高考英语作文复习高级句式写作导练一课件

高级句式写作导练一写作要领

高考评分标准中的“复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构”是指句子结构的复合性和句型的多样性。不论是复杂结构的运用(如强调句、倒装句等句型、含有名词性从句、定语从句或状语从句的复合句),还是较多的语法结构(如分词和不定式等非谓语动词)的运用,都指向句式的转换问题。不容置疑,这些复杂结构的运用及较多的语法结构会增加文章的表达力度、提升文章的档次。1.改变简单句的叙述方式,让简单句不简单不要一味地采用“主谓宾”的文法结构,可以通过改变句子成分的位置,为简单句增加亮点。(1)在主语和谓语间增加插入成分,补充信息I’mLiHua,_______________,whoisstudyinginLondon.(2019全国Ⅰ)(2)副词提前,充分表情达意_________,Sallywasnotdrivenoutliketheformerteachers;_________,shewonrespectfromthestudents.anoutgoingboySurprisinglyinstead2.使用复合句,整合语义关联的简单句(1)使用定语从句尤其是非限制性定语从句的使用,可以使得文章句式复杂,提升表达的层次,成为增分的亮点,从而提升作文档次。Tobeginwith,IhaveeverworkedasavolunteerinChinesepaintingsexhibitioninBeijing,______________________________________(2019全国Ⅰ)whichwillsurelygivemeanedgetothejob.(2)使用名词性从句尤其是主语从句和表语从句的使用,能够增加句子的层次感,使其结构紧凑,言简意赅。如:thereasonwhy...is/wasthat...和what从句的使用。_______________IsuggestyouapplyforPekingUniversity________itisoneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.(2018北京)_________________________you’dbetterbringsomegifts,suchasabookoraChineseknot.(2018全国Ⅰ)ThereasonwhyisthatWhatIwanttostressisthatwhilealthough3.使用非谓语动词整合简单句,尤其是分词在句中作伴随状语和不定式作目的状语。Onthesecondday,Chinesetraditionalinstrumentswilltakethestage,___________________________________________(2019全国Ⅲ)Iamwriting_______________________foryourhelponmyEnglishstudy.(2019浙江)presentingChineseclassicslikeErQuanYingYue.toexpressmygratitude

Sointerestedthat(3)the+比较级...,the+比较级____________

peopleareinvolved,__________theoceanenvironmentis.(2022全国甲)(4)使用强调句,包括强调谓语的“do/does/did+动词原形”结构和强调句子其他成分的“Itis/was...that...”结构。_____________________________Irealizedthatlaborisglorious.(2019北京)ThemoreItwasthroughthisexperiencethatthebettercouldn’thavebeenprotectedWithmyfavoritemealservedwhatgreatfuntherewillbe写作指导二在实际写作中,必须在文章中灵活使用复杂句式和高级表达方式,才能从整体上提升文章的档次。即时演练三一、按照要求改变句式1.Ididn’ttakehisadvice,soIfailedintheexam.(用虚拟语气)__________________________________________________________2.Ifitisso,Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime.(用省略句)__________________________________________________________3.Wecanachieveourgoalonlyinthisway.(用倒装句)__________________________________________________________IfIhadtakenhisadvice,Iwouldn’thavefailedintheexam.Ifso,Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime.Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.一、按照要求改变句式4.Muchtooursurprise,Maryfailedinthefinalexam.(用名词性从句)________________________________________________________5.Thestadiumhasbeensetupandallthestudentsareaccessibletothefacilities.(用with复合结构)________________________________________________________WhatsurprisedusmostisthatMaryfailedinthefinalexam.Withthestadiumsetup,allthestudentsareaccessibletothefacilities.二、运用高级句式翻译下列句子1.我宁愿步行回家也不愿坐拥挤的公交车。______________________________________________________2.我们正在欣赏美景,这时一声巨响吸引了我们的注意力。________________________________________________________————————————————————————————Iwouldratherwalkhomethantakeacrowdedbus.Wewereenjoyingthewonderfulsightwhenaloudnoisecaughtourattention.二、运用高级句式翻译下列句子3.我想借此机会表达你对我慷慨帮助的感激之情,没有你的帮助,我不会取得如此快的进步。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.我们绝对不能忽视知识的价值。________________________________________________________I’dliketotakethisopportunitytoexpressmygratitudetoyouforyourgeneroushelp,withoutwhichIwouldn’tmakesuchrapidprogress.Onnoaccountcanweignorethevalueofknowledge.二、运用高级句式翻译下列句子5.该是我们人类采取适当的措施来维护生态平衡的时候了。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.我们再怎么强调保护环境的重要性也不为过。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Itistimethatwehumanbeingstookpropersteps/measurestokeepthebalanceofnature.Wecannotemphasizetoomuchtheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.Timepassedquicklythatyear,andbeforeweallknewit,itwasthelastdayofschool.二、运用高级句式翻译下列句子8.就我个人而言,一方面父母应该尊重孩子的观点,给他们足够的自由让他们自己做决定;另一方面,父母应该鼓励孩子找出自己的方法来解决问题。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________AsfarasI’mconcern