高考英语议论文正反观点对比写作2

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写作训练正反观点比照class1Teacher:JiangHui假设你是李华，作为一个高三学生,自习课的利用效率问题备受教师和学生的关注。上周你班召开了“教师是否应该在自习课讲课”的班级讨论会。请你用英语把下面的讨论结果写出来，并写出你的观点。Badsample卷面不整洁;涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得11分字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。

比照鲜明写作根本要求1.字数到达要求。2.卷面整洁，字迹清楚。3.语法正确。4.标点正确。5.文章内容是否切题。6.格式正确。高考书面表达评分标准第五档〔很好〕〔21－25分〕完全完成了试题规定的任务。—覆盖所有内容要点。—

应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。—

语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。—

有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。完全到达了预期的写作目的。高考书面表达评分标准HowtopolishyourWriting审抄列四步HowtopolishyourWriting润润本文属于________，根本时态是________，人称用____________议论文一般现在时第一和第三人称审题抓要点，列提纲---文章结构正反观点比照类的文章提出问题不同观点比照说明自己观点构思---文章结构Lastweek,ourclassheldadiscussionaboutwhetherteachersshouldteachinfreeclass.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions对自习课讲课有两种态度.(2)态度一:.26%的学生赞同原因〔1〕原因〔2〕(3)态度二:74%的学生反对。原因〔1〕原因〔2〕，(4)我的观点:学生应该形成自己的学习习惯…提出问题不同观点比照说明自己观点表示不同观点的套语Paragraph1总起: Differentpeoplehold/havedifferentopinions.

Peoplehavetakendifferentattitudestowards…Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.

Therearetwooppositeopinionsaboutit.

paragrap2表达赞同观点…ofthemareinfavoroftheideathat…Peoplewhoarefortheideathink…Somepeoplebelievethat……表达反对的观点: Onthecontrary,…ofthemholdadifferentview.…ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion.

However,eachcoinhastwosides. Ontheotherhand,people

that….

object(4)你的观点:……inmyview/opinion,Iagreewith…,Asforme,…AsfarasI’mconcerned,总结：inbrief,inaword,insummary

1技巧点拨HowtopolishyourWriting词汇句式衔接词22学以致用构思---短语watchovercan'tcontrolthemselves

havenocontroloverthemselves

don'tknowhowtostudy

bepooratschoolworkbeweakinsubjects…观点一〔1〕教师讲课能帮助监督自控能力较差的学生.〔2〕教师讲课对于不知怎么学习并且成绩差的学生是个帮助构思---短语观点二(1)学生应该利用自习课复习，练习和预习。〔2〕教师占用时间讲课不公平。makeuseoftakeadvantageof

goovertheirlessons/reviewdoexercisespreview…prepareone'slessonstakeupsomuchfreeclassIt'sunfairforstudents高考大纲中常用的衔接词whatismore;inaddition；besides,moreoverhowever;onthecontrarytherefore;asaresult;because

like;unlike,ontheotherhandtosumup;allinall1.

表示递进2.表示转折HowtopolishyourWriting3.表示因果4.表示比照

5.表示总结:26%ofthestudents__________theopinion.(赞同〕Theyare________weakinsubjects______theycan'tcontrolthemselves.〔不但…而且…〕*_________,〔与之相反〕74%ofthem___________.(持有不同/相反的观点〕小试牛刀：衔接词areinfavourofarefornotonlybutalsoOnthecontraryholdadifferentview.holdtheoppositeopinion___________,(在我看来〕studentsshouldformagoodhabitofstudyingbythemselves______(而不是〕dependingonteachers.InmyopinionPersonallyspeakingAsfarasI’mconcernedinsteadof句式----化腐朽为神奇

Theythinkthatteachersteachinfreeclassisnotsuitable.TheythoughtteacherstaketimetospeaklessonsisunfairtothemItis+adj/n+(forsb).todowhen…If…takeupteach*Teachersteachinfreeclassisagoodidea.

Studentshavetimetochecktheirlessons..句式----化腐朽为神奇

名词性从句Weshouldvaluewhatwehave

句式：强调句和倒装句IOnlyinthiswaycanyou

solvethisproblem.Hardlyhadtheygottothestation

when

theymettheyoungman.ItwasinthestreeetthatwemetLily.小试牛刀：句式

(强调,倒装,)

Studentscanhavetimetochecktheirlessons

infreeclass.词汇层面1.越晚学到的词汇，越有水平。2.越往后想到的词汇，用的人就越少，自然就越有水平。人靠衣装，文靠词装词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜。使用较高级的词汇.读书对心灵有益。Readingisgoodforourmind.ReadingdoesgoodtoourmindReadingisbeneficialtoourmind.Readingisofgreatbenefittoourmind.Studentscanenrichtheirknowledge

StuentscanhaveagoodcommandoftheirknowledgeStudentscanlearntheirknowledgeHomework仿写文

HowtopolishyourWriting假设你是高三的学生，最近你就高三模拟考试该难还是该