初高中衔接英语句子类型语序及写作指导课件

英语句子类型及简单句写作指导1）简单句：只有一个主语（或并列主语）和一个谓语（或并列谓语）。一、句子类型HeoftenreadsEnglishinthemorning.TomandMikeareAmericanboys.Shelikesdrawingandoftendrawspicturesforthewallnewspapers.按结构分2)并列句：由并列连词（and,but,or等）或分号（；）把两个或两个以上的简单句连在一起构成。

一、句子类型Youhelphimandhehelpsyou.Thefutureisbright;theroadistortuous.3）复合句：含有一个或一个以上从句的句子。复合句包含：名词性从句（主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句）、定语从句和状语从句等。一、句子类型TheforeignvisitorstookalotofpictureswhentheywereattheGreatWall.Whatimpressedmemostishiselegantmanners.练习Practice

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判断以下为什么句子Practice

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练习判断下列表达是否是句子，是哪种句子？5.HeisinClassOneandIaminClassTwo.6.Hewasfondofdrawingwhenhewasachild.7.Neitherhashechangedhismind,norwillhedoso.8.Whathesaidatthemeetingisveryimportant,isn’tit?9.Thefarmerisshowingtheboyhowtoplantatree.10.BothTomandJackenjoycountrymusic.Practice

2判断下列表达是否是句子，是哪种句子？练习1.Birdscanfly.2.ThebirdsinthecagewhichIboughtyesterday.3.Waitformeatthestation.4.Ifyouknowhowtoplaywithwordstomakepeoplelaugh5.Awayofsaying“I’msorry”.6.Pattingthestomachbeforeameal.7.Thebreadmymothermakesismuchbetterthanwhatyoucanbuyatthestore.√√√二、简单句扩句1、简单5大基本句型主+谓+宾Thefamilysangasong.

主+谓Thesunrises.主+谓+宾语（间）+宾语（直）Tomgavemesomemoney.主+谓+宾+宾补Tommademehappy.主+系+表

Sheisastudent.Thefoodis(tastes)verydelicious.

动作状态Thefamilysangasong.Thelovingfamilysangasweetsongathome

lastnight.Thelovingfamilysangasweetsonghappily

athome

lastnight.二、简单句扩句定语1定语2地点状语时间状语方式状语2、简单句语序及扩句总结

英语的写作顺序：

主谓宾+方+地+时2、简单句语序及扩句陈述句的组成部分一个简单陈述句可以由6部分组成，但并不是每个句子都有这么多组成部分。下表中句子的语序中，第6栏(表示时间)可以放在句首或句尾。6123456whenwhowhichwhatactionwhowhichwhathowwherewhen翻译：昨天晚上我在教室里生气地看着Tom

IlookedatTomangrilyintheclassroomlastnight.2、简单句语序及扩句Practice

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请按陈述句语序，对下面单词排序成句1.thenews/listenedto/I/carefully.

Ilistenedtothenewscarefully.2.games/played/yesterday/intheirroom/thechildren/quietly.

Thechildrenplayedgamesquietlyintheirroomyesterday.

3.beforelunch/theletter/inhisoffice/quickly/he/read.

Hereadtheletterquicklyinhisofficebeforelunch.4.thelittleboy/anapple/thismorning/ate/greedily/inthekitchen.

Thelittleboyateanapplegreedilyinthekitchenthismorning.翻译及仿写Practice2

2、简单句语序及扩句5.Thepolicewentintotheroomandfoundtheladylyingonthefloor,dead.简单句+形容词6.Withthebasketonherback,shewentouttofindsomemushroom.With复合结构+简单句7.Thefishcaneatapersonin3minutes,leavingonlythebones.简单句+分词结构他回到家很饿。Hewentbackhome,hungry.随着时间的流逝，我们都变老了。Withtimegoingby,weallgrowold.他离开了，使我们很伤心。Heleft,makingusverysad.Practice2

2、简单句语序及扩句8.Havingfinishedtheexperiment,theywentoutforatrip.分词结构+简单句9.Theexperimentfinished,theywentoutforatrip.独立主格结构+简单句等待公交车时，我感到很无聊。Waitingforabus,Ifeltbored.眼里噙满泪水，Mary紧紧地抱住了她妈妈。Thetreeswatered,wereturnedhomehappily.Practice2

2、简单句语序及扩句树被浇水后，我们就高兴地回家了。Tearswellingupinhereyes,Maryhuggedhermothertightly.单句写作中的常见错误单句写作中的常见错误123不完整句现象01.状语从句充当独立句子02.句子主干不完整03.附加细节的不完整句04.现在分词和不定式的不完整中国式英语现象中国式英语分为两类，一类是完全不符合英语语法规则;另一类是不符合英语表达习惯。01流水句现象流水句现象（run-onsentence）流水句现象是指用逗号切分而不是用连接词连接两个或几个意思完整的句子，或者不使用标点符号切分两个或两个以上意思完整的句子。Mariotoldeveryoneintheroomtobequiethisfavoriteshowwason.句子因为缺少连接词或并列词，又没有正确使用标点，导致句子融合Mariotoldeveryoneintheroomtobequiet.Hisfavoriteshowwason.Mariotoldeveryoneintheroomtobequiet,forhisfavoriteshowwason.Mariotoldeveryoneintheroomtobequiet;hisfavoriteshowwason.融合句（fusedsentences）

with的复合结构

Universitystudentsdopart-timejob,theycanearnsomemoneytosupportthemselves,gainsomeusefulworkingexperiences,makefriendswithmanypeople,thatisveryimportantforthem.

Universitystudentsdopart-timejob,sothattheycanearnsomemoneytosupportthemselves,gainsomeusefulworkingexperiences,andmakefriendswithmanypeople.Thatisveryimportantforthem.1.Shedidn’tfeelparticularlywellshewenttobed

earlier.Shedidn’tfeelparticularlywell,soshewenttobedearlier.2.Hetiredmanytimestogiveupsmokinghenevermanagedto.Hetiredmanytimestogiveupsmoking,buthenevermanagedto.3.Susanwasquiteshockedshehadneverseenawhaleatclosequartersbefore.Susanwasquiteshockedfor/becauseshehadneverseenawhaleatclosequartersbefore.Because

shedidn’tfeelparticularlywell,

shewenttobed.修正流水句5.Don‘tteasethedogyoumightgetbitten.Don‘tteasethedogor/otherwiseyoumightgetbitten.4.Sciencewillsoonproducetomatoesthataremorenutritious,theywillalsobesquare-shapedforeasierpacking.Sciencewillsoonproducetomatoesthataremorenutritiousandwillbesquare-shapedforeasierpacking.修正流水句02不完整句现象不完整句现象0102030401.状语从句充当独立句子AfterIgotmysalary.Itreatedmyselftodinner02.句子主干不完整Youcanchoosetheoneyoufondof.03.附加细节的不完整句Talkingwithanoldfriendusuallyrevivesoldmemories.Suchascollegepranks,footballgames.04.现在分词和不定式的不完整Ellenwalkedallovertheneighborhoodyesterday.TryingtofindherdogBob.Severalpeopleclaimedtheyhadseen

himonlyhoursbefore.1.

Alicialovedgettingweddingpresents.Buthatedwritingthank-younotesAlicialovedgettingweddingpresents,butshehatedwritingthank-younotes2.Thedrivertookusacrossseveralrangesofhills.Theroadattimesnarrowandcurvingbutneverdifficulttotakeatreasonablespeed.(curvev.（使）弯曲)Thedrivertookusacrossseveralrangesofhills.Theroadattimeswas

narrowandcurvingbutneverdifficulttotakeatreasonablespeeds.修正不完整句3.Forsomepeople,lifeisonlyboringorpainful.Especiallyifthepersonhasnopurpose,nogoalinlife.Forsomepeople,lifeisonlyboringorpainful,especiallyifthepersonhasnopurpose,nogoalinlife.4.Andyalwayswinsathide-and-seek.Peekingthroughhisfingersashecountstoonehundred.Soontheotherkidswillbe

caught.(peekv.偷看，窥视)

Peekingthroughhisfingersashecountstoonehundred,Andyalwayswinsathide-and-seek.Soontheotherkidswillbe

caughton.修正不完整句6.Theprofessorwasobviouslydispleasedwiththeperformanceoftheclass.Hiseyeslookingasangryaslightningbolts.Theprofessorwasobviouslydispleasedwiththeperformanceoftheclass,hiseyeslookingasangryaslightningbolts（闪电）.Theprofessorwasobviouslydispleasedwiththeperformanceoftheclass,forhiseyeslookedasangryaslightningbolts.修正不完整句5.OftenIstayuplateinmyroom,studying,writing,orthinkingaboutthefuture.Whilealltheotherintheroomareasleep.OftenIstayuplateinmyroom,studying,writing,orthinkingaboutthefuture,whilealltheotherpeopleintheroomareasleep.MyEnglishispoor.Iverylikereading.Goodgoodstudy,daydayupThepriceisexpensive.IthinkIcan’tdoitTom’slifeishappy.rightorwrong?Ilikereadingverymuch.Themoreyoulearn,themoreyougetThepriceishigh.Tomishappy.Idon’tthinkIcandoitI’mnotgoodatEnglish03中国式英语现象Chinglish中国式英语现象（Chinglish）中国式英语现象(Chinglish)指中国的英语学习者和使用者由于受母语的干扰和影响,硬套汉语规则和习惯，在英语交际中出现的不合规范英语或不合英语文化习惯的畸形英语(李文中,1993)。中国式英语现象的产生是由于学习者受汉语思维模式的影响和干扰所致。中国式英语分为两类，一类是完全不符合英语语法规则;另一类是不符合英语表达习惯。2.Ournewschoolhasmanytreesandflowers1.I,TomandRobertarefromClass2.3.

Smokingisharmfultoyourbody.Smokingisharmfultoyourhealth.

Therearemanytreesandflowersinournewschool.

TomandRobertandIarefromClass2.修正中式英语1.我把我的书包落在教室了。2.离开中国时，请注意身体Iforgotmybagintheclassroom.Ileftmybagintheclassroom.AfteryouleaveChina,pleasenoticeyourbody.AfteryouleaveChina,pleasetakecareofyourself.翻译下列句子3.

人们普遍认为书的影响是如此之大，以至于应该鼓励人们阅读更多的书籍。（itisbelievedthat）4.毫无疑问，懂得一些急救知识是十分重要的。（vital）5.我绝不会错过这个宝贵的机会，这对我未来的发展至关重要。(circumstance)Under/InnocircumstanceswillImissthispreciousopportunity,whichisvitalformyfuturedevelopment.练习

正确连接分句1.Thebookwasinteresting,Ireaditrapidly.Thebookwasinteresting,andIreaditrapidly.2.Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,theboysmoppedthefloor.

Thegirlscleanedthedesksandchairs,andtheboysmoppedthefloor.练习

避免误置修饰语3.AttheageofsixmyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglish.MyfatherbegantoteachmeEnglishwhenIwassix.4.Ialmostgotgoodmarksineverysubject.Igotgoodmarksinalmosteverysubject.练习

注意逻辑主语5.Tobewell-informed,readingnewspaperisagoodhabit.

Tobewell-informed,weshouldreadnewspapereveryday.6.Comingoutoftheclassroom,myheartwasbeatingveryfast.Coming

outoftheclassroom,Ifeltmyheartbeatingveryfast.练习避免指代不清7.Sheaskedhersisterwhyshewasn’tinvitedtotheparty.

Sheaskedwhyhersisterwasn’tinvitedtotheparty.

Sheaskedhersister,“Whywasn’tIinvitedtotheparty?”练习避免人称代词混淆8.Wehadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andyougotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.We

hadbeenontheplaneforeighteenhours,andwegotprettytiredofsittingthatlong.

避免重复9.Inmyopinion,Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice.Inmyopinion,weshouldaskthemforadvice.Ithinkweshouldaskthemforadvice.练习尽量避免汉语干扰10.Thebooksinourlibraryaregettingmoreandmore.Therearemoreandmorebooksinourlibrary.Thenumberofbooksinourlibraryisgettingbiggerandbigger.11.DuringstayinginBeijing,Ivisitedalotofplacesofinterest.DuringmystayinBeijing,I…WhilestayinginBeijing,I…练习12.Thereisamanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.Ayoungmanwantstoseeyoudownstairs.Thereisamanwhowantstoseeyoudownstairs.13.Iwillnotforgetmydearfriendsforever.

Iwillneverforgetmydearfriends.练习注意时态一致15.Iwentshoppingyesterday.Thereweremanypeopleinthesupermarket.Peoplearecarryingbasketsortakingcarts.IstruggledinthecrowdspickingupthethingsIn