达健康问题及意外事故。2.能描述健康问题的状况或意外事故发生的过程及病情或受伤的程度。3.能用＂should/shouldn’t＂提建议。4.写作微技能：不同句式的表达。写作步骤◆步骤一：1.描述问题；◆步骤二：给出合理化的建议；◆步骤三：表达祝愿，希望对方走出困境。真题感知（2023·辽宁鞍山·统考中考真题）眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件，说明他近视的原因并提出建议。要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。（2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。（3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。（4）词数：80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。近视原因长时间使用电子产品；读书时间过长。建议控制使用电子产品时间；养成好习惯（如饮食、做眼保健操）……希望……参考词汇：视力eyesight；近视myopia；电子产品electronicdeviceDearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing【答案】例文：DearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?I’msorrytolearnthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker.Ithinkyoumayuseelectronicproductsforalongtime,whichisbadforyoureyesight.Andreadingbooksfortoolongmaycausemyopia.Butdon’tworry.I’dliketosharewithyousomewaysofprotectingeyesight.Atfirst,youshouldcontrolthetimeyouspendonelectronicproducts.Youcandomoreoutdooractivities.What’smore,youshoulddevelopsomegoodhabits.Youshouldeatmorevegetablesandfruit.Theyaregoodforyourhealth.Besides,doingeyeexercisesplaysanimportantroleinrelaxingyourtiredeyes.Lastly,youshouldhaveyoureyesexaminedeverytermtomakesureyoureyesstayhealthy.Ihopeyou’llfindmywayshelpful.Yours,LiPing[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：根据提示信息给对方一些建议，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，介绍对方近视的原因；第二步，针对朋友的问题给出相应的建议；第三步，表达自己的希望。[亮点词汇]①wouldliketodosth.想要做某事②begoodfor对……有好处③playanimportantrolein在……中起重要作用[高分句型]①Ithinkyoumayuseelectronicproductsforalongtime,whichisbadforyoureyesight.(which引导的定语从句)②doingeyeexercisesplaysanimportantroleinrelaxingyourtiredeyes.(动名词作主语)【词汇积累】1.牙痛haveatoothache 2感到恶心feelsick3.肚子痛haveastomachache 4.流鼻血haveanosebleed5.感冒haveacold 6.摔倒falldown 7.膝盖受伤hurtone’sknee8.割伤cutoneself9.撞到头gethitonthehead 10.躺下来休息liedownandrest 11.喝热的蜂蜜水drinkhotteawithhoney12.看牙医gotothedentist 10.休息几天restforafewdays11.去看医生gotoadoctor 12.量体温takeone’stemperature 13.在……敷药putsomemedicineon.....14.用绑带包扎putabandageon... 15.在水下冲rununderthewater16.去医院gotothehospital 【句式积累】1.Asisknowntoall，health/playingsports/eatinghealthily/havingenoughsleep/washinghandsbeforemealsisofgreatimportancetous.2.It'simportantforustoliveahealthylife/drinkplentyofwater/haveahealthydiet.3.Firstly,earlytobedandearlytorise/goingtobedearlyandgettingupearly/gettingenoughsleepcanmakeusfeelfullofenergy.4.Secondly,eatinghabitsalsoplayanimportantpartinourlife.Weshouldeatasmanykindsoffoodaspossible/eatmorefruitandvegetables/eatlessfastfood/drinkwaterinsteadofsoftdrinks.5.Lastbutnotleast,sportshelpmaketeenagershealthierandstronger.Throughtheseactivities,wecanimproveoursleepandgetagoodrest.6.Inaword,ifwestickto/followtheadvice(given)above，wewillhave/live/leadahealthylife.7.Followtheadvice,andwewillbehealthy.8.Doingeyeexercisesatbreakwillsurelybenefitusalot.Ireallyhopeourschoolcanorganizemoresuchactivities.【俗语谚语】①Healthisnotvaluedtillsicknesses.病时方知健康可贵。②Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一苹果，医生远离我。③Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.早睡早起让人健康、富有和明智。（一）健康问题类短语1.牙痛___________________ 2.头痛___________________3.肚子痛___________________ 4.背痛___________________5.喉咙痛___________________ 6.流鼻血___________________7.感冒___________________ 8.发烧___________________9.咳嗽___________________ 10.感到恶心___________________（二）意外事故短语1.摔倒_____________________ 2.割伤_____________________3.撞到头_____________________ 4.膝盖受伤_____________________5.背受伤_____________________ 6.手臂受伤_____________________（三）措施短语1.躺下来休息_____________________ 2.喝热的蜂蜜水_____________________3.看牙医_____________________ 4.拍X光_____________________5.量体温_____________________ 6.在……敷药_____________________7.用绑带包扎_____________________ 8.在水下冲_____________________9.去医院_____________________ 10.休息几天_____________________11.去看医生_____________________ 12.切除_____________________（四）其他短语1.怎么了_____________________ 2.下车_____________________3.使……惊讶_____________________ 4.同意做某事_____________________5.造成麻烦_____________________ 6.习惯于……_____________________7.冒险_____________________ 8.用尽；耗尽_____________________9.离开，从……出来_____________________10.掌管；管理_____________________11.坚持做某事_____________________ 12.放弃_____________________13.做决定_____________________ 14.考虑做某事_____________________二、句子积累（一）佳句欣赏与模仿1.Isatinthesamewayfortoolongwithoutmoving.Thebusdriverstoppedthebuswithoutthinkingtwice.（withoutdoingsth没有做某事）我一直在做作业没有休息。___________________________________________________________________________________2.Buttohissurprise,theyallagreedtogowithhim.（toone’ssurprise使……惊讶；出乎……意料）让我感到惊讶的是，他能独自穿越这片森林。___________________________________________________________________________________3.ThankstoMr.Wangandthepassengers,thedoctorssavedthemanintime.（thanksto多亏；由于；intime及时）多亏了黄老师，快速送我到医院，我才及时得到治疗(receivetreatment)。___________________________________________________________________________________4.Hebandagedhimselfsothathewouldnotlosetoomuchblood.（sothat因此）我早起是为了赶上早班车。___________________________________________________________________________________5.Hisloveformountainclimbingissogreatthathekeptonclimbingmountainsevenafterhisexperience.（so...that...如此……以至于……）这蛋糕是如此美味，以至于我吃了好多，肚子痛了。___________________________________________________________________________________6.Aronisusedtotakingrisks.（beusedtodoingsth习惯于做某事）我习惯于早上喝一杯水。___________________________________________________________________________________（二）根据健康问题或生活中的伤害事故，提出建议。（提建议的句式有should，shouldn’t，Whynot...?Whydon’tyou...?What/Howabout...?等）1.Tinafelldownfromherbikeandhurtherknee.___________________________________________________________________________________2.Steveatetoomuchatthepartysothathehadastomachache.___________________________________________________________________________________3.MrSmithgothitbyaballwhenhewaswalking.___________________________________________________________________________________（一）眼睛是心灵的窗户。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近为近视感到困扰。请你根据下面表格的提示信息给他写一封电子邮件，说明他近视的原因并提出建议。要求：（1）不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息。（2）根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥。（3）内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐。（4）词数：80~100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。近视原因长时间使用电子产品；读书时间过长。建议控制使用电子产品时间；养成好习惯（如饮食、做眼保健操）……希望……参考词汇：视力eyesight；近视myopia；电子产品electronicdeviceDearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing（二）你的朋友Jim非常喜欢玩游戏。由于长时间玩电脑游戏，现在头痛、眼睛不舒服、腰酸背痛，并且晚上睡不好觉。请你写一篇英语短文，介绍一下他的情况，并指出你对他的建议。具体要求：1.内容包含上述所提供的信息，可适当发挥；2.书写认真，句子通顺，语法正确；3.词数：80词左右。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（三）假如你是李华，你的网友Peter打篮球时意外受伤，请根据以下内容是示，用英语给Peter写一封电子邮件。提示：1.询问病情并提出建议；2.介绍一下你学校的近期活动；3.表达祝愿。要求：80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearPeter,I’msorrytohearthatyougotinjuredwhileplayingbasketball.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyou’llgetbetter，andbebacktoyourschoolassoonaspossible.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua（四）许多孩子喜欢吃零食，这是导致他们肥胖的主要原因之一。英语课上，老师引导学生就吃零食这一问题展开讨论。请你参考以下提示写一篇英语短文，简要谈谈你的看法。提示：1.吃零食是一种坏习惯；2.科学家们说有些零食含有大量的脂肪和糖，人们摄取的脂肪和糖越多，越容易发胖。要求：1.80词左右；2.可适当补充细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：snackn.零食takein摄取overweightadj.肥胖的；超重的___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（五）暑假中，Leo喜欢玩游戏，最近他的脖子有点难受。假如你是Leo的朋友Denny，请你写一封信，帮Leo分析一下他的问题，并就此提出几点建议。提示：（1）久坐不动有害健康；（2）注意休息；（3）适当增加锻炼。词数：不少于80；开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。要求：语句通顺，不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。DearLeo,Iamsorrytohearaboutyourproblems._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ifyoufollowallthesetips,you’llbebettersoon!Yourstruly,Denny（六）英国作家萨克雷曾说：“播种习惯收获性格，播种性格收获命运。”在生活中，一定有好的习惯伴随你的成长。请你以“Goodhabitsmakeme________”为题写一篇短文（词数80—100）。要求：1.补全标题（参考词汇：better,happier,healthier,stronger等）；2.字迹工整，内容完整连贯，语言准确规范；3.鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。短文的开头已给出，不计入词数。Goodhabitsmakeme________Goodhabitsareimportantinourlives.Theyinfluence(影响)usalotinmanyways.Ithink______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________假如你是李大明，你昨天骑自行车时遇到一位疲劳驾驶的司机，发生了一场交通事故。请根据图片提示写一篇英语短文，介绍事故发生的经过及吸取的教训，并呼吁大家遵守交通规则、注意交通安全。要求：1）包含图片信息，语句通顺、流畅，可适当发挥；2）100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；3）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。I’mLiDaming.Yesterday,anaccidenthappenedtomenearmyhome.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（八）每年的8月8日是“全民健身日”，为了让这项活动更加深入人心，某英文杂志的“运动与健康”栏目正在以Let’sDoExerciseTogether为题，向广大中学生征文。运动的重要性运动的时间与方式●保持健康●培养个人的性格●……●上学时步行或骑自行车●上体育课时做各种锻炼（跑步、打篮球……）●周末与朋友去爬山、游泳等●……Let’sDoExerciseTogether

It’sveryimportantforustodoexercise.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（九）健康是高质量生活的根本，是人类一个永恒的话题。如何在高度紧张的学习生活中保持健康的体魄尤其重要。请根据内容提示以“HealthyLifestyle”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的作文。短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。1.拥有良好的健康可以更好地工作和学习，迎接更多挑战（challenge）；2.保持健康有很多种方式，如健康均衡的饮食习惯，多吃蔬菜水果；多锻炼，摆脱不良生活习惯；保持快乐积极的心情，缓解来自学习和工作的压力等。HealthyLifestyleLivingahealthylifestylecanhaveaneffectonbothourworkandlife.Wecanhavemoreenergytofacechallenges.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·江苏淮安·统考中考真题）假如你是李华，你们学校的英语社团将开展以“体育锻炼，健康你我”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请以“BetterExercise,BetterLife”为题，根据以下要点，写一篇英语演讲稿。我的日常锻炼1.最喜欢的锻炼方式2.锻炼时长3.带来益处（不少于两点)给同学的建议1.校内锻炼方式（不少于两点）2.校外锻炼方式（不少于两点）号召1.希望大家多锻炼2.…参考词汇：做早操domorningexercises上体育课havePElessons压力减轻feellessstressed合理锻炼exerciseproperly注意：1.词数在80—100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数；2.可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。BetterExercise,BetterLifeDearclassmates,I’mgladtobeheretogiveaspeech.Mytopicis“BetterExercise,BetterLife”._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sallformyspeech.Thankyouforlistening.（2023·湖南邵阳·统考中考真题）当前，全国儿童青少年近视率居高不下，习近平总书记对此高度重视并作出重要批示，教育部也于2023年3月30日印发了《2023年全国综合防控儿童青少年近视重点工作计划》。对于儿童青少年近视问题，你有何看法和建议。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇短文，告诉大家如何保护视力。要求：1.包含提示中的所有要点，语言表达准确，语句通顺，可适当发挥；2.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.请勿在文中出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。Asweallknow,eyesareveryimportanttous.However,manystudentshavepooreyesight.Inordertoprotectoureyesight,weshouldfollowthesesuggestions.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,let’stakeactiontosaygoodbyetothickglasses.（2023·湖北恩施·中考真题）自教育部等十七部门联合印发《全面加强和改进新时代学生心理健康工作专项行动计划（2023—2025）》以来，越来越多的人开始关注青少年的健康。某英语网站拟举办一次以“HowtoLiveaHealthyLife”为题的征文比赛。作为青少年，我们该如何健康生活？请根据下表要点提示，从如何保持身体健康和心理健康两方面写一篇英语短文投稿。身体健康心理健康坚持锻炼拥有自信保证睡眠保持好心情…………写作要求：（1）文中必须包含表格中所给的要点，另对任意一方面补充一条你自己的观点；（2）条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80。开头已经给出，但不计入总词数；（3）文中不得出现真实人名和地名等相关信息。参考词汇：physicalhealth身体健康

psychologicalhealth心理健康HowtoLiveaHealthyLifeNowadays,moreandmorepeoplehaveetofocusonteenagers’health.Thefollowingsaremyopinionsabouthowweteenagersliveahealthylife.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·内蒙古包头·统考中考真题）你校英文报正在征稿，主题是“Formhealthyeatinghabits”。请根据以下征稿启事，写一篇短文投稿。ARTICLESWANTED!TheWorldWideFundForNature(WWF)suggests:Eatmoreplants:havemorevegetablesandwholegrains(全谷类);Eatavarietyoffoods:don’tbepicky(挑剔的)andhaveacolorfulplate;Eatfewerfoodshighinfat,saltandsugar;…Writeanarticleansweringthefollowingtwoquestions.Wewillpublishthebestoneinournewspaper.1.Whyisitimportanttoformhealthyeatinghabits?2.Howcanyouformhealthyeatinghabits?注意：1.词数80左右，题目已给出，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。Formhealthyeatinghabits___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________