初中英语八年级上册SectionBa-4Selfcheck【市一等奖】

SectionB3a—4SelfcheckUnit4What'sthebestMovietheater?SectionB(3a~selfcheck)WritingtodiscusspreferencestomakecomparisonsInthepreviousclass,welearntabouttalentshowsandtalkedaboutpeoplewhoaretruly_______(talent).AndyouknowthepersonAliceadmiresthemostishergoodfriendJanewhoworksforDisney.Inheropinion,Janeisthe___________(creative)directorwhocan___________brilliantideasforDisneyshows.Shealsoplaysanimportant_____in_______(choose)thebestperformersfortheshows.talentedmostcreativecomeupwithrolechoosingNextmonth,Janeistakinga3-dayholiday.She’sthinkingaboutvisitingmeandsomeotherfriendsinXiamen.She’saskingmeaboutthebestplacetohavefun.Asyouknow,Aliceismoreofthestay-at-hometype,soIhopeintoday’sclass,youcanhelpmefindoutthebestplacetogotoinXiamenforJane.Let’shelpAlicefindfunplacesinourcity!1Pre-writing:learntointroduceaplace–TheBestPlaceinTownGreenwoodParkis_______placetogotoonweekends.Ialwaysfinishmybreakfast__________onSaturdaysbecauseIwanttogettoGreenwoodParkbefore10:00a.m.tomeetmyfriends.Theparkis______________placeonweekendsbecausealmosteveryonegoestheretoseethestreetperformers.Somepeoplethinktheyareboring,butIthinktheyare_____________people.However,theplacewhereyoucanenjoyyourtime_____________isatoneofthesmallcoffeeshopsnearthepark.Youcanreadorrelaxthere.ThereissomethingforeveryoneatGreenwoodPark.crowdedcreativegoodfastquietlyagood(the)fastestthemostcrowdedthemostcreativethemostquietlythebest1Pre-writing:writingframeworkGreenwoodParkisthebestplacetogotoonweekends.IalwaysfinishmybreakfastthefastestonSaturdaysbecauseIwanttogettoGreenwoodParkbefore10:00a.m.tomeetmyfriends.Theparkisthemostcrowdedplaceonweekendsbecausealmosteveryonegoestheretoseethestreetperformers.Somepeoplethinktheyareboring,butIthinktheyarethemostcreativepeople.However,theplacewhereyoucanenjoyyourtimethemostquietlyisatoneofthesmallcoffeeshopsnearthepark.Youcanreadorrelaxthere.ThereissomethingforeveryoneatGreenwoodPark.TopicsentenceConcludingsentenceSupportingdetail1Supportingdetail21Pre-writing:writingframeworkOutline:Beginning:(TopicSentence,youridea) _______isthebestplacetogoto.Body: Supportingdetail1:…becauseeveryonegoesthere… Supportingdetail2:theplacewhereyoucan…is…Ending:(Concludingsentence) Thereissomethingforeveryoneat________.2While-writing:TheBestPlacetoGotoinXiamenTowriteagoodessay,weneedtodecidewhatwe’regoingtowrite.Thusthetopicsentenceisveryimportance,becauseitstatesyouridea.Let’shaveatry.TopicSentence: _______isthebestplacetogoto.Tip1:Makeyourtopicsentencemoredetailed.Greenwoodparkisthebestplaceto1and2.IfwewanttowriteaboutXiamen,whatcanweputhere?2While-writing:TheBestPlacetoGotoinXiamenDifferentpeoplemayhavedifferentneedswhentravelingaroundacity.TofindthebestplaceforJane,weneedtofirstthinkaboutwhattouristscanenjoythemostinXiamen.Discusswithyourgroupmembersandmakealist.Xiamentrylocalsnacks_____isthebestplaceto_______and_______inXiamen.2While-writing:WritingMindMapDiscussanddrawyourwritingmindmap,decidewhattowrite.(Details)Tip2:CheckyourcontentsbeforedraftingQuickCheck1.Haveallyourdetailsclearlysupportedyouridea?所有的细节是否都围绕观点展开？Yes.No.2While-writing:FirstDraft______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Tip3:Reviseyourworkwiththehelpfromothers.3While-writing:Revising1.Structure:Readyourarticleandmakesureitisinagoodstructure.HaveIfollowedthewritingframework(B,B,E)?

我的结构完整吗？2.Logic:Readyourarticleandmakesureitisingoodlogic.HaveIclearlystatedmyopinioninthetopicsentence?

我的主题句是否清晰地陈述了我的观点？Arethesupportingdetailsunitedwiththeopinion?我的细节阐述是否与观点匹配？HaveIsupportedeachreasonwithmoredetails(furtherexplanation,facts,example,

etc)?

我是否充分地阐述了我推荐的理由?2Post-writing:Editing______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________