读后续写练习写作指导讲义-高考英语作文复习专项

试题原题第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Despitetheirgeneticsimilarities,mytwinsistersLennaandElsawerequitedifferent.Lennawasarecognizedathlete

inourmunity.Weallexpectedhertoattainascholarshipononefieldoranother,butshelackedacertainedgetoherreasoning.Elsagotalongwellwitheveryone

whoworksinthelibrary,butshehadthegrace(优雅)ofatwoleggedtable.Theyhadfoundfewoccasionstorelatewithoneanotherandgrewdistant.HadInotlivedwiththem,Iwouldnothaveknownthemtobesisters.Theydid,however,shareadriveforsuccessthatseemedtobeemoresuccessfularoundthesametimeduringsenioryear.Afteratrackandfieldseason,Lennawasofferedfullscholarshipatareputablestateuniversitynearourhome,solongasshemaintaineda3.0GPA.Elsa

hadamoreimportantthingtodo:shewasoneperfectreportcardawayfromseizingthechanceofmakingaspeechatagraduationceremonyfromheropponent,ChetGoodweather.AttheendofthesixthWednesdayofthefourthmarkingperiod,asthesistersunfoldedtheprintedreportcards,theirsmilesturnedtotears:Lennawasgettinga“D”inscienceandElsawasgettinga“C”ingymclass.LennaandElsacamehomeatthesametimeandweresurprisedtofindoneanotherdisappointed.Astheyarguedwithoneanotheraboutwhohadsufferedthegreatermisfortune,theyrealizedthattheother’sproblemsoundedeasytosolve.Elsabarked,“Yourproblemisn’tevenaproblem.IcouldpassthattesteasilyandI

canshowyouhowtoaswell.”

Lennaretorted(反驳),“Well,allyouneedtodotogetan‘A’istoshortenyourmiletimetofiveortenminutes.Twoweeksoftrainingwithmeandthecoachwilltrytohaveyouonthetrackteam.”Thegirlsexchangedglancesandcametoaquickagreement.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Everymorningforthenexttwoweeks,LennawokeElsaupat4:30torun.

_______________________________________________________________________________FinalreportcardsweredistributedtheMondaybeforegraduation.______________________________________________________________________________________试题分析1.人物:①I②twinsister:Lenna(arecognizedathlete,wasofferedfullscholarshipatareputablestateuniversitynearourhome,solongasshemaintaineda3.0GPA)③twinsister:Elsa(wasoneperfectreportcardawayfromseizingthechanceofmakingaspeechatagraduationceremonyfromheropponent)2.前文故事梗概:我的双胞胎姐妹Lenna和Elsa各有长处：Lenna运动能力不错，只要平均绩点拿到3.0分，就可以在离家不远的一所著名的州立大学获得了全额奖学金；Elsa则只要拿到一张完美的成绩报告单就有机会在毕业典礼上演讲。然而，在第四个评分周期内的第六个星期三结束时，双胞胎姐妹的成绩单让她们很失望：Lenna科学表现不佳只得了个D，Elsa的体育则比较差，评定为C。当她们谈起谁运气更差时，发现对方的问题根本不是问题，决定给对方以帮助。......3.续写安排:第一段:Everymorningforthenexttwoweeks,LennawokeElsaupat4:30torun.①（与前一句衔接）Elsa虽有诸多不情愿，但为了成功，只得硬着头皮去坚持。②（过渡）为了报答Lenna的帮助，Elsa也努力在科学学科上给予Lenna很多有效的方法。③（承上启下）两个星期下来，双胞胎姐妹分别在各自的弱项上有了极大的进步。第二段:FinalreportcardsweredistributedtheMondaybeforegraduation.①（与前一句衔接）双胞胎姐妹很期待最终的结果②（过渡）对双方互致感谢③（收尾）在双胞胎姐妹的身上，我感受到的是互帮互助的力量下水作文Everymorningforthenexttwoweeks,LennawokeElsaupat4:30torun.ReluctantasElsawas,shestruggledtodragherselfoutofbedandranafterLennaslowly.Nothingcouldbemoremotivatingthanthinkingoftheingsuccess,whichofferedElsamuchenergytobeabetterperson.AndLenna’sconstantencouragementbroughtElsamorestrength.InreturnforLenna’sefforts,ElsasharedhereffectivemethodsandhelpedLennatosolvedifficultiesinsciencelearningaspossibleasshecould.Daybyday,theyfeltbothbenefitedalotfromeachother.(82words)FinalreportcardsweredistributedtheMondaybeforegraduation.Hardworkpaidoff.Justastheyhadexpected,mytwinsistersbothgottoAlevelintheweaksubject.Theireffortssawmagnificentacademic

performanceinscienceorgymclass.Knowingtheresult,theycouldn’thelpbuthugtightly,earnestthankstoeachotherwithtearsineyes.Notonlydidtheyimprovethemselves

inacademybuttheylearnedhowtoachievetheirgoalsinthejointefforts,inspiringandstimulating.ThatwasalsowhatIhadlearnedfrommyadmirabletwinsisters.(84words)参考范文​Everymorningforthenexttwoweeks,LennawokeElsaupat4:30torun.

AtfirstElsawasbarelymoving,andLennawasabletoreviewhersciencevocabularywhilejoggingalongsideher,butbytheendofthetwoweeks,Lennaactuallyhadtosweatabittokeepupwithher.Everydayafterschool,ElsawoulddragLennaintothelibrary.ThegirlswouldtalkexcitedlyasLennaperiodicallycaughtontoadifficultconceptduringthesemarathonstudysessions.(69words)FinalreportcardsweredistributedtheMondaybeforegraduation.

LennaandElsaagreedtomeetupatthelibraryafterschooltoopentheirreportcardstogether.Surprisingly,whenLennaunfold