高中英语写作新题型短文续写专项练习16篇(含范文及解析)

高中英语新题型短文续写专项练习16篇（含范文及解析）

（一）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

ScoutcouldclearlyrememberthenightshehadtoleaveherhomeinPoland.ItwasthebeginningofWorld

WarIIandherfamilyhadtoescapeassoonaspossible.Shequicklypackedasuitcasewithafewpiecesofclothing,

herdiary,andhermostprizedtreasure,asilkscarf.Scoutandherbestfriend,Betty,hadpersuadedtheirparentsto

buythemmatchingscarves,whichtheytookasasymboloftheirfriendship.Scoutdidn'tknowshewasgoingto

Americaandwouldnotbereturning.

Scoutkeptthatspecialsilkscarfformanyyears.Onedayshedecidedtogiveittohergranddaughter,Eliza,to

weartoherfirstjobinterviewforgoodluck.ScoutwasafraidthatElizawouldlosethescarf,butthegranddaughter

promised,nDon*tworry,Grandma,nothing'sgoingtohappentoyourscarf.You'llseethatit'sgoingtobringbothof

usluck."Andwiththat,Elizakissedhergrandmotherandleftfortheinterview.

Leavingtheinterview,Elizafeltconfidentthatshehadgotthejobsoshedecidedtocelebratebygoingtoa

restaurant.Sittingathertable,Elizafeltanelderlywomanstaringatherforalongtime.

"I'msorry.DoIknowyou?*'Elizaasked.

"I'msorry,dear,butyouremindmeofmybestfriend,*'theoldwomanreplied."Shelookedlikeyouandused

towearascarfjustlikeyours."Elizalistenedcarefully,withhereyesandmouthwideopen.Shehadheardstories

ofhergrandmother'sbestfriendandknewthemeaningofthescarf.CouldthiswomanbeBetty,hergrandmother^

childhoodfriend?

注意：

I.所续写短文词数应为100左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已给出，不计入总词数；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1:

Thentheoldwomanintroducedherself,41Mynameis

Paragraph2:

Theoldwomanagreed._________________________________________________________

答案及解析：

Thentheoldwomanintroducedherself,t4MynameisBetty.I'moriginallyfromPoland,butlefttherewhenI

wasthirteen.AndIhavebeenlivinghereinWashingtonDCinAmericaeversince.^^Elizacouldnotbelieveit,

storiesofhergrandmother^bestfriendfloatinginhermind.Sheassumedthattheoldwomanmustbeher

grandmother'sbestfriend.Shesaid,“Betty,wouldyoumindcomingwithmerightnow?Ineedtoshowyou

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somebody.^^

Theoldwomanagreed.Soontheylefttherestaurantafterdinner.ArrivingatScoufshome,theoldwoman

eagerlyrangthedoorbell.ThemomentScoutopenedthedoor,shewasamazedtoseeherchildhoodfriend

standinginfrontofher.Howmagical!Thescarfindeedbroughtthemgoodluck.Excitedandmoved,bothofthem

wereintears.Theyhadn,tseeneachotherformanyyearsandhadmanythingstoshare.

【详解】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，Scout和Betty从小是好朋友，但是因为战争

原因，Scout必须举家搬去美国，因此他们请求父母给他们买一对围巾作为友谊的象征，自此以后他们不

再见面，但是依然保存着围巾，直到一天Scout的孙女带着她的围巾在餐馆的时候，遇到了Betty.

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：然后，这个老夫人作了自我介绍。所以应该写：Betty讲述自己为什么

也来到了美国，以及Eliza告诉她要带她去见一个人。第二段开头是：这个老夫人同意了。所以应该写：

Betty跟着Eliza去了她的家，见到了童年时的朋友，两人非常激动，不敢相信。

续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当

的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为100左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用

的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。

（二）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

“IfmumfindsoutthatI'mgoingtothebeach,Pllbeinbigtrouble."Isaidtomyselfsoftlyinalowvoice.

Iwentdownstairsslowlyandtriedtowalkcasuallyintothekitchen.AsIwaswalkingtowardsthebackdoor,

mumaskedwithoutlookingupfromher“dish-washing","Whereareyougoing?^^Iansweredbackwithout

hesitation,441amgoingtothegardentoplay."AfterIgotoutofthekitchen,Ibreathedasignofrelief.Myplanhad

workedoutfinesofar.Iclimbedthefenceandjumpedontothemuddyfieldnexttomyhouseandstartedrunning

towardsthebusstopattopspeed,

AfterhalfanhourIwasatthebeachscanningthecrowdformyfriends,JimmyandBobby.Twoyoungmen

wereracinginthecanoes（独木舟）.Afterawhile,Isawthemnearacoconuttree.Irantowardsthemandgotinto

myswimmingtrunk（游泳裤）.Foraboutanhour,weplayedvolleyballhappily.

Suddenly,Bobbyhittheballtoohardandtheballfellintothesea.JustasBobbywasgoingtopickuptheball,

thetidecameinandcarriedtheballfurtherandfurtherawayfromtheshore.Iwantedtoshowoffmyswimming

skillssoIdeclaredtohelpgettheballforthem.

Idivedintothewaterandstartedswimmingatasteadypace.Afterswimmingforabouttenminutes,Ibecame

tiredbutwhenIsawthattheballwasonlyafewfeetawayfromme,Iputin

anextraburstofspeed.However,justasIwasgoingtogettheball,averystrongcurrentswepttheballfurther

awayfromme.Atthatmoment,astringofweed（海草）tangled（缠绕）upwithmyfeetandIcouldnotswim

properly.

Istruggledtokeepafloatbutitwasnouse."IfIhadlistenedtomyparents,thiswouldneverhavehappened,

Ithoughtsilently.

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Finally,afterstrugglingforaminuteortwo,Istillgotpulledunderwater.

Paragraph2

WhenIwokeup,Iwasinanemptyroomlyingonabed.

答案及解析：

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Finally,afterstrugglingForaminuteortwo,Istillgotputtedunderwater.ItoldmyselfIshouldnevergive

up.ThenIpulledtheweedagainwithgreatefforts.Theweedfinallybroke.Iswambacktothesurfacetotakea

deepbreath.Isawtwoyoungmenincanoes,racingeachother.Iwasexhaustedandshoutedforhelp.Thetwomen

sawmeandracedtowardsme.Bythetimetheyreachedme,Ihadbeenalreadyunconscious.

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WhenIwokeup,Iwasinanemptyroomlyingonabed.ItwasnotuntiladoctorcameintotheroomthatI

realizedthatIwasinahospital.JimmyandBobbytoldmethetwoyoungmenbroughtmetotheshoreandsentme

tothehospital.Afterafewminutes,myparentswithhalfangryandhalfworriedfaceswalkedin.Myparents

scoldedmeforrunningoutofthehousesecretlybutwerealsogladthatIwasnotseriouslyinjured.Iwillnever

forgetthatterrifyingexperience.NeitherwillIeverwanttoshowoffagain.

【分析】

前文提要：我挣扎着保持漂浮，但没有用。“如果我听了我父母的话，这是永远不会发生的，”我默默地

想。

【详解】（1）第一段所给首句：Finally,afterstrugglingforaminuteortwo,Istillgotpulledunderwater.S^

一句转折句，接下来应该是作者不放弃，勇敢地游出水面，求救，无论从何角度拓展，需注意与续写第二

段首句呼应。

（2）第二段首句：WhenIwokeup,Iwasinanemptyroomlyingonabed.这一句应该是转折句，既然作者醒

来，说明他已经被救，接下来应该是作者躺在医院里，一定是通知了他的家人，父母来后一定会生气的，

父母会责备他偷偷地跑出了房子，但也很高兴他没有受到严重的伤害。作者永远不会忘记那可怕的经历。

他也不想再炫耀了。

（三）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Onacoldwindyday,apoorboytriedtopayhiswaythroughschoolbysellinggoodsdoortodoor.Wandering

onthestreet,hewasnotasuccessfulseller.What'sworse,hefoundthatheonlyhadonedime（一角硬币）left.

Hisemptystomachremindedhimconstantlythatfordayshehadn'teatenanything.Hehadnochoicebuttobegfor

amealatthenexthouse.Hesitantlyheknockedatdoor,thinkingaboutwhattosaywhenitopened.However,he

losthisnervewhenalovelyyoungwomanopenedthedoor."WhatcanIdoforyou?^^askedtheyoungwoman.The

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boypausedforawhile“Wouldyoupleasegivemesome...adrinkofwater?”theboydarenottolookdirectlyinto

hereyes.Shelookedatthebonyboyandthoughthemightneedsomethingtogivehimenergysoshebroughthima

glassofmilk.Hisheadrisingandsmallhandstakingthecup,hedrankitupslowly,andthenasked,uHowmuchdo

Ioweyou?,,t6Youdon'towemeanything,"sherepliedwithawarmsmileonherface.4tMymotherhastaughtme

nevertoacceptpayforakindness.Deeplymoved,hesaidsincerely,4tThenIshallthankyoufromthebottomof

myheart.^AsHowardKellyleftthathouse,henotonlyfeltstrongerphysically,butitalsoincreasedhisfaithin

Godandthewholehumanrace.Asamatteroffact,hewasabouttogiveupandquitbeforethatpoint.

Yearslatertheyoungwomanbecamecriticallyill.However,thelocaldoctorswereunabletogivetheeffective

medicaltreatment.Finallytheysenthertoahospitalinthebigcity,wherespecialistscanbecalledintocureher

raredisease.Amongthosefamousspecialists,Dr.HowardKellywascalledinfortheconsultation.Whenheheard

thenameofthetownshecamefrom,astrangelightfilledhiseyes.Immediately,heroseandwentdownthrough

thehospitalhallintoherroom.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1:

Dressedinhisdoctorsgown,hewentintoseeher.

Paragraph2:

Thebillwassenttoherroom._____________________________________

答案及解析：

Dressedinhisdoctorsgown,hewentintoseeher.Hesawherlieonthebedandrecognizedheratonce.Her

lovelyfacelookedpale.Hewentbacktotheconsultationroomanddeterminedtodohisbesttosaveherlife.Form

thatdayon,hegavespecialattentiontohercase.Luckily,afteralongstruggle,thebattlewaswon.Dr.Kelly

requestedthebusinessofficetopassthefinalbilltohimforapproval.Helookedatitandthenwrotesomethingon

theside.

Thebillwassenttoherroom.Hesitantlyshetookit.Shewasafraidtoopenitbecauseshewassurethatit

wouldtaketherestofherlifetopayitoff.Finallysheopenedit,onthesideofwhichanotecaughtherattention.

Shereadthesewords,t6Paidinfullwithaglassofmilk."signedDr.HowardKelly.Tearsofjoyfloodedhereyesas

sheprayedsilently,tcThankYou,God.”

【分析】

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本篇书面表达是读后续写。

【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，文章讲述了一个小男孩在饥寒交迫的时候有一个女士给了他一杯牛奶，

若干年后这个小男孩成为了一名医生，去救治那个送给他牛奶的女士。续写部分分为两段，第一段开头

是：他穿着白大褂进入病房去见她..…，所以应该写他见到她躺在床上后的的反应即见到此景他会为她做

什么。要详细叙述一下他为治疗她的病所做出的的努力；第二段开头是：账单送到了她的房间..…，首先

写她见到账单后的心理，然后详述一下打开账单后账单的内容，要把一杯牛奶和账单巧妙的联系起来。

续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当

的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用

的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。

亮点

本文内容完整，表达条理，语言规范。文中使用了较多高级表达：1.Shewasafraidtoopenitbecauseshe

wassurethatitwouldtaketherestofherlifetopayitoff.本句含because引的原因状语从句和that引导的宾语

从句o2.onthesideofwhichanotecaughtherattention使用了which弓|导的定语从句。3.Tearsofjoy

floodedher外空assheprayedsilently止匕处是由as引导的时间状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显

示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

（四）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Once,whenIwasateenager,myfatherandIwerestandinginlinetobuyticketsforthecircus.Finally,there

wasonlyonefamilybetweenusandtheticketcounter.

Thisfamilymadeabigimpressiononme.Therewereeightchildren,allprobablyundertheageof12.You

couldtelltheydidn*thavealotofmoney.

Theirclotheswerenotexpensive,buttheywereclean.Thechildrenwerewell-behaved,allofthemstandingin

line,two-by-twobehindtheirparents,holdinghands.Theywereexcitedlyjabberingabouttheclowns,elephants,

andotheractstheywouldseethatnight.

Onecouldsensetheyhadneverbeentothecircusbefore.Itpromisedtobeahighlightoftheiryounglives.The

fatherandmotherwereattheheadofthepack,standingproudascouldbe.

Themotherwasholdingherhusband'shand,lookingupathimasiftosay,"You'remyknightinshining

armor."

Hewassmilingandbaskinginpride,lookingbackatherasiftoreply,"Yougotthatrightn

Theticketladyaskedthefatherhowmanyticketshewanted.Heproudlyresponded,"Pleaseletmebuyeight

children'sticketsandtwoadultticketssoIcantakemyfamilytothecircus."

Theticketladyquotedtheprice.Theman*swifeletgoofhishand,herheaddropped,andhislipbegantoshake.

Thefatherleanedalittlecloserandasked,HHowmuchdidyousay?"

Theticketladyagainquotedtheprice.Themandidn'thaveenoughmoney.

Howwashesupposedtoturnandtellhiseightchildrenthathedidn'thaveenoughmoneytotakethemtothe

circus?

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Actuallywewerenotwealthyinanysense.SoIunderstandhowthekidswouldfeel.Ifeelsorryforthem.

注意：

1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。

Paragraph1

Seeingwhatwasgoingon,mydadputhishandinhispocket,pulledouta$20billanddroppeditontheground.

Paragraph2

ThatdaymyfatherandIwenttoourcaranddrovehomewithoutanytickets.

答案及解析：

Thenhepickeditupandtappedthemanontheshoulderandsaid,"Excuseme,sir,thisfelloutofyour

pocket."Themanturnedaroundandsawthemoney.Heknewwhatwasgoingon,helookedstraightintomydad's

eyes,tookmydadshandinbothofhis,squeezedtightlyontothe$20bill,andwithhislipshakingandatear

runningdownhischeek,hereplied,Thankyou,thankyou,sir.Thisreallymeansalottomeandmyfamily.M

Wedidntgotothecireusthatnight,whenIaskeddadwhyhedidso,Dadsaid,Mychild,itwasadesperate,

heartbreakingandembarrassingsituationforafather.Surelyhewasn'tbeggingforahandout,buthe.remindedme

ofmyfather,when1wasyoung-"*Hepausedforawhile.asifwanderinginhismemory.Weshouldappreciate

whatwehaveobtainedfromlifeandseizeeveryopportunitytohelpothers.Wedidntgototheeircustonight,but

wedidn'tgowithout.Now,whowantsanicecream?"

【详解】第一段所给首句，Seeingwhatwasgoingon,mydadputhishandinhispocket,pulledouta$20bill

anddroppeditontheground.这一句是故事发展的转折点，接下来他应该是手里拿着20美元，眼含热泪表达

感谢。无论从何角度续写需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。

第二段所给首句,ThatdaymyfatherandIwenttoourcaranddrovehomewithoutanytickets.接下来应该是问

父亲为什么要这么做的时候，父亲做出了的回答。文章应从这一角度入手进行续写。

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读后续写

Myfiance（未婚夫）andIwereexcitedaboutshoppingforourfirsthome.Butourfundswerelimited,and

noneofthehousesinourpricerangeseemedsatisfactory.

Oneagentrecommendedahouseinparticular.Althoughherdescriptionsoundedwonderful,thepricewas

beyondourrange,sowedeclined（谢绝）.Butshekepturgingustohavealookatlast.

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Wefinallydidanditwasloveatfirstsight.Itwasourhome,smallandcharming,overlookingaquietlake.

Walkingthroughtheroomsandtalkingwiththeowners,aniceelderlycouple,wefeltthewarmthandhappinessof

themarriagewithinthathome.Asperfectasitwas,thepriceremainedtoohighforus.Buteveryday,wewouldsit

bythelake,lookingatthehouseanddreamingofwhatitwouldbeliketolivethere.Dayslater,wemadean

offer-farbelowtheaskingprice.Surprisingly,theydidn'tlaughatus.Theyrenewedtheirofferinstead.Itwas

alsomuchmorethanwecouldafford,butfarlessthantheoriginalaskingprice.

Thenextday,wegotadisappointingmessagethatanotherbuyerhadofferedamuchhigherprice.Evenso,we

decidedtotalkwiththeownersdirectly.Wemadeourfinaloffer,whichstillwasthousandsofdollarslessthanthe

otherbuyer9sbid（出价）.Weknewit,butwehadtotry.Nobodyknewifwecouldgetit.

注意：1.所续写的短文的词数应为150词左右；

2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1:

Wewenttotheownershomeafterwemadeourfinaloffer.

Paragraph2:

Theownerlookedatusandsaid,

答案及解析：

13.

Paragrphl：

Wewenttotheowner?shomeafterwemadeourfinaloffer.Theotherpotentialbuyercamewithconfidence.

Theownersmiled,saying,taTellmethereasonwhyyouneedthishouse.Theonewhoseanswersatisfiesmewill

takethepossessionofit.”"Formybusiness.^^Thebuyeransweredwithoutanyhesitation.Afterthinkingforawhile,

Ireplied,6<Icanfeelwarmthandloveofthemarriageinthehouse,whichIhavebeenlongingfbr.^^

Paragraph2：

Theownerlookedatusandsaid,“Iwanttosellmyhousetoyou!^^Asurge（大量,汹涌）ofshockhitme.

“Why?HeofferedahigherpricethanIcouldafford."Iasked,surprised."Iwanttogiveittothosewhocanfillit

withloveinsteadofmoney.^^Weappreciatedhimandfeltasenseofwarmth,deeplymoved.Irealizedthatasincere

heartwasmoresignificantthanmoney.

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【分析】

本文是一篇续写类书面表达，对考生的要求极高，首先是语篇构思能力，其次是运用语言的能力。要求考

生根据原文的脉络继续搭建故事的细节内容。这对夫妻非常喜欢这座房子，但是他们囊怀羞涩根本付不起

高昂的价格，但是他们对房子的喜爱会让他们最终得到这座心爱的家。文章最终必然是一个出人意料的结

尾。全文使用一般过去时，同时根据实际情况灵活运用时态。

【详解】第1步：审题。本文是一篇续写类书面表达，续写第一段中介绍他们最后一次出价并与竞争对手

陈述购房的理由。第二段是房屋主人对两家陈述的评价以及最终的决定。

第2步：组织要点。第一段：这对夫妻购房的原因在于喜爱这栋房子，让他们有家的感觉；另外一对夫妻

购房是想做生意。适当运用心里描写。第二段：房屋主人对两家的陈述进行评价，并给出最终的决定：把

房子卖给我们。此类文章必然有出人意料的结尾，

第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行语篇构思，文章中出现的间接引语和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美

观的卷面是非常重要的。

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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Iwokeupearlierthanmybrotheraseveryotherdayoftheweek.Ijumpedoutofthebed,gotdressed,

brushedmyteeth,andhadbreakfast.Sayinggoodbyetomymother,Igotinthecarnolaterthan7:05.Igotto

schoolontime,eventhoughmybrothercameoutofthehouselateasheusedto.

ItwasaThursday.Iwaswalkingtothechemistryroomswhenmyphoneinmyleftpocketvibrated（震动）.I

tookitoutandlookedattheshinyscreen.AssoonasIsawmyfather^nameonthatscreenIrealizedsomething

wasnotright.

Hewouldnotcallmeinthemiddleofaschooldayjusttotalk.Hewouldwantmetofocusinschoolanddo

well.Iansweredthephone,andmyfathersoundedworried.Hetoldmetofindmybrotherassoonaspossible,

walkwithhimtotheschoolpicking-upzoneandgetinthecarwithmybrother.Ourdriverwouldtakeusback

homewheremyfatherwas.

WhenIwasinthecarwithmybrothermydadcalledthedriverandtoldhimtotakeustothehospital.We

weregoingtomeethimandmymumthere.AssoonasmybrotherandIfoundaboutthechangeinplans,we

lookedateachotherintheeyes.Iimmediatelynoticedthefearinbrother'seyes.

Tobehonest,Iwasreallyscaredtoo,probablymorethanhewas.ButIdidnotsayanything.Wearrivedatthe

hospital.Isawmydadonthephonewaitingforusattheentrance.Hewassmoking.Seeingmydadsmokingmade

memoreworried.Ihadneverseenhimsmokebefore.Hehatedit.Assoonasherecognizedthewhitecar,hethrew

thecigaretteaway.Ilookedatmybrother;hewaslookingoutoftheotherwindow.IdidnottellhimwhatIjust

saw.Ididnotwanthimtoworry.

答案及解析：

Thecarstoppedrightinfromofmydad.HeopenedthedoorandIjumpedoutofthecarandhuggedhin.He

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noticedthatIwasworriedrightawayandwithasmileonhisfacetoldushehadasurpriseforus."Whatgood

thingshappeninhospital?”Whenweapproachedtheward,mydadtoldmybrotherandmetocloseoureyesand

holdhishands.Sowedid.Hiswarmhandsmademefeelmoresecure.

偃walkeddownthehallwithoureyesclosed.Suddenlywestopped.Whenwewalkedintotheroom,my

fathertoldustoopenoureyes.Wesawourmotherlyingonthebed.Tearswelledupinmyeyes,butIwasnotin

pain.RightnexttomymotherIsawthemostbeautifulthingIhadeverseen.Itwasagirl.Shewassleeping.She

wasmysister.Istillrememberthatdayasoneofthehappiestdaysofmylife.

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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Lastweekend,IwenttoMark'snewhousenearbyaforestforalittleget-together.AfterlunchwhenIwas

chattingwithhimandhiswifeCody,heaskedme,“HeyThoran,haveyoueverbeentoasecretspot?”BeforeI

couldevenfinishsayingno,CodyandMarkwerealreadyatthedoorwiththeirjacketson.Andthenextmoment

wewereheadingoutintotheforestwithacamera,afishingeetandaplasticbucket（桶）.

Wewalkedthroughtheforestalongapathbyasmallriver.Breathingthefreshair,wethreetalkedand

laughedalltheway.

“Hey!Whatareyouguysdoing?"Someonesuddenlyshoutedfrombehind.MarkandCody'seyes

immediatelywidened,andwithoutawordtheystartedrunning.Ihadnochoicebuttofollowthem,gettingmy

shoeswetanddirtywithmud.Weprobablyranforabout10minutesbeforeMarkandCodysloweddown.I

stoppedtocatchmybreathandasked,“Whowasthat?”

Markreplied,t4Themostannoyingneighborever.Ifhecaughtupwithus,there5snotellingwhatcouldhappen.

Heisalwaysmakingfimofus.IdislikeWekeptwalkingonforafewmoreminutes.Thenabeautifullake

appearedbeforeoureyes."Wow!Amazing!?,Ishoutedandcouldhardlyholdbackmyexcitement.Thelakewas

largeandthewaterwasdeepandblue,lookingsopeacefulwithtalltreesaroundit.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

Paragraph1:

Lookingaround,wesawarubberboatfloatingbytheshore.

Paragraph2:

“Help!Help!Help!^^Iwassofrightenedandcriedforhelp.

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答案及解析：

Paragraph1:

Lookingaround,wesawarubberboatfloatingbytheshore.a4Howaboutgoingboating?^^Markasked.t6Good

idea."Sowethreeexcitedlyjumpedontotheboatandrowedfarout.Iwasthrilledtofindsomanyfishesinthe

lake.BeforeIcouldsayaword,Markhadcastthefishingnetintothewater.taLefswaitandsee.^^Marksmiled

mysteriously."Lookthisway.Letmetakeaphotoofyoutwo."Codysaid,takingoutthecamera.Hearingthat,I

quicklyapproachedMark.ButallofasuddenIlostmybalanceandfellintothewater.

Paragraph2:

“Help!Help!Help!^^Iwassofrightenedandcriedforhelp.However,noneofuscouldswim.MarkandCody

triedtopullmeupfromthewaterbutinvain.Strugglinginthewater,IwasalmostexhaustedwhenIfeltmyself

liftedbysomeone.ItwasMark'sneighbor,whofollowedusthereandsawwhathadhappened.Withouthesitation,

hejumpedintothewaterandIwassaved.

【分析】

本文是一则读后续写。背景是上个周末，作者去了马克在附近森林的新房子，参加了一个小聚会。然后马

克带作者来到一个秘密的地方。继续往前走了几分钟。然后，一个美丽的湖出现在眼前，湖很大，树很

高，周围很安静……

【详解】(1)第一段所给首句Lookingaround,wesawarubberboatfloatingbytheshore.从看到橡皮船入

手，说明接下来可能要划船等等，但根据第二段首句可知，作者遇到了危险。无论从何角度拓展，需注意

与续写第二段首句呼应。

(2)第二段所给首句“Help!Help!Help!”Iwassofrightenedandcriedfbrhelp.根据首句可知，作者是遇到了

危险，所以应该从“救人”入手来写续文。

(八)

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

HonestyandForgiveness

Onawinterafternoon,afriendandIwerethrowingstonesontotheroofoftheoldlady'shouse.Theobjectof

ourplaywastoobservehowthestoneschangedtomissiles(导弹)astheyrolledtotheedgeoftheroof.Ifound

myselfaperfectlysmoothrockandthrewitout.Thestonewastoosmooth,however,soitslippedfrommyhandas

Iletitgoandheadedstraightnotfortheroofbutforasmallwindowontheoldlady'sbackporch.Atthesoundof

crashedglass,weknewwewereintroubleandranaway.

Iwastoofrightenedofgettingcaughtthatfirstnighttobeconcernedabouttheoldladywiththebroken

windowinwinter.However,afewdayslater,whenIwassurethatIhadn'tbeendiscovered,Istartedtofeelguilty

forhermisfortune.ShestillgreetedmewithasmileeachdaywhenIgaveherthepaper,butIwasnolongerableto

actcomfortableinherpresence.

ImadeupmymindthatIwouldsavemypaperdeliverymoney,

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注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为60-80词；

2.应使用4个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；

3.续写部分为一段，开头语已为你写好；

4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

答案及解析：

ImadeupmymindthatIwouldsavemypaperdeliverymoney,andinthreeweeksIhadthesevendollarsto

coverthecostofherwindow.!putthemoneyinanenvelopewithanoteexplainingthatIwassorryforbreaking

herwindowandhopedthatthesevendollarswouldcoverthecostforrepairingit.Iwaiteduntilitwas

dark,snuck_uptotheoldlady'shouse,andputtheletterIdidn'tsignthroughtheletterslotinherdoor.Onceagain,I

couldhavethefreedomoflookingstraightintotheoldlady'skindeyes.Thenextday,Ihandedtheoldladyher

paperandwasabletoreturnthewarmsmilethatIwasreceivingfromher.Shethankedmeforthepaperandgave

meabagofcookiesshehadmadeherself.Reachingforthecookies,!feltanenvelopeandpulleditoutofthe

bag.WhenIopenedtheenvelope,!wassurprised.Insidewerethesevendollarsandashortnotethatsaid/Tmproud

ofyou!^^

【分析】

本题题型为读后续写，故事续写多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，要求故事完整，逻辑性

强，它能充分激发学生的想象力，培养学生的创新思维能力。本文就是一篇故事续写，要求给出如下：所

续写短文的词数为60-80词；使用4个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写完成后，所使用的关键词

语用下划线标出。

【详解】首先，在逻辑上，文章前半段对剧情的合理拓展非常符合情境：作者因打破了老人的窗玻璃感到

后悔，决定将自己送报纸赚的钱攒齐作为赔偿。情节真实，增强了可读性。其次，在语言方面，文章使用

了多种句型，如IputthemoneyinanenvelopewithanoteexplainingthatIwassorryforbreakingherwindow

andhopedthatthesevendollarswouldcoverthecostforrepairingit.——句中使用了两处宾语从句，又如Iwaited

untilitwasdark,snuckuptotheoldlady'shouse,andputtheletterIdidn'tsignthroughtheletterslotinherdoor.

一句中用了waited…，snuckup…，andput…多个谓语动词，使句子连贯紧凑。句型的多变避免了句子的单

调乏味，使文章更有灵性。同时，一些词汇的使用也使文章更为生动，贴切，如Onceagain,Icouldhave

thefreedomoflookingstraightintotheoldlady'skindeyes.其中onceagain一词用得十分传神，符合情境。

（九）

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Amancamehomefromworklate,tiredandirritated（不耐烦的）,tofindhis5-year-oldsonwaitingfor

himatthedoor.

“Daddy,mayIaskyouaquestion?^^

“Yeahsure,whatisit?”repliedtheman.

“Daddy,howmuchdoyoumakeanhour?”

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“That'snoneofyourbusiness.Whydoyouasksuchathing?"themansaidangrily.

“Ijustwanttoknow.Pleasetellme,howmuchdoyoumakeanhour?,,pleadedthelittleboy.

“Ifyoumustknow,Imake$20anhour.^^

“Oh,"thelittleboyreplied,withhisheaddown.Lookingup,hesaid,"Daddy,mayIpleaseborrow$10?”

Thefatherwasangry,t4Iftheonlyreasonyouaskedthatissoyoucanborrowsomemoneytobuyasillytoy