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读后续写练习写作讲义

试题呈现：

"I'mgoingtomissyousomuch,Poppy,"saidthetall,thinteenager.

Hebentdowntohughisoldfriendgoodbye.Hestoodup,huggedhis

parents,andsmiled,tryingnottolethisemotions（情绪）getthebetterof

him.

Hisparentswerenotquiteabletokeeptheirsundercontrol.They

haddriventheirsonseveralhoursoutoftowntotheuniversitywherehe

wouldsoonbelivingandstudying.Itwastimetosaygoodbyefornowat

least.Thefamilyhuggedandsmiledthroughmistyeyesandthenlaughed.

Theboyliftedthelastbagontohisshoulder,andflashedabright

smile,"Iguessthisisit,"hesaid."I'llseeyoubackhomeinamonth,

okay?”Hisparentsnodded,andtheywatchedashewalkedoutofsight

intothecrowdsofhundredsofstudentsandparents.Theboy'smother

turnedtothedog,“Okay,Poppy,timetogobackhome.”

Thehouseseemedquietasatombwithouttheboylivingthere.All

thatweek,Poppydidn'tseeminterestedinherdinner,herfavoritetoy,or

eveninherdailywalk.Herownersweresadtoo,buttheyknewtheirson

wouldbebacktovisit.Poppydidn't.

Theyofferedthedogsomeofherfavoritepeanutbuttertreats.They

evenlethersitonthesofa,buttheoldgirljustwasn'therusualcheerful

self.Herownersstartedtogetworried."Whatshouldwedotocheer

Poppyup?”askedDad."We'vetriedeverything/*

“Ihaveanidea,butitmightbealittlecrazy/'smiledMom."Without

anybodyleftinthehousebutus,thisplacecoulduseabitoffun.Let'sget

alittledogforPoppy.

Itdidn'ttakelongbeforetheywalkedthroughthefrontdoor

carryingabigbox.Poppywelcomedthemhomeasusualbutwhenshesaw

thebox,shestopped.Sheputhernoseonit.Hertailbeganwagging（摆动）

eversoslowly,thenfasterasshecaughtthesmell.

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Paragraph1：Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.

Paragraph2：Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefrom

university.

优秀作文1:

Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Poppywasa

littlecautiousatfirst,backingawayasthelittlecreaturestruggledtoget

outofthebox.Butaftersniffingtheairforawhile,shegotabitcloser,

andthenletoutacheerfulbarkasshestartedlickingthelittledog

happily.Itseemedthatshehadgotoutoftheshadowthatmoment,filled

withjoyandexcitement.Sohadtheparentswhowatchedherevery

move."Seemslikewe*vegotit,"saidMom,exchangingadelightfulsmile

withdad,"Itreallywillbeagreatsurpriseforourson.”

Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity:Imagine

howsurprisedhewaswhenheopenedthedoor,ashewasnotonly

greetedbypoppy'swarmhug,butalso“attacked"byatiny

creature."Wow,MomandDad,you*vegotapartnerforpoppy,"saidthe

boyashehuggedhisparentstightly.Thatafternoon,thethreeplayed

happilyinthelivingroom,tossingtoyshereandthere,astheparents

startedtopreparetheireveningfeast.Thateveningthefamilysathappily

enjoyingthedelicaciesandmostimportantly,thetimetogether.Though

thetimemaybeslow,itwouldlastineveryone'smemory,forever.

优秀作文2：

Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Adarkbrown

noseshakilystretchedtotheopenedsideofboxbeforethefaceafterit

couldbeexposed.Airsqueezedinandoutoftheholesonitasifabutton

wasbreathing.Itclearlyfailedtoprepareforitssuddenmeetingwitha

largenose.Theairfrozeabitasthenoseshitandseparated.Sharp

barkingcameoutoftheboxasPoppypokeditsnoseinsideagain.Itdid

nottouchthelittledog.Poppy'stonguedid.Shesteppedaninchnearerto

makeherselfclosertothebox.Comfortingitwithlickingratherthan

watchingwasperhapsthefriendliestwayofcommunicationbetween

puppies.DadhuggedPoppyabitandputtheboxgentlyonthefloor.He

hasnotexpectedforwhathappenednext.Poppytookthehandleofhis

boxbyhermouth.TremblingfromthelittleCorgisinsideseemedtobe

slightlyvisiblewhenPoppyjoggedandtookitawaywiththebox.Afat

taildancedtrippingonherway.

Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.Hissight

sweptaroundforhislovelyPoppy.Thetipofhertongueledthelongway

toheryoungowner.Shehadwaitedforhalfayear.Pupilsontheboy's

sharpfaceshonewhilecapturingtheroundedPoppymarchingquicklyto

him.Itbecametoobulkytorun.AtinyCorgisshylyhidatthebackofhis

largefemaleLabradorastheyappeared.Itsawtheboycomingforward

andsharedhiscuddlingwithPoppywhokissedhishandsrepeatedly.

优秀作文3：

Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Awarninglook

floatedinthepupilsofPoppywhenshesawthelittlecreature.She

steppedhalfaninchforward.Odorbroughtbytheairruledhernoseas

theorganofwalnutsizeshookslightly.Itbelongedtoanotherdog.

Bearingtheexistenceofadogwhosharedtheloveofherownerswith

Poppywasthelastthingshewoulddoonearth.SharpteethofPoppy

completelyexposedassheroaredtothepoorpuppy.Staringfromawolf

andvoiceofatigerwerethefirstgiftPoppygaveouttowelcomeher

littlefriend.ItwasneverexpectedtomeetanendtillmumhuggedPoppy

inherarms.WarmthstillbelongedtoPoppy.Shedidnotmindtoseedad

gettingthetinyCorgisoutofitsbox.Mumcuddledtheshakylittlepuppy

togetherwithherPoppyandwalkedtothesofa.Alargecookiefordog

wastheweaponsheusedtoshutPoppy'swaterymouth.Thelittledog

whichspentallitsstrengthhidingatthebackofmumreceivedatinysoft

biscuit.IttrembledagainwhenPoppygaveitaglance.Shetookapieceof

cookieandturnedherheadtotheCorgis.Thatpieceofdessertdidgive

mumtoomuchtimetoreactwhenitwasgiventothelittledog.Poppy

droppedthecookiebeforeitsmouthandlickeditsfur.Itwaspossibly

softandabitsalty.

Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.Hehas

imaginedhowcheerfulitwouldbetoseehisparentsandPoppyagain.

WhathehadnoideaaboutwastheappearanceofPoppywhenhearrived.

Shetookababypuppytohimwithhermouth.Theselivescouldbe

misunderstoodasamotherdogandherbabyonlyiftheylookedmore

similar.Theboytookthepuppiesinhisarms.Hissapphirepupils

questionedtheemeraldonesofPoppy.Whattheladydidwastokisshis

hands.ThelittleCorgisdidthesameasifbeingtaughtbyitsprincess.

优秀作文4：

Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Thenthebox

tippedoversideways,andoutcamethelittledog.Poppywasamazedto

seethelittleone.Shewatchedit,waggedhertailsandthenbarkedwith

joy.Thelittleonewasnotshyandimmediatelystartedrunningand

jumpingaroundtheolderdog."Thatdidn'ttakelong,“remarkedMom,as

bothdogswentrunningaroundthehousecheerfully.Dadlaughed.

Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.Hehad

missedPoppyandhisparentsandwaslookingforwardtoseeingthem.

WhenhebentdowntogivePoppyabighug,hefelloverinsurpriseasthe

littledogsuddenlyappearedandraceduptolickhisfacetoo."Ohmygod,

whoisthis?”theboyasked.Hisparentslaughedatthelookofshockon

hisfaceandsaid,"That'sPee-wee,anewfriendforPoppy.”

优秀作文5：

Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.rrMeetyourlittle

newfriend!MDadannouncedmerrily,asthelittleonesquirmingitsway

outoftheboxtoPoppy,whowasnowexhilaratedwithheroncedroopy

eyesopeningwideoutofsurpriseandelation.Shecametolife

immediatelyasshebefriendedthenewcomer.Theyaccompaniedeach

otherwhentheboywasabsent.Thehousewasnowfilledwithanairof

joy,wherebarksofhappinesscouldbeheardfromtimetotime.Bright

smilesappearedonparents*faces,astheyearnestlywaitedtheirson.

Afewweekslatertheboyarrivedhomefromuniversity:Nosooner

hadhesteppedintothehousethanPoppyandthelittledogdashed

forwardtogreettheirlong-expectedowner,withhisparentswatchingby

theside,grinning.Hiseyebrowsliftedhighasthesurprisehithim,but

thentheysoothedasthedogswarmlynestledagainsthisfeet,wagging

theirtails,waitingtobestrokednThankyouforfindingPoppyafriend!"

Wordsofappreciationandmerrimentfloodedoutoftheboy,ashe

cuppedthelittlecreaturesandhuggedhisparentsinthearms.

优秀作文6：

Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Poppypokedhis

roundheadoutofthebox.andlookedaroundoutofcuriosity.Thesudden

arrivalofanewfriendanimatedPoppy,whobarkedexcitedlyandlicked

thelittledoginrapture.Thepoppywasabitnumbowingtothe

unexpectedwelcomeceremony."Look!Mydear,shelovesournew

member!”Momlaughed.Soonthepuppygotusedtohisnewhome,

beginningtochasePoppywithgreatpleasure,orbechasedbyPoppy

delightedly.Parentswereexceedinglyhappytoseepoppybecome

cheerfulagain.

Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity:Upon

arrival,hereceivedtherapturouswelcomefrompoppy.nHey!It'sbeena

longtime,isn'tit?"Hechuckledatthedogasheclosedthedoor.

Unexpectedly,Poppyabruptlyranawayandthendraggedanotherpuppy

tohim.Thepuppyseemedreluctantwhenapproachingthe

stranger,"Poppywasextremelydepressedafteryouleft,soweboughther

anewfriend/'explainedMomtotheconfusedboy.Awinsomesmilelitup

theboy'sface."Icanreceiveonemorepieceoflovethen,"Herubbedthe

twodogs,headaffectionately."Socanyou,Poppy.”

优秀作文7：

Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.HowPoppy's

eyessparkledwithdelightandcuriositywhenthelovelyfurrydog

bumpedintohersight,whoimmediatelycapturedherwholeattention!

AnditwasnotlongbeforePoppyandthelittledogweremerrily

boundingacrosstheyardandincheerfulchase.Thehouserangwith

excitedbarksagainandtheparentswerecontentwiththisnewwayto

pleasePoppy.

Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromtheuniversity.The

instantheflewintothedoor,theboywasfirstgreetedenthusiasticallyby

Poppy,whosprangtowardshimandshowedherjoybywagginghertail.

Hismomhuggedhimaffectionatelyandnearlykissedawayallhistears!

Pointingtoasmalldog,momsaiditwasPoppy'snewplaymateandPoppy

haddevelopedthehabitofstayinginfrontofhisbedroomtokeep

watchingeverynightsincehewenttouniversity,whichtouchedtheboy

deeply.Couldanythingelsedescribetheboyhalfthehappinessheleftat

thismoment.

优秀作文8：

Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Purewhitefur,

dottedwithdarkspots,thetinydogputherpawsonthebox'sedge,

glancingaroundincuriosity.Poppysteppedaside,sniffed,then

approachednearobserving.Assolidconnectionwasabruptlyformed

betweenthemandtheystucktoeachothereverywhereandeverytime,

poppy'ssorrowwasdrivenawaybythelovelycreature,devotingallher

timetoaccompanyingher.Theparentswererelievedastheygotalong

well,andbroughtbacksomeenergyintheirhouseasdifferenttonesof

barksappearedeveryday,whichwerealwaysinamerrytune.

Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromtheuniversity.Itwas

Poppythatfirstdartedtohimwithitstailwaggingcheerfully.Dragging

hissleeve,Poppyledhimtothebox.Scarcelyhadtheboytakenoffhis

shoeswhenhefoundapuppydogbarkingsoundlyinit."Whatasurprise!

heturnedtohisparents.nWeboughthertocomfortPoppy."answeredhis

parentswearingbrightsmiles,hugginghimtightly.Onthedinnertable,

theychattedabouttheuniversitylifeandmanyadventurousexperiences,

whichpushedtheatmospheretothepeakandeveryone'sfacewas

reddenedbythewarmthincludingthetwocheerfuldogs.Whata

harmoniousreunion!

优秀作文9：

Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Coatedwith

browncurlyhair,itlookedeverywhere,eyessparklingwithcuriosityand

alittleuneasiness.WhenPoppyapproached,itbackedabit.Dadknelt

down,gentlystrokingitscurlyhairandcomforting,MNoworry,youwill

getusedtothenewfamily.nHismagicalwordsseemedtolessenits

anxiety.Meanwhile,Poppy'seyeswerefullofeagernessandexcitement.

Earlynextmorning,thenoiseofdogswakenedthem.Momthrewon

clothesandrushedout."Youguesswhat?nShescreamed,MTheyareplaying

sohappily”.Sincethen,thequiethousewasfilledwithfunagainandthe

parentsfinallyburstoutasignofrelief.

Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromuniversity.Forseveral

weekshehadbeenpicturingPoppy'slonelyandmiserablelifeand

exhilaratedeyesuponseeinghim.Enteringthehouse,however,hewas

surprisedtofindplayingsocheerfullyonthefloorwerejusthisPoppy

andanotherdog,completelyabsorbedintheirhappyworld.Thenhefelta

gentlepatonhisshoulder.Itwasmomwithasmile,“Amazingtheyget

alongsowellandtheonceenergeticPoppycamebackagain,"Instantly,

momentsoflonelinessintheuniversityflashedacrosshismind."Ishould

alsolearntogetalong