高考英语读后续写个人成长类之网络幻影：Sara的线上友情与现实教训 讲义

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwasatwelve-year-oldgirl

IwassoaddictedtochattingonlinethatsomepeopleevencalledmeCyberSara.Mymom,alawyer,alwayscomplainedthatIspenttoomuchtimechattingwithmyInternetfriends.OnedayIgotaninstantmessagefromakidIdidn’tknow.HisnamewasBradley,whosaidhewastwelveandlivedinNewYork.Heaskedifhecouldbemysecretfriend,andIthoughtthatseemedprettycool.Withinafewdays’chatting,Ifoundthatwebothlovedtoplaysoccer,eventhoughIdidn’tplayasmuchasIusedto.Tomygreatjoy,webothlovedplayingcomputergamesverymuch.Everyday,BradleyandIchattedandemailedeachother.Webecamebestfriends.Hewasinterestingandseemedkindofsmart—actually,muchsmarterthanthetypical(典型的，平常的)twelve-year-oldboysIknew.Ireallylikedchattingwithhim.Hetoldmehereallylikedme.BradleykepttellingmeNewYork

wasacoolplacetoliveandemailedmeamazingpicturesofextremelytallskyscrapers(摩天大楼).HeaskedmewhereIlived.ItoldhimIlivedinTampa.Oneday,BradleysharedgoodnewswithmethathewascomingtoTampawithhisparents.Heinvitedmetohaveasecretmeetingandgoforicecreamwithhimintheice-creamshopnearmyschool.EagertofindwhatmysecretInternetfriendwaslike,Ipromisedtokeepitasecret,nottellingmyparentsaboutourplan.IwasexcitedthatIwasfinallygoingtomeetBradleyaftermonthsofchatting.However,herefusedtosendmeapictureofhimself,sayinghedidn’twanttoruinthesurprise.Itmademequiteconfused.Wastheresomethingwrongwithhim?Washeaweird(奇怪的)guywhowasnotconfidentenoughtoshowapictureofhimself?Buthesaideveryoneinhisschoolthoughthewasthecutestboyinhisclass,soIthoughthehadtobenormal.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。Para.1Thenextday,IaccidentallytoldMomthatIwouldmeetmyInternetfriendalone.Para.2Themomentweenteredtheice-creamshop

therewasnoonebutaweirdgrown-up.___________________________________________故事梗概：故事讲述了12岁的女孩Sara沉迷于网络聊天，被称为CyberSara。她在网上结识了一个自称来自纽约的12岁男孩Bradley，两人很快成为了好朋友。Bradley邀请Sara在现实生活中见面，Sara兴奋地答应了，但未告知父母。后来，Sara无意中告诉妈妈她要单独去见网友，妈妈担心她的安全，坚持陪同。见面时发现只有一名成年男子自称是Bradley的叔叔，但事情很快揭露，这名男子并非Bradley的叔叔，Sara意识到了网络安全的重要性。根据"故事山"模型对上述故事的分析：1.引入（Setting）：Sara，一个12岁的女孩，沉迷于在线聊天，被称为CyberSara。她的母亲对她的上网时间表示担忧。2.冲突（Conflict）：Sara遇到了一个名叫Bradley的陌生网友，他邀请Sara在现实生活中见面，这引发了潜在的安全问题。3.升级（RisingAction）：Sara和Bradley建立了友谊，并且Sara对即将到来的见面感到兴奋。然而，Bradley拒绝发送自己的照片，这增加了Sara的困惑和好奇心。4.高潮（Climax）：Sara无意中告诉妈妈她要去见网友，妈妈坚持要陪同，这导致了Sara必须重新考虑她的决定。5.下降（FallingAction）：在冰淇淋店，Sara和妈妈遇到了一个自称是Bradley叔叔的陌生成年人，但事情似乎并不简单。6.结局（Resolution）：妈妈对这名男子的真实身份表示怀疑，并报告了警察。Sara学到了关于在线安全的重要教训，并意识到了信任直觉和家人指导的重要性。参考范文Thenextday,IaccidentallytoldMomthatIwouldmeetmyInternetfriendalone.Uponhearingthat,shebeganannoyingmewithatonofquestions,withherfacefullofanxiety.IeventuallytoldherthatBradleywasgoingtotakemeforicecreamnearmyschool.“No.Neverwillyoumeetastrangerallalone.Youarejusta12-year-oldgirl!”,momwasbesideherselfwithragewhenIshowedmydeterminationtogo.ThiswasthefirsttimeinmylifethatIhadwitnessedmyelegantlawyermomlosetemper.SofuriouswasshethatIhadnochoicebuttobringhertogether.Wepreparedanddrovetotheice-creamshop.Themomentweenteredtheice-creamshop,therewasnoonebutaweirdgrown-up.Noticinghisstrangeappearance,Iwasenvelopedbyasenseoffearandclenchedmom’shandstightly.“Whoareyou?AreyouBradley?”askedmymom.Shockedandspeechless,themansprangfromthechair,attemptingtofleeaway.Butitwastoolate.Momgraspedhishandwithallhermightandaskedmetocallthepolice.Finally,myplanwiththesecretInternetfriendendedupwithanarrowescapefrombeingcheated.WheneverIrecalledtheunusualexperience,fearstilllingeredinmymindmixedwithasenseofrelief.NeithershouldwemeetInternetfriendwithoutinformingparents,norshouldweshareprivateinformationontheInternet.下水文：Para.1:Thenextday,IaccidentallytoldMomthatIwouldmeetmyInternetfriendalone.Hereyeswidenedwithsurpriseandaflickerofconcern."Sara,youcan'tmeetastrangerwithoutmeoryourfatherbeingthere,"shesaidfirmly.Iprotested,insistingthatBradleywasmyfriendandtherewasnothingtoworryabout.ButMomwasn'tconvinced.SheexplainedthepotentialdangersofmeetingsomeonefromtheInternetinreallife,andIrealizedshewasright.Reluctantly,Iagreedtoletheraccompanyme,feelingamixofanxietyandanticipationaboutthemeeting.Para.2:Themomentweenteredtheice-creamshoptherewasnoonebutaweirdgrown-up.Hewassittinginthecorner,lookingaroundnervously.Asweapproached,hestoodupandintroducedhimselfasBradley'suncle,explainingthatBradleywastooshytocomebuthadsenthiminstead.Mymom'sexpressionwasamixofreliefandskepticism.Sheinsistedonstayingwithmeduringthemeeting,andweallsatdowntogether.Themantriedtomakesmalltalk,buthisstoriesaboutBradleydidn'tmatchwhatBradleyhadtoldme.Ifeltagrowingsenseofunease.Afterthemeeting,mymomreportedtheincidenttothepolice,anditturnedoutthatthemanwasnotwhoheclaimedtobe.Ilearnedavaluablelessonaboutonlinesafetyandtheimportanceoftrustingmyinstinctsandmyparents'guidance.文中高分句积累：IwassoaddictedtochattingonlinethatsomepeopleevencalledmeCyberSara."（我沉迷于在线聊天，以至于有些人甚至叫我CyberSara。）这句话使用了"addictedto"和"CyberSara"这个昵称，生动地表达了主人公对网络聊天的痴迷。2."Heaskedifhecouldbemysecretfriend,andIthoughtthatseemedprettycool."（他问我是否可以成为我的秘密朋友，我觉得这听起来很酷。）这句话通过"secretfriend"和"prettycool"传达了一种神秘和兴奋的感觉。3."Tomygreatjoy,webothlovedplayingcomputergamesverymuch."（让我非常高兴的是，我们俩都非常喜欢玩电脑游戏。）"Tomygreatjoy"表达了主人公发现共同爱好时的强烈情感。4."Hetoldmehereallylikedme.BradleykepttellingmeNewYorkwasacoolplacetoliveandemailedmeamazingpicturesofextremelytallskyscrapers."（他告诉我他真的喜欢我。Bradley一直告诉我纽约是一个居住的好地方，并给我发送了非常高层的摩天大楼的惊人照片。）这句话通过"reallylikedme"和"amazingpicturesofextremel