适用于新高考新教材广西专版2025届高考英语一轮总复习写作专项提升Step5第二讲记叙文课件新人教版

写作专项提升第二讲记叙文英语记叙文主要用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历,以写人、叙事为主要内容,应用广泛,写作形式灵活多样。活动报道和人物介绍是高考书面表达的主要考查方式。写作模板1活动报道活动报道是新闻报道的一个方面,是对举行的活动进行报道。第一句话通常为全文主旨句,包括时间、地点、人物和事件四个方面。后文对整个事件的过程和细节进行详细的叙述。活动报道的语言平实客观,不追求过于复杂的句式。典例示范(2020·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容包括:1.参加人员;2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;3.活动反响。注意:写作词数应为80左右;范文欣赏A

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LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthecompetition.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessaryhelpaswellasencouragement.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarriveatthefinishingline,receivingcheersfromalldirections.Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydiditprovideachanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmoreunited.范文赏析文章开门见山,一句话说明活动的人物、时间、地点;然后详述经过、结果;最后对事件进行评价。语言丰富,使用了如witness,extraordinary,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool(非限制性定语从句),receivingcheersfromalldirections(现在分词短语作状语),becausenotonlydiditprovideachanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmoreunited(部分倒装句)等高级词汇和句式,提升了文章的写作档次,也显示出了作者较强的语言运用能力。增分佳句开头说明事件来龙去脉的常用语:1.Inordertoraiseawarenessofenvironmentprotection,theEnglishClubofourschoolorganizedavoluntaryactivitythisSundaymorning.为了提高环境保护的意识,本周日上午我校英语俱乐部组织了一次志愿者活动。2.DuringtheLabourDayholiday,myparentsandIclimbedMountTai.Wewereluckythattheweatherwasfinethatdayandwewereabletoseethesunrise.劳动节假期期间,我和父母一起去爬了泰山。我们很幸运,那天的天气很好,我们看到了日出。3.TheChineseAncientPoetryCompetitionwillbeheldinourschoolconcerthallthisFridayafternoon,from2p.m.to5p.m.本周五下午2点到5点,中国古诗词大赛将会在我校音乐厅举行。4.Lastweek,whenIwasonmywayhomesomethingterriblehappened.上周,当我走在回家的路上时,可怕的事情发生了。中间详细叙述活动过程和细节的常用语:5.We’rescheduledtogatherattheschoolgateat9:00a.m.,andtakeabustotheWestLake,whichwilltakeabouthalfanhour.我们计划上午9点在学校门口集合,乘坐公交车去西湖,这大约需要半小时。6.Whilewalkingonthecountryroad,weenjoyedthewarmsunshineandthebeautifulview.走在乡间的小路上,我们享受着温暖的阳光和美丽的风景。7.Activitiesincludeputtingupposters,tellingthecitizenstheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironmentandpickinguprubbishinthepark.活动包括张贴海报、为市民讲述保护环境的重要性以及在公园捡垃圾。8.Attheendoftheactivity,wetookapicturetomemorizetheunforgettableday.活动结束时,我们合影纪念了这个难忘的日子。结尾简要总结或者评价该活动的常用语:9.ItisthemostexcitingmomentthatIhaveeverexperienced.这是我所经历过的最激动人心的时刻。10.Notonlydiditmakeusclosetonature,butitalsogaveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork.这次活动不但让我们接近大自然,而且让我们从繁重的课业中得到放松。11.Thecompetitionwillprovideanopportunityforustohaveabetterunderstandingofourtraditionalculture.这次竞赛将给我们提供一个更好地理解传统文化的机会。12.ThecompetitionbroadenedmyknowledgeontheSilkRoadandencouragedmetolearnmoreaboutourowncultureinthefuture.这次比赛不仅拓宽了我关于丝绸之路的知识面,而且激励我以后更多地学习关于我们的文化知识。热点演练假定你是某校英文报记者。你们学校最近举办了一次主题为“中国传统文化”的英语征文比赛。请你写一篇英文报道,内容包括:1.参赛情况;2.获奖情况,10名同学分获一、二、三等奖;3.活动反响。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。A

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RecentlyanEnglishwritingcontestwiththethemeoftraditionalChineseculturewasheldinourschool.Alotofstudentsjoinedinenthusiasticallyand10studentswonfirst,secondandthirdprizesrespectively.Thiscontestwasgreatlywelcomedbyallstudentsandteachers,becauseitmadeusunderstandtraditionalChineseculturemoredeeply.Werealisedhowintelligentourancestorswere.Thiseventalsoinspiredustolearnfromthemandusewhatwe’velearnttocreateamuchmorebrilliantmodernChineseculture.写作模板2人物介绍人物介绍的内容通常包括人物生平、性格特点、业余爱好以及取得的成绩。高考对人物介绍的考查通常与书信、电子邮件等结合起来,是书信或者电子邮件中的一部分内容。有时候也要求按照汉语提示对名人进行人物介绍。典例示范(2020·全国Ⅰ卷)你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:1.人物简介;2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:1.词数80左右;2.短文题目和首句已给出,不计入总词数。范文欣赏The

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Honestlyspeaking,hisgreatpatienceandassistancehaveagreatimpactonme.ItwasMr.ZhangwhomademeperceivetheimportanceoflearningEnglishwell.Haditnotbeenforhisguidanceandencouragement,Icouldn’thavewonfirstprizeintheEnglishcontest.Withouthisaid,Iwouldn’thaveboostedmyintegratedskillsinEnglish.I’lldefinitelyrememberhiskindnessandhelpforever.Mr.Zhangisaveryrespectableteacherindeed!Idothankhimforwhathedidforme.范文赏析文章开篇点明尊敬的人。随后介绍尊敬和爱戴该人物的原因。最后进行评价。范文语言丰富,使用了大量亮点词汇和句型,如knowledgeable,humorous,responsible,haveagreatimpacton,definitely等,体现了作者扎实的语言功底。句中使用了状语从句“thatIrespectandlovehimsomuch”;强调句型“ItwasMr.ZhangwhomademeperceivetheimportanceoflearningEnglishwell.”;虚拟语气“Haditnotbeenforhisguidanceandencouragement,Icouldn’thavewonfirstprizeintheEnglishcontest.”和“Withouthisaid,Iwouldn’thaveboostedmyintegratedskillsinEnglish.”提高了表达难度和写作档次,增加了文章的亮点。增分佳句开头介绍人物基本信息的常用语:1.MyfriendLiHua,aged27,graduatedfromPekingUniversityfiveyearsago,andhasjustreceivedhisdoctor’sdegree.我的朋友李华,今年27岁,5年前从北京大学毕业,又刚刚拿到了他的博士学位。2.LiMingismybestfriend.Helookshandsome.Heistallandstrong.李明是我最好的朋友。他长得很英俊,人又高又壮。中间介绍具体个人事迹的常用语:3.Heisgoodatsportssuchasrunning,football,basketballandtabletennis.他擅长运动,例如跑步、足球、篮球、乒乓球等。4.Beingkind-heartedandeasy-going,hefitsinwellwithotherseasilywhereverhegoes.由于心地善良,性情随和,他每到一处总会很容易地与他人相处融洽。5.Wehavemuchincommonregardingourstudy,interestsandhobbies.我们在学习和兴趣爱好方面有许多共同之处。6.Withtheirhelp,Iregainedmyconfidenceandbegantomakesteadyprogress.在他们的帮助下,我重获信心,并且开始取得稳定进步。对该人物进行评价的常用语:7.Truefriendshiplastsalongtime.IbelievethefriendshipbetweenLiMingandIwilllastforever.真正的友情是持久的。我相信我和李明之间的友谊会到永远。8.Inmyopinion,distancecan’tcutoffthefriendship.Onlyifwemisseachother,ourfriendshipwilllastforever.在我看来,距离不能阻断友谊。只要我们彼此想念,我们的友谊就会永存。9.Hedevotedhimselftoscientificresearchandmadegreatcontributionstothecountry.他致力于科研工作,为国家作出了巨大贡献。10.Consideredtobeoneofthegreatestwritersintheworld,hewasawardedtheNobelPrizeinLiterature.他被认为是世界最伟大的作家之一,被授予了诺贝尔文学奖。热点演练(2023·全国甲卷)你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.人物简介及事迹;2.意义或启示。注意:1.词数100左右;2.题目已为你写好。A

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