山西省2024九年级英语全册Unit13We'retryingtosavetheearth写作能力提升练课件新版人教新目标版

UNIT13We’retryingtosavetheearth!UNIT13写作能力提升练⁠

⁠地球上的资源总是有限的,如果不节约使用,就会出现资源短缺问题｡为了保护地球上有限的资源,我们应该采取什么措施呢?请根据下面的写作要点写一篇不少于80词的短文｡写作要点:

1.节约水;2.节约电;3.保护森林｡

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⁠［谋篇布局］［遣词造句］⁠

⁠beginning＜基础句式＞

Theworlddevelopsmuchfasterbuttheresourcesontheearthgetfewer.＜提升句式＞

Withthedevelopmentoftheworld,theresourcesontheearthgetfewerandfewer.＜升华句式＞

Althoughtheworlddevelopsmuchfasterandbetter,theresourcesontheearthgetfewerandfewer.⁠

⁠body＜基础句式1＞

Weshouldprotectdrinkingwater,stoppolluting

itandmakefulluseofit.＜提升句式1＞

Weshouldprotectdrinkingwaterandstoppollutingit,andweshouldmakefulluseofit.＜升华句式1＞

Notonlyshouldweprotectdrinkingwaterandstoppollutingit,butalsoweshouldmakefulluseofit.＜基础句式2＞

Withoutit,wecan’tlivewell.＜提升句式2＞

Withoutit,ourlifewillbeterrible.＜升华句式2＞

Wecan’timaginewhatthelifewillbelikewithoutit.⁠

⁠ending＜基础句式＞

Weshoulddotheseabovetomakeourearthmorebeautiful.＜提升句式＞

Ifwedowhatismentionedabove,wecanmakeourearthmorebeautiful.＜升华句式＞

Inaword,aslongaswedotheseabove,wecanmakeourearthmorebeautiful.［连句成篇］

Althoughtheworlddevelopsmuchfasterandbetter,theresourcesontheearthgetfewerandfewer.Inordertoprotectthem,somethingmustbedone.Savewater.Wateristhesourceoflife.It’sveryimportantforustodoso.Notonlyshouldweprotectdrinkingwaterandstoppollutingit,butalsoweshouldmakefulluseofit.

Saveelectricity.Wecan’timaginewhatthelifewillbelikewithoutit.Everyoneshoulddohisbesttosaveelectricity.Don’tforgettoturnoffthelightswhenwefinishworking.

Protectforests.Theyareuseful.Pleasestopcuttingthemdownandrecyclepaper.Makeourworlda