Continuationwriting母亲节的惊喜课件-高三英语一轮复习

2021年6月全国新高考(Ⅰ、Ⅱ)卷

读后续写AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISEByAishaSeniorOneQ1:Whomakesthemostdeliciousfoodforyouathome?Q2:HaveyouevermadeagifttoyourmotheronMother’sDay?LeadinthetopicofcontinuationwritingThesixelementsofanarrationWhyWhenWhatWhereWhoHowThesixelementsofanarration/story第二节(满分25分)

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6am.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,

Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,

theirfatherappeared.

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

①ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

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Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6am.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.Theyput…Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

③ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.…JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.ReadandanalyzethematerialWhenWhoWhatMother'sDay;at6amThetwins(Jeff-aboy,Jenna-agirl);Father;MotherThetwinsplannedtomakebreakfastfortheirmotherAMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

①ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.…

②Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6am.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.…EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.…Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.③

ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire…Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.ReadandanalyzethematerialWhereWhyHow

ThekitchenTheparents’bedroomTocelebrateMother’sDayandpleasetheirmother.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridgebutmadethekitcheninamess.PlotMountainBeginningDevelopmentClimaxFallingactionEnding

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6am.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,

Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.ThetwinsJeffandJennaplannedtomakebreakfastfortheirmotherasaMother'sDaysurprise.filledwithexcitementexcited,confidentknewexactlywhattodoEverythingwasgoingsmoothlythebreadturnedblack.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.EverythingwentsmoothlyuntilJeffburntthepieceofbread.wentwell,undercontrol

ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.Theporridgeboiledover,Jeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandtheotherpieceofthebreadturnedblack.panicked,losecontrolpanickedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshaketheporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefirethestovewasamessnowstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquicklyJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerJennatoldJefftocleanitupJennamadehimputhishandincoldwaterThepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswellAsthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.?Readandbuild

theplotmountainClimaxBeginningPlotmountainEndingSummarizeandanalyzethethemeDevelopmentFallingactionThetwinsJeffandJennaplannedtomakebreakfastfortheirmotherasaMother'sDaysurprise.EverythingwentsmoothlyuntilJeffburntthepieceofbread.Theporridgeboiledover,Jeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandtheotherpieceofthebreadturnedblack.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup...Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared…①Thekitchenwasinamess.

②Thetwinsfailedtomakebreakfast.ConflictPlotlineEmotionlineexcited,confidentwentsmoothly,controllablepanicked,uncontrollable??Theme①Lovebetweenfamilymembers.

②Learntodothehousework.G—NStrategytoPredict

thestoryPara.1

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Task1:Underlinethekeyinformationinthegivensentence.Task2:Askquestionsaboutthekeyinformationbyyourself.Q1:WhatwasFather’sresponseonseeingthemessinthekitchen?Q2:HowwouldthetwinsexplainthesituationtoFather?Q3:WouldFatherhelpthetwinstomakethebreakfast?Ifso,how?Q4:Howdidthetwinsfeel?Para.2

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Para.1Reversethinking（逆向思维）G—NStrategytoPredict

thestoryPara.2

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Task1:Underlinethekeyinformationinthegivensentence.Task2:Askquestionsaboutthekeyinformationbyyourself.Para.2Q1:HowdidMotherreactandfeelonseeingthebreakfast?Q2:Wouldthetwinsgivetheirmotherasurprise?Whatdidtheysay?Q3:WhatwasMother’sfeelingintheend?Q4:Whatdidthetwinslearnfromthisincident(事件)?Tip1:原词复现Tipstoconnect

theplotPara.1

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Para.2

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Tip2：代词指代Tip3：过渡词衔接时间副词：then,nextday,later,…连接副词：however,but,so,furthermore,…其他副词：fortunately,obviously,infact,…“3C”Principle：consistent一致的continuous延续的coherent连贯的Para.1:

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

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