（江苏省专用）2024届高考英语冲刺必考题型真题模拟-高分写作【查漏补缺】（附答案）

（江苏省专用）2024届高考英语冲刺必考题型真题模拟——高分写作【查漏补缺】知识点：中考高分作文的特征1.清晰的分段，头尾两段比较简洁明了，中间内容可以详细描述。明确时态和文章的体裁，有时候会穿插不同的时态在文章中，特别是是描述个人的一段经历时要用到一般过去时，作文体裁考察书信体、邮件、记叙某件事情、描写某个人居多。例如这样一篇材料是目前中考比较容易考察的类型：生活是一位睿智的长者，生活是一位博学的老师。生活需要我们用心面对，无论是美好还是意外，我们都要记得微笑和感恩。请以“Lifeisfullof”为题写一篇短文，分享一次对你有特殊意义的经历。内容包括：1.请先将标题填写完整；2.分享一次对你有特殊意义的经历；3.谈谈你的感悟。LifeisfullofchallengesLifewillbewonderfulwithallkindsofchallenges.Itisthechallengesthatmakemestronger.（开头段比较简洁，点明主题“生活充满挑战，但挑战让我更坚强。”）ImovedtothecitywhenIenteredthemiddleschool.Butmyproblemwasthatnoonecookedformebecausemyparentscamehomelate,soImadeupmymindtolearnhowtocook.Imustchallengemyself.ThenonedayIwatchedmyparentscookingdinnercarefully.Theytaughtmehowtocook.Afewdayslater,Ilearnedtocookformyself.NowIamhappyIcancookdeliciousfood.Myparentsaresatisfiedwithme.Iamalsoproudofmyself.（中间段主要分享自己的一段特殊经历，这里一定要围绕主题去展开故事的讲解，并且要提到现在自己的改变有哪些。）Ilearnedfromitthatwemaymeetsomedifficultiesinourlife,butifwehaveconfidenceandaregoodatlearning,everythingwillbebetter.Iamsoeagertomeetthecomingdifficulties,Iwon’tgiveupnomatterhowhardtheywillbe.（结尾段谈谈个人的感悟，这个时候需要重新说明一下主题，并且提到遇到挑战个人会怎么应对。）2.适当运用英语中的定语从句、状语从句和宾语从句这大句式以及what引导的主语从句和it作为形式主语和形式宾语的句式。同时，感叹句和强调句也可以使用。例如：HersmileissobrightthatshewontheheartofminewhenIfirstmether.（so….that引导结果状语从句；when引导时间状语从句）Besides,itisimportantforustokeepsafetyrulesinmind,especiallywhenwerowaboatorplayintheamusementpark.（it作形式主语，“Itis+adj.forsb.todosth.”句型）It’smygreathonortoinformyouthatwewillgototheSlenderWestLakeinYangzhouforastudytournextWednesday.（it作形式主语，Itis+名词+todosth）Youmayfinditdifficulttomakefriendswithpeoplewhoalwayshavedoubtsaboutyou.(it作形式宾语，sbfindit+adj+todosth)Maryisalwaysreadytohelpotherswhogetintotrouble.（who引导定语从句）Moreover,whatmakesmeinterestedisthatIcancookbymyself.（what引导主语从句）IthinktheExpoParkisnotonlyanexhibitionofgardens,butalsotheprideofXuzhou’sdevelopment.（“notonly...butalso...”结构）IfIhavethechancetobeamemberoftheclub,I’llbehappy.（if引导条件状语从句）Asforme,Ithinkbeingaleadercanhelpmelearnhowtoarrangethingsproperly,whichmeansalottome.（动名词作主语，which引导非限制性定语从句）Whatawonderfulexperience!（what引导感叹句）Ilearnedfromitthatwemaymeetsomedifficultiesinourlife,butifwehaveconfidenceandaregoodatlearning,everythingwillbebetter.（that引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句）Lifewillbewonderfulwithallkindsofchallenges.Itisthechallengesthatmakemestronger.3.有明显的衔接词或者词组，使得文章长短有致。例如：What’smore,Maryisalwaysreadytohelpotherswhogetintotrouble.Asweallknow,agoodfriendcanmakeourlifebetter.Firstofall,tomakeagoodfriend,youmustbefriendlytoothers.Also,beatrustworthyman.Youcantellanythingtosuchaperson.especiallywhenyouareinabadmood.Inaddition,themostimportantqualityinfindingfriendsishonesty.Asforme,oneofmysecretsofmakingfriendsisbeinghelpful.Ibelievethatbeinghelpfulmeansshowingconcernforothers.Forexample,myclassmateJiangLeifeltsadafterlosingabasketballgameInaword,I’mlookingforwardtohavingameaningfulnewlife.4.可以适当地运用谚语或者名人名言来增强文章想表达的思想感情。例如：Practicemakesperfect.（孰能生巧）Wecanpracticehardinordertohaveagoodperformanceatschool.Nopain,nogain.（一份耕耘，一份收获）Weshouldrealizetheimportanceofworkinghardonthewaytosuccess.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.（有志者事竟成）Wecan’tgiveupeasilywhenwegetintotrouble.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.（患难见真情）Friendshipplaysanimportantroleinourlife.【例题讲解】时光荏苒，光阴似箭。在三年的初中生活里，你肯定遇到过许多良师益友，其中谁会是你最难忘的人呢？请以“TheMostUnforgettablePerson”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讲述你和他（她）之间的故事。注意：1.内容必须包括所给的提示要点，可适当发挥。2.词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。3.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。TheMostUnforgettablePersonHowtimeflies!I’llgraduatefrommymiddleschoolsoon.Overthepastthreeyears,I’vemetlotsofimportantpersons.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【正确答案】TheMostUnforgettablePersonHowtimeflies!I’llgraduatefrommiddlemyschoolsoon.Overthepastthreeyears,I’vemetlotsofimportantpersons.Amongthem,mydeskmateMaryisthemostunforgettablepersonforme.HersmileissobrightthatshewontheheartofminewhenIfirstmether.What’smore,Maryisalwaysreadytohelpotherswhogetintotrouble.Shehaschangedmealotsincewebecamedeskmates.Iusedtobelazyandalwaysmadeagreatmessonmydesk.AndIwasalwaysmadwhenlookingformyexercisebooksandtestpapers.Sheoftenremindedmetotidymydesk.Sometimessheevenhelpedmelookforthings.Gradually,Iformedthegoodhabitofputtingeverythinginorder.Tome,Maryisjustlikethebrightlightinmylife.ShehasleftmemanyhappymemoriesandIwillneverforgether.①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的关键信息，结合给出的三个问题来介绍自己最难忘的人。[写作步骤]第一步，点明最难忘的人是谁；第二步，具体介绍这个人为何是最难忘的；第三步，介绍自己对这个人的感觉。[亮点词汇]①lotsof许多②bereadytodosth.准备好做某事③getintotrouble遇见麻烦④usedtobe过去曾经是⑤lookfor寻找⑥formthegoodhabitof养成……的好习惯[高分句型]①HersmileissobrightthatshewontheheartofminewhenIfirstmether.（that引导结果状语从句；when引导时间状语从句）②What’smore,Maryisalwaysreadytohelpotherswhogetintotrouble.（who引导定语从句）【基础练习】1.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Eric给你发来电子邮件请求帮助。请根据邮件内容，用英语回复。DearLiHua,Howareyougoing?Ourschoolwillholdadramafestivalnextmonth.Itriedoutfortheperformancelastweek.ButI’mveryunhappytobechosentoplayarolewithoutanydialogue.ShouldIgiveupthechance?Couldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?Thankyou!Yours,Eric注意：1.文中不能出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清晰，书写规范。3.词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾部分已经给出，不计入总词数。DearEric,I’mgladtoreceiveyouremail.Now,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutmythoughts.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【正确答案】DearEric,I’mgladtoreceiveyouremail.Now,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutmythoughts.First,it’sbraveofyoutotryoutfortheperformanceduringyourdramafestival.Althoughyouhaven’tgottheroleyouwanted,it’sstillagoodchanceforyoutoimproveyouractingskillsandconfidence.Infact,therolewithoutanydialoguemaybemorechallengingbecauseyouwillhavetousemorebodylanguagestoexpressyourself.Sodon’tgiveupthechance.What’smore,practicehardinordertohaveagoodperformance.Practicemakesperfect.Wishyougoodluckandlookforwardtoyourwonderfulperformance!Yours,LiHua①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏Eric的邮件中的关键信息，针对朋友参加戏剧节选拔而提出的想法和建议。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表达很开心收到朋友的电子邮件，并要表达自己的想法。第二步，夸赞朋友勇于参加戏剧节的选拔，讲述要参加没有对话的角色的理由，鼓励朋友熟能生巧。第三步，书写结束语。表达“祝愿朋友表演成功”的想法。[亮点词汇]①tryoutfortheperformance参加……的选拔②infact事实上③giveup放弃④inorderto为了[高分句型]①I’mgladtoreceiveyouremail.（begladtodosth.句型）②First,it’sbraveofyoutotryoutfortheperformanceduringyourdramafestival.（Itis+形容词+ofsb.todosth.该句型常用描述人物特征的形容词）③Practicemakesperfect.（谚语）2.初中生活就要结束了，同学们即将开始新的征程，规划新的人生。请根据下表提示以“Myplanforthenewlife”为题，给你们校报写一篇英语短文，介绍你的计划。学习制定计划，努力学习；多读好书，……生活早睡早起，勤做锻炼，如……做做家务，感恩父母；听听音乐，放松自己；外出旅游，参观名胜；愿望……注意：1.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。MyplanforthenewlifeOurmiddleschoollifeiscomingtoanend.Anewlifeisontheway.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【正确答案】MyplanforthenewlifeOurmiddleschoollifeiscomingtoanend.Anewlifeisontheway.Iplantodolotsofthingsforthenewlife.First,Iwillmakeaplanandtrytokeepabalancebetweenworkandrest.I’llworkhardonallsubjects.Inmyfreetime,Ihopetoreadmoreusefulbookstolearnaboutdifferenthistoriesandcultures.Readingcanopenupanewworldtome.Second,I’dliketohaveahealthylifestyle.It’sgoodformetogetupearlyandgotobedearly.Exercisemoreeveryday.I’llgojoggingintheparkorplaybasketballwithmyfriends.Moreover,I’mgoingtodosomehouseworkformyparentstothankthem.Listeningtomusicisgoodformetorelaxmyself.Ialsowanttogotravellingtoenjoythenaturalbeautyandvisitthepalacesofinterest.Inaword,I’mlookingforwardtohavingameaningfulnewlife.①题材：本文是一篇材料作文写作；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：本文要求从学习、生活和原文等方面介绍新生活的计划，注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，先介绍学习计划；第二步，介绍生活计划；第三步，介绍自己的愿望。[亮点词汇]①begoodfor对……有好处②Inaword总之③wanttodosth想要做某事[高分句型]①It’sgoodformetogetupearlyandgotobedearly.（it固定句型）②Listeningtomusicisgoodformetorelaxmyself.（动名词作宾语）3.假如你是李华，看到某英语报社将要组织劳动体验和体育锻炼夏令营活动的宣传。请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。SummerCampLivingskillstraining●onafarm●livewithlocalpeople●cookmealsbyyourself●feedanimals,...Sportstraining●inatrainingcentre●livewithteammembers●betestedbycoaches●playballgames,...要求：1.所写内容必须包括一种活动的所有信息，可适当发挥;2.对你所选择的活动说明理由，并对其提出建议;3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数;4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.Iprefer__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【正确答案】DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.IpreferlivingskillstrainingbecauseallthelivingskillsIwillgetduringtheprocesswillbeofgreatvaluetomylaterlife.Thelivingskillstrainingwillbeonafarm.There,Icanlivewithlocalpeoplewhowillhelpmelearnmoreabouttheircustomsandlifestyles.Moreover,whatmakesmeinterestedisthatIcancookbymyself.Inthesummercamp,Icantakepartinactivitiesonthefarmsuchasfeedinganimalsandpickingfruit.IalsohavesomeadviceforyouIhopetherewillbemoreactivitieslikegrowingplantsandvegetables.IhopeIwillenjoymyselfonthefarm.Yours,LiHua①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应先选择想要参与的活动，然后谈谈自己的理由，并给出一些建议。[写作步骤]第一步，表明自己更喜欢哪种活动并说明理由；第二步，更加详细地陈述理由，说明这种活动的好处；第三步，给出一些建议。[亮点词汇]①beofgreatvalue很有价值②takepartin参加[高分句型]①IpreferlivingskillstrainingbecauseallthelivingskillsIwillgetduringtheprocesswillbeofgreatvaluetomylaterlife.（because引导原因状语从句；省略that的定语从句）②Moreover,whatmakesmeinterestedisthatIcancookbymyself.（what引导主语从句；that引导表语从句）4.随着五一劳动假期的到来和疫情的开放，越来越多的人选择外出旅游放松自己。假如你是李华，看到某旅行社组织的两种旅游团的宣传。请用英语给旅行社写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种旅游团及理由，并对你选择的旅游团的活动提出建议。MayDayTourtheYangtzeRiverCulturalTourDisneylandTourTimeMay1—May2May2—May3PlaceNanjingShanghaiActivities●OverlooktheYangtzeRiverfromahelicopter.●TakeaboattripontheYangtzeRiver.●ListentospeechesonhowtoprotecttheYangtzeRiver.●Trydifferentkindsofrides,suchasceMountain.●WatchaparadeofDisneycharacters.●Enjoythebeautifulfireworksshow.Cost￥450/perperson￥1050/perperson(overlook:俯瞰；helicopter:直升机）要求：1.所写内容必须包括一种旅游团的所有信息，可适当发挥；2.对你所选择的旅游团活动说明理由，并对其提出建议；3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchwonderfultours.Iprefer____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【正确答案】例文1DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchwonderfultours.IprefertheYangtzeRiverCulturalTourbecausethetourwillimprovemyknowledgeofthelongestriverinChina.TheYangtzeRiverCulturalTourwilltakeplaceinNanjing.ItlastsfromMay1toMay2.There,wecanoverlooktheYangtzeRiverfromahelicopter.Moreover,wewilltakeaboattripontheYangtzeRiver.WecanalsoenjoybeautifulviewsalongtheYangtzeRiver.Inthetour,wecanlistentospeechesonhowtoprotecttheYangtzeRiver,too.What’smore,thecostofthetripis450yuanperperson.Ialsohavesomeadviceforyou.IhopemorespeechesaboutthehistoryoftheYangtzeRiverwillbegiven.IamsureIwillenjoymyselfinthetour.Yours,LiHua例文2DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchwonderfultours.IpreferDisneylandTourbecausethetourwillmakemerelaxedafterafewmonths’hardwork.TheTourwillbeinShanghai.ItlastsfromMay2toMay3.There,wecantrydifferentkindsofrides,suchasceMountain.Itwillbeveryexciting.WhatmakesmeinterestedisthatwecanwatchaparadeofDisneycharacters.Inthetour,wecanalsoenjoythebeautifulfireworksshow.Moreover,thecostofthetripis1050yuanperperson.Ialsohavesomeadviceforyou.Ihopewecanhavesometimetodosomeshopping.Iwanttobuysomegiftsformyfriends.IamsureIwillhaveafantastictimeinDisneyland.Yours,LiHua①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中所给要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。选择你更想参与的一种旅游团并说明理由；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、地点、活动、费用”几个方面重点介绍旅游团活动的具体情况；第三步，书写结语。提出建议表达希望。[亮点词汇]①takeplace举行②listentospeeches听演讲③What’smore而且④enjoymyself玩得开心[高分句型]①IprefertheYangtzeRiverCulturalTourbecausethetourwillimprovemyknowledgeofthelongestriverinChina.(because引导的原因状语从句)②IamsureIwillenjoymyselfinthetour.(宾语从句)5.红星中学王校长是一位英语老师，在学校网站的英语栏目“HEARYOURVOICE”发帖，了解学生学习和学校食堂两方面的情况。假如你是学生李明，请根据校长的帖子，选择其中一个方面反映问题，并提出建议。←HEARYOURVOICEMr.WangDearstudents,Howiseverythinggoing?Doyouhaveanyproblemswithyourstudy?Forexample,doyouoftenstayuplatetofinishyourhomework?WhataboutourStudents’Canteen(食堂)?Areyousatisfiedwithyourlunch?Lookingforwardtoyourproblemsandadvice.5:20PM.Apr.16,2023注意：1.内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。2.词数80左右（回帖开头和结尾不计入总词数）。3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。.DearMr.Wang,IamLiMing,fromGradeNine._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully,LiMing【正确答案】Possibleversion1:DearMr.Wang,IamLiMing,fromGradeNine.Iwanttotellyousomethingaboutourstudy.Firstofall,properexerciseshelpuscheckwhatwehavelearned.Sincewehavesevensubjects,wehavetospendmorethanthreehoursfinishingourhomework.Wouldyoumaketeachersreducehomework?Besides,mostofusfindlessonsboring.Althoughexercisesandexamshelpusunderstandthekeypoints,theytakeuptoomuchtime.Dearheadmaster,youcan’timaginehowboringourschoollifeis.Ithinkteachersshouldimprovetheirteachingmethods.Ihopetheseproblemscanbedealtwithsoon.Yoursfaithfully,LiMingPossibleversion2:DearMr.Wang,IamLiMing,fromGradeNine.IwanttosaysomethingaboutourStudents’Canteen.First,Iamunhappywiththelunchfood.Sometimesitisnotdelicious.However,Ihavetoeatit.Morekindsofdishesshouldbeprovided.Moreover,thecanteenistoosmalltoholdsomanystudents.Whynotbuildalargerone?Finally,theenvironmentatthecanteenisnotsatisfying.Thetablesandchairsaresometimesdirty.Ithinkthecanteenworkersshoulddothecleaningmorecarefully.Iftheproblemscanbesolved,studentswillhaveahappiertimeoncampus.Yoursfaithfully,LiMing①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕王校长帖子中的问题进行写作。[写作步骤]第一步，开门见山，交代写作目的；第二步，阐述学生学习或学校食堂的问题并给出建议；第三步，表达自己的期望，希望这些问题能够成功解决。[亮点词汇]①firstofall首先②keypoints重点③takeup占据[高分句型]①Firstofall,properexerciseshelpuscheckwhatwehavelearned.（what引导的宾语从句）6.假如你是导游，请根据下表内容，用英语向外国朋友介绍“第十三届中国国际园林博览会（The13thChinaInternationalGardenExpoPark）”主展区的一些情况。地理位置位于徐州东南约30公里的吕梁山风景区，面积2595亩。开幕时间2022年11月6日。吉祥物徐徐、州州——形象可爱，阳光健康。主要展区情况共设65个展园，包括室外展和室内展。是一个集旅游、文化、教育、科技及农业展示为一体的综合性园林，……你的观点（自拟二条）注意：1)语言通顺，意思连贯，想象合理，书写规范；2)词数：90词左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：吕梁山风景区LvliangMountainScenicArea；吉祥物mascot；综合性comprehensive.Hello,guys!WelcometoourExpoPark.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【正确答案】Hello,guys!WelcometoourExpoPark.Nowletmeintroducethiswonderfulparktoyou.Hereisthemainexhibitionofthe13thChinaInternationalGardenExpoPark.ItislocatedinLvliangMountainScenicAreainthesoutheastofXuzhou.Ithasanareaof2595mu,about30kilometersawayfromXuzhouCity.TheGardenExpoParkopenedonNovember16lastyear,withthethemeof“GreenCity,GoodLife”.Herearethemascots—XuxuandZhouzhou.Theyaresocute,sunnyandhealthythatmanytouristslikethemverymuch.Asweallknow,thereare65exhibitionparksintotal,includingoutdoorexhibitionandindoorexhibition.Itisacomprehensivegardenmadeupoftourism,culture,education,science,technologyandagriculture.Itmainlyshowsthegreatachievementssuchasnewtechnologies,newmaterials,newartworksandnewequipment.IthinktheExpoParkisnotonlyanexhibitionofgardens,butalsotheprideofXuzhou’sdevelopment.ItshowstothepublicthatXuzhouisdevelopingsofastandbecomingmoreandmorebeautiful.Ihopeyouwillhaveagoodtimehere.①题材：这是一篇材料作文；②时态：主要是一般现在时；③提示：写作要点已经给出，需要按要求补充；除了开幕时间外，其他不需要用一般过去时。[写作步骤]第一步，描写地理位置；第二步，描写开幕时间、吉祥物、展区情况；第三步，描述自己的观点。[亮点词汇]①haveanareaof占地②withthethemeof主题为③acomprehensivegardenmadeupof由……组成的综合性园林④showthegreatachievements展示巨大的成就[高分句型]①Theyaresocute,sunnyandhealthythatmanytouristslikethemverymuch.（“so...that...”结构）②IthinktheExpoParkisnotonlyanexhibitionofgardens,butalsotheprideofXuzhou’sdevelopment.（“notonly...butalso...”结构）③ItshowstothepublicthatXuzhouisdevelopingsofastandbecomingmoreandmorebeautiful.（宾语从句）7.假如你是李华，看到某英语报社将要组织劳动体验和体育锻炼夏令营活动的宣传。请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。SummerCampLivingskillstraining●onafarm●livewithlocalpeople●cookmealsbyyourself●feedanimals,...Sportstraining●inatrainingcentre●livewithteammembers●betestedbycoaches●playballgames,...要求：1.所写内容必须包括一种活动的所有信息，可适当发挥;2.对你所选择的活动说明理由，并对其提出建议;3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数;4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.Iprefer__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【正确答案】DearSir/Madam,Thanksforofferingsuchmeaningfulcamps.IpreferlivingskillstrainingbecauseallthelivingskillsIwillgetduringtheprocesswillbeofgreatvaluetomylaterlife.Thelivingskillstrainingwillbeonafarm.There,Icanlivewithlocalpeoplewhowillhelpmelearnmoreabouttheircustomsandlifestyles.Moreover,whatmakesmeinterestedisthatIcancookbymyself.Inthesummercamp,Icantakepartinactivitiesonthefarmsuchasfeedinganimalsandpickingfruit.IalsohavesomeadviceforyouIhopetherewillbemoreactivitieslikegrowingplantsandvegetables.IhopeIwillenjoymyselfonthefarm.Yours,LiHua①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应先选择想要参与的活动，然后谈谈自己的理由，并给出一些建议。[写作步骤]第一步，表明自己更喜欢哪种活动并说明理由；第二步，更加详细地陈述理由，说明这种活动的好处；第三步，给出一些建议。[亮点词汇]①beofgreatvalue很有价值②takepartin参加[高分句型]①Ipreferlivingskil