短文改错高考英语专题复习短文改错省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖课件

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短文改错测试点高考英语短文改错主要考查考生在语篇中综合利用英语语言知识能力，它不一样于单句改错，考生应在了解短文基础上,依据上下文逻辑关系,对文中错误做出判断，并进行纠正。所以，该题型综合性强，包括面广。3/116短文改错所考查知识点涵盖了中学英语中全部语法内容，侧重考查:动词和非谓语动词，连词与逻辑关系，副词与形容词等，同时也兼顾考查名词，冠词，动词时态，代词，行文逻辑和固定搭配等。

4/1161、贴近实际生活2、话题相关学生学习生活3、多以书信和日志形式出现4、浅显易懂，没有生僻、超纲词汇。5、句子结构简单，基本是简单句和并不复杂复合句。5/116常考短文改错错误主要是以下几个方面：一是语法方面，主要测试动词时态和语态，非谓语动词和短语动词；名词,代词各种形式，形容词和副词以及比较等级使用方法；连词.冠词.介词；主谓一致；简单句.并列句和复合句，以及倒装.省略句等。

6/116二是在行文逻辑方面，主要考查人物性别及对应物主代词或物数量及对应物主代词，句子并列.递进.转折.因果关系；时间先后次序等.7/116得法者，事半功倍

8/116动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副；非谓语，细辨别，代词格，细领悟；介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注，冠词连词常光顾。短文改错口诀：9/116一、动词形

主要包含两类错误：动词时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致错误。四川卷：Whenhegetshome,hesawtheanimalwaitingatthedoor,stillwearinghisjacketwiththewalletinthepocket.天津卷：InGradeEightItookphysics.InonetestIgetonly36percentoftheanswerscorrect.gotgot10/116安徽卷：Anyonecanborrowbooksifheorshewish.

安徽卷：Youcansitatthedeskandreadthedailynewspapers,magazinesandtheotherbooks,butyouarenotpermittotakethemout

wishespermitted11/116(新课标全国)IfeelveryhappythatIcouldchangemyclothesatlast.[解析]短文发生在过去,整个时态为普通过去时。feel改为felt(2)(新课标全国)Onedayhewashavingayardsaleandtheoldmanlivingnextdoorcomebytohelp.[解析]句中and连接两个并列句。依据句子结构可知,come应该是句子谓语,时态应该与前面句子保持一致come改为came12/116(3)(辽宁)ItwasonlywhenwedidourchemistryprojecttogetherthatIbegintounderstandwhyChristinedressedthewayshedid.[解析]依据上下文可知,此处应用普通过去时。begin改为began（新课标全国一卷）WhenItearapartmyfifthbirthdaytoytrainmyfathersaid,“That’sit.[解析]依据上下文可知,此处应用普通过去时Tear改为tore13/116新课标全国纲领一卷）Forexample,howmanytimeshaveyouwalkedoutofaroomandleavethelightsortelevisionon[解析]句中and连接两个并列句。依据句子结构可知,leave应该是句子谓语,时态应该与前面句子保持一致leave改为left14/116新课标全国1卷）Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway

passed15/116(新课标全国2卷)

Havingteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner,whichmightnotbeserveduntil8o’clockatnight.Thiscustomsoonbecomesanothermealoftheday.became(新课标全国2卷)

TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.

drunk

16/116年四川高考题SuddenlyMary,mybestfriend,askingmetolethecopymyanswers.

asked年陕西高考题OneSundaymorningwegofishingatalake.

went17/1161.Aftertheyhadchosethebookstheywishedtoread,theinstructortoldthemtheprincipalpointshewantedthemtonote.

2.Notonlythestudentsbutalsotheteacherlikethefilm.

chosenlikes18/1163.Iwillliketoknowwhereyouwereborn.

4.Iwouldlikeyoureaditagain.

5.Myfathermustn’thavesaidsuchathing.

wouldtocouldn’t/can’t19/1166.Whenoursixchildrenwereyoung,suppertimeisalwaysbeinginterrupted.7.Growingupisnoteasy.Sometimesallthatisneedissomeonetorelyon.8.ThebikeoutsidemyhouseisbelongedtoTom.wasneeded20/116[考点剖析]

这类题错误设置普通包含以下几个方面：(1)

短文中时态使用前后不一致.(2)

在特定语境条件下时态误用(如含有状语从句复合句中，主句用未来时态，而从句中则用普通现在时态).(3)

主动语态和被动语态混用.21/116处理方案(1)

通读全文，搞清文中动词时态主旋律.(2)

结合语境，灵活利用时态形式.(3)

认真推敲，准确把握主动与被动.22/116二、名词数

指名词单、复数形式使用方法错误。陕西卷：Personally,Ifoundmostlessonratheruninteresting.浙江卷：Anearbycompanywaslookingforstudentswithgoodhandwritingtowriteaddressesonevenlope.Thepaywas10centsperenvelope.

lessonsevenlopes23/116福建卷：Ifyouhaveinterestsinit,replytomesoon.陕西卷：Theyhaveallsortsofcourse.I’msureyouwillfindoneyoulikeit.重庆卷：Insummer,theseaundertheblueskiesisevenmorebeautiful.interestcoursessky24/1161.Thebookwillgiveyoualltheinformationsyouneed.

2.Heisongoodtermwithme.

3.Heisagenerousfellow,andwillsoonmakefriendwithyouagain.

Theydidnotwantmetodoanyworkatfamilyfurniture,fun,homework,paper,news,progress,trouble,work（工作），equipmentadvice等informationtermsfriendshome25/1164.Hesenthisdaughtertoagirl’shighschool.

5.Givemethreespoonfulofsugar.

6.AuntMaryreturnedhomeaftertenyear’sabsence.7.Hehadnoideasthatthekitchenwasnotforguests.

girls’spoonfulsyears’idea26/116(新课标全国)Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutluggagesluggages是不可数名词。Luggage(辽宁)InearlyJanuarythisyear,therateofUFOreportswassteady,aroundthreeperweeks此处频率表示单数概念,用可数名词单数,意思是每七天。weeks改为week(3)(新课标全国)...hestoppedataboxofgoldenballforChristmastreesball是可数名词,依据句意这里应该用复数形式。balls27/116(4)(海南)TherearetwogirlsfrommycoursehereandIplantomakefriendwiththem.

friends[解析]make

friends

with

sb是固定短语,意为“与某人交朋友”(5)(海南)Morethan1,000paintingwillbeonshow,andhighschoolstudentsandteachersfromalltheeightdistrictswillcometotheevent.

paintings28/116(新课标全国1卷）Hewastall,withbroadshoulderandabeardthatturnedfromblacktowardsgrayoveryears.

shoulders（浙江卷)HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomyclassmate,mySchoolandjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.

classmates29/116[考点剖析]

这类题错误设置普通包含以下几个方面：(1)

可名词与不可数名词混用.(2)

用于固定词组中一些名词使用方法.(3)

同义词或反义词混用.30/116解决方案1.

理清可数与不可数名词之间区分与联络.2.

记清一些用于固定词组中名词特殊使用方法.3.结合语境认真分辨同义名词或近义名词.31/116三、还要注意形和副

注意形容词和副词在句子中作用和详细使用方法。这也是高考短文改错题常考点。浙江卷：Igottothefinishinglinefirst.Iwontherace.Ifeltveryproudlyofmyself.福建卷：Wecanhearbirdssinginghappyallaround.proudhappily１修饰名词，be动词，系动词要用形容词２修饰动词，形容词，整个句子用副词３比较级和最高级使用32/116全国卷Ⅱ：IwilllearnmoreaboutthehistoryoftheOlmpicsasgoodastheOlmpicgames.辽宁卷：Shewasusualpatientwithherstudentsandnevermadethemdisappointed.usuallywell33/116)(浙江)Whenshedroppedmeoff,Ipulledoutthetoyslowandgaveitback.[答案]slow改为slowly(新课标全国)IwasgoingtovisitafriendhereandafterthatIwouldgotoXiamenforalongholiday.[解析]此处副词指代方位错误,应该是“那里”。[答案]here改为there34/116(新课标全国)MyfriendNicktoldmeastoryabouthisexperiencebackintheUSwhichwasveryinterested.注意interested与interesting区分:interested普通表示人感觉,而interesting表示事物特征。interested改为interesting35/116)(新课标全国)Ontheboxwasacardsaying:“25centseach.”...Convinced,Nickhasbroughtthepriceupto10centsapiece.依据上文“25cents

each”可知,“10cents”显然是降价了up改为down36/116

1.Unfortunate，therearetoomanypeopleinmyfamily.2.Youshouldberespectabletowardsyourteachers.3.Iamabsolutelyuncapabletotellalie.

Unfortunatelyfortunately，luckily，obviously，natrually，interestinglyrespectfulincapable37/1164.Youmustmakeyourparentshappily.

5.HelookeddifferentlyafterhisreturnfromEurope.6.Thenumberofgirlsisveryfew.

happydifferentsmall38/1167.Theycamebacklatelyandhadsometea.8.Thetwomenthrewalltheirequipmentintothewatertomaketheballoonlight.9.Thenewpersononthejobfeelsmorebetterafterheorshehasplayedtenniswithotherpeopleintheoffice.latelightermuch/even/rather39/116考点剖析:(1)

形容词和副词混用，是短文改错中常见考点之一.(2)比较级和最高级混用或误用.(3)比较级和最高级修饰语误用以及近义词误用.40/116处理方案(1)

熟知形容词和副词句法功效.(2)

理清短文中形容词和副词比较等级关系.(3)结合短文内容，准确使用形容词和副词.41/116四、非谓语，细区分这是考查最多错误形式之一。主要有现在分词、过去分词，动名词和不定式错误。浙江卷：Icouldnottorunveryfastandfellbehind.宁夏卷：LiMengcameseemeeveryday.

to42/116(3)(浙江)“Excuseme,”shesaid,putherarmaroundtheunhappyoldwomanPut—putting)(辽宁)...andsheneverseemed∧carewhattherestofusthoughtabouther.[解析]seem

to

do

sth是固定使用方法。seemed后加to(陕西高考卷)Mysisterwanted∧getoutoftheshopasfastasshecouldwhenashopassistantcameovertous.want

to

do

sth是固定使用方法。wanted后加to

43/116（新课标全国1卷）Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs

hold（新课标全国2卷）Haveteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner,whichmightnotbeserveduntil8o’clockatnight.Having44/116（年全国高考卷纲领卷）Heisn’tgoodattalkbuthegetsonwellwithotherpeople.

talking

（年四川卷）Afterthinkforsometime,Ilethercopymyanswers.

thinking（浙江高考卷）Iamawfullytiring,butIknowI’llneverfallasleep.

tired45/116（陕西卷)Felthungry,webuiltafirebythelakeandbarbecuedthefish.ItwasdeliciousFeelingEncouragedbythegovernment,farmersplantedmorevegetables.46/116重庆卷：

Andthereweremanymeaningfulthings辽宁卷：

Weallenjoyedthispreciousdaygreatly,rememberthetimewespenttogetherandthepeopletheywerefamiliarwith.rememberingthatwereworththinkofthinking47/1161.Hehasneverbeenheardspeakillofothers.

2.Wehearitsayfrequentlythatwhatpresent-daymenmostdesireissecurity.

3.ItisdifficulttomakeyourselfunderstandinEnglish.tosaidunderstood48/1164.Onhiswayhome,hesuddenlyheardhisnamecalling.5.Butthentherearealwaysmoremysterieslookinto.6.Afterlearnthebasicsofthesubject,nothingelseseemedverypracticaltome.calledtolearning49/1167.Thatis,agameoftennismakinghimverybusy.8.Hedidn’twantsharethingswithotherpeople.9.SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfonpaper.10.MyparentslovemedearlyofcourseandwilldoalltheycanmakesurethatIgetagoodeducation.madetotalkingto50/11611.Theairkeepstheballoonupwasescapingquicklyandtheballoonwascomingdown.12.Ijustwanttothankyouforhelpingmebecomingadifferentperson.13.Theywantedonechildoranothertocomeoutandplayed.keepingbecomeplay51/116考点剖析这类题错误设置普通包含以下几个方面：(1)

谓语动词与非谓语动词混用.(2)

非谓语动词之间混用.(3)

在并列结构中非谓语动词误用.52/116解决方案(1)

纵观全文或全句，明确句中动词所作句子成份.(2)

系统掌握非谓语动词句法功效.(3)

前后联络，整体把握.53/116六、代词格，细领悟高考链接6：

IheardthatMr.WangwouldteachourEnglishthisterm.us1.人称代词主格和宾格，物主代词使用．２．反身代词oneself

使用．3．不定代词使用．4．Both,all,either,neither,none使用.5.

Whose和who’s，its和

it’s区分．人称单数复数主格宾格主格宾格第一人称第二人称第三人称Imeweusyouyouyouyouhehimsheheritittheythem单数复数形容词性物主代词myyourhisheritsouryourtheir名词性物主代词mineyourshishersitsoursyourstheirs54/116五、代词格，细领悟（全国I）

Iwasonlyaboutsixwhenheheldhishandouttome.Itookitinmeandwewalked.mineFinally,thementhrewawaymostofhisclothestosavethemselves.their55/116全国II：

Ishouldbeabletotellvisitorsaboutourhistoryandcultureandshowthemtheirgreatachievement.陕西：JustatthattimeIwokeupandfoundmestillinbed!

ourmyself56/116（新课标全国一卷）Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.and57/116(辽宁)Thecommandingofficer,WayneTyler...decidedtomakehisfindingsknown.Theywroteanarticle,whichsaidthatallUFOreportscould

beexplainedquitenaturallybyaircraftmovements.解析]此处指代是Wayne

Tyler,是男性单数。They----He58/116(2)(新课标全国)Onedayhewashavingayardsaleandtheoldmanlivingnextdoorcamebytohelp.Withoutamomentdelay,myneighbor

pickedupthebox.[解析]依据上文提到Nick可知,这里邻居应该是指Nick邻居。[答案]my改为his59/116（浙江高考题）Dadlosthisjob,andasMomexplained,“Hewasluckytofindotherone.”another（全国课标卷）Havingteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner,thatmightnotbeserveduntil8o’clockatnight.

which60/116（四川卷）Ilethercopymyanswers.Butafterthetest,allofuswerecalledtotheteacher’soffice.（陕西卷）Wetookoursfishingpolesandheadedforthelake.61/1161.Knowledgeisthereforwhomeverwillseekit.

2.Whomdoyouthinkisthewriterofthisbook?

3.Hisbrother’scaseisquitedifferentfromme.

whoeverwhomine62/1164.Peoplefindincreasinglydifficulttomaketheirliving.

5.Heistallerthananyoneinhisclass.6.IspokeamanwhoIthoughttobemycousin.

itelseto63/1167.Ireadyoure-mailtomyparentsandshowedthemthephotoyousentittome.8.Ihopethatbothyoutwocouldcomeandvisitussometimesoon.9.Thosefreshmenfinallylearnedtosolvetheproblemsbythem.themselves64/116[考点剖析]这类题错误设置普通包含以下几个方面：1)

代词指代人或事物前后不一致错误.2)

“it”

一词不妥使用(包含用于从句中或作形式主语或宾语).3)

不定代词或反身代词误用.65/116[处理方案](1)

顺藤摸瓜，理清短文中代词指代关系，注意联络上下文。(2)

系统掌握it各种使用方法.(3)准确把握不定代词在文中正确使用。

66/116主要考查习惯搭配方面基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。catchasightoflosemyheartinhurryinSundayafternoonsuchmanypeopleinashortaon∨so六、习惯使用方法要记住67/116（陕西卷）Beforewaitingforabouthalfanhour,Iwasbeginningtogetimpatient.after68/1161.Don’tapproachtoaworkofartinsuchaspirit.

2.Theboywasabsorbedbuildingadaminthebrook.

3.Iwasimpressedatthezealwithwhichhespokeoftheplan.

4.Thegentlemaninsistedatmyreceivingthemoney.

5.Atlastwereachedtothevillageatthefootofthehillinwithon69/1166.Becausethehelpyougavemethatsummer,mylifechanged.7.Whenayoungmanstartstoearnhisownliving,hecannolongerexpectotherstopayhisfood.8.I

imagine

you’ll

be

at

vacation

yourself

by

that

time.

offoron70/116考点剖析:(1)

在一些固定短语中，介词误用

是很常见题型.(2)

介词与连词或副词混用.(3)

及物动词之后介词多用或不及物动词之后介词漏用.71/116解析方案:(1)

平时学习中注意积累语言知识，尤其是一些固定搭配记忆.(2)

强化语法训练，分清连词，副词和介词之间区分和句法功效.(3)语法知识记忆和语感培养结合起来.72/116七、句子成份多分析

不一样句子成份要用不一样词类；不一样语境要选择不一样词语。只有对句子结构和成份作细致分析，才能找出用词不妥错误。年安徽卷:Shelookedatmeandstartedtolaugh.“Howareyoulaughing?”Iasked.天津卷：Iwasluckyenoughtohaveateacherwhichdidn’ttakemybadgradesasajudgementofmyabilities,but…who/thatWhy73/116新课标全国卷Butbeforelongtheybegintoseewhichwashappening.Which---what74/116(海南)NolecturesthismorningsoIthinkIshoude-mailyouandletyouknowwhatthingsaregoing.[解析]依据语境可知know后宾语从句应该用how引导,表示“情况进展怎样”what改为how(浙江)MyfatherwaspleasedifIshowedhimthemoneyamonthlater.依据句意“一个月后,当我给父亲看钱时候……”可知此处应该用when引导从句。75/116)(安徽)Shelookedatitandstartedtolaugh,“Howareyoulaughing?”Iasked.“BecauseThey’redogbiscuits!”shesaid.[解析]依据下文“Because

they

re

dog

biscuits!”可知,问题是“为何笑?”How改为Why76/1161.MyroommatelivesinasmalltownincentralMissouri,aquiettownwhichIwouldliketolivemyself.

2.TheUnitedStatesiscomposedoffiftystates,twoofthoseareseparatedfromtheothersbylandorwater.

3.Thesephotoswillshowyouhowourvillagelookslike.4.Icannotmakesenseofthathesaidatthemeeting.wherewhichwhatwhat77/116八、逻辑错误须关注

与句子上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上张冠李戴。四川卷：Thatnight，wesatdowntowhattheythoughtwouldbeapleasant,uninterruptedmeals.NMET:

Somestudentsmayalsosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.wetheir78/116（陕西高考卷）Iwanttogiveup,andmygrandfathertoldmetowaitalittlelonger.

but

浙江高考卷HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomyClassmates,myschoolorjusteverythingelseIloveintheworld.and79/116新课标全国一卷Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimselfapartfromothersinoursmalltown,hewasstrongandpowerful.

and四川卷

Wewerewarnednottocheatagainsoshewouldneedtoseeourparents.

or80/1163.Icameintothelivingroomandsawoneofthemjustgothroughthekitchendoorbutturnonthelight.4.Hewillstaythereoneandtwodays.5.Theremaynotbemuchchoicebetweenthisoneorthat.

andorand81/116考点剖析:(1)

并列连but,and,or,so等词混用，经常出现在改错题中。(2)

并列连词和隶属连词混用。(3)

平行结构方面错误。82/116常考错误形式有：连词but，and，or和so使用方法错误，以及冠词使用方法错误等。2oo7全国II：ImeanttowritelongletterandtellyouallthethingsI’mdoingattheschool…四川卷：AnAustralianfarmerfoundthekangaroocaughtinthefencearoundhisfarms.aa九、冠词、连词常光临83/1163.冠词误用冠词考查主要包括冠词误加和漏用,有时也考查不定冠词与定冠词以及零冠词使用方法区分(包含a与an区分)。其中,包括最多是,当一个单数可数名词表示泛指时,其前漏用不定冠词;另外,冠词在一些习语中使用方法也是一个主要考点。冠词方面主要设置以下错误:(1)表示“一……”时不用a/an,在不可数名词前却用不定冠词a/an;(2)表示特指时不用定冠词the,不表示特指时却用the,尤其在一些习惯表示中随便使用定冠词the;(3)不定冠词a与an混用,元音发音开头单词前误用a,辅音发音开头单词前却用an。解题时应依据语境逻辑判断相关名词表示特指还是泛指,如表示特指用the;表示泛指且有“一……”之意,元音发音单词前用an,辅音发音单词前用a。84/116(辽宁)When,however,onMonday,January16,asciencefictionfilmaboutvisitorsfromouterspacewasshownontelevision,therewastheimmediateincreaseinreportsofsightingsfromallpartsoftheStates.[解析]此处报道增加表示泛指,且后面单词是元音发音开头,故用不定冠词an。[答案]第一个the改为an85/1163.IgainedsomuchconfidencethatIwentbacktoschoolasnewperson.4,Withcomingofspring,grassandtreesturngreen.5.WhenachildisfiveinEnglandorWales,hisparentsmustsendhimtotheschool.6.Afterahourorsowebegantofeelveryfrightened.athean86/116Thiscustomsoonbecomesanothermealofday

the87/116浙江卷：TodayIwashavingaPElessonwhileIfelldownandhurtmyfoot.

辽宁卷：Shealwaysmadesurethatourhomeworkwasfinishedontime,butshemarkedstrictlyonouractualperformance.

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写出该加词。删除：把多出词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后词。注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。95/116IlearnedearlyinlifethatIhadtobemorepatientandlittleaggressive.FromthetimeIwasaboutfouruntilIwasaboutsix,Idestroyedeachofmytoy.Iwashappywhenthetoysworked,butwhenthingsdidwrong,Igotangryandbrokeit.Forawhileparentsboughtmenewtoys.Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhichwashappening.WhenItearapartmyfifthbirthdaytoytrain,myfathersaid,“That’sit.Nomoretoystoyou.”Mypunishmentlastedayear.Meanwhile,IfoundoutthatwithmorepatienceImustmakemytoystolast.Myattitudechangedfromthenon.my短文改错：themlesstoyswenttorewhatCould/mightfor新课标卷96/116短文改错应注意问题

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Alice,I

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to

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to

you.

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win

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national

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painting

last

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father

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that

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go

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England

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place

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practicing

my

English

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We’ve

been

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each

for

nearly

a

year

now.

I

have

often

dreamed

of

talk

face

to

face

with

you.

I

imagine

you’ll

be

at

vacation

yourself

by

that

time.

Perhaps

we

could

go

out

to

do

any

sightseeing

together.

Bestwishes！

Lily102/116Dear

Alice,I

have

just

got

some

good

news

to

tell

to

you.

I

win

a

national

prize

for

painting

last

week.

My

father

was

so

pleasing

that

he

suggested

I

go

to

England

for

a

holiday.

I’d

like

to

staying

there

for

half

a

month,

visiting

place

of

interest

or

practicing

my

English

as

well.

We’ve

been

wonpleasedstayplacesand103/116Writing

to

each

for

nearly

a

year

now.

I

have

often

dreamed

of

talk

face

to

face

with

you.

I

imagine

you’ll

be

at

vacation

yourself

by

that

time.

Perhaps

we

could

go

out

to

do

any

sightseeing

together.

Bestwishes！

Lily∧talkingonothersome104/116

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