2023年高考英语模拟题读后续写

2023年高考英语模拟题读后续写精选

01

个人成长（人与自我）

题目来源：重庆市高2023届高三第一次质量检测

阅读下面材料.根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段,使之构成一篇

完整的短文。

Thesoundofglassbreakingisinstantlyrecognizable.I'dbeen

tellingmybestfriendMissiasillystoryandhadspunaround

inthelivingroomwhenIheardthatsoundandfroze.

WhenIlookeddownatthecarpet,itwascoveredwithpieces

ofsparklingred,pinkandclearglass.Missisaid."Oh,no,

notthevase.''

“Why?WhatdidIdo?”Myfacereddened.

“Abby,thatglassvasewasoneofthefewitemsmyrelatives

broughtwhentheycametoAmerica,Missirepliednervously."If

you'dbrokenanythingelseintheapartment,Iwould,vegladly

saidIdidit.Butyou,regoingtohavetotellmymomthatit

wasyourfault,andshe,sgoingtobereallymad.”

Iwasterrified.I'ddestroyedapricelessfamilyheirloom（传

家宝）.WhydidIhavetospinaroundlikethat?

Wegathereduptheshatteredpieces.Ikeptsayingthatmaybeit

couldbefixed,butMissisaidgentlyitdidn'tlookpossible.

Iinsistedwekeepthepieces.Theglasswassofragile,like

acolorful,swirlylightbulbhadexploded.Someofitbroke

evenmoreaswetriedtosweepitupcarefully.

Missisaidhermomwouldbehomebysix.Mystomachwasinknots.

Wouldhermomyellatmeorpunishme?WouldshetellmeI

couldn'tstayintheirapartmentfortheweekend?Icouldn't

stopplayingthe“fifteensecondsoverinmymind,mespinning

fastandthesoundofglasscrashing.TheonlythingIcould

thinkoftosaywas"I'msorry.”

Acoupleofminutesaftersixweheardakeyturninthedoor.

Hermomwashome.Rightfromthestart,wecouldseeshewas

inagoodmood.Hello!It'shottoday.Iwanttotreatyougirls

tothatfrozenyogurtIknowyoulike,Let'sgo!”hermom

said.Shepointedattheopendoor.

注意；1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:

“Beforethat,Ineedtotellyousomething“Isaid.

Paragraph2:

Hearingmyapology,Missi'smothereruptedintoaloudscream

ofjoy.

话题：个人成长

主要内容：Abby无意间打碎了Missi家的传家宝--一只玻璃花瓶，

为此她非常忐忑不安。她诚实地向Missi的妈妈道歉，她没有责怪

Abby,宽慰她不要自责。这件事对Abby影响深远，使她成年后对人

更加宽容和包容。

参考范文

uBeforethat,Ineedtotellyousomething,“Isaid."Wecan

talkattheyogurtplace,“hermomsmiled."No.Ineedtotell

younow.It,simportant,“Iinsisted.Icouldfeelmyvoice

shakingandtriednottocry."Whatisit,dear?”shegently

asked,closingthedoorandwalkingclosertome.Ourhands

almosttouched.Withhereyesstudyingme,myheartbeatfaster.

"I'msorry,“Iblurtedout."I...Iwastalkingandlaughing

withMissiwhenIspunaroundandaccidentallybrokethevase.”

Ifurtherexplainedthatwesavedthepiecesbuttriedinvain

tofixit.Itstilllookedlikesmallpiecesofglass.

Hearingmyapology,Missi'smothereruptedintoaloudscream

ofjoy.Sheembracedme,kissingmeonbothcheeks."Oh,thank

you!Ialwayshatedthatuglyvase.Nowit'sgone!You,vedone

meahugefavor!”hermomexclaimedwithdelight.Although

relievedtohaveapologized,Iwasstillinshock,forthiswas

notatallthereactionIhadexpected.Itwasn'tuntilIreached

myadultyearsthatIrecognizedwhataprofoundgifther

mother'sgenerosityinwelcomingmyapologywas.Now,whenI

receiveagenuineapology,Ialwaysconsiderthepeople5s

feelingsandmakesuremyresponseshowsthemtheirapologywas

fullyheardandtrulyappreciated.

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02

助人篇（人与社会）

题目来源：2023届广州市高三年级阶段训练

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一

篇完整的短文。

OnasnowydayStevesatdownontheusualseatintheUnion

Square.EveryThanksgivingfornineyearshehadsatdownthere

atoneintheafternoon.Everytime,awonderfulthinghappened

tohim,whichmadehisheartfeelfullofjoy.

OnthoseotherThanksgivingDays,Steveusuallyhadbeenhungry.

ButtodayStevewasnothungry.Hehadcomefromadinnerso

bigthathehadalmostnopowertomove.Hisbodyhadsuddenly

becometoobigforhisclothes;itseemedreadytobreakout

ofthem.Theyweretorn.Youcouldseehisskinthroughahole

inthefrontofhisshirt.Butthecoldwind,withsnowinit,

feltpleasantlycooltohim.

Thedinnerhadnotbeenexpected.Hehadbeenpassingalarge

housenearthebeginningofthatgreatbroadstreetcalledFifth

Avenue,wherelivedtwoladiesofanoldfamilywhohadadeep

loveoftraditionthatonThanksgivingDayfoodwillbeoffered

tothefirsthungrypersontowalkby.TodayStevehappenedto

betheonetopassbyonhiswaytothepark.

Stevesatinthepark,appearingtobewaitingforsomebody,

butappearingnottoexpectsomethingtohappen.Suddenlyhis

eyesgrewwiderandhisbreathstopped.Fortheoldgentleman

wascomingacrossFourthAvenuetowardSteve'sseat.

EveryThanksgivingDayfornineyearstheoldgentlemanhadcome

theretofindSteveonhisseat.ThenhehadledStevetoa

restaurantandwatchedhimeatabigdinner,whichhadbeena

partofThanksgivingDay.Theoldgentlemanwasthinandtall

andsixty.Hishairwaswhiterandthinnerthanithadbeenlast

year.Hislegsshook,seemingnotasstrongastheywerethe

yearbefore.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:

Asthiskindoldgentlemancametowardhim,Stevebegantoshake

andhisbreathwasshorter.

Paragraph2:

Withthesewords,theoldmanlookedintoSteve'seyes,

expectingStevetoacceptthedinner.

话题：助人篇

主要内容：今年的感恩节，Steve在第五大道的一所大宅里饱餐了一

顿美食。九年以来的每个感恩节，一位老先生都会请他吃大餐。今年

老先生如约又来请他吃饭，可是Steve已经吃得很饱了，他会拒绝还

是接受老先生的邀请以便给他施恩的机会呢？

参考范文

Asthiskindoldgentlemancametowardhim,Stevebegantoshake

andhisbreathwasshorter.Hewishedhecouldflyaway.But

hecouldnotmovefromhisseat."Goodafternoon,“saidthe

oldgentleman."Gladtoseeyouagain.Comewithme,myman,

andIwillgiveyouadinnerthatwillsurelymakeyourbody

feelasthankfulasyourmind."Thosearewhattheoldgentleman

saideverytime.Thewordsthemselveswerealmostatradition.

Alwaysbefore,theyhadbeenmusicinSteve'sear.Butnowhe

lookedupattheoldgentleman'sface,totallyatalosswhat

tosay.

Withthesewords,theoldmanlookedintoSteve'seyes,

expectingStevetoacceptthedinner.Stevehesitatedforhalf

aminute,helplessandverysorryforhimself.AndthenSteve

madeastrangenoise,andsaid:uThankyou.I'mveryhungry.v

whichtheoldgentlemanhadheardninetimesbefore,he

understoodit.Stevewasveryfull,butheunderstoodthathe

wasapartofatradition.HisdesireforfoodonThanksgiving

Daywasnothisown.Itbelongedtothiskindoldgentleman.

Thenhestruggledtostandupandfollowedthegentlemaninthe

snow.

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03

救助动物（人与自然）

题目来源：江苏省百校联考高三年级第一次考试

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一

篇完整的短文。

I'mfromthefishingtownofKinsale,inIreland.Lifeispretty

goodthere,butDubaicaughtmyattentionwhenIwas18.Imoved

theremyself10yearsagoasa30-year-oldfilm-maker.It's

beenawildride,fullofchaosandwonder.

Mywife,Christine,livesherewithme;whenhersisterAngela

cametovisitinAprilthisyear,thethreeofussetoffin

mypickuptruck.Itwasacloudlessday,touching40℃.The

heatandhumiditywereviolent,sowehadtosightseefromthe

car.

WetookthescenicroutebetweenDubaiandRasal-Khaimah,a

charmingcityinthenorth.Ayearearlier,whileoff-roading

withafriend,Igotstuckatawatercrossingthere,atthe

onlyinletonthecoast,wheretheseaflowsintoaswampylagoon

（咸水湖）.Ihadtoberescued,andlearnedhowquicklythetide

（潮水）couldcomein.

ChristinespottedwhatlookedliketheLochNessmonsterstuck

inthesand.Wedecidedtoinvestigateanddroveuptowhere

thesandmetthelagoon.Itwasacamel,notmoving.

Sincerelocatinghere,Ihavealwayskeptashovel,rope,

torchesandknivesinmycar一gettingstuckinthedesertcan

bedebilitating（耗费体力）.

Igotoutmyshovelandapproachedthecamel.Itwasafemale;

wenicknamedherStucky.Itlookedasifshehadbeentrapped

forhours一shewasinquitedeep.I'vebeenaroundcamelsa

lotinDubai;theyaremassive.Theycanbefriendly,butthey

canalsobefierce.IapproachedStuckyslowlyandstartedto

gentlydigawaythesandaroundher.Ikeptpattingher.Iknew

ifsheswungherheadaroundquickly,shecouldinjureherself,

orme.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:

Christinefilmedmyrescueattemptandpostedphotosonsocial

media.

Paragraph2:

Luckily,atthatpoint,apickuparrivedcarrying7guyswith

allsortsofapparatus（装备）.

话题：救助动物

主要内容：我和妻子、妻妹三人在沙漠旅行途中遇见一只被困的大骆

驼。我用工具想把它从沙子里救出来，我的妻子把我救助的视频发到

了社交媒体上，希望在附近的人能看到并来救助。

参考范文

Christinefilmedmyrescueattemptandpostedphotosonsocial

media.AngelagaveStuckywater.Ifocusedondiggingouther

backlegs.WhenItriedtowipethesweatfrommyeyes,Iwould

getsandinthem.Anhourlater,westillweren，tmakingmuch

progress一wheneverwenearlyfreedaleg,whichtookabout20

minutes,shewouldgetsuckedbackintothesand.Andthemore

shestruggledtogetfree,themorestuckshebecame.Wewere

worrieditwouldgetdarkandthetidewouldcomein.

Luckily,atthatpoint,apickuparrivedcarrying7guyswith

allsortsofapparatus（装备）.Someonesawpostedphotosofthe

camelrescueonsocialmedia.Wordthenquicklyspreadtothe

smallfarmsafewkilometresaway.Theyjoinedinandworked

super-hard.EveryonewasworkingonallfourofthecameTslegs

atthesametime,usingdifferenttechniques.Whenwefinally

gotherout,Stucky'slegswereeffectivelydead.Thetheguys

massagedherlegstogetthebloodflowing.Ittookabout20

minutesforhertostand.Thensheturned,stretchedandgave

usawinkgoodbye.

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043

实现理想（励志成长）人与自我

题目来源：浙江省Z20联盟高三第一次联考

阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成

一篇完整的短文。

Ihadadreamfromprimaryschool:toworkintelevision.My

parentsownedalittlegrocerystore,soweweredefinitelynot

fancypeople.Thankfully,mydadhadraisedmetohavealot

ofconfidence.Heoftensaid,“Youcandoanythingyouwantto

do.”Mydadwasparticularlysupportive.Hewasmysteadyrock

一alwaysthereforme.

Withhishelpandencouragement,Iwasadmittedtotheradio

andtelevisionartsprogramatRyersoninToronto.Ireally

lovedtheprogramandworkedhardandIwasnamedthemost

outstandinggraduate.IfeltlikeIwasalreadylivingmydream.

IbegantothinkthatmaybeIcouldapplyforaninternship（实

习资格）inCBCorCTV.

Luckily,GlobalTelevisionhadjuststartedbroadcastingin

Canadathatyear.Ithoughttomyself:I'mnewandthey,renew,

soifrmgoingtogettoknowonepersonatGlobal,itmight

aswellbethepresident.Iwasscared,butIknewdeepdown

insidethatthiswaswhatIwanted.WhenIcalledmydadand

toldhimmyplan,hesaid,“Good,Faye.That,sexactlywhat

youshoulddo.”

Withmyheartjustaboutpoundingoutofmybody,Icalledup

thepresidentofGlobalTelevision.SuddenlyMr.Slaightwas

onthephone."I'veheardthatyourstudiofacilitiesare

amazing.Icouldcomeateleveno,clockonMondayoreleven

o,clockonSundayforatour.Whatwouldsuityoubetter?”I

caughthimtotallyoffguard.Hestutteredabit,andthen

pickedaday.WhenIhungup,Iwasscaredbutexcited.

Iarrivedatthestudioontheappointedday.WhenMr.Slaight

tookmearound,helookedatmeandsaid,“Whatdoyouwant?”

Hesoundedfuriousbutcurious."AllIwantisachanceto

audition（试镜）Ijustwantyoutoknowmyface,That'sallI'm

asking”

Ididn，tknowwhetherI,deverhearfromhimagain,burtwoweeks

later,hissecretarycalled."Mr.Slaightwantstoknowifyou'd

liketocomeandauditionforanewschoollifeshow."I

immediatelyanswered,"Sure!”

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:

WhenIarrivedatthestation,Iwentdirectintotheaudition

andbeganmyshortperformance.

Paragraph2:

FinallycamethedayofmyfirstpublicappearanceonliveTV

withmyparentsathomewatching.

话题：实现理想（励志成长）

主要内容：我一直努力实现去电视台工作的梦想。幸运的是新开播的

加拿大全球电视台在招兵买马，我勇敢地给电视总裁打电话自荐，他

给了我试镜的机会，我的梦想得以实现。

参考范文

WhenIarrivedatthestation,Iwentdirectintotheaudition

andbeganmyshortperformance.Withboldness,Ifinishedmy

performancerelativelysmoothlythoughpalmsweresweating.

NeverinmywildestdreamdidIimaginethatIwasindeed

assignedtheinternjobtoactonaschoollifeshowandmyfirst

publicappearanceonTVwasinfivedays.Aftersharingthe

thrillingnewswithmydad,Ireceivedthewarmest

congratulationsandexpectationsfrommyfamily.Picturingmy

familieseagerlywaitingformyperformance,Iworkeddayand

nightasbusyasabeeforfearthatIwouldmakeafoolofmyself

liveonTV.

FinallycamethedayofmyfirstpublicappearanceonliveTV

withmyparentsathomewatching.Wearingfancydressand

delicatemakeup,Iwassoproudbutnervousthatmyshowwould

bewatchedbysomanyaudience.Mymindsuddenlywentblankas

Iwasimmersedinmythoughtsandtotallyforgotmylines.Deep

frownsgraduallyclimbedonmypartners'face,withwhose

suddenvigorouspull,Iwasdrivenbacktothereality.Isoon

cameupwithalittletricktomakeupfortheembarrassingblank.

Astheshowwenton,soconcentratedwasIthatIhardlydared

toevenblinkmyeyes.Aftermydebut,Irangmydadwith

frustrationanddisappointment,onlytoreaphistrustand

encouragementagain.Itwasliterallydad'slovethatsupported

mealongmywaytobeanoutstandingactor.

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05

助人篇（人与自我）

题目来源：2023湖北名校联盟高三第一次测评

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一

篇完整的短文。

“Goback,Mom!Goback!”shoutedmysix-year-olddaughter,June.

Iquicklyturnedaroundtocastmydoubtfuleyesontheback

seat,worriedIhadforgottenheryoungersister.Iwasrelieved

toseethegirlssafeandsitintheircarseats,butJune's

expressionwasoneofpureanxiety."Mom,wehavetogoback,“

sheinsisted."Someoneneedsourhelp!”

AsIlookedbackfromthedriver'sseat,Ispottedayoungman

inragsplayinghisguitar.Hisskinny,poor-lookingdogrested

nexttohisfeetnearanold,worncardboardsignthatread,

“Homeless,pleasehelp.”

We,dcomeacrosshomelesspeoplebeforeandhadtalkedabout

theirneedsandstruggles.Ishouldseizethechancetoseta

goodexampleformydaughterstogiveahelpinghand.SoI

searchedforsomecash,onlytofindIhadnothingbutcredit

cards."I'msorry,sweetheart,butIdon'thaveanycash,"I

said."Ihavesome,Mom!”Junereplied.Sheopenedherlittle

pinkpurseandpulledoutafive-dollarbill."Oh,good.I'11

payyoubackwhenwegethome,“Irespondedwithasighofrelief.

“No,Mom,"sheinsisted,“Iwanttohelphim.Idon'twant

youtopaymeback.Iwanttogivehimmymoney.”

Aswedrovedownthecrowdedrowsoftheparkinglot,I

reassuredherthatwewouldgettohim.Whenwegotthere,I

calledout,uExcuseme,sir!”Hecautiouslywalkedtowardour

carandanswered,“Yes,ma'am?”"Hereyougo,sir."June

stretchedoutherentirebodytohandhimherfivedollarbill

throughthewindowandexplained,“Iwantyoutohavethis.”

Hesmiledandhesitatinglyasked,“Thiswasyourmoney?”"Yes!

Iwantyoutohaveit,“sheproudlyanswered."Thankyou,“

hesaid,touchedbyherthoughtfulness.

Weexchangedasmile,andaswedroveaway,myyoungerdaughter

Scarlettbegantocry.Ihadn'tnoticedthatshehademptied

herpurseandwasholdingtwoquartersinhertinyhands.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph1:

uMom,Iwantedtohelp,too,"shesobbed.

Paragraph2:

Nowwithtearsinhiseyes,hesaidindisbelief,“Youwant

tohelpme?”

话题：助人篇

主要内容：两个很小的孩子在回家的途中把自己的零用钱送给一个无

家可归的青年。

参考范文

uMom,IwantedtoHelp,too,"shesobbed.Shefeltlikeshe

hadmissedout.Ididn,tknowhowtoletherunderstandthat

twoquarterswastoolittle.ButbeforeIcouldmakeupa

suitableexplanation,sheannounced,“Mom,heneedshelp!”I

sighedandturnedaround.Seeingusagain,thegentlemanlooked

confused.Iawkwardlyexplainedthatmyotherdaughterwanted

togivehimhermoneyjustashereldersisterhadjustdone.

Hepeeredintothevanwindowtoseemypig-tailedfour-year-old

grinningfromeartoear."Iwanttohelpyou!”shedeclared

proudly.

Nowwithtearsinhiseyes,hesaidindisbelief,“Youwantto

helpme?”Shenoddedfirmlyandhappily.ThenJuneproudly

handedhimScarlett'scoins.Hetightlyclutchedtheminhis

dirt-stainedhandandshowereduswithsincereblessings.Two

quarterswasn'tmuch,eventotheman,butwhatmatteredtohim

anduswasthelovinggesturemygirlsmade.Onourwayback

home,Juneputherhandonherheart,closedhereyes,andtold

herlittlesister,“Itfeelssogoodtohelpsomeone,doesn，t

it,Sisterbaby?”Scarlettagreed.Withbigsmiles,theysank

backintotheirseats.

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06

友情篇（人与社会）

题目来源：2022.8浙江“山水联盟”高三联考

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一

篇完整的短文。

Onthefirstdayofschool,Istaredinaweatthehugebuildings.

ThishighschoolwasdefinitelybiggerthantheoneIhad

previouslyattended.

Thiswasmysecondyearofhighschool,butmyfirstyearof

schoolinSt.Louis.IhaddecidedthenightbeforethatIwould

bemuchhappierinanewschoolifImadefriendsthatwere

so-called“popular”.Gettinginwiththerightgroupofpeople

wouldmakemylifeawholelotbetter.Ievenboughtanewoutfit

andhadmyhairstyledjustsothefirstdaywouldbeperfect.

Scared,yetanxioustobeginmynewlife,Iwalkedupthestairs

tothefrontdoor.Thehallswerepackedwithkidsyellingand

laughingandtellingstoriesoftheirsummeradventures.My

firstclasswasgeometry,butwherewasthat?

Iwasstandinginthehalllookingconfused,whenashort,blond

girlwearingglassescameupandasked,“Areyounew?Youlook

lost.Doyouneedhelp?MynameisDiane.What,syours?”Even

thoughsheseemedabitstrange,definitelynotthekindof

personIwantedtobeassociatedwith,Idecidedtoanswerher

anyway.Iwas,afterall,lost.

Afterexchangingnames.Ifollowedherupthestairsanddown

ahallwayontheright,makingpoliteconversationthewhole

way.Whenwereachedmyroomshesaid,“Well,hereyouare.

WelcometoJFK,andIhopeyourdaygoesallright.”

Isaidthanksandwavedgood-bye.Onceinsidetheclassroom,

Isawonebiggroupofpeoplehuddledaroundsomeonewhoseemed

tobetellingsomesortofstory.Iwalkedoverandgotclose

enoughtooverhear.Alleyesweregluedtotheguyinthemiddle

ofthecirclewhowaswearingaletterjacketcoveredwith

patches.Idecidedthatthisguywaspopular,soImanagedto

getaseatrightnexttohim.Isaid,“Hi,mynameisLisaand

I'mnewhere."Hesaid,“Johnny.”

注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右:

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置答题。

Paragraph1:

Attheendoftheclass,Iturnedtohimandasked,"I'mnot

surewheremynextclassis,couldyouhelpme?”

Paragraph2:

Justatthattime,someonecameupandtappedmeontheshoulder.

话题：友情篇

主要内容：Lisa高二转学至圣路易斯的一所学校，她希望在新环境

中和最受欢迎的学生交朋友。上学的第一天她找不到上几何课的教

室，一个名叫Diane的女生主动带她去教室，在那她见到一位很受欢

迎的男生Johnny。她主动想结识这位男生，不料在向他求助时却遭

到冷遇。谁会帮助Lisa呢？什么样的人适合做朋友呢？

参考范文

Attheendoftheclass,Iturnedtohimandasked,"I'mnot

surewheremynextclassis,couldyouhelpme?”Withafrown,

helookedatmeandthensaidaquickno,turnedbacktohis

friends,andwalkedoutoftheclassroom.Astheywerewalking

outIheardhimsay,“Didyouguysseethatnewgirltrying

togetintoourgroup?Thatoutfitwaswaytoostrange."They

alllaughedandsomeofthemturnedaroundandstaredatme.

Myfacehotwithshame,Istoodstock-still,notbelievingwhat

hadjusthappened.

Justatthattime,someonecameupandtappedmeontheshoulder.

ItwasDiane.Likearayofsunshine,thebigsmileonherface

sweptawaymygloom.Istruggledtoholdmyfeelingsbackand

toldherwhatIhadencountered.Agleamofconcerninhereyes,

shesaidshewassorryandofferedtofindmynextclass.At

thatmomentIrealizedhowwrongIwasinwantingtoonlybe

friendswithpopularpeople.MaybeIshouldn，tdecidewhether

apersonisworthbeingmyfriendornotbytheirreputation,

butbywhotheyare.

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07

生活体验（旅途）（人与自然）

题目来源：浙江省杭州二中2023届新高三2022学年适应性测试

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一

篇完整的短文。

Edundidnotwanttogoonahike.Sheespeciallydidnotwant

togoonalonghikeinthemountainsthatledtoatinycabin

（小木屋）withnoelectricityandnorunningwater.Shewanted

tostayhomereadingabookinsteadwhilewrappedinawarm

blanket.

“Ready?”Momaskedcheerfullyafterbreakfast.Edunlooked

outofthewindowandonlysawrain,lotsofit."Weshould

goanotherday,“Edunsuggested."Maybeahundredyearsfrom

now."Sheworriedshewouldgettiredonthehike.Sheworried

aboutgettingboredatthedarkcabin.Momsaiditwastimeto

stopworryingandgetintothecar.

Edun'sbrother,Will,waswaitinginthegarage,whoworea

cameraaroundhisneck.WillwasfouryearsolderthanEdunand

hadclimbedmanymoremountains.He'dstartedhikingwhenhe

wastwoandlovedit.

Becauseitwasraining,Edunhadtowearherrainpants,her

rainhat,herrainjacket,andherwaterproofboots.Herjacket

hadaroughmaterialontheinside.Shedidn'tlikehowitfelt

againstherskin.

Afterabouthalfanhour'sdrive,theyparkedatatrailhead

（登山口）.Therainhadstoppedbutthegroundwasstill

drippingwet."We'11betherebyafternoon!”Mompromised.

Theafternoonsoundedfaraway.

Willidentifiedabirdsittingonanearbybranch一"Fox

sparrow!”一thenheraceddownthetrailandwassoonoutof

sight.

Edunrestedunderapinetree."Youcan'tforcemetowalk,“

Edunsaid."You'reright,“saidhermomsmilingly,standing

underthetree,too,"Butyouwillneverknowwhatmaylieahead

andamazeus.

注意:

1.续写词数应为150词左右；

2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

Paragraph1:

ThinkingMomwasright,Edunfollowedherdownthetrail.

Paragraph2:

Twentyminuteslater,theysawthecabin.

话题：生活体验（旅途）

主要内容：Edun不喜欢去山区远足，在妈妈的催促下，和哥哥Will

一起出发了。雨天使他们的行程更加艰难。雨停后，Edun站在高处,

惊叹于眼前美丽的风景。世界如此美好，一定要去看看。

参考范文

ThinkingMomwasright,Edunfollowedherdownthetrail.They

passedawaterfall,tinyyetclear.Thetricklingofwatermade

Edunfeelbetter.Toheramazement,astheywalkedon,there

wasalwayssomethingtolookforinthewetgreenwoods:animal

tracks,wildflowers,littlecreeks.Soontheycaughtupwith

Will,whoeagerlyshowedthemthephotoshetookoftheFox

sparrowrestingonabranch.Togethertheywenton,strolling

pastscratchybushes,climbingovergrayrocksandhiking

throughdwarftrees.Edunloomedabovethoselittletrees,

exclaiming,“Look,Mom,I'magiant."Unknowinglytheyhad

alreadydonemostoftheclimb.

Twentyminuteslater,theysawthecabin.EdunandWillstarted

racingupthehill.Finally,theretheywereinthesmallbut

cozycabin.Throughitswindow,Edunsawfarawaymeadowsand

lakes,andmanymoremountains,awholenewworldemerging

beforehereyes.Thatnight,everybodystayeduplatetosee

thestars.Somanystarsclusteringupthere,Edunproposed,

“Ineedtotakeapictureofthem.”"Click!”Thecamerafroze

themoment.Radiantwithasmile,EdunapproachedMomandhugged

her,whispering,uMom,thankyouforhavingmecome!”

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08

助人篇（人与社会）

题目来源：金太阳开学联考试卷

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一

篇完整的短文。

Aftergraduatingfromcollege,Iworkedasasalesmanfora

pianocompany.Weadvertisedourpianosinsmalltown

newspapersandthen,whenwereceivedmanyreplies,wewould

loadourlittletrucks,driveintotheareaandsellthepianos

tothosewhohadreplied.Everytimeweadvertised,wewould

receiveareplyonapostcardwhichsaid,“Pleasebringmea

newpianoformylittlegranddaughter.Itmustberedmahogany

（红木）.Icanpay$10amonthwithmyeggmoney."Ofcourse,

wecouldnotsellanewpianofor$10amonth.Nofinancecompany

wouldcarryacontractwithpaymentsthatsmall,soweignored

herpostcards.

Oneday,however,Ihappenedtobeinthatareacallingonother

replies,andoutofcuriosityIdecidedtomeettheoldlady.

IfoundprettymuchwhatIexpected:Theoldladylivedina

one-roomcabininthemiddleofacottonfield.Thecabinhad

adirtfloorandtherewerechickensinthehouse.Obviously,

shecouldnothavequalifiedtopurchaseanythingoncredit

一nocar,nophone,norealjob,nothingbutaroofoverher

head.Icouldseedaylightthroughtheroofinseveralplaces.

Herlittlegranddaughterwasabout10,barefootandwearinga

feedsack（麻布袋）dress.Iexplainedtotheoldlady