绵阳暑期培训学校培训材料书面表达样本

灵活运用高档表达方式提高高考英语书面表达得分近年来，高考英语书面表达评分原则规定。考生必要使用比较高档表达方式方能获取高分，而不少考生只会用构造简朴句子来表达文意，写出来文章得分就低。因而，同窗们应在平时书面表达训练中多练习使用高档表达方式，才干在高考英语书面表达中获得高分。一、什么是高档表达方式普通说来，如果一篇书面表达通篇都是单一主谓宾构造简朴句，表达效果就比较差。各种复合句、特殊句式(倒装句、强调句、感叹句、suchas列举句型等)和带过渡性插入语句子普通难度大、语境逻辑强、表达效果好，是普遍承认高档表达方式，也是高考英语书面表达与否能获取高分重要根据同窗们在写英语书面表达时应依照表达需要有选取地使用这些高档表达方式。二、掌握简朴表达方式转化高档表达方式办法简朴表达方式可以转化成高档表达方式，并且转换难度也不是很大，由于高档表达方式也是在简朴表达方式基本上构成。下面简介几种将简朴表达方式转化为高档表达方式办法。1．将两个简朴句合并为一种由which引导非限制性定语从句。which在非限制性定语从句中代表主句内容，从句可由两个简朴句之一改造而成。例1：近来许多中学生乱花钱，关于这一点不同人有不同看法。简朴句：Recentlymanymiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirmoneyonunnecessarythings.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutit.高档表达方式：例2：许多男孩学抽烟，这对身体有危害。简朴句：Manyboyslearntosmoke.Itdoesharmtotheirhealth.高档表达方式：2．在表达观点陈述句前加过渡性插入语。某些表达观点陈述句前加上inmyopinion，frommypointofview，personallyspeaking，asfarasIknow，asfarasI'mconcerned，asweallknow，asisknowntoall等插入语之后往往使句式更丰满，逻辑更严密，说理更充分，从而增强了文章表达效果。例1：简朴句：WeshouldnotspendtoomuchtimeinsurfingtheInternet.咱们不应当花太多时间上网。高档表达方式：Inmyopinion，weshouldnotspendtoomuchtimeinsurfingtheInternet.我以为咱们不应当花太多时间上网。例2：简朴句：Takingexercisedoesgoodtoourhealth.锻炼对健康有好处。高档表达方式：Asweallknow／Asisknowntoall，takingexercisedoesgoodtoourhealth.众所周知，锻炼对健康有好处。例3：简朴句：Maryisanhonestandkindgirl.玛丽是一种诚实善良女孩。高档表达方式：AsfarasIknow，Maryisanhonestandkindgirl.就我所知，玛丽是一种诚实善良女孩。3．在两个简朴句之间加上过渡性词汇。为使两个简朴句之间逻辑更严密，过渡更自然，可在其间加上过渡性词汇。例1：雨下得很大，咱们只得呆在旅馆里。简朴句：Itrainedheavily.Wehadtostayatthehotel.高档表达方式：Itrainedheavily；asaresult，wehadtostayatthehotel.例2：我买了某些时装，又去看了一种精彩表演。简朴句：Iboughtsomefashionableclothes.Iwenttoseeawonderfulperformance.高档表达方式：Iboughtsomefashionableclothes；，Iwenttoseeawonderfulperformance.例3：我在火车站迷了路，天也徐徐地暗了。简朴句：Iwaslostatthestation.Itwasgettingdark.高档表达方式：Iwaslostatthestation；，itwasgettingdark.4．将两个简朴句合并为并列句。两个简朴句分别表达会令句子读起来缺少连贯性和逻辑性，而加上并列连词改导致并列句后逻辑严密得多，句式也高档得多。例1：这道题太难了，我解不出来。简朴句：Thisproblemistoodifficult.Ican’tworkitout.高档表达方式：例2：我想买这辆自行车，却没有足够钱。简朴句：Iwanttobuythisbike.Idon’thaveenoughmoney.高档表达方式：Iwanttobuythisbike，butIdon'thaveenoughmoney.5．将两个简朴句合并为复合句。两个简朴句加上从属连词可合并成主从复合句，这是增强语境逻辑、提高表达档次好办法。例1：我没有带钱。没能当作那场电影。简朴句：Ididn’ttakeanymoney.Icouldn’tseethatfilm.高档表达方式：BecauseIdidn’ttakeanymoney，Icouldn’tseethefilm.例2：你不早点出发就不能及时到达。简朴句：Youdon’tstartearly.Youcan’tgetthereintime.高档表达方式：Ifyoudon’tstartearly，youcan’tgetthereintime.6．将陈述句改为感叹句。陈述句构造平凡、语调平缓，而转换为感叹句后句式变新颖，语调变强烈，表达档次明显得到提高。例1：陈述句：Topreventthepollutionisveryimportant．防止污染很重要。高档表达方式：防止污染多重要啊!例2：陈述句：Sheisaclevergirl．她是一种聪颖女孩。高档表达方式：她是一种多么聪颖女孩啊!7．将陈述句改为倒装句。陈述句改成倒装句后构造新颖、情感浓烈，表达效果明显增强。例1：直到太阳落山咱们才离开那个村庄。陈述句：Wedidn’tleavethevillageuntilthesunset.高档表达方式：例2：那时我几乎不懂英语重要性。陈述句：IcouldhardlyunderstandtheimportanceofEnglishatthattime.高档表达方式：8．将简朴句改为强调句。简朴句改为强调句后语调更强烈、感情更充沛，是不可多得高档表达方式。例l：抽烟对她身体导致了伤害。简朴句：Smokingdidgreatharmtohishealth.高档表达方式：例2：咱们钱是父母辛苦挣来。简朴句：Ourmoneyisearnedthroughhardworkbyourparents.高档表达方式：9．将普通性列举句子改为suchas列举句型。普通性列举句子只起到罗列事实作用，而suchas列举句型除具备列举功能之外，其对称构造也能增强表达效果。例1：晚会上将有唱歌、跳舞、做游戏等节目。普通性列举句子：Thepartywillincludesinging，dancingandplayinggames.高档表达方式：Therewillbeafewprogramsattheparty，suchassinging，dancingandplayinggames.例2：咱们将参观长城、颐和园、紫禁城等名胜古迹。普通性列举句子：TheplacesofinterestwewillvisitaretheGreatWall，theSummerPalaceandtheForbiddenCity，etc。高档表达方式：Wewillvisitseveralplacesofinterest，suchastheGreatWall，theSummerPalaceandtheForbiddenCity.三、增强使用高档表达方式意识掌握了简朴表达方式转化高档表达方式办法，并不意味着在写作时一定能用上，只有增强使用高档表达方式意识，养成使用高档表达方式习惯，才干保证在写作时自然贴切地用上。典型句式模板1．Itgoeswitoutsayingthat(不言而喻).2.Whatreallycountisnot…but…真正重要不是…而是…仿写：03Whatreallycountisnothowfashionableyouarebutwhetheryoupossessagreatamountofknowledge，anoblecharacterandawarmheart.仿写：05Whatreallycountisnothowtalentedyouare，buthowperseveringyouare.仿写：06Whatreallycountisnottheconditionitprovides，butthereputationtheuniversitygets.3.Greateffortsshouldbemadeto….Onlyby…canweenableourcountrytotakethestrongpositionamongthepoweroftheworld.仿写：03ThusIsuggetthatgreateffortsshouldbemadetobethepersonthesocietyneeds,.Onlybydoingsocanyoudefinitelyenableyourselftobecomeashappyasyouusedtobe.仿写：05AsfarasIamconcerned，greateffortsshouldbemadetobuildyourconfidenceandperseveranc.Onlybydoingsocanyoudefinitelyenableourselvetotakethestrongpositioninourlife.仿写：06SinceImadeupmymind，greateffortsshouldbemadetorealizemydream.AndonlybyworkinghardcanIdefinitelyenablemyselftotakethestrongpositionamongmypeers.高考书面表达惯用高档句式1.Therebe(exist，live，lie，stand…)sb./sth.2.sb.have(has/had)sth.3.sb.find/think/feel+it+n./adj.+(forsb.)todosth.Wethinkitourdutytoworkhard.Shefindsitnecessarytotakedownnoteswhilelistening.Theyfeelitimportanttohavesomeworkingexperience.4.~themost+形容词+名词+(that)+主词+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read…HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen.Mr.ChangisthekindestteacherthatIhaveeverhad.5、Nothingis+more+形容词+thanto+VNothingismoreimportantthantoreceiveeducation.没有比接受教诲更重要事。6、~cannotemphasizetheimportanceof~toomuch.（再怎么强调...重要性也不为过Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch.7、Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V...（不可否认...）Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourlivinghavegonefrombadtoworse.Thereisnotdenyingthatsuccessfulbusinessliesinahealthybodyandmind.8、Itisuni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Step1．仔细审题Step2.理清要点Step3.译写单句Step4.连句成篇Step5.检查润色Step1．仔细审题Step2.理清要点Step3.译写单句Step4.连句成篇Step5.检查润色Step6.定稿抄写范例：题目：依照如下提示，用英语写一篇简介香港短文，字数100字左右。香港位于中华人民共和国东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。1842年鸦片战争后，当时中华人民共和国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。1997年她已回到祖国怀抱，其前景会更美好。参照词汇：明珠pearl[pə:l]，鸦片opium

[əupiəm]第一步：仔细审题本文属阐明性文章。第二步：理清要点1、香港地理位置、面积和人口。2、鸦片战争后香港处境。3、1997年她回到祖国怀抱。4、其前景会更美好。第三步：译写单句香港位于中华人民共和国东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.Herareais1,045k㎡.Herpopulationismorethan6million.Sheiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.1842年鸦片战争后，当时中华人民共和国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。ShewasgivenuptoBritainafterthe1842OpiumWar.1997年她已回到祖国怀抱，其前景会更美好。In1997，shereturnedtomotherland.Herfutureisverybeautiful.第四步：连句成篇HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.Herareais1,045k㎡and(←.Her)populationismorethan6million.Sheiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.ShewasgivenuptoBritainafterthe1842OpiumWar.In1997，shereturnedtomotherlandand(←.Her)futureisverybeautiful.第五步：检查润色1HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof(←Herareais)1,045k㎡and(←.Her)hasapopulationofmorethan6million(←populationismorethan6million).Sheiswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842,ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernmentafterthe1842OpiumWar，andthepeopleinHongKonglivedahardlife.In1997，shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareandwillbeworkinghardtomakehermorebeautiful.(←.Herfutureisverybeautiful.)第五步：检查润色2HongKongliesinthesoutheastofChina.shehasanareaof1,045k㎡andhasapopulationofmorethan6millionand(←.She)iswell-knownas“thePearloftheEast”.In1842，thethenChinesegovernmentwasforcedtogiveupHongKongtoBritain(←ShewasgivenuptoBritainbythethenChinesegovernment)aftertheOpiumWar，andthepeopleinHongKongsufferedalot(←livedahardlife).AfterthereturnofHongKongtoChinain1997(←In1997，shereturnedtomotherlandandthepeopleofHongKongareand)，thepeopleofHongKongareunitedmorewiththeChinesepeopleinmainlandChina，andtheywillworkhard