2024届高考英语读后续写 寻找森林中迷路的父亲

高考英语读后续写语篇练习1——脱险篇（寻找森林中迷路的父亲）题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目再现3续写原文Nataliewaselevenyearsold.ShelivedwithherfamilyinavillageinKerala.Herfamilydidnotliverightinthevillage,butontheoutskirtsofthevillage.Thiswasbecauseherfatherwasamahout.Oneofthefirstcommandsanelephantlearnsistokneeldownandallowthemahouttositatopit.Fromthatmomenton,theelephantobeyseverycommanditsmasterwillgiveit.Themahoutcommandstheanimalwithgentleprodsandwithwordsofencouragement.Natalieneverstoppedbeingamazedathowsuchahugeanimalwouldobeyamanwhowasphysicallysomuchsmallerthanit.Natalielovedgoingwithherfatherintothejungle.Here,hugetreeswerecutdownandtransportedtosawmills.Butitwasnoteasyforvehiclestomoveaboutinthethickforests.Thiswaswheretheelephantscameinhandy.Theyweresostrongthattheycouldmovemanytreetrunksatatime.4续写原文Nataliewishedshedidn'thavetogotoschooleveryday.Shewashappiestwhentherewasaholiday.Thenshewouldhelptobatheandfeedtheelephant.Shewouldsitatopwithherfather,and,inherchildishbutfirmvoice,shewouldgivecommandstotheelephantlikeherfather.Butnoelephantobeyedher.Herfatheroftenencouragedher,"Whatyouneedispatience!”Oneday,afterNataliehadfinishedherhomeworkandputbooksintoherbackpack,shenoticedthatherfatherhadnotyetreturnedfromtheforestwiththeelephant.Hewasusuallycomingbackbeforesunset.Nataliewassoworriedthatshewentinsearchofherfather.5段首句Para1:Afterawhile,sheelephantinthemiddleoftheforestwithoutherfather.Para2:Finally,theelephantledNatalietoherfatherwithheratop.6Part2题目分析7已知短文内容本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了娜塔丽的父亲是驯象员，娜塔丽喜欢和父亲一起去丛林，一天，当娜塔莉完成作业，把书放进背包后，她注意到她的父亲还没有带着大象从森林里回来。他通常在日落前回来。娜塔丽非常担心，她去找她的父亲。最后在大象的带领下娜塔丽找到了父亲，发现这一切都是父亲的安排，为的是让娜塔丽骑上大象。8点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写建议第一段：“过了一会儿，她看到大象在森林中，没有她的父亲。”可知，第一段可描写娜塔丽是如何训练大象听从自己的命令的，经过不断的努力，大象最终跪了下来，让她坐在上面。第二段：“最后，大象把骑在它背上的娜塔丽她带到她父亲那里。”可知，第二段可描写娜塔丽如何在大象的带领下找到父亲的。10续写线索：发现大象——尝试驯服大象——大象跪下让娜塔丽坐在上面——找到父亲——了解真相——感到自豪Part3范文呈现11范文呈现Afterawhile,shesawtheelephantinthemiddleoftheforestwithoutherfather.Herheartpoundingrapidly,Nataliedashedtotheelephant,hopingthatitcouldleadhertoherfather.Hardasshetriedseveraltimes,shestillcouldn'tmaketheelephantobeyhercommand.Astheskygraduallydarkened,shewasgettingimpatientandfeelingataloss.However,atthethoughtofherfather,shedecidedtotryagainwithmorepatience,givingtheelephantmoregentleprodsandwordsofencouragement.Throughherconstantefforts,theelephantultimatelykneltdownandallowedhertositatopit.12范文呈现Finally,theelephantledNatalietoherfatherwithheratop.Seeingherfathersafeandsound,shewaswildwithjoy.Hardlyhadshejumpeddownwhen

shehuggedherfathertightlyandshecouldn'twaittotellhimwhathadhappened.Afterhearingthewholestory,herfatherpattedheronthebackandbeamed,"Mygirl,youfinallymadeit!You'lldefinitelyturngoodmahout."ItwasnotuntilthenthatNatalierealizedherfatherarrangedeverything.AsenseofpridesweptoverNatalie."Irememberwhatyoutoldme——Bepatient."