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六级写作高分秘诀2小时突破主讲：朱伟新东方教育科技集团十位“集团演讲师”称号获得者。新东方上海学校教学管理中心主任、名师工作室项目负责人。新东方在线全国综合评分最高的老师。考研英语写作、考研阅读、考研词汇、托福写作、托福阅读培训师，畅销网络视频课程《恋练有词》讲师斯诺克上海沃德大师赛华东地区推广赛翻译、新闻官。个人著作《考研英语作文考前预测必背20篇》是2013-2014年英语写作类畅销书；畅销词汇系列书籍《恋练有词》及配套网络课程两年以来累计学员达120万人次，销售额突破1000万；最新畅销白皮书系列《四级英语作文预测白皮书》、《六级英语作文预测白皮书》是亚马逊Kindle电子图书英语考试类单月销量第一名THINGSABOUTWRITING:1、sentencestructure2、paperstructure:head,body,conclusion3、modelEssay1、sentencestructure

Warm-up简单句----复杂句话题：选择困难、人生迷茫、犹豫不决InChina,manyundergraduatesfeelhelplesstochoosetheirgoal.InChina,manyundergraduatesfeelhelplesstochoosetheirgoal.InChina,40%moreorlessofundergraduatesfeelhelplesstochoosetheirgoal.InChina,40%moreorlessofundergraduatesfeelhelplesstochoosetheirgoal.InChina,40%moreorlessofundergraduatesfeelhelplessinthefaceofwhethertograduateforajobortopursueahigherdegree.InChina,40%moreorlessofundergraduatesfeelhelplessinthefaceofwhethertograduateforajobortopursueahigherdegree.ItisunveiledbyarecentsurveythatinChina,40%moreorlessofundergraduatesfeelhelplessinthefaceofwhethertograduateforajobortopursueahigherdegree.ItisunveiledbyarecentsurveythatinChina,40%moreorlessofundergraduatesfeelhelplessinthefaceofwhethertograduateforajobortopursueahigherdegree.Itisunveiledbyarecentsurvey

initiatedbyChinaDailythatinChina,40%moreorlessofundergraduates

investigatedfeelhelplessinthefaceofwhethertograduateforajobortopursueahigherdegree.2、paperstructurehead,body,conclusion→what====background(chart/phenomenon)why★===mainidea+analyses(reasons/effects)+caseshow===conclusion(echothemainidea)/suggestions/future3.ModelEssays第一大类双向话题作文（考查矛盾）TheFragranceAlwaysStaysInTheHandThatGivesTheRoseWhenamanisindifficulty,asillustratedinthepictureabove,hecanlookforhelpfromthosepeoplehehelpedinthepast.Thisremindsusoftheimportanceofahealthyconceptofgivingandtaking.Beginwithgiving.Whenpeopleseethatyouhelpothersinneed,theymaybeinspiredtohelpaswell;thatistosay,youaresettingagoodexampleforothers.Forexample,whenachildseeshisfatherbuyinggroceriesforanelderlyperson,it’sverylikelythathe/shewillimitatethisbehaviorandlearntolookforwaystobehelpfulaswell.Asfortaking,whenyouaregenerousinhelpingothers,youwillreceivetheassistanceyouneedinonewayoranother.Butweshouldn’t“give”onlysowecanlater“take.”Whenweworkforthegoodofothers—evenifwereceivenopersonalrewardlater—wefilltheworldwithhopeandmaketheworldabetterplacetolive.

Onthewhole,theworldwillbemorewonderfulwheneveryoneiswillingtohelpothers.举一反三drawinginferencesaboutothercasesfromoneinstance

It’sthemostinterestingcartoonI’veevermetinthelatest10-yearrealexampapers.Ifthemanintherightscissorstherope,boththevictimintheleftandhimself/herselfwilllosethechancetosurvive.Actually,tohurtsomeoneisgoodtononebutworsetoyourself,asaChineseclassicsayinggoes.

Thesedays,we’veseenalotofmoraldisastersviasocialnetworks.Theunderlyingreasonforourmankindtohurteachotheristhatweareusedtolettingourownegoout.Inthebackgroundofthe“fastandfurious”economicdevelopment,everyspecificpersoncanfeelunderunspeakablepressureduetothelimitedoccupationsandpersonaloptions.Normally,thewaytofitthefiercesituationistochangeyourself.However,fewpeoplearewillingtogetoutofthewayofthemselves.

Rather,theyhaveindulgedthemselvesinegoisticimpulse,whichmayleadthemtosacrificeother’sbenefits.Forexample,it’sveryirrationaltosacrificesocialjusticeinthenameofefficiencybecausetheterminalofhappinessisequalcaretowardseveryoneratherthantherichnessofminority.Whenefficiencykillsjustice,hehimself

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Forthesakeofyourself,pleasecherisheverylittledripofother’skindnessanddiscardtheDevilinside.第二大类单向话题作文

LackofTrustandHonesty

Currentsocietyisdiscussingtheproblemoflackoftrustandhonesty.Citizensaresurroundedbyfalseproductsandliesastheygothroughtheirnormaldays.Whenwemeetasupposedlydisabledmanbeggingformoneyinthestreet,weimmediatelywonderifheischeatingus.Consumerscannoteasilybelieveanythingmerchantshaveguaranteedinthebusinessworld.Thissituationneedstobeaddressedthroughtheactionofgovernmentandsociety.Theunderlyingreasonforthisphenomenonisthatbusyschedulesinlifeandworkleavepeoplewithlittletimetoreallyinvestigatethingsintheoutsideworld;consequentlypeoplecannottrustthosetheydonotknow.Trustisnotsomethingthatcanbebuiltwithquick-fixtechniques.Rather,itissomethingthatiscultivatedthroughpersonalinteractions.Anotherfactoratplayisthattherearenotenoughconsequencestodeterimmoralpeoplefromlyingandcheatingtobenefitthemselves.Thegovernmenthasnotenactedlawsstrictenough,andmustenforcealltherelevantlaws.Inviewofallthesefactors,certainmeasuresmustbetakentoimprovethissituation.Governmentshouldenactlawstopunishfraud,andthepublicshouldenhancetheircommunicationwithothersandbuilduptheirtrust.Onlythroughthesemethodscanwereturntoamoremoralenvironment.

第三大类：邮件，通知

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（对于别人投诉的回复和安抚）投诉你负责的勤工助学中心某学生兼职表现糟糕Iwillnotuseyourtemporarystaffanymorefortheirdisastrousperformance.DearSir,Inresponsetoyourletterofcomplaintaboutourtemporaryadministrationassistanceyoureceivedfrommyorganization,Iwouldliketoapologize.

Wereallycareaboutourclientsandthatiswhywewilltrytogivesomeexplanationaboutwhathappened.Para.2:Actually,everycandidate

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Ipromisetheperson

youreceivedlastweekwasnotanexception.Unfortunately,hisfamilycoincidedwithsomecatastrophicaffairsthesedayssothathehasmadealotofmisunderstandingsduetoabsenceofmind.Itisveryirrationalthatwestillsendhimtoworkforyou.Para.3:Knowingthatthiscaseisexceptional,Iwouldliketogiveyousomekindofcompensation.Nextweek,ifyouplease,Iwillsendyouanotherskilledfreeofcharge.Reallyhopeyoucanconsiderthismendation.Yoursfaithfully,LiMing，

TheDirectorofDepartment（八）报告：report(二).关于学校及宿舍文化建设的汇报通告ReportontheCulturalConstructionofOurDormitoriesandCampusReportontheCulturalConstructionofOurDormitoriesandCampus

Thisreportaimstomakeabriefretrospectabouttheculturalnurtureinourdormitoriesandcampuslastyear.

First,wehaveheldmorethan10matches,including“SanitationGotTalents”,“theKingofKaraoke”,“SpeechContest”,etc.,amiddifferentdormitoriestopromo