中考英语书面表达写作技巧专项复习

初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导TobeabletowriteanEnglishcompositonThewaysofcompositionwriting.Usethewaystowriteacomposition.

LearningObjectiveDiscussaboutthispicture

（2018河北）

请仔细观察下面的图片，并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。提示

（1）Whatarethemanandthewomandoing?（2）Whatshouldyoudowhenyouseepeoplelitterlikethis?Why?要求：（1）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。

（2）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词汇：throw,environment,civilized（文明的）

Icanseeamanandawomaninthepicture.Themanis___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________认真审题，分析背景,找出文章要表达的中心。Step1审英语书面表达写作技巧

定人称、定时态：介绍图示中两个人在做的事情，人称为_______，时态为___________；介绍自己看到此类情况的做法，人称为_______，时态为_________定主题：_____________环保、爱护环境第三人称第一人称现在进行时一般现在时/一般将来时Readthetipscarefullytothinkaboutthetopic,includingthebackground.Forexample,inthispassage:用核心词汇或短语列出文章要点。列Step2英语书面表达写作技巧Theman:throwaway,everywhereThewoman:stop,ask…to…,put…in…I:when,doesn’tlistento,pickup,myself,protecttheenvironmentEnding:takeaction,amorebeautifulplaceWhatareyouaskedtowriteabout?Howmanyaspects(方面)？Listthekeywordsandexpressions将列出的核心词汇或短语整理成句子,使结构完整，符合表达习惯。Step3整英语书面表达写作技巧ThemanisthrowingawaytherubbisheverywhereThewomanisstoppinghim.Sheaskshimtoputtherubbishinthedustbin.Shetellsthemanthatthecityisourhome.Iseeotherpeoplethrowawayrubbisheverywhere,Iwillalsodoasthewomandoes.Hedoesn’tlistentome,Iwillpickitupmyselfandputininthedustbin.Ithinkthecityismyhome.weshouldprotecttheenvironment.Everyonetakesactiontoprotectit,thecitywillbeamorebeautifulplacetolive.,1.表示并列或递进:and,both…and;notonly…butalso,neither…nor;2.表示条件:if3.表示顺序:first,next，then,finally;4.表示因果:because,so;5.表示选择:or,either…or;6.表示解释:forexample,suchas;7.表示转折:but,however英语书面表达写作技巧Step4：连恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。Useconnectivestojoinsentences.Turnthesentencesintoapassage美

修改词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下改变句式或添加语句，展示自己的语言功底。写作第六步：英语书面表达写作技巧

检查人称、时态、单词拼写和大小写使用正确

写作第七步：抄将草稿认真抄写到答题纸上，一定注意书写的注意事项。Payattentiontoyourhandwriting!写作第五步：查153书写注意事项3、一旦写错，规范修改——用一条斜线划掉即可。eg:HecanspekerEnglishverywell.HecanspekerspeakEnglishverywell.1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。作文答题纸一般为单线，我们应将单线作为“四线格”中的第三线并以此为基准书写，不要把它作为第四线，让字母吊在线上。2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写——给人一种凌乱的感觉。It’syourturnnow!

某英文网站正在开展以“建设绿色校园”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，你们学校上周也进行了保护校园环境的实践活动。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你对保护环境的认识，活动中你做了什么，以及你的感受

要点:（1）Whatdoyouthinkofprotectingtheenvironment?（2）Whatdidyoudointheactivity?（3）Howdidyoufeel?要求:（1）短文必须包含所有提示内容，可作适当发挥。

（2）短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名。（3）词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Atmyschool,weheldapracticalactivitylastweek_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Writingpractice

思路点拨1.人称:________________________________2.时态：________________________________3.写作导图：ApracticalactivityofprotectingtheenvironmentYouropinionsonthisactivity：__________________Thethingsyoudidinthisactivity:_______________Yourfeelingsatthattime：____________________________________整（成句）:审:列:美（定稿）：连(成篇)：(writeasmanywordsandexpressionsaspossible)查（纠错）：誊写：Summary——书面表达写作技巧审列整连美草稿纸答题纸抄payattentiontoyourhandwriting!查

要求：1.短文必须包含所有提示内容，可作适当发挥。2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Homework每年6月8号为“世界海洋日”(WorldOceansDay)，今年世界海洋日的主题是“清洁我们的海洋（CleaningOurOceans）”。假如你是李华，请你以“SayNoToPlastics”为题，根据以下提示和要求，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法和建议。提示：1.Whyshouldwesaynotoplastics?2.Whatshouldwedoinourdailylife?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________EnglishWritingSkills:1.Readthetipscarefully,includingthebackground.2.Whatareyouaskedtowriteabout?Howmanyaspects(方面)？3.Useconnectivestojoinwords,phrasesandsentences.4.Payattentiontoyourhandwriting.Onepossibleversion:

Atmyschool,weheldapracticalactivitylastmonth.It'saboutprotectingtheenvironment.Ithinkthisactivityisverynecessary.It'simportantforeveryonetotakeactionstoprotectourenvironment.Afterall,wehaveonlyoneearth.Duringtheactivity,wenotonlywateredthetreesandflowersaroundourschool,butalsocollectedthewasteontheplayground.What'smore,wegaveaspeechtocallonallpeopletorealizetheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.Weencouragedstudentstodosomesmallthingstomakeadifferencetoourenvironment.Ittookusthreehourstofinishit.Wewereverytiredbuthappy.Theschoolseemedmorebeautifulwithourefforts.Ilovemyschool.红色为“连”蓝色为“美”

习作互改评价表批改人姓名_____被改人姓名________作文标题________批改日期___________评价项目得分（在相应处打ˇ）语言单词拼写和大小写使用正确54321用词恰当，避免重复用词54321主谓一致，时态、语态使用得当54321字迹工整，标点规范54321句法固定搭配使用准确108642句子结构完整，无残缺句108642运用多种句式表达108642总分:______（语言________句法______）文章的亮点:待改进的地方:4分6中考英语作文类型提示作文表格提示(Charts)图文提示(Pictures)汉语提示(Chinese)英语提示(English)Waysofbeginning:1.Atpresent,protectingtheenvironmentisthemostimportant.2.Itiseveryone’sdutytoloveandprotecttheenvironment.1.Ibelievewecanmaketheworldabetterplacetolivein.2.Inaword,everyonecandosomethingtomakeadifference.3.Inmypointofview,I’lltrymybesttomakeourcitycleanerandmorebeautiful.Waysofending:写作第四步

连英语书面表达写作技巧Icanseeamanandawomaninthepicture.Themanisthrowingawaytherubbisheverywhere.thewomanisstophim.Sheaskshimtoputtherubbishinthedustbin.She()tellsthemanthatthecityisourhome.

()Iseeotherpeoplethrowawayrubbisheverywhere,Iwillalsodo()thewomandoes.()hedoesn’tlistenme,Iwillpickitupmyselfandputitinthedustbin.

()Ithinkthecityismyhome.Weshouldprotecttheenvironment.

()everyonetakesactiontoprotectit,thecitywillbeamorebeautifulplacetolivein.

alsoWhenIfasBecauseIf写作第五步

查英语书面表达写作技巧Icanseeamanandawomaninthepicture.Themanisthrowingawaytherubbisheverywhere.Thewomanisstopping

him.Sheaskshimtoputtherubbishinthedustbin.Shealsotellsthemanthatthecityisourhome.

WhenIseeotherpeoplethrowawayrubbisheverywhere,Iwillalsodoasthewomandoes.Ifhedoesn’tlistentome,Iwillpickitupmyselfandputinthedustbin.BecauseIthinkthecityismyhome.Weshouldprotecttheenvironment.

Ifeveryonetakesactiontoprotectit,thecitywillbeamorebeautifulplacetolivein.

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alsodoasthewomandoes.Ifhedoesn’tlistentome,Iwillpickitupmyselfandputinthedustbin.Because

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regardthecityasmyhome.

Itisourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.

Inmyopinion,ifeveryonetakesactiontoprotectit,thecitywillbeamorebeautifulplacetolivein.写作第六步

美英语书面表达写作技巧Icanseeamanandawomaninthepicture.Themanisthrowingawaytherubbisheverywhere.Thewomanisstopping

him.Sheaskshimtoputtherubbishinthedustbin.Shealsotellsthemanthatthecityisourhome.

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