书面表达16篇(北京名校真题)-2024年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递(北京专用)

2024年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递(北京专用)第四期专题06书面表达16篇1．（2024·北京东城·一模）假设你是李华，在学生会负责今年体育节吉祥物(mascot)的设计征集活动。你校交换生Peter对该活动很感兴趣，他给你发来邮件，询问吉祥物设计的具体要求及提交(submit)的时间和方式。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所知道的相关内容。提示词语：creative,culture,colourful,draw,email提示问题：●Whatarethedesignrequirementsforthemascot?●WhenandhowshouldPetersubmithisdesign?DearPeter,I’mgladtoknowthatyou’reinterestedinthemascotdesignforourschool’sSportsFestival.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Goodluckwithyourdesign!Yours,LiHua【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearPeter,I’mgladtoknowthatyou’reinterestedinthemascotdesignforourschool’sSportsFestival.Thedesignisexpectedtobecreative.Itshouldshowthesportsmanshipandourschoolculture.Colourfulandattractivedesignsarehighlypreferred.Youcancreateyourdesignindifferentways.Bothhanddrawingandcomputerdrawingareacceptable.YouneedtosubmityourdesignbynextFriday,June15th.Justemailittomascotdesign@.Pleasemakesureyouincludeyourfullnameandclassintheemail.Goodluckwithyourdesign!Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。引出有关体育节吉祥物设计事宜；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从创新、文化和颜色等方面详细介绍了吉祥物的设计思路；第三步，表达希望设计方案能被选上的愿望。[亮点词汇]①indifferentways以不同的方式②both…and…不但……而且……③needtodosth.需要做某事[高分句型]①Thedesignisexpectedtobecreative.(一般现在时的被动语态)②Pleasemakesureyouincludeyourfullnameandclassintheemail.(祈使句)2．（2024·北京西城·一模）初中三年，一定有很多课给你留下了深刻的印象。假设你是李华。你校英文公众号正在开展以“MyMostMemorableClass”为主题的征文活动，请用英文写一篇文章投稿，介绍你最难忘的一节课，并谈谈这节课为什么令你难忘。提示词语：science,music,experiment,sing,interesting提示问题：●Whatwasyourmostmemorableclass?●Whywastheclassmemorable?MyMostMemorableClass________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyMostMemorableClassWehavehadthousandsoflessonsinmiddleschool.Someofthemhaveleftadeepimpressiononme.Amongthem,themostmemorableoneisaphysicsclassIhadlastterm.Intheclass,ourphysicsteacherMr.Liubroughtsomematerialsandaskedustousethemtodoanexperiment.IwasconfidentthatIcoulddoagoodjob,becauseIhadworkedoutalloftheexperimenthomeworkproblems.Iofferedtoperformtheexperimentinfrontofthewholeclass.However,Ijustcouldn’tputwhatIhadlearntintopracticenomatterhowhardItried.Asyoucanimagine,Iwassoembarrassed!ThephysicsclasswasreallymemorablebecauseIlearnedanimportantlifelessonfromitsrealknowledgecomesfrompractice.Ialsolearnedtobemodestandprudent,whichwillpositivelyinfluencemyfuturelife.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己最难忘的课；第二步，阐述难忘的原因；第三步，总结说明从难忘的课程中学到了什么。[亮点词汇]①leftadeepimpression留下深刻印象②performtheexperiment做实验[高分句型]①However,Ijustcouldn’tputwhatIhadlearntintopracticenomatterhowhardItried.(what引导宾语从句)②ThephysicsclasswasreallymemorablebecauseIlearnedanimportantlifelessonfromitsrealknowledgecomesfrompractice.(because引导原因状语从句)3．（2024·北京通州·一模）某英文网站青少年板块正在开展以“学会和父母相处”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，分享你和父母之间发生的一个冲突，你是如何恰当地处理的，以及你从中得到的启示。提示词语：disagreement,spend,cellphone,shout,communicate提示问题：·Whatwastheproblembetweenyourparentsandyou?·Howdidyoudealwithit?·Whathaveyoulearnedfromit?Problemsareoftenaroundus._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Problemsareoftenaroundus.Ilovemyparentsandtheylovemeaswell,butwealsohavedisagreementsandsometimeswemakeeachotherunhappy.Oneday,Ispenttoomuchtimeonmycellphonebecauseoftalkingabouttheschoolprojectwithmyclassmates.MymumwasangryandshoutedatmebecauseshethoughtIwastedmytime.IknewsheworriedaboutmesoIdidn’tclosemydoorthistime.IexplainedthereasonandtoldherthatIunderstoodherworries.Shesaidsorrytomebecauseofhermisunderstanding.Fromthisexperience,Ihavelearnedtheimportanceofcommunicatingandunderstanding.Irealizethatlisteningtoothersandexpressingclearlycanpreventmisunderstandings.Inaddition,takingresponsibilityformyactionsandshowingtrustworthinesscanhelpmebuildabetterrelationshipwithmyparents.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：一般过去时、一般现在时；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图；第二步，介绍自己与父母之间发生的一个冲突及自己的处理方式；第三步，阐述自己从这次冲突中懂得的道理。[亮点词汇]①talkingabout...with...与……谈论……②worriedabout担心③saidsorryto向……道歉④takingresponsibilityfor对……负责⑤buildabetterrelationshipwith建立更好的关系[高分句型]①MymumwasangryandshoutedatmebecauseshethoughtIwastedmytime.（because引导原因状语从句）②Irealizethatlisteningtoothersandexpressingclearlycanpreventmisunderstandings.（that引导宾语从句，动词ing作主语）4．（2024·北京大兴·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom向你发来电子邮件，想了解你在生活中有哪些处理废旧物品的做法。请你给他回复一封英文电子邮件，介绍你的相应做法及理由。提示词语：waste,decorate(装饰),protect,environment提示问题：Howdoyoudealwiththewaste?Whatisyourreason?DearTom,I’mgladtointroducemyways...___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ifyouhaveanyothergoodideas,writetomesoon.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearTom,I’mgladtointroducemywaystodealwiththewaste.Ioftencutawastebottleinhalf,andthenIcangetaspecialcontainerwhichIcanputmypensandotherthingsin.Besides,Ialsotrytomakethemintoartpiecestodecoratemyroom.Intheseways,InotonlyimprovemyDIYskillsbutalsohelpprotecttheenvironment.ThemostimportantisthatIturnthesewastethingsintousefulthingsandgivethemnewlives.Ifyouhaveanyothergoodideas,writetomesoon.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍是如何处理废品的；第三步，书写结语，表达期待。[亮点词汇]①cutsth.inhalf把某物切成两半②notonly...butalso...不仅……而且……[高分句型]①Ioftencutawastebottleinhalf,andthenIcangetaspecialcontainerwhichIcanputmypensandotherthingsin.（定语从句）②ThemostimportantisthatIturnthesewastethingsintousefulthingsandgivethemnewlives.（表语从句）5．（2024·北京海淀·一模）学而致知，行而致远。假设你是李华。某英文网站正在开展以“学以致用”为主题的征文活动。请用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享一次你运用所学解决实际问题的经历，并谈谈你的收获。提示词语：skill,makeuseof,connect,improve,meaningful提示问题：●Whatexperiencecanyoushareaboutputtingwhatyou'velearnedintopractice?●Whathaveyoulearnedfromit?It’simportanttoputwhatwe’velearnedintopractice.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：It’simportanttoputwhatwe’velearnedintopractice.Lastsummerholiday,IlearnedsomefirstaidknowledgesuchasCPRandHeimlichManeuver.Oneday,mylittersisterwaschokedbyacandyandcouldn’tbreathe.Seeingthis,IthoughtofwhatIlearntlastsummerholidayshortly.Then,Istoodbehindmysisterandappliedpressuretoherabdomen.Fortunately,thecandyinherthroatwasspitout.Atlast,Icalled120forfurthercheck.Fromthisexperience,Ihavelearnedtheimportanceofthecombinationoftheoryandpractice,whichnotonlyenablesustohaveabetterunderstandingofwhatwehavelearned,butalsomakescontributionstooursociety.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；③提示：根据所给提示问题完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图；第二步，介绍自己学以致用的一次经历；第三步，阐述自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①suchas比如②applysthtosth将……运用……③thinkof想起[高分句型]Ihavelearnedtheimportanceofthecombinationoftheoryandpractice,whichnotonlyenablesustohaveabetterunderstandingofwhatwehavelearned,butalsomakescontributionstooursociety.(定语从句)6．（2024·北京海淀·一模）假设你是李华。你的好朋友Peter正在参与筹备他们学校的“校园劳动日”活动，他写信向你征求创意。请你用英语给他写一封回信，提供一些活动创意并说明理由。提示词语：cleanup,repair,garden,fun,responsibility提示问题：●Whatactivitieswouldyouliketosuggest?●Whydoyousuggestso?DearPeter,I’mexcitedtohearthatyou’reorganizingactivitiesforSchoolServiceDay.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Idohopethatmysuggestionswillbehelpful.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearPeter,

I’mexcitedtohearthatyou’reorganizingactivitiesforSchoolServiceDay.AndI’dliketosharesomeideaswithyou.First,Ithinkit’sagoodideatoorganizeclean-upactivities.Forexample,studentscancleantheclassroomandplayground,whichcanmaketheschoolmuchcleanerandmorebeautiful.What’smore,youcanaskstudentstorepairthebrokendesksandchairs.Itwillbegreatfun.Moreover,youcanarrangeforstudentstowaterthegarden.Theywillfeelastrongsenseofresponsibilitytobeautifytheschool.Idohopethatmysuggestionswillbehelpful.

Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：一般现在时、一般将来时；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我想和你分享一些想法”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“清洁活动、修理活动、给花园浇水活动等”几个方面重点介绍；第三步，书写结语。表达“希望建议能有所帮助”的愿望。[亮点词汇]①share...with...和……分享……②What’smore另外③arrangeforstudentsto...安排学生……④waterthegarden给花园浇水⑤feelastrongsenseofresponsibility有强烈的责任感⑥beautifytheschool美化学校[高分句型]①First,Ithinkit’sagoodideatoorganizeclean-upactivities.（that引导宾语从句，that省略；it固定句式）②Forexample,studentscancleantheclassroomandplayground,whichcanmaketheschoolmuchcleanerandmorebeautiful.（which引导非限制性定语从句）③Theywillfeelastrongsenseofresponsibilitytobeautifytheschool.（动词不定式作定语）7．（23-24九年级上·北京·期末）假如你是李华，你和你的英国笔友Peter都热心参与志愿服务，他给你发来邮件询问你参与志愿服务的情况。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所参加过的一次志愿者活动，并谈谈你的感受。不少于50词。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。提示词语：Children’sHome,tellstories,teach,tired,happy提示问题：●Wheredidyoudothevolunteerwork?●Whatdidyoudothere?●Howdidyoufeel?DearPeter,I’mgladtotellyouaboutthevolunteerworkIdid.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】范文：DearPeter,I’mgladtotellyouaboutthevolunteerworkIdid.Lastsummer,IgotanopportunitytovolunteerataChildren’sHomeinthecommunity.Mymaindutywastotakecareofchildrenagedfivetosevenyearsold.Theywereveryfriendly.TheyshowedmebigsmileswhentheysawabagofgiftsIbroughtforthem.Ididlotsofthingswiththem.Itoldstories,sangsongs,andtaughtthemsomethingIwasgoodat.Itwasawonderfulday.Iwashappytobeabletodosomethingforlittlekids.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。②时态：时态为“一般过去时”。③提示：文章为第一人称，向别人介绍自己的志愿服务经历和感受。问题回答完整，提示词运用在文章中去，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出地点在哪里做的志愿服务；第二步，具体介绍自己做了哪些事情；第三步，谈谈自己对于这次志愿服务活动的感受。[亮点词汇]①takecareof照顾②wasgoodat擅长③washappyto高兴做某事④beableto能、会⑤opportunity机会[高分句型]①TheyshowedmebigsmileswhentheysawabagofgiftsIbroughtforthem.（时间状语从句）②Ireadstories,sangsongs,andtaughtthemsomethingIwasgoodat.（限制性定语从句）③Mymaindutywastotakecareofchildrenagedfivetosevenyearsold.（动词不定式作表语）8．（23-24九年级上·北京·期末）好的习惯有着无穷的力量，它如同种子在日复一日的坚持中生根发芽，茁壮成长。学校英文网站开展“好习惯伴我成长”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的一个好习惯是什么，你是如何保持的以及它带给你的收获。不少于50词；文中已给出内容不计入总词数；所给提示词语仅供选用；请不要写出你的校名和姓名。提示词语：reading,keepdoing,freetime,improve,knowledge提示问题：●Whatisyourgoodhabit?●Howdoyoukeepyourgoodhabit?●Whatcanyougetfromyourgoodhabit?Goodhabitscanchangeourwholelife.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文Goodhabitscanchangeourwholelife.Oneofmygoodhabitsistakingnotesinclass.Inclass,Itakedownwhatmyteacherswriteontheblackboardandotherimportantpointsaboutmylessons.Ikeepmynoteswell-organizedandtidysothatIcanfindinformationeasilylater.BeforeIdomyhomeworkandtakeexams,Ireviewmynotescarefully.Thehabitoftakingnoteshelpsmebecomeasuccessfulstudent.Itnotonlyimprovesmylearningabilities,butalsohelpsmegetgoodgrades.Agoodhabitreallyhelpsmeinmystudyanddailylife.I’llkeepitlifelong.【详解】[总体分析］①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：文章应该包括三个问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。［写作步骤］第一步，开门见山，介绍的好习惯是什么；第二步，介绍你是如何保持你的好习惯的；第三步，介绍你从这个好习惯中得到了什么；第四步，书写总结。［亮点词汇］①takedown记录，记下②getgoodgrades取得好成绩［高分句型］①Ikeepmynoteswell-organizedandtidysothatIcanfindinformationeasilylater.(sothat引导目的状语从句)②Itnotonlyimprovesmylearningabilities,butalsohelpsmegetgoodgrades.(notonly…butalso…引导并列句)9．（23-24九年级上·北京顺义·期末）假如你是李华，你校英语社团的公众号计划做以“MyFavoriteBook”为主题的系列推送。请你用英语给社团公众号留言，推荐你最喜欢的一本书，谈谈你喜欢的理由及收获。提示词语：writer，interesting，encourage提示问题：·Whatisyourfavoritebook?·Whydoyoulikeit?·Whatbenefitshaveyougotfromit?Readingcanmakeourlifecolorful.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Readingcanmakeourlifecolorful.IlikereadingnovelsbestbecauseIcanlearninterestingstoriesofdifferentpeople.MyfavoritebookisJaneEyrewrittenbyCharlotteBronte.First,IammovedbyJane’sexperienceandtraits.Janeissmallinbodybutstronginheart.Asapoororphan,shesufferedalotofdifficultiesbutshenevergaveup.Asawoman,shepursuedjustice,freedomandrespectinherlife.What’smore,thelanguageisrichandbeautiful,whichishelpfulforEnglishlearners.Ibenefitalotfromreadingit.Itnotonlybroadensmyvisionbutalsohelpsmebuildmycharacters.SoIwillkeepreadingasalastinghabit.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”与为主。③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“推荐最喜欢的一本书，谈谈喜欢的理由及收获。”并适当补充，使文章内容充实，行文应使用第一人称。[写作步骤]第一步，说明阅读的重要性，以及自己最喜欢的书。第二步，介绍喜欢这本书的原因。第三步，分享这本书带给自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①gaveup放弃②benefitfrom从……中收益[高分句型]①IlikereadingnovelsbestbecauseIcanlearninterestingstoriesofdifferentpeople.（because引导的原因状语从句）②What’smore,thelanguageisrichandbeautiful,whichishelpfulforEnglishlearners.（定语从句）10．（23-24九年级上·北京顺义·期末）某英文网站正在开展以“榜样”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈谁是你心中的榜样，你的理由，以及他/她对你的影响。提示词语:helpful,care,workhard,overcome(克服)提示问题:Whoisyourrolemodel?Whyishe/sheyourrolemodel?Whatinfluencehashe/shehadonyou?Everyonemayhavehisownrolemodel._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Everyonemayhavehisownrolemodel.ThepersonIadmiremostismyfather.Inmyeyes,myfatherishard-workingandresponsibleforeverythinghedoes.Asadoctor,hespendsmostofhistimeandenergyonhiswork.Heiswillingtohelpandcareallthepatients.What’smore,hegivesmesupporttohelpmethroughhardtimes.Forexample,whenIfailedanexamlastyear,hehelpedmefindthesolutionsandencouragedmetoovercomethedifficulties.

Withhisguidanceandinfluence,Istudyhardatschoolandtrytohelpmyclassmateswiththeirhomework.IhopeIcandoaswellashiminthefuture.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己心中的榜样；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，描述自己的理由以及榜样对自己的影响；第三步，表达个人观点，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①bewillingtodosth.愿意做某事②what’smore此外③forexample例如[高分句型]①Forexample,whenIfailedanexamlastyear,hehelpedmefindthesolutionsandencouragedmetoovercomethedifficulties.（when引导的时间状语从句）②IhopeIcandoaswellashiminthefuture.（省略that的宾语从句）11．（23-24九年级上·北京门头沟·期末）2023年7月末，我们的家乡门头沟区出现了灾害性特大暴雨天气，受损严重。家乡人民众志成城，积极抗洪救灾。假如你是李华，你的笔友Peter非常关心你和你的家乡，想了解一下这次灾情的情况。请你用英文回复邮件，简述家乡受灾的基本情况，谈谈令你印象深刻的人或事以及感受。提示词语：flood(洪灾),damage,seriously,neighbour,inspiring提示问题：●Whatwasyourhometownlikeduringtheflood?●Whoorwhatimpressedyou?●Howdidyoufeel?DearPeter，Thankyouverymuchforyourconcerns._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearPeter,

Thankyouverymuchforyourconcerns.DisastrousheavyrainsoccurredinourhometownMentougouDistrict,causingseriousdamagein2023July.Manylow-lyingcommunitiesfloodedagain.Itwasfullofmuddywater.

ThePLAmenarrivedimmediatelytorescuethevillagersofthefloodedareas.Andtheydidtheirbesttofightagainsttheflood.Theysuppliedthevillagerswithfreshvegetablesandfood.Somemedicalteamswereorganizedtohelpussothatwecouldhavehealthydiet.

Afteralongtime,everythingwentonverywell.Andthatwasasignofvictory.Iwasdeeplymovedbythesepeople.

Yours,

LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文为一封电子邮件；②时态：本文时态一般过去时为主；③提示：本文要点以问题形式给出，注意要点衔接自然。[写作步骤]第一步，感谢好友的关心；第二步，描写洪水中家乡的样子，谁或什么事情给你留下了深刻的印象；第三步，结束语，感觉如何。[亮点词汇]①wasfullof充满；②immediately立即地③fightagainst与……战斗[高分句型]Somemedicalteamswereorganizedtohelpussothatwecouldhavehealthydiet.（目的状语从句）12．（23-24九年级上·北京门头沟·期末）现实中，总会有这样一个人。他（她）有一种独特的人格魅力。这种魅力是令人钦佩的性格、品质、行为……。他（她）散发出的令人钦佩的气质一直吸引着你，伴随你的成长。某英文网站正在开展以“令我钦佩的人”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍一下谁是你敬佩的人，你为什么钦佩他（她），以及你从他（她）身上学到了什么。提示词语：help,enjoy,friendly,workhard,takeaction提示问题：●Whoisthepersonyouadmire?●Whydoyouadmirehimorher?●Whathaveyoulearntfromhimorher?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Iadmiremymotherverymuch.Sheishelpfulandcareful.Everydayshegetsupveryearlyandgoestobedlate.Sheisnotonlybusywithherworkbutalsotakesgoodcareofourfamily.What’smore,sheisveryhelpfultoothers.Whenpeoplearoundherareintrouble,she’salwaysreadytohelpthemtosolvetheproblems.Allthepeoplelikeher.I’mluckytohavesuchagoodmother.IloveherandIhavelearnedalotfromher.Ihaveknowntheimportanceofresponsibilityandhelpingothers.Iwillworkhardandtrymybesttohelpothers.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中询问的三个主要问题，并适当增加细节。[写作步骤]①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我最敬佩的人”来引出下文中对三个问题的回答；②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“我最敬佩的人是谁、原因和值得学习的地方”三方面入手，重点介绍我的母亲；③第三步，书写结语。表达对母亲的爱。[亮点词汇]①getsup起床②notonly...butalso...不但……而且……③bebusywithsth忙于某事④takecareof照顾⑤what’smore此外⑥introuble有困难⑦tryone’sbesttodosth某人尽全力做某事[高分句型]①Whenpeoplearoundherareintrouble,she’salwaysreadytohelpthemtosolvetheproblems.（when引导的时间状语从句）13．（23-24九年级上·北京石景山·期末）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom与你交流如何安排课余生活，请你用英语回复一封邮件。提示词语：enjoy,sports,relax提示问题：Howdoyouspendyoursparetime？Explainyourreasons.DearTom,I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmysparetime._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________