非谓语在英语写作中的运用

关于非谓语在英语写作中的运用TaiwanwaslocatedinthesoutheastofChinaanditisthebiggestislandinChina.Itcoveranareaof36thousandsquarekilometersandhasapopulationof22million.Taiwanissurroundedbyalotofmountainsiswell-knownforitsnaturalsceneryandmanyplacesofinterest.Taiwaneseareenthusiastic,friendlyandpolitetoothersandTaiwanisattractedmanytouriststovisiteveryyear.TheeconomyandculturedeveloprapidlyinTaiwan.学生作文优点：1.要点齐全

2.表达基本流畅缺点：1.句子的表达有错误

2.句子结构简单,句式单一9分iscoverswhichattracts时态主谓一致主从句混淆语态第2页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天

在英语写作中的运用

——少米之炊，大有可为非谓语ByHuangYing第3页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天A.安全性B.简洁而不简单C.高效（得分效率=最终得分÷答题耗时)当王老师走进教室拿丢在那里的钥匙的时候，他看到同学们正在读书。

Enteringtheclassroomtogetthekeyslostthere,Mr.Wangsawstudentsreading.

WhenMr.Wangenteredtheclassroomtogetthekeysthathehadlostthere,hesawstudentsreading为什么要用非谓语?(19words)(14words)第4页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天1.被老师批评后，他决定要努力学习。一.用数个简单句表达原文信息，一定要确保准确性。Hewascriticizedbyhisteacher.Hedecidedtostudyhard.二.确定主干，并将其他部分以合理的形式表现出来。Criticizedbyhisteacher,hedecidedtostudyhard.非谓语做状语或定语第5页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天2.假如天气允许，我们就可以去爬山。一.用数个简单句表达原文信息，一定要确保准确性。Weatherpermits.Wewillgotoclimbthemountain.

二.确定主干，并将其他部分以合理的形式表现出来。Weatherpermitting,wewillgotoclimbthemountain.逻辑主语第6页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天3.翟志刚身着中国制造的花费3000万人民币的航天服在太空中行走。一.用数个简单句表达原文信息，一定要确保准确性。ZhaiZhigangwalkedinspace.Heworeaspacesuit.ThespacesuitwasmadeinChina.Thespacesuitcost30millionyuan.二.确定主干，并将其他部分以合理的形式表现出来。ZhaiZhigangwalkedinspace,wearingaspacesuitmadeinChinaandcosting30millionyuan.第7页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天1.这部以英文写成的小说在世界各地受到了青年人的追捧。2.昨天，万教授接受采访时，谈到了饮食与健康的关系。3.站在山顶上我们可以看到全城.4.还有很多工作要做，他没有被允许外出。即时练习(请运用非谓语翻译下列句子)Thenovel

ispopularamongtheyoungstersallovertheworld.writteninEnglish

,ProfessorWantalkedtheRelationshipbetweendietandhealth.Interviewedyesterday

,wecanseethewholecity.Standingonthetopofthemountain

,heisnotallowedtogoout.Withmuchworktodo第8页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天即“with+宾语+补足语”with+宾语+形容词副词…v-ingv-edtodo主动、进行被动、完成将要发生

with复合结构第9页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天Fillintheblanks

1.Withtheboy__________theway，wefoundhehouseeasily.(lead)2.Withtheboy_____________theway，wewillfindthehouseeasilytomorrow.(lead)3.Helayonthebedwiththebedroomdoor_______________.(shut)leadingtoleadshut即时练习：第10页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天

常见的使役动词和感官动词：

feelhear/listensee/watch/findlet/make/have/get

一感二听三看四让使役动词和感官动词的结构+sb./sth.+非谓语第11页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天◎Speakloudertomakeyourself_________.

再大点声说，让别人都听到。◎Shehasthecomputer__________.

她让人把电脑修好了。◎Iheardhim________________intheroom.

我听到他在房间里读书。◎Idon’twantsuchaquestion___________here.

我不想在这里讨论这样的一个问题。heardrepairedreadingbooks即时练习discussed第12页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天Conclusion:

哪些非谓语结构可用来达成我们的目标？3）使役动词和感官动词的结构：使役动词/感官动词+sb./sth.+非谓语1）非谓语动词作状语或定语（若能写出定语或状语从句，则必能写出此类结构）2）特定的介词with,without,insteadof,ratherthan,etc.逻辑主语第13页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天PeopleinGuangzhoufoundthatthecityhadbeenfloodedovernight.Somanypeoplewhowereterrifiedwerewalkingontheroadsthatwerecoveredwithwater.Theyfoundthatagirlwhowasfrightenedwastrappedinanundergroundgarageandthatshewastrembling.Astherewasn’tanyrescueequipmentleft,thepassers-byhadnochoicebuttoaskthegirltowaitpatientlyfortherescueteam.Practicewhatyoulearnt第14页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天PracticewhatyoulearntPeopleinGuangzhoufoundthatthecityhadbeenfloodedovernight.Somanypeoplewhowereterrifiedwerewalkingontheroadsthatwerecoveredwithwater.Theyfoundthatagirlwhowasfrightenedwastrappedinanundergroundgarageandthatshewastrembling.Astherewasn’tanyrescueequipmentleft,thepassers-byhadnochoicebuttoaskthegirltowaitpatientlyfortherescueteam.第15页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天PracticewhatyoulearntPeopleinGuangzhoufoundthatthecityhadbeenfloodedovernight.Somanypeoplewhowereterrifiedwerewalkingontheroadsthatwerecoveredwithwater.Theyfoundthatagirlwhowasfrightenedwastrappedinanundergroundgarageandthatshewastrembling.Astherewasn’tanyrescueequipmentleft,thepassers-byhadnochoicebuttoaskthegirltowaitpatientlyfortherescueteam.第16页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天PracticewhatyoulearntPeopleinGuangzhoufoundthatthecityhadbeenfloodedovernight.Somanypeoplewhowereterrifiedwerewalkingontheroadsthatwerecoveredwithwater.Theyfoundthatagirlwhowasfrightenedwastrappedinanundergroundgarageandthatshewastrembling.Astherewasn’tanyrescueequipmentleft,thepassers-byhadnochoicebuttoaskthegirltowaitpatientlyfortherescueteam.第17页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天PracticewhatyoulearntPeopleinGuangzhoufoundthatthecityhadbeenfloodedovernight.Somanypeoplewhowereterrifiedwerewalkingontheroadsthatwerecoveredwithwater.Theyfoundthatagirlwhowasfrightenedwastrappedinanundergroundgarageandthatshewastrembling.Astherewasn’tanyrescueequipmentleft,thepassers-byhadnochoicebuttoaskthegirltowaitpatientlyfortherescueteam.第18页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天PracticewhatyoulearntPeopleinGuangzhoufoundthatthecityhadbeenfloodedovernight.Somanypeoplewhowereterrifiedwerewalkingontheroadsthatwerecoveredwithwater.Theyfoundthatagirlwhowasfrightenedwastrappedinanundergroundgarageandthatshewastrembling.Astherewasn’tanyrescueequipmentleft,thepassers-byhadnochoicebuttoaskthegirltowaitpatientlyfortherescueteam.第19页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天PracticewhatyoulearntPeopleinGuangzhoufoundthatthecityhadbeenfloodedovernight.Somanypeoplewhowereterrifiedwerewalkingontheroadsthatwerecoveredwithwater.Theyfoundthatagirlwhowasfrightenedwastrappedinanundergroundgarageandthatshewastrembling.

Astherewasn’tanyrescueequipmentleft,thepassers-byhadnochoicebuttoaskthegirltowaitpatientlyfortherescueteam.第20页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天PracticewhatyoulearntPeopleinGuangzhoufoundthatthecityhadbeenfloodedovernight.

Somanypeoplewhowereterrifiedwerewalkingontheroadsthatwerecoveredwithwater.

Theyfoundthatagirlwhowasfrightenedwastrappedinanundergroundgarageandthatshewastrembling.Astherewasn’tanyrescueequipmentleft,thepassers-byhadnochoicebuttoaskthegirltowaitpatientlyfortherescueteam.PeopleinGuangzhoufoundthecityfloodedovernight.Withoutanyrescueequipmentleft,thepassers-byhadto

getthegirlwaitingpatientlyfortherescueteam.Theyfoundafrightenedgirltrappedinanundergroundgarage,trembling.Somanyterrifiedpeoplewerewalkingontheroadcoveredwithwater.第21页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天PracticewhatyoulearntPeopleinGuangzhoufoundthatthecityhadbeenfloodedovernight.Somanypeoplewhowereterrifiedwerewalkingontheroadsthatwerecoveredwithwater.Theyfoundthatagirlwhowasfrightenedwastrappedinanundergroundgarageandthatshewastrembling.

Astherewasn’tanyrescueequipmentleft,thepassers-byhadnochoicebuttoaskthegirltowaitpatientlyfortherescueteam.(71words)第22页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天PeopleinGuangzhoufoundthecityfloodedovernight.Somanyterrifiedpeoplewerewalkingonthewater-coveredroad.Theyfoundafrightenedgirltrappedinanundergroundgarage,trembling.Withoutanyrescueequipmentleft,thepassers-byhadtogetthegirlwaitingpatientlyfortherescueteam.(48words)Practicewhatyoulearnt第23页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天TaiwanwhichislocatedinthesoutheastofChina,isthebiggestislandinChina.Althoughitcoversanareaof36thousandsquarekilometers,Taiwanhasapopulationof22million.Taiwan,whichissurroundedbyalotofmountains,iswell-knownforitsnaturalsceneryandmanyplacesofinterest.What’smore,Taiwaneseareenthusiastic,friendlyandpolitetoothersandthereforeTaiwanattractsmanytouriststovisiteveryyear.BecausemorepeoplecometovisitTaiwan,theeconomyandculturedeveloprapidlyinTaiwan.（96words）Practicewhatyoulearnt第24页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天TaiwanwhichislocatedinthesoutheastofChina,isthebiggestislandinChina.Althoughitcoversanareaof36thousandsquarekilometers,Taiwanhasapopulationof22million.Taiwan,whichissurroundedbyalotofmountains,iswell-knownforitsnaturalsceneryandmanyplacesofinterest.What’smore,Taiwaneseareenthusiastic,friendlyandpolitetoothersandthereforeTaiwanattractsmanytouriststovisiteveryyear.BecausemorepeoplecometovisitTaiwan,theeconomyandculturedeveloprapidlyinTaiwan.（96words）Practicewhatyoulearnt第25页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天TaiwanwhichislocatedinthesoutheastofChina,isthebiggestislandinChina.Althoughitcoversanareaof36thousandsquarekilometers,Taiwanhasapopulationof22million.Taiwan,whichissurroundedbyalotofmountains,iswell-knownforitsnaturalsceneryandmanyplacesofinterest.What’smore,Taiwaneseareenthusiastic,friendlyandpolitetoothersandthereforeTaiwanattractsmanytouriststovisiteveryyear.BecausemorepeoplecometovisitTaiwan,theeconomyandculturedeveloprapidlyinTaiwan.（96words）Practicewhatyoulearnt第26页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天TaiwanwhichislocatedinthesoutheastofChina,isthebiggestislandinChina.Althoughitcoversanareaof36thousandsquarekilometers,Taiwanhasapopulationof22million.Taiwan,whichissurroundedbyalotofmountains,iswell-knownforitsnaturalsceneryandmanyplacesofinterest.What’smore,Taiwaneseareenthusiastic,friendlyandpolitetoothersandthereforeTaiwanattractsmanytouriststovisiteveryyear.BecausemorepeoplecometovisitTaiwan,theeconomyandculturedeveloprapidlyinTaiwan.（96words）Practicewhatyoulearnt第27页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天TaiwanwhichislocatedinthesoutheastofChina,isthebiggestislandinChina.Althoughitcoversanareaof36thousandsquarekilometers,Taiwanhasapopulationof22million.Taiwan,whichissurroundedbyalotofmountains,iswell-knownforitsnaturalsceneryandmanyplacesofinterest.What’smore,Taiwaneseareenthusiastic,friendlyandpolitetoothersandthereforeTaiwanattractsmanytouriststovisiteveryyear.BecausemorepeoplecometovisitTaiwan,theeconomyandculturedeveloprapidlyinTaiwan.（96words）Practicewhatyoulearnt第28页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天TaiwanwhichislocatedinthesoutheastofChina,isthebiggestislandinChina.Althoughitcoversanareaof36thousandsquarekilometers,Taiwanhasapopulationof22million.Taiwan,whichissurroundedbyalotofmountains,iswell-knownforitsnaturalsceneryandmanyplacesofinterest.What’smore,Taiwaneseareenthusiastic,friendlyandpolitetoothersandthereforeTaiwanattractsmanytouriststovisiteveryyear.BecausemorepeoplecometovisitTaiwan,theeconomyandculturedeveloprapidlyinTaiwan.PracticewhatyoulearntWithmorepeoplecomingtovisitTaiwan,theeconomyandculturedeveloprapidlyinTaiwanTaiwan,locatedinthesoutheastofChina,isthelargestislandinChina.Althoughcoveringanareaof36thousandsquarekilometers,ithasapopulationof22million.Taiwan,surroundedbymanymountains,iswell-knownforitsnaturalsceneryandmanyplacesofinterest.第29页,共34页，2024年2月25日，星期天Taiwanwhichislocat