专题10 应用文之建议信 2024年高考英语考前冲刺必背作文(模板、素材、分类押题范文)(新高考专用)

专题10应用文之建议信写作要点写作要点写作结构写作结构第一段：写信原因+写信目的1.I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublefittinginyournewschool.Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpfultoyou.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会对你有一些帮助。2.Learning/Hearingthatyouhavedifficultyindealingwiththerelationshipwithyourparents,I'dliketogiveyousomeadvice.得知/听说你在处理与父母的关系上有困难，我想要给你一些建议。3.I'mmorethangladtoreceiveyourletteraskingmehowtolearnChinese.Thefollowingaresomesuggestionsforyou.很高兴收到你就如何学习汉语向我征求建议的来信。以下是给你的一些建议。4.YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtohowtolearnChinesewell,andIwilltrytooffersomepracticalsuggestionshere.你向我征求关于如何学好汉语的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些实用的建议。5.I'mwritinginreplytoyourlastletteronhowtospeakEnglishfluentlyandaccurately.我写信是来回复你在上封信中提到的如何准确流利地说英语的问题。6.I'mwritingtoyoutopresentwhatIthinkonthefurtherimprovementofourhotelsoastoattractmoreclients（顾客）.我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。第二段：给出具体的建议及理由1.Tobeginwith/Firstandforemost,youaresupposedtodo你应该做…2.You'dbetterdosth.你最好做……/Youmayaswelldosth.你不妨做…3.Lastbutnotleast,whynotdosth?最后，为什么不……？4.Personally/AsfarasI'mconcerned/Frommypointofview,itwouldbeawisechoice/goodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic.Bydoingthis,youwillcalmyourselfdown.在我看来，看书或听音乐将会是明智的选择/不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。5.There'snoneedforyoutobesoworriedandnervous,andit'snecessaryforyoutoconsultsomebooksconcerningthetraditionalChineseculture.你没必要如此担心和紧张，你有必要查阅一些关于中国传统文化的书籍。6.Anothersuggestionisthatyoushouldwearaprotectivemasktopreventyourselffromgettinginfectedifyougooutdoors.另一个建议是，你应该戴上防护口罩，以防外出时被感染。7.Inaddition,Istronglysuggest/advisethatyoushouldmakeuseoftimetomasterthepresentsubjects.此外,我强烈建议你利用时间掌握现在的科目。8.IfIwereyou/WereIyou,Iwouldworkoutregularlyinordertokeephealthy.如果我是你，我会经常锻炼以保持健康。第三段：希望采纳建议+表达美好祝愿1.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful/beneficial/practical.Feelfreetocontactmeifyouhaveanyquestions.我希望你会认为这些建议有帮助/有益/可行。如果你有任何问题，请随时和我联系。2.Isincerelyhopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:wherethereisawill,thereisaway.我真诚地希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。3.Ihopemysuggestionscanmakeadifferencetoyou.Bestwishesandgoodluck!希望我的建议能对你有影响。4.Ihopeyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.Iamsureyouwillhaveapleasantonlinelearningexperience.希望你能考虑我的建议。我相信你会有一个愉快的网上学习经历。5.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.如果你能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。写作模板写作模板Dear

________,Iwasgladtoreceiveyourletter

askingformyadviceon

_________(别人求助内容).Herearemysuggestions.

/

Youhaveaskedmeformyadvice

withregardto__________,andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.Togetstarted,youhadbetter_________(建议一).

Besides,it’sagoodideato_________(建议二).

Lastbutnotleast,Ithinkthemostefficientwayisto_________(建议三).With

allthefactors

takenintoconsideration,I’msureyouwill_________(成功解决问题).

/

Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.

Goodluckwith

your__________(祝愿)Bestwishes,LiJin写作素材写作素材Writing1:2023▪新高考I&II卷假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括；1.

说明问题；2.

提出建议注意:

1.

写作词数应为80个左右：

2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkit’snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。【详解】1.

词汇积累首先：tobeginwith→firstofall提高：improve→progress建议：suggestion→advice选择：choose

→

select2句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.拓展句：Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.【点睛】[高分句型1]Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.（运用了现在分词作状语）[高分句型2]Besides,Studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句）Writing2:2023▪安徽省、云南省、吉林省、黑龙江省四省联考卷你刚观看了你校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会。请在线上留言板上写一则评论，内容包括：1.

音乐会特点；2.

观看感受；3.

意见建议。注意：1.

写作词数应为80左右；2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thisonlineconcertisabsolutelyfantastic.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Thisonlineconcertis

absolutelyfantastic.Theperformersfromthetwoschoolshavedonetheirbestin

entertainingtheaudiencewith

onesongafteranother.Theirperformancesare

undoubtedly

of

highquality,whichmakestheconcertalmostnodifferentfromaliveone.Ienjoyedeverysecondoftheconcertandwas

particularly

attractedwhentheboysandgirlsfromBritainstartedtosingthetraditionalChinesesong“LiangZhu”.Theyperformedthesonginaway

that

touchedmyheartandgavemeafeelingof

connection.Ihopetherewillbemore

opportunities

inthefutureforusChinesestudentsandourinternationalfriendstolearnaboutandfromeachother.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放作文。要求考生就学校与英国一所友好学校联合在线上举办的音乐会，在线上留言板上写一则评论。【详解】1.词汇积累确定无疑地：undoubtedly→withoutdoubt尤其地：particularly→

especially感动：touch→

move希望：hope→

expect2.句式拓展同义句原句：Theirperformancesareundoubtedlyofhighquality,whichmakestheconcertalmostnodifferentfromaliveone.拓展句：Thereisnodoubtthattheirperformancesareofhighquality,whichmakestheconcertalmostnodifferentfromaliveone.【点睛】【高分句型1】Theirperformancesareundoubtedlyofhighquality,whichmakestheconcertalmostnodifferentfromaliveone.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】IenjoyedeverysecondoftheconcertandwasparticularlyattractedwhentheboysandgirlsfromBritainstartedtosingthetraditionalChinesesong“LiangZhu”.

（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）押题范文押题范文1.(2024年湖北省八市高三3月联考)假定你是李华，你的笔友Jack因高三学习压力增大，总为一些小事对家长或同学发脾气，为此他很懊恼，希望得到你的帮助。请你回复一封邮件，内容包括：1.表示理解；2.提出建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearJack,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Lihua【答案】DearJack,Ilearn

thattheincreasingacademicpressureisbecoming

aheadacheforyou.

Actually,itisnotuncommon

forseniorthreestudents

ofyour

age

toloseyourtemperwithparentsandclassmates.

Sojust

takeiteasyandherecomesmyadvice.Italwayscomesfirstto

doexercise,suchasrunning,climbing,playingbasketball,

andthelike,sothatyoucanrelieveyourselfbothphysicallyandmentally.Balancingyourworkandplay

toguaranteeyourstudyefficiencyisalsopreferable,Equallyimportantisto

communicatewithyourparentsandfriendstogaintheirunderstandingandsupport.Ihopemyadviceis

ofsome

helptoyou.Lookingforwardtoyour

breakingfreefromyourbother.

Yours

sincerely，LiHua1.应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为建议信；（2）因两人是笔友关系，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为就如何缓解学习压力提出具体建议，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。2.本文的亮点：（1）academicpressure学业压力；（2）becomeaheadacheforsb对某人来说是一件头疼的事情；（3）itisnotuncommonforsbtodosth双重否定表达肯定意义=itiscommonforsbtodosth；（4）takeiteasy放轻松；（5）herecomesmyadvice运用完全倒装结构；（6）italwayscomesfirsttodosth做某事总是排在首位的；（7）andthelike等等=andsoon；（8）balanceyourworkandplay劳逸结合；（9）...isalsopreferable某事也是更好的；（10）Equallyimportantistodosth表语形容词置于句首产生完全倒装结构；（11）isofgreathelptosb对某事而言有所帮助；（12）breakfreefromyourbother摆脱困扰。2.(2023年全国高考英语真题北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动。他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：1.活动形式；2.活动内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJim,Iamgladtolearnthatyouareplanningaclubactivitythemedwith"GreenBeijing".Herearemysuggestions.Italwayscomesfirstto

inviteacelebratedexpertforalectureonenvironmentalprotection.Toact,afterall,weshouldthinkfirst.ActivitieslikegarbagepickingandwasteclassificationinfamousscenicspotsinBeijingarealsopreferable,whichwillpromotetheecologicalconceptofhealthandenvironmentalprotectiontotouristswithpracticalactions.PluswhynotchoosegreentravelsothatyoucancontributetoBeijing'senvironmentalprotection?Ihopemyadviceishelpfultoyou.Yours,LiHua1.应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为建议信；（2）因两人相识，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为建议的具体内容，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。2.本文的亮点：（1）Italwayscomesfirsttodosth做某事是首要的；（2）celebrated形容词，意为“著名的”；（3）...arealsopreferable也是更好的；（4）Plus此外；（5）contributeto对...做出贡献。3.(2024年河南省普通高中毕业班高考适应性测试)假如你是李华，你校计划举行以“FlyYourDream”为主题的英语周活动。现就活动的内容、形式征集建议，请你给负责本次活动的外教Chris写一封信，提出你的想法。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下形式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearChris,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearChris,Iamgladtolearnthatourschoolisscheduledto

holdanEnglishweekactivity

of"FlyingYourDreams".Thisactivity,Ibelieve,

willbeofextraordinarysignificance.And

herecomesmyproposal.Themedwith

"dream",itwouldbepreferableto

focusonthediversityinvariousformsofthebigevent.Onthetopofmylistare

stageactivities,rangingfrom

painting

andspeechcontests,totheEnglishsongperformance.Flyingkitesisanotheralternative.Everyindividualcanmakeakite

withadreamonitandflytheirdreams.Notonlywillitstimulatethestudents'interest,itwillalsoimprove

theirhands-onability,killingtwobirdswithonestone.Ihopemysuggestionsare

ofsomehelpand

wishthiseventacompletesuccess!Yours,LiHua1.应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为建议信；（2）因两人是师生关系，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为就英语周活动的内容和形式提出具体建议，故本文总体时态定调为一般将来时。2.本文的亮点：（1）bescheduledtodosth计划做某事；（2）beofextraordinarysignificance意义非凡；（3）herecomesmyproposal运用完全倒装结构；（4）themedwith以...为主题；（5）itwouldbepreferabletodosth做某事是更好的；（6）Onthetopofmylistare...介宾短语置于句首产生完全倒装结构；（7）rangingfrom...to...表达形式多样性的结构；（8）anotheralternative另一个选择；（9）Notonlywillit...否定词置于句首产生部分倒装结构；（10）stimulateone'sinterest激发兴趣；（11）killingtwobirdswithonestone分词短语作结果状语，意为“一石二鸟，一箭双雕”；（12）ofsomehelp有所帮助。4.(2023届重庆市高三第一次联合诊断检测·康德卷)假定你是李华，美国“汉语桥（ChineseBridge）”网上冬令营组织方正在网上征集活动内容，欢迎网友献计献策。请你给组织方写一封建议信，内容包括：1.你建议的活动（至少两项）；2.你的理由；3.你的希望。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dearcommitteemembers,I'mgladtoknowthatyouareseekingfortheeventsofChineseBridgeonlinewintercamp.Herecomesmyadvice

asaguideline.Musicknowsnoborders.

Italwayscomesfirstto

holdaninstrumentconcert,inwhichstudentscanplaysomefamiliarChineseclassicalfolkmusic,whichcanfurther

stimulatestudents'interestinlearningChineseandhelpthem

feeltheweightofhistory

oftraditionalChinesemusic.AChinesestoryspeechcontestisalsopreferable,sincethereare

awealthofclassicmythsandlegendsinChina.Theseactivities,I’mconvinced,willdefinitelybringthestudentsaculturalfeast.Iwouldappreciateitif

youcouldtakemysuggestionintoconsideration.Ihopethewintercampwillbeagreatsuccess!Yours,LiHua1.应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为建议信；（2）因文本开头已给出，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为提出并说明原因，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。2.本文的亮点：（1）Herecomesmyadvice运用完全倒装结构；（2）Musicknowsnoborders音乐无国界；（3）Italwayscomesfirsttodosth首先要做某事；（4）stimulateone'sinterestin激发某人的兴趣；（5）feeltheweightofhistory感受历史的厚重感；（6）...isalsopreferable也是更可取的；（7）awealthof丰富多彩的，很多的；（8）I'mconvinced我相信，文中用作插入语；（9）definitely明确地；（10）bringsbaculturalfeast带给某人一场文化盛宴；（11）Iwouldappreciateitif如果...我将不胜感激；（12）takesthintoconsideration把某事考虑在内。5.(浙江省绍兴市2024届高三一模考试)假定你是李华，你的英国笔友David刚升入高中，但因一时无法适应新的校园生活而焦虑，写信向你倾诉他的烦恼。请你给他回复一封邮件，内容包括：1.分析可能的原因；2.给出合理的建议。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearDavid,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________