06Unit4单元写作指导典题例析跟踪训练(科技节的活动计划)(译林版2020)(原卷版)

Unit4Scientistswhochangedtheworld(译林版2020必修第三册)单元写作指导&典题例析&跟踪训练(科技节制订的活动计划)I.单元写作指导话题分析本单元的主题语境是“人与社会”，话题是“著名人物科学家”。单元写作的话题关于为科技节制订的活动和计划。文章是说明文，里面涉及到一些小发明创造,所以写作时要实事求是、言简意赅,语言较为正式。2.话题词汇(1)活动安排①invitesb.todosth. 邀请某人做某事②bescheduledtodosth. 被安排做某事③takeplace 发生;举行④withthepurposeof 目的是……⑤takepartin/participatein/joinin 参加(2)科技发明与创造①introducesth.tosb. 向某人介绍某物②sharesth.withsb. 与某人分享某物③improvethequalityoflife 改善生活质量④haveabetterunderstandingof对……有更好的了解⑤inspiresb.todosth. 激励某人做某事3.句式整理(1)开头①TheScienceFestivalisscheduledtotakeplaceontheplaygroundfrom8a.m.to11a.m.,lastingthreehours.科技节定于上午8点到11点在操场上举行，持续3个小时。②I’mgreatlyhonoredtoinviteyoutotheScienceFestivaltobeheldinourschool.我非常荣幸地邀请您参加在我们学校举行的科技节。(2)主体段落①Itgoeswithoutsayingthatmoderntechnologybringsusconvenienceandfortinlife.毫无疑问，现代科技给我们的生活带来了方便和舒适。②Thepurposeoftheactivityistoarousethestudents’interestinscience.这个活动的目的是激发学生对科学的兴趣。③Thegadgetisofgreatlypracticaluseindailylife.这种小工具在日常生活中很实用。(3)结尾①IwouldappreciateitifyoucouldjoinintheingScienceFestival.如果你能参加即将到来的科技节，我将不胜感激。②Lookingforwardtoyourjoiningus.期待您的加入。II.典题例析假定你是李华,想邀请英国交换生Peter下周二参加你校举办的“科技节”，并观赏学生们的“科技小发明”。请给他写封邮件，内容包括:1.写信意图；2.活动时间和地点；3.活动目的和内容；4.表达希望。注意:1.词数80个左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇:科技小发明:technologygadgets审核体裁/话题邀请参加科技节的文章(邀请信)时态/人称一般现在时/第一，三人称文章结构第一段：引入话题：写邀请信的目的第二段：科技节的时间，地点，举办科技节的目的意义第三段：再次邀请核心要点1.活动的时间，地点和意义，2活动的内容和目的。二.造句1.科技节定于上午8点到11点在操场上举行。→TheScienceFestival____________________ontheplaygroundfrom8a.m.to11a.m.

2.科技节持续3个小时。TheScienceFestival____________________.3.它的目的是鼓励我们学生创造性地思考和与他人分享我们的作品。____________________aswellasshareourworkswithothers.

4.各种各样的小工具在我们的日常生活中用处很大。Variousgadgetsare____________________inourdailylife.5.一些优秀的学生发明家会介绍他们的技术小工具的功能,并当场示范。Someexcellentstudentinventorswill____________________.6.我认为这将是最令人兴奋的部分。(exciting)________________________________________.【答案】1.isscheduledtotakeplace2.laststhreehours3.Itspurposeistoencourageusstudentstothinkcreatively4.ofgreatuse/useful5.introducethefunctionsoftheirtechnologygadgetsandperformthemonthespot6.Ithinkitwillbethemostexcitingpart.

三.句式升级1.用分词作状语合并句1和句2。_______________________________________________________________.

2.用定语从句合并句5和句6。_______________________________________________________________.【答案】1.TheScienceFestivalisscheduledtotakeplaceontheplaygroundfrom8a.m.to11a.m.,lastingthreehours.

2.Someexcellentstudentinventorswillintroducethefunctionsoftheirtechnologygadgetsandperformthemonthespot,whichIthinkwillbethemostexcitingpart.

【参考范文】DearDavid,I’mgladtoinviteyoutotheScienceFestivaltobeheldinourschoolnextMondaytoenjoythestudents’technologygadgets.TheScienceFestivalisscheduledtotakeplaceontheplaygroundfrom8a.m.to11a.m.,lastingthreehours.Itspurposeistoencourageusstudentstothinkcreativelyaswellasshareourworkswithothers.Atthisfestival,youcanenjoyvariousgadgetswhichareofgreatuse/greatlyusefulinourdailylife.What’smore,someexcellentstudentinventorswillintroducethefunctionsoftheirtechnologygadgetsandperformthemonthespot,whichIthinkwillbethemostexcitingpart.IwouldappreciateitifyoucouldjoinintheingScienceFestival.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyandexpectingyouring.Yours,LiHuaIII.跟踪训练应用文写作A(2023下·湖南岳阳·高一统考期末)假如你是李华，“学校科技节”即将到来，你校英文报正在开展主题为“Scientistswhochangedtheworld”的征文活动，请用英文写一篇文章，介绍你最崇拜的科学家。文章内容包括以下三个方面：1.科学家的成就；2.他(她)对世界的影响；3.你崇拜他(她)的理由。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________B(2023上·甘肃兰州·高一校考阶段练习)假定你是李华，擅长体育运动，最近收到朋友Jane的来信,她在信中说自己苦恼于身体不够强壮。1.鼓励Jane参加跑步俱乐部。2.阐明跑步对于健身的积极作用。3.分享一些科学跑步的建议。注意：1.词数80左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.信的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。DearJane,Iamreallysorrytohearthatyouareworryingaboutyourweakbody.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourstruly,LiHuaC(2023下·四川绵阳·高一统考期末)假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Tom约好一起去参加你校即将举行的科技节并为他做介绍，但你因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表达歉意；2.说明原因；3.提出弥补措施。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearTom,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHuaD(2023下·河北石家庄·高一正定中学校考阶段练习)假定你是李华，请根据下列表格中的内容提示，为校报的“英语园地”写一篇英语短文，介绍你最崇拜的一位中国科学家。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：培育杂交水稻breedhybridrice；产量output姓名袁隆平出生年份1930年职业科学家工作经历大学毕业后，从事农业教学和研究工作；1975年，成功培育出了杂交水稻。成就提高了水稻产量，有助于消除世界饥饿；被誉为“杂交水稻之父”。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________E(2023下·湖南长沙·高一长沙市明德中学校考阶段练习)假如你是李华，你的朋友国际交换生John报名参加了学校科技读书节的中文演讲比赛，比赛主题是“低碳生活，绿色家园”。他很重视这个活动，但不知如何准备，故写信向你求助。请你给他回信提一些建议，内容包括：1.表示支持；2.具体建议；3.表达祝愿。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.考词汇：科技读书节ScienceTechnologyandReadingFestival低碳生活，绿色家园LowcarbonLife,GreenHome________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________F(2023下·江苏连云港·高一统考期末)假定你是李华，你校学生会将举办一年一度的科技节活动，请你用英语写一个书面通知。内容包括：1.活动主题；2.内容安排；3.报名方式。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。Notice_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Students’Union读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A(2023上·陕西宝鸡·高一统考期中)SHOULDWEFIGHTNEWTECHNOLOGY?Thismorning,Isawtheshockingheadline:“PassengerDiesWhenCarCrashesinDriverlessMode”.Inthearticle,variouspeoplesaidthatthepublicshouldopposetheideaofdevelopingdriverlesscars.Theysaidthatsomeadvancesintechnologywereunnecessaryandcouldevenbedangerous.Hence,weshouldceaseacceptingtechnologyjustbecauseitisnew.Thenewspaperreportedthatthecarpanyhadalreadyapologizedfortheaccident,butthefamiliesofthedeceasedsaiditwasnotenough.Nevertheless,thepanystillclaimedthatmostpeoplewouldbetravellingindriverlesscarsonedaysoon.Ontheonehand,therearemanydifferentgroupsofpeoplearoundtheworldwholivehappilyintheabsenceofnewtechnology.ProbablythemostwellknownaretheAmish,agroupofChristianslivinginruralAmerica.Theydonotownordrivecars,watchTV,orusetheInternet.Theyhavelivedmainlyasfarmerssincethe18thcenturyandtheywillprobablybelivingthesamewayinthedistantfuture.Theyadvocateasimplelifewithanemphasisonhardwork,family,andmunity.Theythinkthatisbetterthancaringaboutluxuriesorfollowingthelivesoftherichandfamous.ItcouldevenbearguedthattheAmish’squalityoflifeisbettersincetheyliveinandappreciatethenaturalenvironmentratherthanlivinginlarge,pollutedcities.注意：1.续写段落不少于150个词；2.请按如下格式作答。参考词汇：theInternetkeepintouch

socialmediahealthmonitorParagraph1:Ontheotherhand,newtechnologyhasprovidedpeopleeverywherewithmanybenefitsovertheyears.Forexample,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Personally,Ihavebenefitedquitealotfromtechnologicaladvances.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________B(2023上·云南·高三云南师大附中校考阶段练习)Iwasalwaysthelittlegirlwhoplayedwithmagnetsonthekitchenfloor.Ipiecedtogethermodelrollercoastersandexhaustedalotofsciencekits.Learningfrommydadashedesignedrobots,Iformedmyownideas,includinganautomaticbreakfastmachine.At14yearsold,Iappliedtomyhighschool’sAcademyofScience,Engineering,andHighTechnology.Asisunfortunatelytypicalinengineering,femalestudentswerecriticallyunderrepresentedinthisacademytherewereameretwentyofusoutofninetytotalstudents.Thiswasatoughchallengeforme:asanambitiousfemaleengineer,Ineededtoadvocatemyowntalentsandabilitiesinafieldwherewomenareoftenmarginalized(边缘化).Withinthefirstmonthofthefreshmanyear,webeganourfirstproject:awoodencancrusher(压罐器).Ihadworkedonprojectswithboysbefore，butthosewerenothinglikethis.Thethreeofushadonemonthtoresearch,design,build,andtestourdeviceamonthfullofarguingandfrustration.Mysuggestionswereturneddown.AndIwasassignedthe“default(默认的)femalerole”oftimekeeperanddocumentation.Iwasn’texpectedtobecapableofcontributingtoanythingelse.Wefinishedwithafunctionalcancrusher,butIknewthiswasnothowIwantedtocontinueasafemaleengineer.Bythetimejunioryearrolledaround,itwastimetofacetheyearlongEngineeringDesignandDevelopment(EDD)projectandstatepetition.WhenIagreedtoworkwithtwoothergirls,Ihadnoideathatthiswouldentirelychangemyperspectiveofmyabilityasateammember,aleaderandanengineer.Forthispetition,wecreatedagarageparkingaidtohelpdriverspreventsideviewmirrordamage.Withinourteam,wecreatedasafespacewhereweallvalue