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SnowhadjustmeltedoffthegroundthatAprildayatourhouseinReginaBeach,Saskatchewan.Ihadjustcleanedupthepoolinpreparationforsellingthehouse.Theyearbefore,Ihadlostmyjobwiththeprovincialgovernment,andnowourfinancialsituationwasgrim.Indespair,Ihadfinallyputthehomeonthemarket,andarealestateagentwasduetoshowuplaterthatday.Evenworse,IwouldhavetogiveupmybelovedGreatDane(大丹犬),Brigitte,becauseIcouldnolongeraffordthecostoffeedingit.ThethoughtoflosingthedogandourbeautifulhomewasalmostmorethanIcouldbear.

Deepindespair,Isattypingupresumesandcoverletters.OutofthecornerofmyeyeIcouldseemythirteen-month-oldson,Forrest,ashelayonthecarpet,playingnearourbig,gentlenanny-dog,Brigitte.ItseemedasifBrigittewasalwaysmeanttobeinthisfamilyandsheturnedouttobeaperfectcompanion.

BrigittecametoourhouseonChristmasevewhenthedoorbellrangandIwassuresomeofmyChristmaspackageshadarrived.Irantothedoorandswungitopen,butnoonewasthere.Isensedsomethingandlookeddown,onlytofindabeautifulGreatDanesittingthere,lookingupatmewithbig,intelligenteyes.Therewasnowaythatshecouldhaverungthedoorbellbyherself,wasthere?Perhaps,someonehadfoundthepuppysomewhereandleftherthere,andthenrangthedoorbellandranaway.TheyaccuratelyguessedIwouldwelcomeanadditionalfamilymemberandtakecareofher.

Thinkingofthese,Icouldn’thelpheavingasighandwentstraightbacktowork.However,Ihadn’ttypedmorethantwosentenceswhenBrigittebeganbarkingfuriouslyandrunningbackandforthtotheslidingglassdooroverlookingourpool.

Iracedtoseewhatwashappeningandnoticedthattheslidingdoorwasslightlyopen.Suddenly,IrealizedForrestwasnowheretobeseen.Inpanic,Iopenedthedoorandranoutside.注意：1.

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ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwasallrightandcouldbereleasedfromhospital.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________2【前文分析】

本文以故事为线索展开，讲述了作者失业时经济紧张，不得不卖掉房子并放弃爱犬，绝望之中作者一边打简历和求职信一边从眼角余光看着13个月大的儿子和温柔的大狗布丽吉特玩耍，后来孩子不慎掉进了水里，爱犬把孩子救了的故事。3【续写框架】1.段落续写:①由第一段首句内容“在那里，我惊讶地看到害怕水的布丽吉特跳进了游泳池。”可知，第一段可描写Forrest掉进水里，布丽吉特跳进水里救起了他，以及作者的感受并赶紧把儿子送去了医院。②由第二段首句内容“最后，医生说福雷斯特没事，可以出院了。”可知，第二段可描写回家后狗和作者的儿子友好相处的场景以及作者的感受并决定不会放弃布丽吉特。2.续写线索:儿子掉进水里一狗救了孩子一送去医院一狗和孩子友好相处一决定不放弃狗

【优美句子展示】1.

①Thethoughtoflosingmybabywas

morethanIcouldimagine.②Manyyearswitnessmysuccess,butthe

incident

leavesaneverlastingmemoryfromthebottomofmyheart.

2.①Thankfulandsomewhatguilty,

Ilooked

atBrigittewhosetailwaswaggingcheerfully.②Throughthisincident,Iwasgivenaperspectivethat

therewasalwayssomeoneaccompanyingyouwithunconditionalloveandloyalty.

3.

Imadeavowtomyselfsilentlythat

nomatterwhatchallengeslifethrowsatme,I'llneverhavetheideaofgiving

upmyfamily,

includingmybelovedcompanion——Brigitte.

4.Afterleavingthehospital,Ibreathed

asighofrelief.5.Ifirmlybelievewhere

thereisaway,

thereishope.

6.

①Havingaglanceat

thepool,Ifound

mysonwasstruggling

miserably.②Sensingtheworryof

Brigitte,I

cast

aneyeon

theground,

onlytofindthat

Forrestdroppedintothepool.

7.

Itwas

Brigitte'stimelyandgenerous

help

that

madeForrestgetridof

thethreatoflife.8.Instead,I

resolvedtoadoptBrigitte

as

amemberofmyfamily.9.

Howeverhorrible

thesituationwas,

weshouldbeoptimisticaboutlife.10.①I

put

Forrestonthegroundcarefully,

performed

thefirstaidand

called

120straightaway.②Nomatterwhathapped,wemust

facechallengeswithbravery.

11.①Onseeingus,Brigitteswungitstail

enthusiastically.②Though

lifewasfullofupsanddowns,wehad

suchaloyalcompanion.③Brigittewasresemblingashiningsunto

accompanyustogothroughthetoughtimes.

12.UndertheguidanceofBrigitte,I

succeededin

seizingmysonbythearm,afterwhich

Itookhimbacktotheground.13.①Atthatcriticalmoment,Ididsth.②Spontaneously,Iactedaccordingly③Theexperience

gainedthroughthisincident

willhelpmedosth.14.I

kepttraceof

Brigitte,onlytofind

mysonwassinkingintothewater.15.Althoughwe

weretrappedinadversity,

weshouldhavepositiveattitudetowardsfuture.16.

Thereisnothingthatcannotbeconquered.17.AtthesightofhealthyForrest,Brigitte

barkedatthetopofitsvoice.

18.

Brighttewas

sniffing

atmyson

and

licking

hisicyface.

19.

Sweatwellingonmyforehead,IcarriedouttheCPRwithoutnodelay.20.I

wascommittedtoadopting

Brigtitte

permanently.

【范文展示】

ThereIwassurprisedtoseeBrigitte,whowasterrifiedofwater,diveintothepool.Tomyhorror,IcaughtsightofForrest,whowasstrugglingdesperatelyinthechillypool.Brigittewenttoallitslengthstoswimtomysonlikeanarrowoffthebow.Inasplitsecond,Idivedintothepool,feelinganintensesenseofconcernsurgingthroughme.Witheverypowerfulstroke,IgotclosetoForrest,grabbedhimbythearmandgothimoutofthepool.Handingshakingandvoicetrembling,Icalled911andsoonwewererushedtothenearesthospital,whereForrestwasexaminedthoroughlybythemedicalstaff.

Finally,thedoctorsaidForrestwas