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teacherinPapuaNewGuinea.JosharedherexperiencewithRosemaryinherletterhome.AninvitationLetterfromLiHuaRosemaryDearJo,I’mwritingtoexpressmyearnestinvitationfordeliveringaspeechtothestudentsinXinhuaHighSchool.Aimingtomotivatemorestudentstogetinvolvedinthevoluntaryactivities,aspeechisscheduledtobegiveninthelecturehallat3pm,onOct.10.Youareexpectedtoshareyourexperiencesasavolunteerteacherandyourreflectiononyourjob.Ifirmlybelievethatyourspeechisboundtomakeabigdifferencetousstudents.Aresponseatyourearliestconvenienceishighlyappreciated.Yourssincerely,LiHuaAninvitationletter1.Who2.What3.WhyWhoarethetargetedaudience?WhydoesLiHuaaskJotogiveaspeech?What’sthemaintopicofherspeech?DearJo,I’mwritingtoexpressmyearnestinvitationfordeliveringaspeechtothestudentsinXinhuaHighSchool.Aimingtomotivatemorestudentstogetinvolvedinthevoluntaryactivities,aspeechisscheduledtobegiveninthelecturehallat3pm,onOct.10.Youareexpectedtoshareyourexperienceasavolunteerteacherandyourreflectiononyourjob.Ifirmlybelievethatyourspeechisboundtomakeabigdifferencetousstudents.Aresponseatyourearliestconvenienceishighlyappreciated.Yourssincerely,LiHuatargetedaudiencethemaintopicpurposeWhatimpressedJomost?Jo’sexperienceschoolavisitmaintopic

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