2023年高考英语二轮复习讲义+分层训练-8 上海高考议论类作文（解析版）（上海专用）

►专题08上海高考议论文类作文

〜考克精力

【考精甚覆】

攸论:g,也称论说文，是就某一观点或概念进行论证并得出合理结论的一种文体，考查学生的语言水平和

逻辑思维能力。

命题的方式主要有：

提纲式（给出汉语提示，要求学生论证）、

图表式（给出图片或图表，要求学生先描写再分析论证）、

「情景式（给出情景，要求学生描述分析）等。

论说文在结构上是由论点、论据和结论组成，通常由引言段、中心段和结论段构成，中心段可以由一至多个

推展段组成。引言段（Openingparagraph）说出文中的要点、核心问题一推展段（中心段/正文部分Body

paragraphs）

围绕主题开展叙述、讨论一结论段（结尾部分Concludingparagraph）对全文的总结和概括。

论说文的类型通常有：观点对比型、问题解决型、道理/观点论证型、说明利弊型等，各类型的论证方式有

相异之处，每一种类型都有相对固定的论证方式及句型。值得谑意的是近耳依被中筏召出执祀救星秸卷和辂合

的余仅彬式。

【要点机理】

>要点一：观点对比型

此题型是通过就同一事件比较两个不同甚至对立的观点，或就同一问题比较两种不同的选择方法来阐明自

己的观点或选择的方法。

1.写作结构

即入沏讣|陈状观占1都分.1陈述观占，.许令）“我的观点”部分结论

2.常用句型

A.引入部分：

.hasbecomeaheatedtopicamongpeopletoday.Opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.

Nowadays,peoplearedividedonthequestionaboutwhether...

.Theissueofwhether...ornot...hasbeenwidelyargued/debatedcurrently.

....isacommonoccurrenceinourdailylife,butdifferentpeopleholddifferentattitudestowardsit.

B.陈述观点1部分：

.Somepeoplesuggest/think/maintain/holdtheopinionthat...

.Somepeopleprefertothinkthat...

.Thosewhoadvocate/areinfavorof...believethat...

.Thosewhocriticize/objectto/oppose...maintainthat...

C.陈述观点2部分：

.However/Nevertheless/Yet,otherpeopleholdadifferentpointofview.Theyinsistthat...

.Onthecontrary/Incontrast,therearestillmanypeoplewhodonotagree,andtheyclaim/argue/believe

that...

.Ontheotherhand,noteveryonesharestheopinion.

D.“我的观点”部分：

.Formypart/Astome/Asfaras1amconcerned,Fdliketoagreetotheformer/latteropinion.

.Frommypointofview,Iaminfavorof...Z1amonthesideof...

Inmyopinion,bothsidesarepartlyright/thereissometruthinbothsides.

.Tome/Incaseofme,1prefer.../theformeropinionismoreattractiveinthat...

D.结论部分

Insummary/Consequently/Inconclusion/Tosumup/Allinall/Inbrief/Inshort...

词汇表达积累：

1.Recentlysbhaveconductedasurveyconcerning（调查或研究的主题）...

2.PeoplearedividedintotwosidesonthisquestionasA（观点一）andB（观点二）arebothobvious.

3.（正方）ThosewhoadvocatethepracticearguethatAsurelyhassomemerits.（列举两个优点）Tobeginwith,...

Besides,...（反方）Inthemeanwhile,thoseholdingtheoppositeviewmaintainthatB...（两点反对理由）

4.（个人观点）Astome,IholdthatAoutweighB.Inthefirstplace,...Toplus,...Lastbutnotleast,...（自己的三点原因）

5.Toputinanutshell,...（总结概括）

A要点二：问题解决型

此题型是先指出某一问题或现象，然后提出解决方法。此类型的论说文重心在解决问题上，但有时题目中

也

要求对问题产生的原因或引起的严重后果做相应的描述，所以审题时，要注意弄清作文段落间的合理比例。

1.写作结构指导

问题陈述।'分析（原因/后果）'问题解决）结论（期望/展望）

2.常用句型

问题陈述

.Recently/Nowadays,...hasbecomeaseriousproblemwehavetoface.

......thephenomenon...hasarousedthepublic'sconcern.

.Thereisnodenyingthat...hasbecomeaseriousconcernamongpeople.

分析（原因/后果）

.Thereareseveralreasonsfortheproblem.

.Thereareavarietyoffactorscontributingtothephenomenon.

问题解决

.Peoplehavefiguredoutmanywaystosolvetheproblem.

.Itishightimethatweshouldfigure/figuredoutwaystodealwiththeproblem.

结论（期望/展望）

.Withthejointefforts,Iamconfidentthat...

.Aslongaswewewillresolvetheproblemeventually.

词汇表达积累:

1.问题描述：

①Recently/Nowadays,（问题或现象）hasbecomeaseriousproblemwehavetoface.

②（问题或现象）thephenomenon...hasarousedthepublic'sconcern.

③Thereisnodenyingthat（问题或现象）hasbecomeaseriousconcernamongpeople.

3.问题原因：

①原因简述:Obviously,（问题或现象）istheresultof...（原因）

②原因详述：Thereareseveralreasonsforthe..../Thereareavarietyoffactorscontributingtothe....（罗列原因）

4.解决措施：

①FromwhereIstand,Istronglyinsistthatyoutakefollowingmeasurestotackle/solve/dealwiththeproblem

immediately.

②Peoplehavefiguredoutmanywaystosolvetheproblem.

③Itishightimethatweshouldfigure/figuredoutwaystodealwiththeproblem.

（罗列措施）

结论（期望/展望）

①Withthejointefforts,Iamconfidentthat...

②Aslongaswewewillresolvetheproblemeventually.

（期望对方采取建议解决问题）Theresidentswouldappreciateitifyoucouldtaketheadviceaboveaswellasany

other

effectivemeasures.

（期望及时回复）Lookingforwardtoyourpromptresponse.

>要点三：说明利弊型

此题型是要求针对某一事物或现象从正反两面分析其优缺点，然后表明作者对该事物或现象的看法。

1.写作结构指导

描述某事物或现象陈述该事物或现象的优缺点—►表明我的态度或看法

2.常用句型

陈述该事物或现象的优点

.Thereareseveraladvantagesin...Thefirst/biggestadvantageisthat...

.Theadvantagesof...canbelistedasfollows.First...Besides...

....isplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinpeople'slife.Foronething,...Foranother,...

陈述该事物或现象的缺点

.However,...justlikeanythingelse,hasitsnegativesideaswell.

.Inthemeanwhile,wecannotignorethedisadvantagesof...

.However,thenegativeaspectsof...arealsoapparent/evident/obvious.Tobeginwith,...Tomakematters

worse,...Worstofall,...

.Inspiteof/Despitetheadvantages/beneficialsides,ithasitscomprehensivedisadvantages/sideeffects.

表明个人态度或看法（利大于弊）

.Astome,Ithinktheadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages...

.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iholdthat...hasmoreadvantagesthandisadvantages.

.Personally,Ithinkwhatismoreimportantisitspositiveside.

词汇表达积累：

1.Withtheincreasingpopularityof（事物），thereare（事物相关的现象）

2.（利）Somepeoplebelievethat,comparedwith...（事物）bringsus...andhelpsus...

（弊）However,othersholdadifferentattitudetowards（事物）Theythinkitwilltakemorerisksdoing...Forexample,

（举出弊端的事例）

AsfarasIamconcerned,（事物）isunderconstructionnow.

总结段落（客观看待）：Weshouldtakeadevelopingviewabout（事物）

Despite（弊）itisobviouslyhelpfultosb.（利）as...

【柒网剧析】

（2019上海高考英语作文）

假如你是李敏，在一本英文旅游杂志上，你发现了这样一条信息：某古城景区对当地人收费5美元，对外国人

收费15美元，针对这一情况，请你以李敏的口吻给该杂志编辑写一封信，具体要求如下：

1.介绍一下你在杂志上看到的内容；

2.针对此事自己的态度以及理由。

第一步：列提纲

第一段：

背景：_____________________________________________________________________________

观点：____________________________________________________________________________

参考思路：

背景：chargedomestictourists5dollarswhileforeigners15dollars

观点：unfair,thepriceforticketsshouldbefair

第二段：

理由：1,__________________________________________________________________________

2____________________________________________________________________________

3,_________________________________________________________________________

参考思路：1,itattractsmoretourists,maketravelingthrive;

2,bringjobsandconsumption,improveeconomy;

2,protecttheoldhistoryanddisplaytheancientcity;

第三段：总结（对观点的升华）

总结：______________________________________________________________________________

参考,思路：notonlyimprovetourismbutalsoprotecttheancientcity

第二步：思考主体段落的思路拓展：

第一式：____________________________________________________________________________

第二式：_____________________________________________________________________________

第一式：分析原因：overseatouristswillbemorewillingtotravelhere

第二式：分析结果：theimproveconsumptionandincreasedjobswillbenefiteconomy

第三步：组织成句子

第一段：______________________________________________________________________________________

参考思路：

背景句：theticketpricesoftheancientcityfordomestictouristsisat5dollarswhile15dollarsforoverseasguests.

观点句：Istronglyadvocatetheequalfareandmyreasonsareasfollows.

第二段：

First：___________________________________________________________________________________

What'smore：______________________________________________________________________________________

Lastbutnotleast:__________________________________________________________________________________

参考思路：

Firstly,manyforeignersarewillingtovisittheancientcitybutwillfeeldiscriminatedanddrawbackwhenbeing

chargedhigherpricethanthelocal,fairpricecanobviouslyattractmoretourists,winningusaseatintheincreasing

competitivetravelingmarket.

Whafsmore,moretouristsbringmoreconsumptionandmorejobs,which,withoutdoubt,willmakelocal

economythrive.

Another,researcherswillhavemoremoneydeeply-exploringthehistoryoftheancientcityanddisplaytheold

dayswithnewtechnology.Therefore,wecanappreciatethepastbeautifulsceneryoftheancientcity.

第三段：______________________________________________________________________________________

BasedonwhatIstatedabove,thefairpricewillbenefitmoretouristsandtourisms.Notonlyitattractsmoretouristsbut

alsodisplaysitsbeautifulscenery.Whatmattersmostisthatithasacomprehensiveinfluenceonourpresentdaysand

constructsnewrelationshipbetweenhumansandtheenvironmentofancientcity.

第四步：成文

DearEditor,

Asanhonestreaderofyourtravelmagazine,itisapitytoreadthenewsthattheticketpricesofanancientcityfor

domestictouristsareat5dollarswhile15dollarsforoverseasguests.Iamwritingtostronglyadvocatetheequalfare

andmyreasonsareasfollows.

Firstly,manyforeignersarewillingtovisittheancientcitybutwillfeeldiscriminatedanddrawbackwhenbeing

chargedhigherpricethanthelocal.fairpricecanobviouslyattractmoretourists,winningusaseatintheincreasing

competitivetravelingmarket.What'smore,moretouristsbringmoreconsumptionandmorejobs,which,withoutdoubt,

willmakelocaleconomythrive.Another,researcherswillhavemoremoneydeeply-exploringthehistoryoftheancient

cityanddisplaytheolddayswithnewtechnology.Therefore,wecanappreciatethepastbeautifulsceneryofthe

ancientcity.

BasedonwhatIstatedabove,notonlywillthefairpricebenefitmoretouristsbutalsohaveacomprehensive

influenceonourpresentdayseverlastingdevelopmentoflocaleconomyandtourism,constructingnewrelationship

betweenhumansandtheenvironmentofancientcity.

Iwillhighlyappreciateitifyoucanreplytomeassoonaspossible!

Yourfaithfully,

LiMin

句式总结：

1,Asanhonestreaderofyourtravelmagazine

2,1amwritingtostronglyadvocatetheequalfareandmyreasonsareasfollows.

3,fairpricecanobviouslyattractmoretourists,winningusaseatintheincreasingcompetitivetravelingmarket.

4,which,withoutdoubt,willmakelocaleconomythrive.

5,BasedonwhatIstatedabove,...

6,notonlywillthefairpricebenefitmoretouristsbutalsohaveacomprehensiveinfluenceon...

做命被】

（2020上海高考英语作文）

你是明启中学高三学生李华，你想邀请王磊参加下周五郊外得露天音乐会，但王磊由于路远、交通不便等原因

犹豫不决，请你写封邮件给小王，说服他一起去，信的内容包括：

（1）提出解决问题的方法/措施

（2）阐释音乐会的重要性/音乐会值得欣赏的理由

01

题目综述

今年的高考作文题，基本延续了近年来上海高考英语作文的出题方式。

作文话题以生活情境形式出现，同时需要借助信件写作的模式来表达自己的一些看法和建议。

02

审题要点

①今年高考的话题依旧是围绕着同学们身边的生活来展开。同时也需要联想一些细节来展开自己的描写。

例如，面对一场露天音乐会，同学们在实际生活中应该不会陌生，但是关于露天音乐会的场景，有哪些有意思

的方面，这需要大家在平时的生活中留意观察。

考试中时间有限，但是如果能够展开合理的联想，这对大家写作非常有帮助。

②写作套用了近年来常用的信件套路，结合了实际生活的需要。这个和我们高考越发贴近实际生活场景这个大

的方向是保持一致的。

信件写作的基本格式和结构需要所有同学都能够熟练掌握。(见下文)

③本质上来看，这依旧是一篇议论文。高中英语写作中，议论文的写作同学们务必掌握清楚。细细读来，这篇

文章看似是在帮同学解决心中疑虑。如果落入这个陷阱，说明同学们在审题方面没有看透本质。其实这篇文章

抓住议论文这个核心结构就可以了

03

实用结构

信件写作的基本框架

Greeting:

Useanappropriategreeting(DearMr/Miss/Mrs/Ms...+lastname,orDear+firstname)

Openingparagraph:

Usesetphrasetobeginyourletterandsaywhyyouarewriting(Howareyoudoing?Itwasnicetohearfromyou...etc)

Mainpart:

Thecontentofyourwriting

Closingparagraph:

Stateanythingyouwanttoemphasize.

Usesetphrasestoendyourletter

Signatureendings:

Yours,allthebest,bestwishes...

议论文的基本框架

Introduction：

Brieflyintroducethetopicyou'regoingtodiscuss.

Sayhowyoufeelabout.

Mainpart:(twoparagraphs)

Choosetwomainaspectsoftheissueandwriteoneparagraphoneach.

Explainyourideas/points,andgiveexamplesifpossible.

Conclusion:

Sumupbystatingyouroverallopinion.

同学们只要把这两个框架融汇起来合理使用，就是本文的基本大纲。

04

参考范文1:

DearWangLei,

It'sbeenawhilesinceIheardfromyou.Lasttime,Iinvitedyoutoattendtheconcertwhichwillbeheldnext

Fridayinthecenturypark.Thoughyoudidnotreplytome,thehesitationwearingonyourfaceofferedmeaglimpseof

whatwasgoingoninyourmind.Maybeitistherecentghastlyweatherortheterribletrafficthathinderyoufrom

makingupyourmind.However,asfarasIconcerned,it'sstillworthourefforts.

Thisconcertisnotapopmusicconcertbutaclassicmusiconewhereseveralprestigioussymphonyorchestras

willperformmanywell-knowncompositions.Itmustbeafeastforalltheaudience.Moreover,chancesarethatwemay

haveanalbumwithperformers?autographsonit.Youshouldnevermisssuchafabulousconcert!

Intermsofdifficultiesyouareworriedabout,Ihavealreadyfoundsomesolutions.Myfatherwillbeavailableon

thatdaysothathecandriveustothescene.Ihavemanagedtopersuadehimtomakehispromise.Inaddition,incase

ofarainyday,Ihavepreparedtworaincoats.Iamconfidentthatwewillindulgeourselvesintotheelegantflowof

notes.

Iamlookingforwardtohearingyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

参考范文2：

DearWangLei,

I'mLiHua.Havingsentyouaninvitationtoanoutdoorconcertforsomedays,Ihaven'treceivedyourreply.Are

youstillhesitanttomakeadecisionjustbecausetheconcertwillbeheldintheoutersuburbwhichisnotsoaccessible

topublictransportation?

Honestlyspeaking,transportproblemisreallynotabigdeal.Wecandefinitelyfindawayout.Ifpossible,Ican

askmyfathertodrivemetotheconcert,andcertainlywecanpickyouupaslongasyoumakeupyourmindtogo

therewithus.Inthiscase,thereisnoneedtoworryaboutthetraffic.

Totellyouthetruth,asamusicloverlikeyouandme,thisoutdoorconcertisreallyworthgoingto.Haveyouseen

itspublicitymaterials?ItreadsthatpopsingerslikeCheerChenandmusicbandslikeEscapePlanwillalsoperformat

thisconcert,wheremusicians,singers,songwriters,musicbandsandmusicloverslikeuswillcontributetoandenjoya

feastofmusictogether.What'smore,asseniorthreestudentswhohavejustfinishedthecollegeentrance

examination,wearedesperateforachancetorelaxourselvesandrelieveourenormouspressure,andthisconcert

providesuswithagoldenopportunitytoimmerseourselvesinourpurejoyformusicandridourselvesoftheheavy

academicburdens.Therefore,donothesitate,joinmeintheconcertandlet'shavefuntogether.

SincetheoutdoorconcertistobeheldnextFriday,couldyoupleasetellmeyourfinaldecisionbeforetheendof

thisweek?Reallylookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Thanks.(285words)

Yours,

LiHua.

j优选林缀

演练1:（2021•上海市徐汇中学高三期中）

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假设你班班长打算在寒假组织一次班级活动，现有三种方案：一、慈善义卖帮助家庭有困难的同学；二、聘请

英语专家介绍有效的学习方法；三、组织一次班级新年派对。

作为班级的一员，请你根据你的实际情况，在三项方案中选择其中一项，提出对该项活动的建议并谈谈理由。

你的写作中必须包括：

■在三项方案中选择其中一项;

•对该方案提出建议；

•谈谈你提出该建议的理由。

【参考答案】

Recently,aheatedtopicofourclassisthatwehavetochooseonebestamongthreedifferentactivities,including

charitysaletohelpstudentswithfamiliesintrouble,invitingEnglishexpertstointroduceeffectivelearningmethods

andholdingaNewYearPartyinourwinterholiday.Afteracarefulconsideration,theproposaltoholdaNewYear

Partyearnsmyfavor.

Severalsuggestionsaboutthepartyarelistedasfollows.Firstly,clearandabsorbingthememustbesettled.Only

withaspecifictheme,canweeventuallyworkoutthesuitableactivitiesanddecorations.Besides,aproperschedule

andanamelistarenecessary.Inotherwords,whentoholdthepartyandwhowillattenditaresuretomakeabig

differenceinitsevolvingpurpose.Lastbutnotleast,abouttheexpense,anyamountofmoneywespendshallbelisted,

throughwhichwecanbettercontrolthewholeprocessandmaketheFulluseoftheresourceswehave.

Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove,ifallthesesuggestionscanbeearnedoutstrictly,itisnosuiprisethatour

NewYearPartywillleaveadeepimpressiononeveryone.

【思路点拨】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生从班长提出的三个班级活动方案中选出一个，针对选出的方案提出建议并

给出理由。

【精准解析】

I.词汇积累

一个热门话题：aheatedtopic—>ahottopic

获得J’我的喜爱：earnmyfavor—>isfavorable

吸引人的主题：absorbingtheme-attractivetheme

并且：besides—»what,smore

2.句式拓展

简单句变复杂句

原句：Onlywithaspecifictheme,canweeventuallyworkoutthesuitableactivitiesanddecorations.

拓展句：Ifwehaveaspecifictheme,wecaneventuallyworkoutthesuitableactivitiesanddecorations.

【名师指导】

【高分句型I]whentoholdthepartyandwhowillattenditaresuretomakeabigdifferenceinitsevolvingpuipose.

（运用了who引导的主语从句）

【高分句型2]Lastbutnotleast,abouttheexpense,anyamountofmoneywespendshallbelisted,throughwhichwe

canbettercontrolthewholeprocessandmakethefulluseoftheresourceswehave.（运用了介词+which引导的的非

限制性定语从句）

演练2:（2021♦上海♦复旦附中高三月考）

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowin

Chinese.

假设你是明启中学高一学生李明，最近你校英语报正在开展"TheelectronicdevicethatImusttakewhiletravelling1'

的征文活动。

你对此话题很感兴趣，写一篇文章，内容须包括：

1）你在旅游途中一定携带的电子设备；

2）你的理由。

【参考答案】

Nowadays,withtherapiddevelopmentofelectronictechnology,ourtraveljourneyisbecomingmoreandmore

colorful.Electronicdeviceslikecomputers,cellphones,andiPadsarefillingourtimeonhigh-speedtrainsorplanes.

Personally,thereisanotherelectronicdevicethatIwilldefinitelytakewithmeontheroad,andthatispowerbank.

Firstly,powerbankissmallinsizeandcanbecarriedaround.Todaymoreandmorepeopleprefertotakephotos

withmobilephonesinsteadofcamerasbecauseitisimportanttobelightlyequippedwhentravelling,sopowerbank

canhelpavoidtheembarrassingmomentwhentheywanttorecordgoodmomentsbuttheirphonessuddenlyrunoutof

power.Powerbankisclearlyaportableandversatileelectronicdevice.

Secondly,forlongdistancetravel,powerbank,canchargemymobilephoneintimesoastoavoidnotreplyingto

messagestimelyduetothesuddendeathofthebattery.IrememberoncewhenIwasonthetraintoNanjing,mymobile

phonewasalmostoutofpowerwhenIwasabouttoarriveatthestation.Fortunately,thepowerbankIcarriedwasa

timelyhelp,otherwiseImightnotbeabletocontactmyfriendinNanjingtopickmeup.Therefore,powerbankisan

electronicdevicethatIwillcarrywithmenomatterIamtravelingorgoingout.

Finally,thesecurityofpowerbankistrustworthy.Thecurrentpowerbankgenerallyhasthefunctionsofcharge

control,chargeprotectionanddischargeprotection,sowhenchargingourmobilephonesoriPads,wedon'tneedto

worryaboutexcessivecharging.Inaddition,thecurrentpowerbankcapacityishigh,whichmeansitcancharge

differentelectronicdevicesatthesametime.

Forme,powerbankisoneofthegreatestinventionsintheageofscienceandtechnology.Ifeelmoresecureand

convenientwhentravelingwithit.

【思路点拨】

本篇书面表达属于夹叙夹议文，要求假设你是明启中学高一学生李明，最近你校英语报正在开展“Theelectronic

devicethatImusttakewhiletravelling”的征文活动。你对此话题很感兴趣，写一篇文章，内容须包括：1）你在旅

游途中一定携带的电子设备；2）你的理由。

【精准解析】

词汇积累

有趣的：colorful—>interesting

就我个人而言：personally—>asfarasI'mconcerned

避免：avoid—prevent...from...

可靠的：trustworthy—reliable

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Nowadays,withtherapiddevelopmentofelectronictechnology,ourtraveljourneyisbecomingmoreandmore

colorful.

拓展句：Now,electronictechnologyhasdeveloped,whichmakesourtraveljourneybecomemoreandmorecolorful.

【名师指导】

[高分句型1]Personally,thereisanotherelectronicdevicethatIwilldefinitelytakewithmeontheroad,andthatis

powerbank.（运用了that引导的定语从句）

［高分句型2JInaddition,thecurrentpowerbankcapacityishigh,whichmeansitcanchargedifferentelectronic

devicesatthesametime.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

演练3:（2021•上海奉贤区致远高级中学高三月考）

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假如你是明启中学的学生李明，你的学校打算引入机器人，担任食堂服务员/图书管理员，在学校贴吧发帖，

你很感兴趣，决定回帖响应，你所写的内容应包括：

1.你认为机器人适合担任的一个岗位，二选一。

2.阐述选择的理由。

【参考答案】

Dearheadmaster,

SoappealingisyourplantointroducearobottoourschoolthatIdecidetorespondtoyouraskingforproposals.

Frommyperspective,arobotismoresuitableforthepositionoflibrarian.

Withregardtotherangeofservice,alibrarianneedsnotonlytoclassifybooks,butalsoputandfindtheminthe

rightorderontherightshelf,whilebeingawaiterinvolvesservingtherightdishestotherighttable,doingsome

cleaningandsoon.Arobotcanaccomplishthreeorfourlibrarians'workofsortingandlabelingbooksatthesame

time.

Intermsofworkingefficiency,arobotmaybemoreefficientindoingtheprogrammedmechanicalandepetitive

kindofwork.Therefore,itismoreadvisablefortherobottoundertakethedutiesofalibrariangroupingcountless

booksrepeatedly.

Inanutshell,itisthemechanicalworkofalibrarianthattherobotismorecompetentat.Hopethatmyadvicewill

beofgreathelptoyourdecision.

Yours,

Wanglei

【思路点拨】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在学校贴吧发帖，就学校打算引入机器人担任食堂服务员或者图书管理员

给出建议，并阐述理由。

【精准解析】

1.词汇积累

吸引人的：叩pealingTattractive

建议：proposal—>suggestion

关于：withregardto—*concerning

分类：classify—*categorize

2.句式拓展

变倒装句

原句：Withregardtotherangeofservice,alibrarianneedsnotonlytoclassifybooks,butalsoputandfindtheminthe

rightorderontherightshelf...

拓展句：Withregardtotherangeofservice,notonlydoesalibrarianneedtoclassifybooks,butalsohe/sheputsand

findsthemintherightorderontherightshelf...

【名师指导】

[高分句型1]SoappealingisyourplantointroducearobottoourschoolthatIdecidetorespondtoyouraskingfor

proposals.（运用了so…that句型，和倒装句）

【高分句型2]Withregardtotherangeofservice,alibrarianneedsnotonlytoclassifybooks,butalsoputandfind

themintherightorderontherightshelf,whilebeingawaiterinvolvesservingtherightdishestotherighttable,doing

somecleaningandsoon.（运用了并列连词while引，动名词作主语和宾语）

[高分句型3]Therefore,itismoreadvisablefortherobottoundertakethedutiesofalibrariangroupingcountless

booksrepeatedly.（运用了it形式主语，不定式作真正的主语）

一略您於迹

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【上海市奉贤区奉城高级中学2022-2023学年高三上学期期中考试英语试题】

假如你是明启中学的李华。你们学校即将开展英语周主题活动，提出以下几个活动方案，向全校征集意见。请

你写一封信给学生会，选择一种活动，并说明选择它的理由。

你的信须包括：1.描述这个活动的相关信息：

2.通过与其他两种活动的比较说明你选择的理由。

活动内容参与人员时间评价方式

英语主题演讲比

教师推荐（每班2人）2022年11月16日下午教师当场打分

赛

发布到学校公众号公开投

英语短视频比赛全员可参加（个人或组队）2022年11月7日~11月21日

票

英语主题写作比

全员可参加（独立完成）2022年11月23日下午教师与学生代表共同评分

赛

【答案】DearSir/Madam,

Recently,hearingthatourschoolwillholdsomeactivitiestoimproveourinterestinEnglishlearning,whichinclude

EnglishSpeechContest,EnglishShortVideoCompetitionandEnglishWritingCompetition,Ichoosetoparticipateinthe

EnglishShortVideoCompetition.

EnglishShortVideoCompetitionwillbeheldfromNovember7toNovember21,2022.Allstudentscanparticipate

inthecompetitionindividuallyorinateam.Theworkswillbepublishedtotheschoofsofficialaccountandtheywillbe

votedpublicly.

Comparedwiththeothertwoactivities,theEnglishShortVideoCompetitioncanstimulatestudents'creativityand

improvetheirteamworkability.Besides,thewayofpublicvotingismorefairandequitable.

Therefore,IwillchoosetheEnglishShortVideoCompetition.Ibelievethatthisactivitywillbewelcomedbythe

students.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学生会写一封信，选择一种你喜欢的英语周主题活动，并说明

选择它的理由。

【详解】1.词汇积累

参力口：participatein—takepartin

激发：stimulate—carouse

此外：besides—>what,smore

因此：therefore-thus

2.句式拓展

简单句变复合句

原句：Comparedwiththeothertwoactivities,theEnglishShortVideoCompetitioncanstimulatestudents'creativityand

improvetheirteamworkability.

拓展句：Comparedwiththeothertwoactivities,theEnglishShortVideoCompetitioncanstimulatestudents5creativity

andimprovetheirteamworkability,whichisbeneficialtoourfutureworkandstudy.

【点睛】【高分句型1]Recently,hearingthatourschoolwillholdsomeactivitiestoimproveourinterestinEnglish

learning,whichincludeEnglishSpeechContest,EnglishShortVideoCompetitionandEnglishWritingCompetition,I

choosetoparticipateintheEnglishShortVideoCompelition.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）

[2]Ibelievethatthisactivitywillbewelcomedbythestudents.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）

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[上海市建平中学2022-2023学年高三上学期期中教学质量检测英语试题】

假设你是汇文中学的李星，你很想成为一名美食评论员（foodcritic）,学校校报主编给你布置了一个任务一一针

对你校周围新开的一家中餐馆，写一篇餐馆评论（review）。你的文章应含有以下内容：

•你的用餐经历；（可以提到食物质量，用餐环境，服务态度等方面）

•你是否会推荐该餐馆。

【答案】TodayIwouldliketointroduceanewChineserestauranttoyou,whichiscalledShikeandislocatednear

Huiwenhighschool.Ifyougothere,youwillalwayswanttoeatthere.It'sattractivetousstudentsfbrfourreasons.

Firstofall,it'sdecoratedinaspecialwayand