Unit1单元写作指导典题例析跟踪训练(保护动植物的文章)(译林版2020)(原卷版)

Unit1Natureinthebalance(译林版2020必修第三册)单元写作指导&典题例析&跟踪训练(保护动植物的文章)I.单元写作指导1.话题特点主题为人与自然，话题为保护环境、保护濒危野生动植物是高考常见的,以此为话题的多为新闻报道，倡议书。主要内容一般有环境或野生动植物的现状、出现这种现状的原因,以及提出改进的措施。2.话题词汇(1)现状①变得越来越严重getmoreandmoreserious②处于濒临灭绝的危险 beindangerofextinction③被残忍杀害 bekilledwithoutmercy(2)原因④给……造成损害 do/causedamageto⑤把……兑换成…… exchange...for...⑥获利 makeprofits(3)措施⑦提高……的意识 raisetheawarenessof⑧意识到 be/beeawareof⑨呼吁某人做某事 callon/callfor/appealtosb.todosth.⑩采取行动/措施 takeaction/measures3.话题句式(1)段首句①It’safactthatmanyrareanimalsarefacingthedangerofextinction.许多稀有动物正面临灭绝的危险,这是个事实。②Manywildanimalsarebeingfewerandfewerduetohumans’killing.由于人类的捕杀,许多野生动物正变得越来越少。③Asisshowninthechart,wecanseethenumberofanimalspeciesdecreasesfasterandfasterandthistrendwillcontinue.如图表所示,我们可以看到动物物种的数量下降得越来越快,而且这一趋势将继续下去。(2)主体段落句①Thereasonwhythenumberofanimalspeciesisdecreasingisthatanimalshavebeevictimsoffashionindustry.动物物种数量减少的原因是动物成为时尚产业的受害者。②Itisbecauseofhumanactivitiesthatanimalsareindangerofdyingout.正是由于人类的活动,动物才处于灭绝的危险之中。③It’swrongtokillanimalstomakeclothesorforsome“fun”.为了做衣服或找点“乐子”而杀死动物是错误的。(3)段尾句①Onlyifwetakesomedrasticmeasurescanwildanimalsbeprotected.我们只有采取一些有力措施,才能保护野生动物。②Everybodyshouldraisetheawarenessthatit’sourdutytoprotectwildanimals.每个人都应该增强保护野生动物是我们的责任的意识。③Imakeanurgentappealthatmeasuresshouldbetakentocopewiththesituation.我急切呼吁应该采取措施改变现状。II.典题例析假定你是李华。英语课上,老师要求分组讨论“保护野生动物”的话题。请你写一篇小组发言稿,向全班汇报,内容包括:1.必要性;2.措施;3.呼吁。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dearclassmates,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou.一审核体裁,话题关于野生动物(倡议书)时态,人称一般现在时,第一人称文章结构首段:引入话题中段:原因以及措施尾段:发出倡议核心要点引出“保护野生动物”的话题濒临灭绝，停止杀戮和贩卖保护动物等于保护自己二造句1.毫无疑问,野生动物应该受到严格的保护。_____________________wildanimalsshouldbeprotectedstrictly.

2.野生动物属于自然的一部分,对生态平衡非常重要。Wildanimalsbelongtopartofnatureandare_________________________ecologicalbalance.

3.必须通过一些法律来阻止人们杀害和出售它们。Somelawsmustbepassedto__________________________________them.

4.(一句多译)该是我们采取有效措施保护野生动物的时候了。→_______________________________________________________protectwildanimals.(It’shightimethat...)

→)________________________________________________protectwildanimals.(It’stimeforsb.todo)

答案：1.There’snodoubtthat2.ofgreatimportance/veryimportantto3.stoppeoplefromkillingandselling4.It’shightimethatwetookeffectivemeasuresto/It’stimeforustotakeeffectivemeasuresto三.句式升级用从属连词合并句1、2_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

答案：There’snodoubtthatwildanimalsshouldbeprotectedstrictlybecausetheybelongtopartofnatureandareofgreatimportance/veryimportanttoecologicalbalance【参考范文】Dearclassmates,I’mgladtoreportourgroup’sopinionsaboutthetopic“WildAnimalProtection”.Firstly,there’snodoubtthatwildanimalsshouldbeprotectedstrictlybecausetheybelongtopartofnatureandareofgreatimportancetoecologicalbalance.However,atthepresenttime,someofthemarefacingthedangerofdyingout.Then,howcanweprotectthem?Somelawsmustbepassedtostoppeoplefromkillingandsellingthem.Besides,peopleshouldnotbeallowedtoeatwildlife.It’shightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestoprotectwildanimals.Protectingthemmeansprotectingourselves.Thankyou.III.跟踪训练应用文写作A(2024上·甘肃白银·高一校考期末)假定你是中学生李华，请你根据以下要点给ChinaDaily的编辑写一封信。内容包含：1.许多野生动物濒临灭绝，保护野生动物势在必行;2.分析造成野生动物濒临灭绝的原因，如森林遭到破坏，人类大量捕杀野生动物等;3.至少提出两条保护野生动植物的措施。注意：写作词数应为80左右。DearEditor,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaB(2024上·辽宁朝阳·高一统考期末)假如你是高中生李华,你校下个月将举办主题为“Whenthebuyingstops,thekillingcan,too”的英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇关于保护野生动物的演讲稿参加此次活动,内容要点如下：1.野生动物生存现状;2.野生动物保护呼吁。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Goodmorning!I’mhonoredtostandheretodelivermyspeech,whosethemeis“Whenthebuyingstops,thekillingcan,too”.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!C(2024上·河南新乡·高一原阳一中校考阶段练习)请以学生会的名义写一篇关于保护濒危动物的海报，呼吁所有的学生保护濒危动物。内容包括：1.为什么要保护濒危动物;2.怎么保护濒危动物;3.号召保护濒危动物。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ProtectEndangeredAnimals!______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TheStudents’UnionJanuary10,2022D(2024·江苏苏州·高一苏州中学校考阶段练习)假如你是校学生会主席，你代表学生会向全校学生发出倡议，呼吁大家保护珍稀鸟类(rarebirds)。内容包括：1.保护珍稀鸟类的重要性；2.人类活动对珍稀鸟类的伤害；3.保护珍稀鸟类的方法。注意：1)词数80左右；2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3)本部分请作答于答题卷2。Dearfellowstudents,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TheStudents’UnionE(2023上·广东江门·高一江门市第一中学校考期末)众所周知，现在产于中国的野生动物越来越少了，一些野生动物面临灭绝的趋势，请就此情况写一篇有关保护野生动物的倡议信。主要内容：1.野生动物濒临灭绝的现状；2.野生动物濒临灭绝的原因；3.拯救措施及号召更多人加入。注意：1.词数不少于80；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A(2023上·河北邯郸·高一校联考阶段练习)Atthetimeofthiswriting.Ihavereachedtheageof105.AsIlookback,Ithinkofthemanywonderfulthingsthathavehappenedinmylonglife.manyofwhichhaveservedtostrengthenmybeliefthatmiraclesreallydohappen.OneofthesethatIrecalltodayhappenedmanyyearsagobutisstillasfreshinmymindasifithadhappenedyesterday.PeterwasaRussianWolfhound(Borzoi)withthetypicaltall,longleggedbuildofthehunterhewassupposedtobebutneverwas.HeweighedclosetoeightyfivepoundsandhadthelongnoseandnarrowheadoftheBorzoi,sonarrowthatitdidn’tseemtohavemuchroomforbrains.InPeter’scase,itdidn’t.Hebecameeasilyconfused,buthisgentlenaturemadeupforhislackofintelligence.Onthedayinquestion,Ihadgatheredupmydogs.oneOldEnglishSheepdog,oneWhippetrescue,andPeter.Theywereallsettledinmycoveredpickuptruckbed,andwasheadedoutforourdailyexercise,sixmilesintothecountrywheretherewasnoleash(绳)lawandtheycouldrunfree.Theywerealltrainednottochasewildanimals,tostayreasonablyclose.andtoewhencalled.AfterIhadwalkedforabouttenminutes,Inoticedonedogwasmissing.Peter,ofcourse!Itseemedobviousthathehadstoppedtoinvestigatesomeirresistible(不可抗的)smell,andthen,beingconfused,hadturnedbackthewaywehadjuste,Hewouldeasilybeabletofollowourtrack,butinthewrongdirection.AndwhenaBorzoiruns,hecoversalotofgroundinaveryshorttime.Feelingguilty,knowingIshouldhavekeptacloserwatchonhim,Iretraced(折返)mysteps,callingandwhistling,buttherewasnosignofhim.Itwaswinterandwouldsoonbedark.Indesperation,Istartedtopray.“PleaseGod,keepPetersafe.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Afterhalfanhourofcallingatthetopofmyvoice.Ifinallydecidedtodrivethetwootherdogshome.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Uponreachinghome,Idiscoveredalongnosewaitingatthedoorway.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________B(2023上·河北保定·高一校联考期中)Onceuponatime,inaquietcountryside,therelivedahumblefarmerwithaheartasvastashisfields.Hehadalitterofadorablepuppiesthatheneededtofindnewhomesfor.Onesunnymorning,hedecidedtopaintasignadvertisingthepuppiesandsetofftonailittoapostattheedgeofhisyard.Ashehammeredinthelastnail,hefeltasmallhandpullingathisclothes.Lookingdown,hesawthesincereeyesofalittleboylookingupathim.Theboysaid.“Sir.Iwanttobuyoneofyourpuppies.”Thefarmer,wipingthesweatfromhisface,replied,“Well,thesepuppiesefromfineparentsandcostagooddealofmoney.”Theboy’sheaddrooped(下垂)foramoment,buthereachedintohispocketandpulledoutahandfulofchange,holdingituptothefarmer.“I’vegot89cents.Isthatenoughatleasttotakealook?”Thefarmer’sheartwarmed,andhesmiled,saying,“Ofcourse.”Hethenletoutawhistle(口哨),calling,“Here,Dolly!”Withthat,acharmingsightappearedasDollyandherfouradorablepupsrushedoutfromthedoghouseanddowntheslope.Thelittleboypressedhisfaceagainstthefence,hiseyesdancingwithdelight.Asthefourpuppiesapproachedthefence,theboynoticedsomethingmovinginsidethedoghouse.Slowly,anotherlittlefurballappeared,obviouslysmallerthantheothers,Itwobbled(摇晃)downtheslope,doingitsbesttocatchup.Theboywasveryexcited,andhepointedtothepuppy,saying,“Iwantthatone.”Thefarmer,however,kneltdownattheboy’ssideandgentlysaid,“Son,youwon’twantthatpuppy.Hewillneverbeabletorunandplaywithyouliketheseotherdogswould.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Theboytookastepback,showinghisdisabledleftleg.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thelittleboy’sfacelitupwithgratitude(感激).____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________C(2023上·湖北黄冈·高一校联考期中)Therewasabigfireinaforest.Animalsthatlivedtherehadtofindnewhomes.Farawaywasahousewherethreelittlechildrenlived.TheirnameswereThomas,KathyandCarrie.Itwaslunchtime.Momsaid,“Whydon’tyouhaveapicnicintheyard?”Thekidsspread(展开)outthepicnicblanketandputsomecarrotsticksanddrinksonit.Thentheyranbacktothekitchentofetchmorefood.Butwhentheycamebacktotheblanket,somethingwaswrong.Wherewerethecarrotsticks?Theywereallgone!“Thismustbeatrick,”saidKathy.“Let’sleavethecelery(芹菜)stickshereandseewhatwillhappen.”TheytoldMomthatsomeonehadstolenthecarrotsticks.Momhurriedoutwiththemtothepicnicblanket.Butnow,notonlywerethecarrotsticksmissing,butthecelerysticksweregone,too!Momsaid,“Well,yourdrinksarestillouthere.Getyoursandwiches.Youguysgoaheadandeatthemouthereandmaybesomethingwillturnup.”TheywerejustabouttofinisheatingwhenCarrielookedoveratthebushes(灌木丛)andsawsomethingmove.Shesoftlysaid,“Shush!Seethebushesmoving?”Alittleanimalcametotheedge(边缘)ofthebushesandlookedatthem.Itwasarabbit.Quietlyitwentbackintothebushes.Thomassaid,“Let’sgetmoreceleryandcarrots,andseeifthatrabbitisourthief.Wecanputthemattheedgeofthebushesandwatchfromthewindow.”Theycarefullyputceleryandcarrotsdownnearthebushesandwalkedbacktothehouse.Astheywatched,thelittlerabbitcameoutandcarriedthevegetablesawayintothebushes.Momthoughtthatmaybebecauseoftheforestfire,therabbitneededanewhome.“Maybewecankeepfeedingthisrabbit,andshewillstayhereforalongtime.”saidMom.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式作答。Thatisjustwhattheydid._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally,springcame._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________D(2023上·安徽芜湖·高一芜湖一中校考期中)Jeremylikestohelphisfamilywithhousework.HespendstimeplayingwithhisbabysisterwhileMomcooksdinner.Aftersupper,hedriesthedishesforDad.ButJeremy’sfavoritejobisfeedingFletch.Fletchisthefamilycat.Heisbrownandblack,withtigerstripes(条纹)acrosshisback.FletchalwaysplaysandwalkswithhimintheparkandletsJeremyknowhe’shungrybybumpinghisheadonJeremy’slegs.Onenightaftersupper,MomaskedJeremytofindBabySuzy’sdoll.“Ithinkshedroppeditinthebackyardthisafternoon.Shewon’tbeabletosleepwithoutit.Canyoutakealookbeforeitgetsdark?”Jeremyopenedthekitchendoorandranoutside.Thebrightreddollwaseasytofindinthegrass.Jeremygotitandranback.Laterthatnight,Jeremywasreadyforbed.HealwayssaidgoodnighttoFletchbeforeturningoutthelight,butFletchwasn’tinhisroom.Jeremylookedinthebathroomandhallway.Thenhewentdownstairs.Jeremylookedinthelivingroomanddiningroom,butFletchwasnotthere.Hesearchedallthepossibleplacesathome,buttherewasstillnohope.Thenhegottothekitchen,Jeremybegantocry.Momlookedupfromhertea.“Jeremy,youshouldbeinbed!What’swrong?”“Thebackdoorisopen!”Jeremycried.“AndIcan’tfindFletchanywhere!”Momfrowned.“Ithinkyou’rerighttobeworried,”shesaidslowly.“Fletchmayslipoutthedoor.”注意：1.续写词数应为150个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Jeremycried.“Fletchranawayandit’sallmyfault!Ileftthedooropen!”________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thenallofasudden,thesunshoneinhiseyes,anditwasmorning.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________E(2023上·湖南株洲·高一株洲市南方中学校考阶段练习)Itwasaburninghotdayinlatesummer,whenmyfatherdrovemeandmyfriendsJimandJohntothelumbermill(锯木厂)wherehewasworking.Theworkers’workingconditionswerereallypoor.Thatdaythefansweren’tworking.Theworkerswerecoveredinsweatandsawdust,lookingdiscouragedandtired.Itwasdangerousbackbreakingworkthatpaidverylittle.Theydidtheworkbecausetheyhadnootherworktodotosup