2024年高考英语读后续写语料积累之如何表达激动背诵与测试（词-句-文）讲义（原卷版）

读后续写语料积累之如何表达激动背诵与测试（词-句-文）讲义

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背诵积累区：背诵迁移举一反三

一、必背单词

1.激动类形容词：

excited,thrilled,exciting,thrilling

2.激动类副词：

excitedly

3.激动类名词：

excitement,thrill

4.激动类动词：

excite,thrill

二、高频语块

1.cheerup振奋起来

2.with/inexcitement激动地

3.flushwithexcitement激动得满脸通红

4.conceal/hideone\excitement难掩激动

5.containone'sexcitement抑制内心的激动

6.toone'sexcitement/thrill令某人激动的是

7.ascreamofthrill/excitement激动的尖叫声

8.aripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitement——阵兴奋

三、佳句赏析

1.Hisvoicewaschokedwithemotion.他情绪激动，难以成声。

2.Hisfacewaslitupwithexcitement.他的脸由于激动而放出光彩。

3.Herfacewasglowingwithexcitement.她因兴奋而显得容光焕发。

4.Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一阵兴奋的涟漪掠过他们。

5.Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她红红的脸因激动而发亮。

6.MyheartisinmymouthwheneverIhearthenationalanthem.每当我听到国歌就激动不已。

7.Herheartwasflutteringwithanxietyaswellasexcitement.她的心又兴奋又不安，怦怦乱跳。

8.Ashiverofexcitementpassedthroughherstomachwhensheheardthenews.听到这个消息，一阵激动的

战栗传到她的胃里。

9.Theteachefsencouragementwarmedhisheart.Hefeltasurgeofexcitement.老师的鼓励温暖着他的心,

他感到一阵兴奋。

10.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awildexcitementtookholdofher.当主持人宣布她

获奖时，她兴奋得不能自己。

11.Dadsaidwewouldgocampingnextweek,hiseyesglittering\twinklingwithexcitement.爸爸说下

星期去露营，他的眼中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。

12.Unabletocontainhisjoyandexcitement,hethrewhimselfintomyarms,murmuring,“Thankyou,

dearmum."不能抑制住他的高兴和激动，他一下子扑到我的怀里，喃喃道：妈妈，辛苦了。

测试巩固区：分级测试步步为赢

一、高频语块汉译英

1.振奋起来

2.激动地

3.激动得满脸通红

4.难掩激动

5.抑制内心的激动

6.令某人激动的是

7.激动的尖叫声

8.一阵兴奋

二、佳句赏析汉译英

1.他情绪激动，难以成声。

2.他的脸由于激动而放出光彩。

3.她因兴奋而显得容光焕发。

4.一阵兴奋的涟漪掠过他们。

5.她红红的脸因激动而发亮。

6.每当我听到国歌就激动不已。

7.她的心又兴奋又不安，怦怦乱跳。

8.听到这个消息，一阵激动的战栗传到她的胃里。

9.老师的鼓励温暖着他的心，他感到一阵兴奋。

10.当主持人宣布她获奖时,她兴奋得不能自己。

1L爸爸说下星期去露营，他的眼中闪烁着兴奋的光芒。

三、情感表达片段运用

请运用以上必备单词或高频语块，把下面的语篇补充完整。

Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalong

theriver.Theviewsonthejourneyweresurprisinglybeautiful,1（妈妈激动不已）.

Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momcouldhardly2（抑制兴奋），andwould

3（振奋起来）likeachild.Shewouldgetoffthecar,laughinganddancingaround

4（兴奋地）.Themomentwearrivedatthecampingplace,5（激动得

尖叫起来），Momlocatedaclearingandimmediatelyguidedustopitchthetent6（眼

里闪着激动的光芒），wesatonthegrass,enjoyingthesplendidnature.

四、情感表达语篇运用

1.（2023上•广西•高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构

成一篇完整的短文。

I'veforgottenalmosteverythingaboutmyearlychildhoodexcepttheconcert,andmymotheralso

remembersit.

WhenIwasafive-year-oldboy,Iwaslearningtoplaythepianoinamusicalschool.Oneday,afamous

pianomasterwassaidtoholdapianoconcertinourcity.Wishingtoencouragemyprogressonthepiano,my

mothertookmetotheconcert.Afterwewereseated,mymotherspottedafriendintheaudience,whoshehadn't

metforalongtime.Soshetoldmetostayinmypositionandthenwalkeddownthepassagetogreetherfriend.

Mymotherandherfriendstoodchattinghappilyforawhilebeforetheperformance.Meanwhile,Iwassoexcited

toseetheconcertstagethatIstoodupandeventuallymademywaythroughadoormarked“NoAdmittance^^to

explorethewondersoftheconcerthall.

Whenthehouselightsbecamedimandtheconcertwasabouttobegin,mymotherreturnedtoherseat.And

shediscoveredthatIwasmissing.Mymothersaidshefeltreallyguiltyatthattimeandthatshesaidtoherself,

“It'smyfault.Ishouldn'thaveleftmylittlesonaloneinhisplace.^^Confusedandanxious,shelookedaround,but

Iwasnowheretobeseen.Suddenly,thecurtainpartedandspotlightsfocusedontheimpressivepianoonthestage.

Tohersurprise,shesawmesittingbythekeyboardinnocentlyplayingTwinkleTwinkleLittleStaronthepiano.

Atthatmoment,thepianomastermadehisentrance.Seeingme,alittleboy,sittingatthecenterofthestage

andplayingthepiano,heseemedtobecompletelyataloss.Butthenhequicklymovedtothepianoand

whisperedinmyear,"Don'tquit.Keepplaying.^^Leaningover,hereachedaroundtotheothersideofmeand

soonaddedarunningobbligato（伴奏）.Together,wetransformedafrighteningsituationintoacreativeexperience.

Theaudiencehadneverseensuchaperformanceform.Theylistenedcuriouslyandattentively,lostinthe

wonderfulmusicworld.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右：

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Whenthepiececametoanend,thepianomasterbreathedasighofrelief.

Aftertheconcert,mymotherandIwaitedforthepianomasterbackstage.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小时候妈妈带着作者去看音乐会，作者误走入舞台上弹钢琴的故

事。

【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“当这首曲子结束时，钢琴大师松了一口气。”可知，第一段可

描写作者弹完钢琴后钢琴大师鼓励作者，观众也给作者鼓掌，作者很高兴。

②由第二段首句内容“音乐会结束后，我和妈妈在后台等钢琴大师。”可知，第二段可描写妈妈向钢琴大师

道歉，大师很欣赏作者，认为作者以后会有所作为，多亏了大师，作者现在能登上舞台，而且对未来的音

乐之路充满信心。

2.续写线索：弹完曲子一钢琴大师鼓励作者一观众鼓掌一高兴，回到座位上欣赏音乐一音乐会结

束一向大师道歉一大师很欣赏作者一作者如今音乐有所作为

3.词汇激活

行为类

①拥抱某人：hugsb./givesb.ahug

②鼓掌：clap/applaud

③走近：comeupto/approach

情绪类

①兴奋地：Excitedly/withexcitement

②感动的：touched/moved

【点睛】[高分句型1]Excitedlyandhappily,Iranintomymother飞armsandtookmyseatagain.（由副词作伴

随状语）

[高分句型2]Seeinghimcoming,mymothercameuptohimandsaidapologetically,6<Itakemylittlesontoyour

concertinthehopethathecanbenefitfromit.（由现在分词作状语和that引导的同位语从句）

2.（2023上•湖南岳阳•高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之

构成一篇完整的短文。

Forsomeweeks,Ihadnoticedanelderlywomanwalkingpastourhouse,pushingagrocerycartfilledwith

trashbags.Icouldn'thelpbutfeelsorryforherassheshuffled（拖着月却走路）along.Occasionally,shewould

pauseandpickupacanfrombesidetheroad.Shewouldcarefullyputitintooneofthebagsandcontinueonher

way.

Iwonderedwhatcircumstanceshadbroughthertothispointinlife.Didshehavenofamily?Wasthereno

onetolookafterher?

Oneevening,Icouldnolongerstandit.Asshewalkedby,Iwentouttothestreetandstoppedher.

“Madam,“Isaid."CanIaskyousomething?^^

Sheturnedtolookatmewithbeautiful,darkeyesthattwinkledinherwrinkledface.Iknewthenthatshe

wasnoordinaryhomelessperson.Therewasdignityand,yes,evenjoyabouther.Suddenly,Ifeltembarrassedto

askhermyquestions,butIinsisted.

'Tveseenyouforafewweekspickingupcans,^^Iexplained.t4Doyousellthemtobuygroceries?^^

shesaidwithasmile.dothistohelpthechildren.^^

Imusthavelookedconfusedbecauseshewentontoexplain.

“Ihadcancer-twice-andbothtimesIwenttoabighospitalinanothertown.Theycuredme.ButwhileI

wasthere,Imetthechildren,andI'veneverforgottenthem.Idon'thaveanymoney,butIcanstillwalk,andI

pickupthesecanstosellthemformoneyforthehospital.^^

Shetoldmethatshespendsmanyhoursaweekcollectingcans;atleasttwobusinessessavecansforher.

Whenshehasenough,sheloadsthemallintoafriend^pickup,andthetwoofthemtakethemtothecitywhere

thehospitalislocated.Theretheygetcashedout.

注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Aswecontinuedtotalk,Ilearnedmoreaboutwhatshethought.

“No,no.Idon'twantyourmoney,9,sherepliedwithawaveofherhand,backingawayabit.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了几个星期以来，作者注意到了一个推着一辆装满垃圾袋的购物车

的老妇人，于是询问老妇人的个人情况，在得知了老妇人遇到的困难后，作者想要给老妇人钱，但是开始

被拒绝了，在我的坚持下她收下了钱。作者认为老妇人像天使一样。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“随着我们继续交谈，我越来越了解她的想法”可知，第一段可描写作者和老妇人交谈

以及老妇人的感受。

②由第二段首句内容“，不，不。我不要你的钱，’她回答说，挥了挥手，后退了一点。”可知，第二段可描

写老妇人拒绝了作者的钱，作者如何说服她收下钱以及作者的感悟。

2.续写线索：交谈——深入了解——拿钱帮助——被拒绝——说服老人收下——作者感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

①捡起：collect/pickup

②看见：see/spot/notice

③确保：ensure/makesure

情绪类

①幸运：blessed/lucky

②值得：worthit/worthwhile

【点睛】[高分句型1]“Iknowhowyoufeelwhenyouseealadyofmyagestillwalkontheroadtomakesome

moneybycollectingcans,“shesaid.（运用了how引导宾语从句和when引导的时间状语从句）

[高分句型2]Iwatchedasshebeganwalkingdownthestreetagain,pushingthecartofcans,stopping

occasionallytopickuponeortwo.（运用了现在分词作状语）

3.（2023・全国•模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的

短文。

WhenIenteredmyfirstrodeo（牛仔竞技比赛），Iwas12yearsold.Itwasmorelikeaplaydaythanarodeo,

buttoa12-year-oldgirllikeme,IfeltlikeIwasattheNationalFinalsRodeo!

Astobarrelracing（绕桶赛），Ididn'tknowmuchaboutit,onlywhatmydadhadtoldme.ButIhadbeen

determinedtoentertheplayandwintheplayeversinceIwastoldthatmynotsomucholdercompetitivecousin

Courtneywouldbethere.ThiswasmynighttofinallyshowherthatIcouldrideahorsejustasgoodorbetter,and

doanythingelseshecoulddo.Shewasinforasurprise!

Courtneyalwaysthoughtshewasbetterthanme.Shealwayssaidherhorsewasbetterthanmine,too.

CourtneyhadaPalominohorsenamedBuck.Hewasfast,andbeautiful.MyhorsewasabigAppaloosanamed

Zipper.Hewasn'tbeautifulorflashylikeBuckbuthewaskindandwillingtopleasetheskinnylittlegirlthatfed

himsugarseverydayafteradayofriding.ThatwasthereasonIknewwecouldbeatCourtney,becausewehad

somethingshedidn't-apartnership,onewebothrespected.

CourtneyandIwereinthe12-14agegroup.AsIwatchedthemeninthearena（竞技场）setthethreebarrels

upintheirplaces,Ifeltnervousandalittlescaredforthefirsttimethatnight.ThoughIhadpreviouslypracticeda

lotwithZipper,andZipperracedfastandmadeturnsstably,Istillgotupsetwhenthinkingaboutracingagainst

Courtney!

Iclosedmyeyes,takingadeepbreath.Suddenly,Ifeltawarmfamiliarhandonmyshoulder.ItwasDad.He

smiledatme,saying,<6Areyouscaredornervous?Orboth?”"Both,butI'mmorescaredthatI'mgoingtomess

up,“Ireplied,truthfully.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式作答。

“Youwon't.Justhavefaithinyourself,andZipper,Dadsaid.

Gameover,ItookZippertorest,givinghimsugarsforajobwelldone.

【答案】

“Youwon't.Justhavefaithinyourself,andZipper,Dadsaid.ThafswhenIrealizedIwasnotgoinginto

thatarenaalone,butwithmypartner!Zipperhadbeenpracticingjustashardasme.SoIthought,ifImessedup,

hewouldberighttheretocorrectme."Iknowwhattodo,Dad.Thankyou.^^Dadjustsmiled,t4Nowgowarmup

andwinatrophy!"Soon,itwasmyturn.ZipperandIdidtogethersmoothlyalltheway.Andtomygreat

surpriseandexcitement,IbeatCourtneyandwon,thoughitwasjustanarrowvictory.

Gameover,ItookZippertorest,givinghimsugarsforajobwelldone.WhileZipperwasenjoyingthe

sugars,IwenttoDad.Hewassittinginhislawnchairtothesideofthearena,watchingtherid