江苏省南京市、盐城市2024届高三年级下册3月第一次模拟考试 英语 含解析

南京市、盐城市2024届高三年级第一次模拟考试

英语

2024.03

第一部分听力（共两节，满分30分）

做题时，先将答案标在试卷上。录音内容结束后，你将有两分钟的时间将试卷上的答案

转涂到答题卡上。

第一节（共5小题；每小题1.5分，满分7.5分）

听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最

佳选项。听完每段对话后，你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段对

话仅读一遍。

例：Howmuchistheshirt?

A.£19.15.B.£9.18.C.£9.15.

答案是c。

1.Wheredoestheconversationtakeplace?

A.Ataflowershop.B.Ataconcert.C.Atawedding.

2.Whatarethespeakerstalkingabout?

A.Aphoto.B.Adrawing.C.Anartist.

3.Howdoesthemansound?

A.Surprised.B.Fearful.C.Worried.

4.Whowantstoborrowthebook?

A.David.B.Alice.C.Jane.

5.Whydidthe-woman'getaticket?

A.Shedrovetoofast.B.Sheranaredlight.C.Sheparkedillegally.

第二节（共15小题；每小题1.5分，满分22.5分）

听下面5段对话或独白。每段对话或独白后有几个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个

选项中选出最佳选项。听每段对话或独白前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题5秒钟；听

完后，各小题给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话或独白读两遍。

听第6段材料，回答第6、7题。

6.Whydoesthemantalktothewoman?

A.Totakeapictureofher.

B.ToapplyforanewIDcard.

C.Tocheckhispersonalinformation.

7.Howwillthemangetthebill?

A.Byhavingitmailed.

B.Bypickingitupinperson.

C.Bydownloadingitfromanemail.

听第7段材料，回答第8至10题。

8.Howmuchshouldthemanpayintotal?

A.£120.B.£125.C.£130.

9.Whatdoesthemanaskthewomantodo?

A.Wraphisgiftup.B.Givehimadiscount.C.Arrangeatailoringservice.

10.Whatistheman'slastconcernaboutthetrousers?

A.Whowillshortenthem.

B.Whenhecancollectthem.

C.Whetherhecanreturnthem.

听第8段材料，回答第11至13题。

1-1.Whatistheprobablerelationshipbetweenthespeakers?

A.Hostandguest.B.Husbandandwife.C.Customerandwaiter.

12.Whatdothespeakerswanttodo?

A.Endtheparty.B.Gobackhome.C.Dovoluntarywork.

13.Whatwillthemandonext?

A.Buymoredrinks.B.Playthemusic.C.Shutthelights.

听第9段材料，回答第14至17题。

14.Whatisthemainpurposeoftheman'svisit?

A.Tohavefurtherstudy.B.Toattendaconference.C.Tobuynewproducts.

15.WhenwillthemanleavetheU.S.?

A.OnApril19th.B.OnApril21st.C.OnApril27th.

16.Wheredidthemanfinishhiscollege?

A.InChicago.B.InBeijing.C.InPennsylvania.

17.Whatisprobablytheman?

A:Afinancialmanager.B.Acustomsofficer.C.Acomputerengineer.

听第10段材料，回答第18至20题。

18.Whatwilltheweatherbelikelatertoday?

A.Rainy.B.Cloudy.C.Windy.

19.WhatwillthelowtemperaturebethisSaturday?

A.10°C.B.18°C.C.28°C.

20.WhatarepeopleadvisedtodowhileboatingonSundayafternoon?

A.Takeanumbrella.B.Followtheforecast.C.Putonmoreclothes.

第二部分阅读(共两节，满分50分)

第一节(共15小题：每小题2.5分，满分37.5分)

阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。

A

Thesocialpurposeofthecopyrightsystemistoencouragecreativityandtheadvancementof

knowledgebygivingthosewhomakeintellectual(智力的)contributionsa"uniquerighttotheir

writingsanddiscoveries"forlimitedtimes.Protectionisprovidedforamuchlongertimeforcopy­

rightsthanforpatents.TheU.S.CopyrightLawof1976providesatermorthelifetimeoftheauthor

plus50years.Itrecognizesthatthevalueofwrittenworksoftenextendsoveralongertimethanthat

oftechnologicaladvancesinthepublicarea.

Itisessentialtoregisterforformalcopyrightprotectioninordertohavesomedegreeofprotec­

tionagainstthecopyrightofone'sworksbyothers.Theprocedureforobtainingacopyrightregistra­

tionisquitesimple-anapplicationissubmittedwithasmallfeeandtwocopiesofthework.No

examinationismade,andthecopyrightis-immediatelyinforce.

TheCopyrightOfficewillprovideonrequestavarietyofleaflets(小册子)describingthe

procedureandgivinginformationabouttheclassesofsubjectmatterthatcanberegistered.

Thosearesubjecttoprotection:

(1)Booksandnewspapers(2)Lectures

(3)Dramaticcompositions(4)Films

(5)Maps(6)Worksofart

(7)Soundrecordings(8)Photographs

(9)Printsandlabels(10)Musicalcompositions

Thosearenotsubjecttoprotection:

(1)Ideas(2)Systems,methodsandplans

(3)Governmentpublications(4)Lawsandopinionsofcourts

YoucancontacttheCopyrightOffice(www.copyrightofE)formoreinformation.

21.Inwhichaspectdocopyrightsdifferfrompatents?

A.Theapplicationfee.B.Thedurationofprotection.

C.Theintellectualvalue.D.Thecontributiontosociety.

22.Whichofthefollowingshouldyouprovideforcopyrightregistration?

A.Copiesofyourwork.B.Photosofyourself.

C.Introductoryleaflets.D.Examinationcertificates.

23.Accordingtothetext,theCopyrightOfficemayreject.

A.amovieaboutanewmethodoftimetravel

B.anoriginalmusicalcompositionforchildren

C.abookaboutone'sopinionsonAmericanlaws

D.anofficialdocumentissuedbythelocalcounty

B

ErnestOwusuwas13in1980whenhewasgiventheopportunitytoappearintheaudienceofa

BBCshow,andaskThatcherhowshefeltaboutbeingcalledtheIronLady.Thisencounterre-

emergedinaBBC'sprogrammerecently.

Atthetimeoftheirmeeting,Owusuwasonfreeschoolmeals,livingonapublicestateinBrixton,

southLondon,whereheandhissisterwerebeingraisedbytheirmotherRose,astrugglinghairdresser.

Now57,Owusulooksremarkablysimilarevenwithagreyingbeard.Buthislifehasbeentrans­

formed.Thefatherofthreeisahumanresourcesdirector,andthefirstblackcaptainoftheAddington

golfclubinits110-yearhistory.Asablackguy,itisaboutbreakingtheglassceiling.

Speakinginitsclubhouse,Owusudescribeshisriseinsocialstatus(地位)asaThatcherite

journey".Andhesaysitbeganbyaskingthewomanherself."Tothisdayitstillhasanimpact.My

confidencechangedfromthatslidine-doormoment.Somethingaboutherconnectedwithme."

ThatchertoldOwususheenjoyedbeingcalledtheIronLady."Ithinkit'sratherapraise,don't

you?"shesaid."Becausesooftenpeoplehavesaidtomeifyou'reinyourjobyou'vegottobesoft

andwarmandhuman,butyou'vegottohaveatouchofsteel.nOwusurecallsthemoment,"Ijust

rememberhereyecontact.Shewasansweringme,notthecamera.Shewelcomedthequestionsaying

you'vegottobefirminthisworld.Andthatstuckwithme.n

Aftertheshowwasbroadcast,Owususaidhebecame"alittleheroinBrixtonforagoodthree

months0.Owusuadded,"Itallgavemeextraconfidence.Doorsmightnothaveopenedsoquickly.It

wasoneofthosekeymomentstomakeyoudothingsmaybeyouwouldn'totherwisehavedone.n

24.WhatdoweknowaboutOwusuwhenhewas13?

A.HemetwithThatchertwice.B.Hejoinedafamousgolfclub.

C.HehostedaBBC'sprogramme.D.Helivedatthebottomofsociety.

25.Whatdotheunderlinedwords"sliding-doormoment"inparagraph4probablymean?

A.Turningpoint.B.Importantdecision.

C.Socialstatus.D.Remarkableachievement.

26.Basedonthetext,whatmadeabigdifferencetoOwusu?

A.Others*treatinghimequallyatwork.

B.Others*votinghimaheroinBrixton.

C.Thatcher'seffortstopreservehisdignity.

D.Thatcher'sfaithinthenecessityoftoughness.

27.Whichofthefollowingisasuitabletitleforthetext?

A.TheArtofDialogueB.ThePowerofConfidence

C.ALife-changingMeetingD.AStatus-improvingTale

C

Sincethelasticeage,humanshaveclearednearlyhalfoftheearth'sforestsandgrasslandsfor

agriculture.Withtheworldpopulationexpanding,there'sever-increasingpressureonfarmlandto

producenotonlymorefoodbutalsocleanenergy.InplacessuchasYakimaCounty,Washington,

it'screatedcompetitionforspaceasland-hungrysolarpanels（板）consumeavailablefields.Last

month,thestateapprovedplanstocover1,700acresofagriculturallandwithsolarpanels,fueling

concernsoverthelong-termimpactsoflosingcropland.

ArecentstudyfromtheUniversityofCalifornia,however,showshowfarmersmaysoonharvest

cropsandenergytogether.Oneresearcher,MajdiAbouNajm,explainsthatvisiblelightspectrum

（光谱）canbeseparatedintoblueandredlightwaves,andtheirphotons（光子）havedifferent

properties.Blueoneshavehigherenergythanredones.Whilethatgivesbluelightwhatisneeded

togeneratepower,italsoresultsinhighertemperatures.nFromaplantangle,redphotonsarethe

efficientones,"saysAbouNajm."Theydon'tmaketheplantfeelhot."

Agoalofthestudyistocreateanewgenerationofsolarpanels.Heseespotentialintheorganic

solarcells,whichcomefromcarbon-basedmaterials.Thinandtransparent,thecellsareappliedlike

afilmontovarioussurfaces.Thisnewtechnologycouldbeusedtodevelopspecialsolarpanelsthat

blockbluelighttogeneratepower,whilepassingtheredlightontocropsplanteddirectlybelow.

Thesepanelscouldalsoprovideshadeforheat-sensitivefruitsduringthehottestpartoftheday.

By2050,wellhavetwobillionmorepeople,andwellneedmorefoodandmoreenergy.By

maximizingthesolarspectrum,"we^emakingfulluseofanendlesslysustainableresource,"says

AbouNajm."Ifatechnologykicksinthatcandevelopthesepanels,thentheskyisthelimitonhow

efficientwecanbe."

28.Whatproblemdoesthefirstparagraphfocuson?

A.Losingcroplandtosolarpanels.B.Distributionoftheworldpopulation.

C.Reductioninforestsandgrasslands.D.Competingforlandbetweenfarmers.

29.Whatdoestheunderlinedword"that"inparagraph2referto?

A.Generationofsolarpower.B.Hotweatherincreasingefficiency.

C.Bluephotonshavinghigherenergy.D.Separationofvisiblelightspectrum.

30.Whatdoweknowabouttheorganicsolarcells?

A.Theymakefruitsheat-sensitive.B.Theycancooldowninhotdays.

C.Theyallowredlighttopassthrough.D.Theycanstorecarbon-basedmaterials.

31.WhatdoesAbouNajmthinkofthefutureofthenewsolarpanels?

A.Limited.B.Promising.C.Uncertain.D.Challenging.

D

"Anxiety."Theverywordinvitesdiscomfort.Itseffects-shortnessofbreath,poundingheart,

muscletension—areoutrightupsetting.But,asaclinician,Ifindthatwetendtomissoutonmany

valuableopportunitiespresentedbythishumanemotion.Inandofitself,anxietyisnotdeadly,noris

itadisease.Quitethecontrary:itisanindicatorofbrainandsensoryhealth.Onceweacceptthatit

isanormal,thoughuncomfortable,partoflife,wecanuseittohelpus.

Weallknowworkingoutatthegymishard.Bynature,a"goodworkouf*isuncomfortable,

sinceitinvolvespushingourphysicalstrengthpastwhatwecaneasilydo.Thesweetspotofexercise

isalwaysasomewhatchallengingexperience.Similarly,ifyouwanttobeemotionallystronger,you

needtofacesometension.Forexample,oneeffectivetreatmentforfearisexposuretherapy（疗

法），whichinvolvesgraduallyencounteringthingsthatmakeoneanxious,reducingfearovertime.

Humansaresocialcreatures.Whenmypatientslearntoopenuptotheirpartnersabouttheir

anxieties,theyalmostalwaysreportagreatersenseofemotionalcloseness.Also,asinternational

relationshipexpertSueJohnsonteaches,whenweexpressourneedforconnectionduringchallenging

moments（e.g.,"I'mhavingahardtimerightnowandcouldreallyuseyoursupport"）,itcreates

greaterconnectionandturnsouranxietyintolove.

Fromtimetotime,wefindourselvesattheendofourrope.Ourresponsibilitiespileup,our

resourcesbreakdown,andwefeeluncomfortablyanxious-whatwe'reexperiencingiscalledstress.

Simplyput,thedemandsplaceduponusoutweighouravailableresources,justlikeasetofscales

（天平）goingoutofbalance.FocusingonworkandpretendingeverythingisOKonlyleadsto

disastrousresults.Medicaltreatmentforstressmayfunctionforawhile,butittendstomakethings

worseinthelongrun.Theonlysolutiontodealwithstressistodothemathematicstobalancethe

scales.

32.Whatdoestheauthorsayaboutanxiety?

A.Itisaninvitationtodiseases.

B.Itindicatesstablementalhealth.

C.Itcostsusmanyvaluablechances.

D.Itisanaturalemotionalexpression.

33.Whydoestheauthormention"goodworkout"inparagraph2?

A.Toprovehowexerciseinfluencesemotions.

B.Tosuggestaneffectivewaytochallengelimits.

C.Toexplainhowanxietybuildsemotionalstrength.

D.Toshowapositiveconnectionbetweenmindandbody.

34.Whatisparagraph3mainlyabout?

A.Thekeytoclosenessispartners1support.

B.Sharinganxietiesimprovesrelationships.

C.Humansaredefinedbytheirsocialnature.

D.Expressingfeelingskeepsusoffanxieties.

35.Accordingtothelastparagraph,howcanwedealwithstress?

A.Devotemoreenergytoourwork.B.Increaseresources.availabletous.

C.Seekprofessionalmedicaltreatment.D.Masteradvancedmathematicalskills.

第二节（共5小题；每小题2.5分，满分12.5分）

阅读下面短文，从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多

余选项。

Onceayearinasmallmountainvillage,theMandepeoplegathertohearthefolkstoriesoftheir

traditions.ThemanplayinganinstrumentcalledSosso-Balawhilesingingisthestoryteller.Heholds

allthefolkknowledgeoftheMandepeople.

Mostofusdon'thaveamusicalinstrumentthattiesustogether,butwehavesomeoneinour

liveswho'sthekeeperofourfolkknowledge.Oftenit'sagrandmother,whokeepsallourstoriesof

wisdomreadytotelluponrequest.36What'sthebestwaytogetababytosleep?WheredoI

comefrom?What'smymoralcompass?Thestoriesprovideananswer,andit'susefultospeakwith

someonewhoknowshowthingsare.done.

37Researchershavedocumentedfolkknowledgeinotherspecies-whalesreturningtoparts

oftheseathatthey'dabandonedagenerationbefore;monkeys,thatcommunicatehuntingskillsto

theiroffspring（后代）.Folkknowledgeisnotonlyculture,it'salsosurvival.38

Traditionally,weshareitinsmallunits—familiessharingaroundadinnertable.39Lookat

anysocialmedia,andyoullseefolkknowledgeatworkandatplay.Ifsexplodedaswe'retrainedto

lookforinformationonline,ratherthanfromwithin.Inthiscase,chancesarethatourquestionscan

beansweredwithmisinformation.

Butwedon'tgatheronceayeartorealitycheckour"folkstories"astheMandepeopledo;nor

dowecenterourfolktraditionsaroundamusicalinstrument.Theinternethasnorealityexceptits

ownand,leftunchecked,itswisdomhasnorhythm（节奏）.40

A.Ifsjustchaos.

B.Thisiswhywedoit.

C.Humanwisdomhasbeenpasseddownthroughgenerations.

D.Thestoriescanbeusefulfordealingwithallsortsofdoubts.

E.Nowadays,folkknowledgehasexpandedtodigitalnetworks.

F.Nowtheinternethasmadevaluablefolkwisdomatyourfingertips.

G.Recently,wediscoveredthatthisveryhumanpracticeisn'tlimitedtohumans.

第三部分语言运用（共两节，满分30分）

第一节（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分）

阅读下面短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。

Katherinewouldneverforgetthedaywhenherdaughterbroughtaplatefromkindergarten,with

adrawingofmouse-likecreaturesonit.

"Emma,whataretheselittlecharacters?Whatdo.You41them?"Katherinesaid."Mom,

they'remy42.Theycometochildrenwhoarelonelyorwhoweremeanttohavea43life,

"Emmasaid.It44theunemployed36-year-oldmom'sheartduringatimewhenshewasn'tfeeling

toogoodaboutherjob45.

Allthiseventually46anewprojectforKatherine,unemployedformonths—makingaline

ofstuffedanimals,forsalebasedonherdaughter's47."Everyday,Iwouldworkonit,"shesaid.

"Overtime,itfeltlikethisiswhatIreally48,"Inherbasement,Katherinecutpatterns,wrote

storylinesand49prototypes（原型样品）toturn"The.Representatives"intodolls（玩偶）.

Todayshehasfour50dollprototypesandspecificstorylinestogowitheachmaincharacter.

Shehopesto51thedollstoparentsgoingthroughhardtimes,ormaybethosepreparingtowork

overseas,leavingtheir52behindwithrelatives.

Shesaidevenifthedollsdon't53,she'staughtherdaughter54tokeepmovingevenin

downtimes.It'sreallya55forthoseunemployedrightnow,shesaid.

41.A.leaveB.callC.bringD.feed

42.A.representativesB.classmatesC.supportersD.guides

43.A.longerB.tougherC.betterD.fairer

44.A.brokeB.closedC.touchedD.won

45.A.descriptionsB.reportsC.dutiesD.prospects

46.A.ledtoB.referredtoC.adaptedtoD.belongedto

47.A.memoriesB.drawingsC.toysD.feelings

48.A.learnedB.imaginedC.wantedD.promised

49.A.testedB.labeledC.copiedD.sewed

50.A.advertisedB.completedC.markedD.printed

51.A.returnB.donateC.marketD.expose

52.A.kidsB.parentsC.jobsD.stories

53.A.turnupB.catchupC.breakoffD.takeoff

54.A.onpurposeB.byexampleC.atwillD.indetail

55.A.traditionB.dreamC.wonderD.lesson

第二节（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）

阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。

Incense(香)boastsalonghistory,56itsrootsinmanycultures-ancientChina,ancient

Egypt,Babylonandbeyond.Peoplefromallwalksoflifebenefitfromitscountlessqualities,whether

theyuseitforpleasure57asmedicine.

SincetheTangandSongdynasties,burningincense,hangingpaintings,makingtea,andenjoy­

ingmusichavebeenknownasthe"fourartsforliterati(文人)58(make)fromseeds,

leavesandflowers,incensehasbeenusedasanenjoyable59(pursue)forscholars.

Moreover,medicalincenseisanessentialpartofTraditionalChineseMedicine,whichconsiders

preventativehealthcareas60farsuperiorformoftreatmentwhenillnessstrikes.

61(basic),medicalincensecankillbacteriaintheenvironment,protectingpeopleagainst

infections.Itisalsobelieved62(possess)theabilitytobalancetheflowofQi,avitalenergy

forcewithinthebody.Oncethemedicalelementswithinincensearebreathedin,theysoonfind63

(they)wayintothebloodstream.Fromtheretheygodirectlytotheorgans64treatmentassis­

tanceisneeded.Thespecifictypesofincense65(choose)basedontheindividuaFscondition,

aimingtorestorebalanceandpromotewell-being.

第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分）

第一节（满分15分）

假定你是李华，一个月前你给校英文报专栏InterpersonalRelationships投稿，但尚未收

到回复。请你写一封邮件问询，内容包括：

1.简述稿件内容；

2.询问稿件情况。

注意：

1.写作词数应为80个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

DearEditor,

Sincerely,

LiHua

第二节（满分25分）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Whenwearelittlekids,birthdaypartiesaremomentousoccasions.Theyareourtimetoshine,

andweloveeverythingaboutthem:theballoons,thegames,thecake,thegifts,andsoon.

Afterreadingcoolstoriesaboutpoliceofficerssolvingmysteries,AllenMillerthoughtthepolice

wereawesome,hopingtobecomeoneofthem!So,whenhehadtochooseathemeforhisseventh

birthdayparty-hewentwithhisfavorite:thepolice!Andallhewantedforhisbirthdaypartywasa

modelpolicecar.Heexcitedlyinvitedsomeofhisfriendsandanxiouslyawaitedtheday.Unfortu­

nately,noneofthemcouldmakeittothepartyduetovariousreasons.

Allen'smomRachelwrestledwiththechallengingdecision:shouldshecancelthepartyandsave

Allentheembarrassmentofanemptypartyroom?Hehadbeenlookingforwardtothepartyand

talkingaboutitdaily,soitwouldbreakhishearttocancelit.

OfficerFrankSmith,whohadalreadyplannedwithRachelandagreedtoshowupattheparty,

heardfromRachelthatitmightbecanceledduetolowattendance.That'swhenhedecidedtosave

theday-heisapoliceofficerafterall!Hisdutyistoserveandprotect,andhedecidedtoprotect

Allenfromhavingabadday,andservehimthemostamazingseventhbirthdayparty!OfficerSmith

gotthewholelocalpolicetojoinin."Weliketobeinvolvedinourcommunity.It'snotjustabout

enforcing（执行）thelaw.Weliketobethereinthegoodtimesaswel,nheexplainedtoRachel.

OnthedayofAllen'sparty,OfficerSmithpickedupRachelandAlleninhispolicecar.Theboy

didn'tknowwheretheyweregoing,butwasexcited.TheystoppedatTownHall,andOfficerSmith

ledthemintothemeetingroomwhereagroupofpolicemenwerewaitingtowishAllenahappy

birthday.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

There,apartywaswaitingforhim.

Aftertheyenjoyedthecake,OfficerSmithtookoutagiftbag.

南京市、盐城市2024届高三年级第一次模拟考试

英语参考答案

2024.03

第一部分听力（共两节，满分30分）

l.C2.B3.A4.B5.A6.B7.A8.C9.C10.B

11.B12.A13.C14.B15.C16.C17.A18.C19.A20.B

第二部分阅读（共两节，满分50分）

第一节（共15小题;每小题2.5分，满分37.5分）

21.B22.A23.D24.D25.A

26.D27.C28.A29.C30.C

31.B32.D33.C34.B35.B

第二节（共5小题;每小题2.5分，满分12.5分）

36.D37.G38.B39.E40.A

第三部分语言运用（共两节，满分30分）

第一节（共15小题;每小题1分，满分15分）

41.B42.A43.C44.C45.D

46.A47.B48.C49.D50.B

51.C52.A53.D54.B55.D

第二节（共10小题；每小题L5分，满分15分）

56.with57.or58.Made59.pursuit60.a61.Basically

62.topossess63.their64.where65.arechosen

第四部分写作（共两节,满分40分）

第一节（满分15分）

DearEditor,

Icontributedtoyour"InterpersonalRelationships"columnamonthago.Nothavingreceived

anyresponseyet,Iamwritingtoinquireaboutit.

Titled"StrangersundertheSameRoof',myarticleexploresvariouspracticalstrategiesfor

usteenagerstomaintainaharmoniousparent-childrelationship.Doesitringabellwithyou?

I'meagertoknowifmycontributionhasbeenselectedforpublicationorifanyfurthermodifi­

cationsareneeded.

Thankyouforyourattention.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.(80words)

Sincerely,

LiHua

第二节(满分25分)

There,apartywaswaitingforhim.ThemomentAllensteppedinside,achorusof"Happy

Birthday"filledthemeetingroom,andhefoundhimselfsurroundedbylotsofpoliceofficers

holdingballoons.OfficerSmithintroducedhimtoalltheofficers,whogavehimhighfives.Allen

wasthrilled,andhiseyessparkledwithexcitementashelookedatthegrandpolice-themedcake.

AsAllencutintothecakewiththehelpofhismom,theroomeruptedintocheersandlaughter,

addingtothejoyfulatmosphere.(80words)

Aftertheyenjoyedthecake,OfficerSmithtookoutagiftbag."It'sforyou.Hepresentedthe

delicatelywrappedparceltoAllen,whowasstunnedbythesurprise."Wow,amodelpolicecar!

Itlooksexactlyliketheonewecameherein!Thankyou!”OfficerSmithsmiled,nAnytime,

Allen."AllenhuggedOfficerSmithandthankedhimagainformakingtheotherwisecrushing

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书面表达评分建议

应用文写作(满分15分)

一、评分原则

1.本题总分为15分，按5个档次给分;

2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量、

确定或调整档次，最后给分；

3.词数少于60,从总分中减去2分；

4.评分时，应主要从以下三个方面考虑：

（1）内容要点的覆盖、表达的清楚程度以及合理性；

（2）使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性；

（3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。

5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度子以考

虑。英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受；

6.如字迹难以辨认，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

二、内容要点

1.简述稿件内容；

2.询问稿件情况。

三、各档次的给分范围和要求

完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的。

第五档（13-15分）

1.覆盖所有内容要点；

2.语言表达准确、多样并且恰当；

3.有效地使用了衔接手段，使全文结构紧凑。

完成了试题规定的任务，达到了预期的写作目的。

第四档（10-12分）

1.覆盖所有内容要点；

2.语言表达比较准确、多样，有些许语言错误；

3.比较有效地使用了衔接手段，使全文结构较为紧凑。

基本完成了试题规定的任务，基本达到了预期的写作目的。

第三档（7-9分）

1.覆盖大部分内容要点；

2.语言表达比较单一，有一些语言错误；

3.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，全文不够紧凑。

未恰当完成试题规定的任务，未能清楚地将信息传达给读者。

第二档（4-6分）

1.遗漏一些要点或写了一些无关内容；

2.词汇有限，语法结构单一，错误较多；

3.较少使用语