2023~2024学年 Unit 4 Reading for Writing高中英语课件

Unit4ReadingforWritingWriteasummary1243knowmoreaboutthenaturaldisastersandtheireffects影响;mastertheformat(格式)andthemaincontentofabrief简要的summary;learntorespectandprotectourenvironment;cultivate(培养)thecritical(批判的)thinking.LearningobjectivesTsunamiWarmingupTsunamiWhatis“tsunami”?

Thegreatwaves“tsunami”

isaseriesof一系列travelingoceanwavesofextremelylonglengthgenerated生成，引发byearthquakesoccurring发生blow在...之下orneartheocean,submarine海底的landslides山崩，滑坡anderuptions爆发.DamageAPacific-widetsunamigeneratedbythe1960ChileEarthquake.1960年智利地震引发的太平洋海啸。TheGreatAlaskanEarthquakeof1964produceddeadlytsunamiwavesinAlaska,OregonandCalifornia.1964年的阿尔萨坎大地震在阿拉斯加、俄勒冈和加利福尼亚引发了致命的海啸。Afterscanningthematerials,answerthequestions.1.Whatisatsunami?Whatcausesit?2.Whatdamagecanitcause?Harborwave.Itiscausedbytheearthquake.Itcancrash碾碎overeverythinginitsway,buildingsandevenawhole全部的city.Besides,itcancause导致manydeathstoo.Predictwhatthetextisaboutaccordingtothetitleandthepicture.Lead-inItisanewsreport新闻报道.Itmightbeaboutthebigdamagethetsunamicaused.0201031.Whendidthetsunamihappen?2.Whatcausedthetsunami?3.Whywoulditbedifficulttodeliverfoodandsupplies?Ithappenedon26December,2004Averypowerfulearthquakeof9.0-magnitudewhichhappenedundertheseaoff远离thewestcoastofSumatraIsland苏门答腊岛inIndonesia.Dangerousconditionsanddamaged被破坏的roadswillmakeitdifficulttodeliverfoodandsupplies.Readingpart添加标题AddthetitleClickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent添加标题AddthetitleClickheretoaddyourtextcontent，ClickheretoaddyourtextcontentClickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，ClickheretoaddyourtextcontentClickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，ClickheretoaddyourtextcontentClickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，ClickheretoaddyourtextcontentClickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，Clickheretoaddyourtextcontent，ClickheretoaddyourtextcontentWhat:

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Where:How:Thetsunamicausedover6500peopledeathsandcausedgreatdamagetobuildings,carsandroads.On26December,2004,Thetsunamiwascausedbyapowerfulearthquake.InIndonesia,India,Thailand,Malaysia,andatleastfourothercountries.Foreignaidisorganized,butsupplies物资aredifficulttodeliverbecauseofthedamagedroads.MainpointsinanewsreportReadthesummary总结ofthenewsreportandcheckthemainpointsitincludeMainpointsinsamplesummaryWhatmainpointsdoesitinclude?(Ex.2onpage55)On26December2004,atsunamikilledmorethan6500tourists,fishermenandotherlocalsinSoutheastAsia.Thousandsofpeoplearemissingandthenumberofdeathsisexpectedtogrow.Thedamagecausedbythetsunamiismakingitdifficultforrescue救援workerstohelpthesurvivors幸存者.dateeventplaceeffectcauseWritingstyleWhatmakesthenewsreportbelievable?Thespotpicture现场图片,theserioustitle严肃的标题,thenumberscited引用的数字,andthefactreportedinanobjective客观的manner方式

areallwhatmakethenewsreportmorebelievable.02032.Ittellsthemainideasandonlylists列出themostimportantinformation.1.Asummaryisashortstatement陈述.3.Itdoesn’tliterally文字地copytheoriginal原本的text,whichrequiresustowriteinourownwords.01FeaturesofsummarySummary

概要是一篇较长文章本质思想的简洁重述，它要求用尽量少的语言对原文的主旨进行复述。概要不是简单的换句话说，更不是评论，而是作者思想中最基本部分的准确再现。Summary

《考试说明》中规定概要写作阅卷时按5个档次给分，其中最高档次第五档(21-25points)的评分标准是：1.理解准确，涵盖全部要点；2.能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇；3.完全使用自己的语言；4.有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。3211.定位——查找核心信息

通过阅读定位语篇的核心信息，包括核心单词，核心短语和核心句子。(句子为主，以单词和短语为辅)3.核查——添加关联词，检查句子的连贯性

核查标点、语法、连接词及字数，优先考虑使用较短的连接词，如：but，then，later等。

写作方法:2.改写——用自己的语言改写信息

在核心信息的基础上进行语言表达形式的改写，对原文的语言表达形式尽可能实现大规模的改变。改写过程中，原则上字数不超过原句，不改变原文的逻辑结构，充分考虑语句压缩。steponesteptwostepthreestepfourReadthetextandwritealist清单ofthemaindetails.Writedownthemainideaofeachparagraphbasedonthedetailsabove.Organizetheideasanddraft打草稿yoursummary.Exchange交换drafts.Writingasummary：writeasummaryforthetextonpage50.StepI.Readthetextandwritealistofthemaindetails.◎Strange奇怪的thingshappenedinthecountrysidebeforetheearthquake;◎Anearthquakehit_________Chinaon28July1976;◎________________________________________________________________________◎____________________________________________________________◎________________________________________________________________________◎________________________________________________________________________TangshanThenumberofpeoplewhowerekilledorbadlyinjuredinthequakewasmorethan400,000;Nearlyeverythinginthecitywasdestroyed;Soldiers士兵andmedicalworkers医务工作者cametohelpthepeoplewhohadgreatlossandtotryandfindsurvivors幸存者;Withstrongsupport支持fromthegovernmentandthetireless不知疲倦的effortsofthecity'speople,anewTangshanwasbuiltupontheearthquakeruins废墟.StepII.Writedownthemainideaofeachparagraphbasedonthedetailsabove.

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Para3:Para4:Para5:StrangethingshappenedinthecountrysideofHebei,China.AstrongearthquakehitTangshan,andmanypeoplewerekilledorinjured.Thecitywasgreatlyaffectedandnearlydestroyed.Therescueworkbegansoonafterthequake.Withstrongsupportfromthegovernmentandthecity'speople,thenewcityofTangshanwasbuilt.Step-III.Organizetheideasanddraftyoursummary.SampleWritingForseveraldays,strangethingsoccurred发生inthecountrysideofnortheastern东北部Hebei.Then,on28July1976,anearthquakehitTangshancity.Thecitywasgreatlyaffected影响andnearlydestroyed摧毁.Manypeoplewerekilledorinjured.The