读后续写-My+New+Brother 高三英语作文复习专题+

读后续写故事解读

MyNewBrotherVocabulary1.copy[ˈkɒpi]

n.复印件,副本,复制品;(书的)一本,一册,一份2.onstage[ˌɒnˈsteɪdʒ]

adj.舞台上的;表演的;adv.上台,上场3.bathtub[ˈbɑːθtʌb]

n.浴盆;浴缸4.raindrops[ˈreɪndrɒps]

n. 雨点;雨滴5.complicated[ˈkɒmplɪkeɪtɪd]

adj.复杂的;难懂的6.farfrom远非；远离7.involved[ɪnˈvɒlvd]

adj.卷入的；参与的8.drawstring[ˈdrɔːstrɪŋ]

n. (穿在袋口/裤腰上的)拉绳,束带9.burstintoflames

[fleɪm](突然猛烈地)燃烧起来10.ifonly要是...多好Iwasinmyroom,feelingunwillingtoheadtothecommunitytheatrewith“mybrother”Henry.HehadrecentlybeenadoptedbymyparentsandIwasnotinthemoodforbeingonstagewithhim.Iwasinmyroom,feelingunwillingtoheadtothecommunitytheatrewith“mybrother”Henry.HehadrecentlybeenadoptedbymyparentsandIwasnotinthemoodforbeingonstagewithhim.Translation前往；朝...走去v.采取；收养

“Kirstie,comehere,”mymomcalled.Followinghervoice,Ifoundheroutsidethebathroom,holdingawetbook.Shegavethebookashake.“Henry’sbookwasinthebathtub.Didyouputitthere?”Sheglaredatme,somethingshehadneverdonebeforeHenrycametoourhome.Ihadn’twethisbookonpurpose.Raindropsfellfrommyeyes.Tomakemattersworse,shepromisedtobuyhimanewcopy.Myheartached.Henrywasstealingmymother’slove.Hewasruiningmylife.Translation怒目而视故意毁坏；毁灭

Sheglaredatme,somethingshehadneverdonebeforeHenrycametoourhome.Sentence1主句谓语从句谓语从句谓语定语从句时间状语从句

Meanwhile,Henrywasnearby,absorbedinworkingonacomplicatedropeknot(绳结),somethinghelikedtodo.Whydidaboylikehimlikedoinggirlywork?Itseemedfarfrommanly(男子汉气概).Translationbeabsorbedin全神贯注于继续工作；从事于Meanwhile,Henrywasnearby,abosorbedinworkingonacomplicatedropeknot,somethinghelikedtodo.Sentence2定语从句分词短语作状语主句谓语从句谓语

Soon,itwastimetosetofftothecommunitytheatre.AsHenrywalkedaheadofustothecar,mymomtookmeasideandsaidinalowvoice,“ItwillbeHenry’sfirsttimeonstage.Bekindtohim,honey.Inoddedbutsighed(叹气).Ihadn’talwaysfounditthisdifficulttobekind.ButsinceHenryhadmovedin,everythingfeltdifferent.Thetheatreusedtobeaspecialplaceformyparentsandme.WithHenryinvolved,itdidn’tseemsospecialanymore.Translation发现做某事是...的

Finally,itwasourstagetime.Myheartbeatwildly.IforgotmyannoyanceatHenryforawhile.Aswekidslinedup,readytoactoutourshortplay,IrealizedhowlooselyIhadtiedthedrawstringonmyskirt.Sureenough,myskirtbegantodrop.Icouldheartheaudiencelaughing.EventhoughIwaswearingshortsundermyskirt,Icouldfeelmyfaceburstintoflames.However,myhandswerefull.Ifonlysomeonecouldhelpmeout.Translation烦恼，气恼how+adv.+主+谓hearsb.doingsth.听到某人正在做某事helpsb.out帮助某人摆脱困境Aswekidslinedup,readytoactoutourshortplay,IrealizedhowlooselyIhadtiedthedrawstringsonmyskirts.sentence3从句谓语从句谓语主句谓语时间状语从句宾语从句重点词汇（2mins）：1.headto前往；朝...走去2.adopt采取；收养3.glareat怒目而视 4.onpurpose故意 5.ruin毁坏；毁灭 6.beabsorbedin全神贯注于7.workon继续工作；从事于8.find+it+adj.todosth.发现做某事是...的9.annoyance烦恼，气恼10.how+adv.+主+谓11.hearsb.doingsth.听到某人正在做某事 12.helpsb.out帮助某人摆脱困境

GroupDiscussionStructurePlotsFeelingsBeginning(开端)

Developments(发展)

Climax(高潮)

Iwasunwillingtobewithmynewbrother,Henry,adoptedbymyparents.upsetMomthoughtIwetHenry’sbookonpurpose.sadMompromisedtobuyHenryanewcopy.heart-achedMeanwhile,Henrywasabsorbedinsthgirly.MomaskedmetobekindtoHenry.reluctantMydrawstringgotloosenandbegantodrop.embarrassedconfused

GroupDiscussion情节冲突：伏笔与呼应:我和Henry之间产生隔阂Henry喜欢并擅长打结→裙子上的细绳脱落GroupDiscussion人物主要人物次要人物正面描写侧面描写正面描写侧面描写次要人物(Mom)烘托/环境(book)次要人物(Mom)烘托/环境(ropeknot)MeHenry心理、动作动作人物形象：人物形象：乖巧却抵触Henry认真、细心、沉默寡言表达意图(主题)FamilyLoveUnderstanding

Rightthen,Henrysensedmyembarrassment.Withoutasecondthought,heapproachedmequickly,droppedtoacrouch,andtiedabeautifulfirmbowknot.“Nailedit.”Hewhispered.Shockedbywhathehaddone,lfeltsomethingdeepinmymindbegantochange.Itseemedasifhiskinddeedshadmeltedmyheart.ThinkingaboutwhatIhaddonetohim,Ifeltashamedofmyself.WhileIwaslostinthought,themusictookmebacktoreality,Weedgedtothestageandstartedourperformance.Themomenttheshowwasover,theaudiencecastapprovingglancesatus,astormofthunderousapplauseechoingaroundthehall.

Aftertheperformance,IfoundHenryandtappedhimonthearmgratefully."Thank...you,Henry."Myvoicetrembledwithmyfaceburning.Ihadtoadmitthat.butforhistimelyhelp,Iwouldn'thavepluckedupmycouragetostandonthestage.Withouthiswonderfulknottingskills,theperformancewouldhavebeenquitedifferent.Henrypattedmegentlyontheshoulder,anenormousgrinflashinga