2024届2月高三第四次广东六校联考试题 读后续写 -归还藏起来的自行车 讲义

读后续写原题目呈现：阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Isatinmyparents’

car.MomhadinsistedIgowithhertopickupDadfromwork.AcrossfromDad’sofficeisabikestore.Thatwasthedaymyeleven-year-oldeyesfirstsawthepurpleBMXMongoosebike.Fromthatdayon,allIcouldthinkaboutwasthatbike.Ievendrewpicturesofthebikeinclass.Everyeveningafterward,atfivethirty,IeagerlywentalongwithMomtogetDad.AndeverydayItoldmyparents,“Iwantthatbike!”

ButtheydisagreedandrepliedthatIhadalreadyhadaperfectlygoodbikeathome.I’dargueitwasoldandugly,thinkingthatmyhappinessdependedonthatpurplebike.Dayslater,Ifoundthestorehadsoldthatbike.IknewI’dneverbehappyagain.Aweeklater,returninghomefromschool,Itrippedoversomething.Lyingintheweedsnearariverandsomewoodedlots,wasabike—

theexactbikefromthestore.

“Hey,whosebikeisthis?”

Ishouted,scanningthearea.Noonereplied,andtherewasnooneinsight.Maybeitsownerdidn’twantitanylonger.Icouldn’tleaveitlyingintheweeds.SoItookithomeandhiditbehindthegarage.Everydayafterschool,Isatthere,admiringit.ButIdidn’tfeellikeridinganddidn’tfeelashappyasIhadthought.Thinkingaboutthebikemademystomachtightenanduncomfortable.Afewdayslater,duringlunchatschool,myfriendsaid,“DidyouhearaboutTyler,intheotherfifth-gradeclass?HelosthisnewpurpleBMXMongoosebikehehadjustgottenforhisbirthday.Heleftitbyariverwhileplayinginthewoods.Itgotdark,andhecouldn’tfindit.”“I’dnevergooffandleaveanewbikelikethat.Hedoesn’tdeservetohavethatbike,”

Ireplied.Myfriendadded,

“Kidssayhe’snice.AndtheysayTylerisupsetbecausehisdadworkedovertimetobuythebikeforhim.”

Fortherestoftheday,Icouldn’tstopthinkingaboutTyler.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Afterschool,Ireturnedhomeand

draggedtomyroom.“IknowTyler’shouse,”

Momsaid.

“I’lldriveyouthere.”文本分析：第一段讲作者的内心挣扎；第二段是故事的结尾，还车+承认错误。主旨是诚实。参考范文一，Afterschool,Ireturnedhomeand

draggedtomyroom.

However,myfriend’swordskept

echoinginmy

mind,remindingmethatthebikeIfoundbelongedtoTyler.Tossingandturning,I

struggledmentally.IwasdyingforanewBMXMongoosebike,butdeepdown,Iwasalsoclearthatitwaswronganddishonestto

keepwhatwasn’tmine.Finally,theconsciencetooktheupperhandandIdecidedto

followmyheart.Iwentdownstairsandtoldmomeveryting.Surprisingly,

themomentthewordscameout,Ifeltagreatburdenliftfrommyshoulders

anddaysofstresswasgoneinstantly.Mom

listened,criticizingmeforhidingTyler’sbikeandurgingmetoreturnit.

“IknowTyler’shouse,”

Momsaid.

“I’lldriveyouthere.”

Withouthesitation,wetookthebike,hoppedinthecar,andarrivedatTyler’sdoor.Whenseeingthebike,Tyler’seyeslitup.Screamingandlaughing,hesprangtohisbikeandthenhuggedmetightly.Iexplainedtohimthathehad

misplaceditnearmyroom,notbyariver.Hisfatherwasalsogratefultomeforsavinghisloss.Themostscaringthingwas

toconfessmysecret,buteverbody,aftertheinitialsurprise,forgavemeandpraisedmeofmyhonestyandbravery.Itwasanunforgettableexpeirence,remindingthathonestywasthebestpolicyandaclearconsciencewas

invaluable.

放学后，我回到家里，拖着步子走进我的房间。然而，朋友的话一直在我的脑海中回响，提醒着我找到的自行车是属于Tyler的。我辗转反侧，心里挣扎着。我非常渴望一辆新的BMXMongoose自行车，但内心深处，我也清楚保留不属于自己的东西是错误和不诚实的。最终，良心占了上风，我决定听从内心。我下楼告诉妈妈了一切。令人惊讶的是，当话语出口的那一刻，我感到一股巨大的压力从肩膀上解脱了，数天的紧张瞬间消失了。妈妈听了，批评我隐瞒了Tyler的自行车，并敦促我归还它。“我知道Tyler家在哪里，”妈妈说。“我会开车送你去。”毫不犹豫，我们拿起自行车，跳进车里，来到了Tyler的门口。看到自行车，Tyler的眼睛亮了起来。他尖叫着笑了起来，跳到了自行车上，然后紧紧地拥抱了我。我向他解释，他把自行车遗失在我房间附近，而不是在河边。他的父亲也感激我挽救了他的损失。最可怕的是坦白我的秘密，但每个人，在最初的惊讶之后，都原谅了我，并称赞我诚实和勇敢。这是一次难忘的经历，提醒我诚实是上策，清白的良心是无价的。参考范文二，Afterschool,Ireturnedhomeanddraggedtomyroom.TheimageofthepurpleBMXMongoosebikelingeredinmymind,butnowitwasaccompaniedbyanaggingsenseofguiltandshame.Icouldn'tshakeoffthethoughtofhowhardTyler'sfathermusthaveworkedtobuyhimthatbike.Imagininghimputtinginextrahoursatwork,sacrificingtimewithhisfamilyjusttoseethejoyonhisson'sface,mademystomachchurnwithguilt.

Thatbikewasn'tminetoclaim.

Finally,afteralongconflictingthinking,Imadeupthemindtoreturnthebike.ThenIwentdownandconfessedeverythingtomom,expectingascold.

“IknowTyler’shouse,”Momsaidgently.“I’lldriveyouthere.”Relieffloodedme

whenIhearditandlasteduntil

wearrivedat

Tyler'shouse.Withaheavyheart,Iknockedonhisdoorandexplainedwhathappened,apologizingprofusely.Tyler'seyeswidenedindisbelief,thensoftenedwithgratitude.

Returningthebikefeltlikeliftingaweightoffmyshoulders.Itwasn'taboutthebikeanymore;itwasaboutdoingwhatwasrightandunderstandingthevalueofhonestyandempathy.Fromthatdayon,Ilearnedthattruehappinesscomesfromintegrityandkindness,notmaterialpossessions.表示作者紧张的心情：1.Feelingastabofguiltoverwhelmingme,Ithrewmyselfonthebedandburiedmyfaceinthepillow.感觉内疚在扎着我，我爬到床上，把脸埋在枕头里。2.feel

mystomachachedbadlyfromtheshame

因为羞愧感到胃痛3.Tossingandturning,I

struggledmentally.4.accompaniedbyanaggingsenseof