高考英语作文真题训练50题含参考答案

高考英语写作真题训练50题含参考答案

学校:姓名：班级:考号：

一、概要写作

1.Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)of

thepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfarsaspossible.

Onceitwaspossibletodefinemaleandfemaleroleseasilybythedivisionoflabor.Men

workedoutsidethehomeandearnedtheincometosupporttheirfamilies,whilewomen

cookedthemealsandtookcareofthehomeandthechildren.Theseroleswerefirmlyfixed

formostpeople,andtherewasnotmuchopportunityforwomentoexchangetheirroles.But

bythemiddleofthiscentury,men'sandwomen'sroleswerebecominglessfirmlyfixed.

Inthe1950s,economicandsocialsuccesswasthegoalofthetypicalAmerican.Butin

the1960sanewforcedevelopedcalledthecounterculture.Thepeopleinvolvedinthis

movementdidnotvaluethemiddle-classAmericangoals.Thecounterculturepresentedmen

andwomenwithnewrolechoices.Takingmoreinterestinchildcare,menbegantoshare

child-raisingtaskswiththeirwives.Infact,someyoungmenandwomenmovedto

communalhomesorfarmswheretheeconomicandchildcareresponsibilitieswereshared

equallybybothsexes.Inaddition,manyAmericansdidnotvaluethetraditionalmaleroleof

soldier.SomeyoungmenrefusedtobedraftedassoldierstofightinthewarinVietnam.

Intermsofnumbers,thecounterculturewasnotaverylargegroupofpeople.Butits

influencespreadtomanypartsofAmericansociety.Workingmenofallclassesbeganto

changetheireconomicandsocialpatterns.Industrialworkersandbusinessexecutivesalike

cutdownon“overtime“worksothattheycouldspendmoreleisuretimewiththeirfamilies.

Somedoctors,lawyers,andteachersturnedawayfromhighpayingsituationstopracticetheir

professionsinpoorerneighborhoods.

Inthe1970s,thefeministmovement,orwomen'sliberation,producedadditional

economicandsocialchanges.Womenofallagesandatalllevelsofsocietywereenteringthe

workforceingreaternumbers.Mostofthemstilltooktraditionalwomen'sjobsaspublic

schoolteaching,nursing,andsecretarialwork.Butsomewomenbegantoentertraditionally

maleoccupations:policework,banking,dentistry,andconstructionwork.Womenwere

askingforequalwork,andequalopportunitiesforpromotion.

Todaytheexpertsgenerallyagreethatimportantchangesaretakingplaceintherolesof

menandwomen.Naturally,therearedifficultiesinadjustingtothesetransformations.

【答案】Maleandfemaleroleswereonceeasilydividedbylabour.However,thishas

changed.Thecountercultureofferedthemnewrolechoices.Mentendedtotransformtheir

economicandsocialpatternswhilewomencalledforequaljobsandpromotionopportunities

inwomen'sliberation.Thoughit'sdifficulttoadapttothesetransformations,theinfluenceof

countercultureisgoingintoalllevelsofsociety.

【解析】

【导语】

本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，男性和女性的角色曾经很容易被分工。然而，这种情

况已经改变。反主流文化为他们提供了新的角色选择。男子倾向于改变其经济和社会模

式，而妇女则要求在妇女解放中获得平等的工作和晋升机会。虽然很难适应这种转变,

但反主流文化的影响正在渗透到社会的各个层面。

【详解】

1.要点摘录

①Onceitwaspossibletodefinemaleandfemaleroleseasilybythedivisionoflabor.Butby

themiddleofthiscentury,men'sandwomen'sroleswerebecominglessfirmlyfixed.

②Thecounterculturepresentedmenandwomenwithnewrolechoices.

©Workingmenofallclassesbegantochangetheireconomicandsocialpatterns.

@Inthe1970s,thefeministmovement,orwomen'sliberation,producedadditionaleconomic

andsocialchanges.Womenwereaskingforequalwork,andequalopportunitiesfor

promotion.

©Todaytheexpertsgenerallyagreethatimportantchangesaretakingplaceintherolesof

menandwomen.Naturally,therearedifficultiesinadjustingtothesetransformations.

2.缜密构思

将1、2两个要点进行整合，将第3、4两个要点进行概括，第5个要点总说。

3.遣词造句

Maleandfemaleroleswereonceeasilydividedbylabour.However,thishaschanged.

Thecountercultureofferedthemnewrolechoices.

Mentendedtotransformtheireconomicandsocialpatternswhilewomencalledforequal

jobsandpromotionopportunitiesinwomen'sliberation.

Thoughit'sdifficulttoadapttothesetransformations,theinfluenceofcountercultureisgoing

intoalllevelsofsociety.

【点睛】

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[高分句型1]Mentendedtotransformtheireconomicandsocialpatternswhilewomencalled

fbrequaljobsandpromotionopportunitiesinwomen'sliberation.（运用while连接并歹U句对

原文第三段和第四段进行了概括）

[高分句型2]Thoughit'sdifficulttoadapttothesetransformations,theinfluenceof

countercultureisgoingintoalllevelsofsociety,（fflthough引导让步状语从句对最后一段

进行了概括，表达非常高级）

2.Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint（s）of

thepassageinnomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

ANewWaveofMigration

AstheseaextendssteadilyinlandincountriessuchasBangladeshandasdecreasing

rainsputalreadymarginalfarmlandoutofplayinEthiopiaandotherplaces,awaveof

migrationcausedbythechangingclimateistakingshapeonthehorizon.

Butmost“climatemigrants^^willnotbeheadingabroadtostartnewlives;insteadthey

willsettleelsewhereintheirhomecountries.Areportreleasedthisweekdeclaresthatif

nothingisdonetocontrolglobalwarmingandfactormigrationintodevelopmentplanning,

bymid-centurythisinternalpopulationshiftcouldinvolvemorethan140millionpeoplein

threeregionsexamined:sub-SaharanAfrica,southAsiaandLatinAmerica."Climatechange

isalreadyadriverofinternalmigration,anditwillbecomemoresointhefuture,saysJohn

Roome,seniordirectorofClimatechangeatTheWorldBankGroup.

Thepotentialforsuchanincreaseinareaconsistingof55percentofthedeveloping

world'spopulationraisesquestionsofenvironmentaljusticebecausethosewhohave

contributedtheleasttoglobalwarmingareforcedtoshouldermoreoftheburden.Itis

necessaryfordevelopedcountriesliketheU.S.tostepup,saysMariaCristinaGarcia,a

professorofAmericanStudiesatCornellUniversity.Developedcountriescanhelpbyboth

workingtolimitgreenhousegasemissionsandfundingeffortstohelpdevelopingnations

planforclimatemigrationchallenges.

Thestudyofclimatemigrationisstillrelativelynew,andprojectionsofjusthowmany

peoplemightbedrivenfromtheirhomesastheworldwarmsarehardtopindown.Some

peoplewillneedtomigratedespiteanymeasuresthatmightbetaken——but“thisdoesn'thave

tobeacrisis^^Roomesays.Properlymanagedmigrationcouldevenbringmoreeconomic

opportunitiestosomepoorcommunities.Butplanningneedstostartnow.

【答案】Astheseaextendssteadilyinland,awaveofmigrationcausedbythechanging

climateappear.Most“climatemigrants^^willsettleelsewhereintheirhomecountries.It's

unfairfbrthecountrieswhohavecontributedtheleasttoglobalwarmingtoshouldermoreof

theburden.Thoughtheclimatemigrationisstillrelativelynew,planningneedstostartnow.

【解析】

【导语】

本文是说明文。文章主要讲述随着气候变暖，沿海地区人民要面临向内陆移民的问题。

【详解】

1.要点摘录

①AstheseaextendssteadilyinlandincountriessuchasBangladeshandasdecreasingrains

putalreadymarginalfarmlandoutofplayinEthiopiaandotherplaces,awaveofmigration

causedbythechangingclimateistakingshapeonthehorizon.

②Butmost"climatemigrants^^willnotbeheadingabroadtostartnewlives;insteadtheywill

settleelsewhereintheirhomecountries.

③Thepotentialforsuchanincreaseinareaconsistingof55percentofthedeveloping

world'spopulationraisesquestionsofenvironmentaljusticebecausethosewhohave

contributedtheleasttoglobalwarmingareforcedtoshouldermoreoftheburden.

©Thestudyofclimatemigrationisstillrelativelynew,andprojectionsofjusthowmany

peoplemightbedrivenfromtheirhomesastheworldwarmsarehardtopindown.

⑤Butplanningneedstostartnow.

2.缜密构思

将1、2、3三个要点进行重组，将4、5两个要点进行整合。

3.遣词造句

Astheseaextendssteadilyinland,awaveofmigrationcausedbythechangingclimate

appear.

Most“climatemigrants^^willsettleelsewhereintheirhomecountries.

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Ifsunfairforthecountrieswhohavecontributedtheleasttoglobalwarmingtoshoulder

moreoftheburden.

Thoughtheclimatemigrationisstillrelativelynew,planningneedstostartnow.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]AstheseaextendssteadilyinlandincountriessuchasBangladeshandas

decreasingrainsputalreadymarginalfarmlandoutofplayinEthiopiaandotherplaces,a

waveofmigrationcausedbythechangingclimateistakingshapeonthehorizon.（运用一个

复杂的主从复合句对移民现象做了一个背景介绍。其中as引导的时间状语从句表达高

级）

【高分句型2】Thepotentialforsuchanincreaseinareaconsistingof55percentofthe

developingworld'spopulationraisesquestionsofenvironmentaljusticebecausethosewho

havecontributedtheleasttoglobalwarmingareforcedtoshouldermoreoftheburden.（用

because引导的原因状语从句和who引导的定语从句描述了对“气候移民”这一后果的承

担不公平，表达高级）

3.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

YesterdayMattwassick.IpickedupArchiefromthesitterandEloisefromschooland

decidedtoruntoTargetforafewthings.Ihadhopedtobeinandoutquickly.

Ifoundalinewithjustonepersonaheadofmeandbeganorganizingmyitemsonthe

conveyor.Afterplacingmyitems,Ilookeduptoseethatthepersonaheadofmewasan

elderlywoman.Shewaspayingforheritemswithchangeandwantedtopurchaseeach

separately.Iwasfrustratedwiththiswomanandtheinconvenienceshehadplacedonme.

ButthenIwatchedtheyoungemployeewiththiswoman.Iwatchedhimhelphercount

herchange,eversosoftlytakingitfromhershakinghands.Whensheaskedifshehad

enoughtobuyareusablebag,hetoldhershedidandwenttwolinesovertogetoneforher

andthenrepackagedheritems.Neveroncewasthisemployeeangry.Hewasnothingbut

patientandkind.

AsIwaswatchinghim,IsawthatEloisewastoo.Shewasstandingnexttothewoman,

watchingtheemployeecountthechange.IrealizedIhadn'tbeeninconveniencedatall.That

mydaughterwasinsteadwitnessingkindnessandpatienceandbeingtaughtthisvaluable

lessonbyacompletestranger.

Whenthewomanwasfinished,theemployeebeganringingupmyitemsandthanked

meformypatience.Ithenthankedhimforteachinguspatienceandkindnessbyhis

treatmentofthatelderlywoman.Whenhewasfinished,Ipushedmycartthroughthestore

tryingtofindthemanager.Iwantedhertoknowoftheemployee'skindnessandpatienceand

howmuchitmeanttome.Aftertrackingherdownandsharingthestorywithher,weleft

Targetwithacartfullofconsumableitems,butwhatismore,aheartfullofgratitudeforsuch

aninvaluablelesson.

IfyouareeverintheGlendaleTarget,giveIshmaelasmileandanod.Theworldcould

usemorepeoplelikehim.

【答案］Oneday,theauthorwithtwochildrenwenttoTargetforshopping.（要点1）While

waitinginline,shefoundanoldladywastroublesome,buttheyoungemployeetreatedher

patiently.（要点2）Shewastouchedbyhiskindnessandpatienceandthoughtherchildren

wouldlearnalotfromthisexperience.（要点3）Shesharedthestorywiththemanagerand

hopedotherscouldpraisetheemployee'skindnessandpatience.（要点4）

【解析】

【导语】

这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者的一次购物经历。作者带着孩子们去购物，排在

前面结账的老人比较麻烦，但收银员耐心的对待老人。作者被这位员工的德行所感动,

并希望自己的孩子能从中学到些东西。同时，作者将这位员工的德行分享给了经理，并

希望其他顾客也能对他的德行称赞。

【详解】

1.要点摘录

©YesterdayMattwassick.IpickedupArchiefromthesitterandEloisefromschooland

decidedtoruntoTargetfbrafewthings.

②Shewaspayingfbrheritemswithchangeandwantedtopurchaseeachseparately.Iwas

frustratedwiththiswomanandtheinconvenienceshehadplacedonme.

③Neveroncewasthisemployeeangry.Hewasnothingbutpatientandkind.

©Thatmydaughterwasinsteadwitnessingkindnessandpatienceandbeingtaughtthis

valuablelessonbyacompletestranger.

⑤Aftertrackingherdownandsharingthestoi*ywithher,weleftTargetwithacartfullof

consumableitems,butwhatismore,aheartfullofgratitudeforsuchaninvaluablelesson.

@IfyouareeverintheGlendaleTarget,giveIshmaelasmileandanod.Theworldcoulduse

morepeoplelikehim.

2.缜密构思

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将第①要点进行重组;将第②③两个要点进行重组整合概括;将第④要点重组;将第⑤⑥

要点整合概括。

3.遣词造句

①Oneday,theauthorwithtwochildrenwenttoTargetforshopping.

②Whilewaitinginline,shefoundanoldladywastroublesome,buttheyoungemployee

treatedherpatiently.

③Shewastouchedbyhiskindnessandpatienceandthoughtherchildrenwouldlearnalot

fromthisexperience.

④Shesharedthestorywiththemanagerandhopedotherscouldpraisetheemployee's

kindnessandpatience.

【点睛】

［高分句型1］：Whilewaitinginline,shefoundanoldladywastroublesome,buttheyoung

employeetreatedherpatiently.（运用了并列复合句的结构对原文第二段和第三段进行了

概括。其中“Whilewaitinginline”的省略句式结构，"anoldladywastroublesome”省略弓|

导词“that”的宾语从句，以及“but”用在句中表达前后转折关系的用法比较高级。）

［高分句型2］：Shesharedthestorywiththemanagerandhopedotherscouldpraisethe

employee'skindnessandpatience.（运用并列连词构成并列复合句的结构对第五段和第

六段进行了概括，其中词组“sharesthwithsb."，以及“otherscouldpraisetheemployee's

kindnessandpatience”省略引导词的宾语从句的用法比较高级。）

4.概要写作

Thesedaysagreenbuildingmeansmorethanjustthecolorofthepaint.Greenbuilding

canalsorefertoenvironmentallyfriendlyhouses,factories,andoffices.

Greenbuildingmeans"reducingtheimpactofthebuildingontheland”,TarynHolowka

oftheU.S.GreenBuildingCouncilinWashington,D.C.said.AccordingtoHolowka,

buildingaccountfor65percentoftotalU.S.electricityuse.

Butgreenbuildingcanreduceenergyandwateruse.Also,thebuildingsareoften

locatednearpublictransportationsuchasbusesandsubways,sothatpeoplecandrivetheir

carsless.Thatcouldbegoodfortheenvironment,becausecarsuselotsofgasandgiveoff

pollution.Greenbuildingsareoftenbuiltondevelopedland,sothatthebuildingsdon't

destroyforests.

MartyDettlingistheprojectmangerforabuildingthatputtheseideasintoaction.The

Solairehasbeencalledthecountry'sfirstgreenhigh-risebuilding.AccordingtoDettling,

“We'vereducedourenergyusebyone-thirdandourwaterby50percent.^^

TheSolairecutsenergyinpartbyusingsolarpower.t4Onthefaceofthebuildingwe

havesolarpanelswhichchangethesun'senergyintoelectricity,Dettlingexplained.The

Solairealsohaslightsthatautomaticallyturnoffwhenpeopleleavetheroom.Inaddition,the

buildinghaslotsofwindows,allowingpeopletousethesunforlightduringtheday.The

Solairecutswaterbyreusingit.

Noteveryoneiseagertomoveintoagreenbuilding,however.Somepeoplethinkthat

thingslikesolarpanelscostmoremoneythanmoretraditionalenergysources.Anyhow,

Holowkasaid,"It'sgoingtobebig.”

【答案】①Environmentallyfriendlystructuresarecalledgreenbuildings.②Theycanreduce

energyandwaterusebyaconsiderablepercentage,thuslessenpollutionandavoiddestroying

forestsaswell.③Forexample,thegreenbuildingSolairehassubstantiallyreduceditsenergy

andwaterusepartlybyapplyingsolarpowerandreusingwater.©Althoughnotallpeople

likegreenbuildingyet,itisexpectedtobepopularinthenearfuture.

【解析】

【导语】

本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，环境友好型结构被称为绿色建筑。它们可以大幅度

地减少能源和水的使用，从而减少污染并避免破坏森林。例如，绿色建筑Solaire通过

使用太阳能和回用水，在一定程度上大大减少了能源和水的使用。虽然不是所有人都喜

欢绿色建筑，但预计在不久的将来它会流行起来。

【详解】

1.要点摘录

①Greenbuildingcanalsorefertoenvironmentallyfriendlyhouses,factories,andoffices.

②Buigreenbuildingcanreduceenergyandwateruse.Thatcouldbegoodforthe

environment,becausecarsuselotsofgasandgiveoffpollution.Greenbuildingsareoften

builtondevelopedland,sothatthebuildingsdon'tdestroyforests.

©AccordingtoDettling,"We'vereducedourenergyusebyone-thirdandourwaterby50

percent.".TheSolairecutsenergyinpartbyusingsolarpower.TheSolairecutswaterby

reusingit.

@Noteveryoneiseagertomoveintoagreenbuilding,however.Somepeoplethinkthat

thingslikesolarpanelscostmoremoneythanmoretraditionalenergysources.Anyhow,

Holowkasaid,"It'sgoingtobebig.”

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2.缜密构思

将第1、2两个要点进行整合，将第3、4两个要点进行重组。

3.遣词造句

Environmentallyfriendlystructuresarecalledgreenbuildings,whichcanreduceenergyand

waterusebyaconsiderablepercentage,thuslessenpollutionandavoiddestroyingforestsas

well.Forexample,thegreenbuildingSolairehassubstantiallyreduceditsenergyandwater

usepartlybyapplyingsolarpowerandreusingwater.Althoughnotallpeoplelikegreen

buildingyet,itisexpectedtobepopularinthenearfuture.

【点睛】

［高分句型l］Theycanreduceenergyandwaterusebyaconsiderablepercentage,thuslessen

pollutionandavoiddestroyingforestsaswell.运用一个复杂的主从复合句对原文第二段和

第三段进行了概括。其中运用了动名词作宾语。

［高分句型2JAIthoughnotallpeoplelikegreenbuildingyet,itisexpectedtobepopularin

thenearfuture.用although引导让步状语从句对最后一段进行了概括，表达非常高级。

5.Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizeinnomorethan60wordsthemain

ideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassage.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

ThePowerofiPhone

ThoughApplereleaseddatalastweekindicatingiPhonesalesmay,atlast,beslowing,

oneCEOrecentlyexplainedwhyhethinksthesmartphonehasoverturnedourexpectationsof

basicallyeverything.

HairyWestistheCEOoftheglobaldesignandstrategyfirmFrog,whichworkswithits

,,

clients“toanticipatethefuture,InaconversationwithTheHuffingtonPostattheWorld

EconomicForuminDavos,Switzerland,WestcreditedApplewithtransformingtheway

companiesapproachconsumersandtheirownemployees.

“Waybackintheday,“Westsaid,companiesmarketedtheirproductsas“militaryspec”

and"industrial“totakeadvantageoftheimpressionthattheseseeminglyspecializedproducts

wereofhigherqualitythanconsumerversions.Inthe70s,80sand90s,thisslowlygaveway

totheriseof“professional''productsadaptedtobusinessesandbusinesspeople.

“ThatallchangedafterthecomingoftheiPhonein2007Jhesaid."Consumersbeganto

usethisamazingdigitalinterface,andtheylikedit.Theyuseditintheirpersonallifeandat

home,andwhentheywentbacktowork,theyencounteredthisterrible'professional'or

'industrial',or'enterprise'product,andtheyrealizedhowold-fashionedandinconvenientit

was.Theydemandedchange.”

ThatmassiveshiftforeshadowedthedownfallofBlackBerryandtheweakeningofthe

powerofitdepartments—anditalsoforcedcompaniestoupdatetheworkexperienceof

theiremployees,accordingtoWest.

“Companiesneedtohiremillennials,andmillennialsrefusetoworkintheseoutdated,

backwardsystems,hesaid."Notonlyisituncomfortable,butitalsoindicatessomething

wrongaboutthecompany.Ifyourworkexperienceisthatold-fashioned,thenwhatelseis

wronginthecompany?”

【答案］HarryWest,theCEOofFrog,believesthatthecomingofiPhonehaschangedthe

expectationsoftoday9sconsumersandemployees.Consumerswanttousemodemand

convenientdigitalproductslikeiPhonebothathomeandwork;whilecompaniesareforced

toimprovetheoutdatedworkexperienceoftheiremployees.

【解析】

【导语】

本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，Frog的首席执行官哈里・韦斯特认为，iPhone的到来

改变了今天的消费者和员工的期望。消费者希望在家里和工作中都能使用像iPhone这

样现代化、便捷的数字产品；而公司被迫改善员工过时的工作经验。

【详解】

1耍点摘录

①HarryWestistheCEOoftheglobaldesignandstrategyfirmFrog,whichworkswithits

clientsutoanticipatethefUture”.“ThatallchangedafterthecomingoftheiPhonein2007,“he

said."Consumersbegantousethisamazingdigitalinterface,andtheylikedit.

②Theyuseditintheirpersonallifeandathome,andwhentheywentbacktowork,they

encounteredthisterrible'professional'or'industrial',or'enterprise'product,andthey

realizedhowold-fashionedandinconvenientitwas.Theydemandedchange.

③ThatmassiveshiftforeshadowedthedownfallofBlackBerryandtheweakeningofthe

powerofitdepartments—anditalsoforcedcompaniestoupdatetheworkexperienceof

theiremployees,accordingtoWest.

2.缜密构思将第1个要点进行总说，将第2、3二个要点进行分说。

3.遣词造句

HarryWest,theCEOofFrog,believesthatthecomingofiPhonehaschangedthe

expectationsoftoday'sconsumersandemployees.

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ConsumerswanttousemodernandconvenientdigitalproductslikeiPhonebothathomeand

work;whilecompaniesareforcedtoimprovetheoutdatedworkexperienceoftheir

employees.

【点睛】

[高分句型1]HaiyyWest,theCEOofFrog,believesthatthecomingofiPhonehaschanged

theexpectationsoftoday'sconsumersandemployees.（运用that引导宾语从句对原文第四

段进行了概括）

[高分句型2]ConsumerswanttousemodemandconvenientdigitalproductslikeiPhone

bothathomeandwork;whilecompaniesareforcedtoimprovetheoutdatedworkexperience

oftheiremployee”运用了while连接并列句，表示前后的对比，对倒数第二段和第三段

进行了概括，表达非常高级）

二、读后续写

6.阅读下列材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文，

续写的词数应为150左右。

EverygirldreamsandBonnieisnoexception.WhenBonniewasyoung,shehadread

dozensofbooksonhowtobeaballerina（芭蕾舞者）,SwanLake（天鹅湖）washerfavorite

andshehadalwayswantedtobecomethewhiteswaninit.Later,shestartedtakingballet（芭

蕾Wessonsandallherteachersconfirmedshewasagoodstudent.Inthehopeofbecominga

greatballerina,shetrainedhardonadailybasis.

Oneday,shesawanadvertisementthatafamousballerinatroupe（舞团）wouldbe

performinginherhometown.Andthewholetownwastalkingaboutthetroupeleaderwho

wassaidtobethebestballetdancerintheworld.Herthoughtsranwild."Imustmeetthe

leaderofthetroupeandshowhimmyskills"shesaidtoherself.

Shedressedherselfinherbestballerinacostumeandmanagedtoslip（溜）inthe

backstagewithoutbeingnoticed.Toherluck,theleaderenteredthedressingroomandshe

timidlyknockedatthedoor"Comein"saidagentlevoice.Openingthedoor,Bonniesawa

tallandslimmanwithacalmlookonhisface.Shebravelyapproachedhimandhandedhim

abunchofredrosesandinherexcitementtheihorns（刺）pricked（刺痛）herhandbutshedid

notpaymuchattentiontothepain.

Theleaderobservedheractionasshetoldhimherdream."Alright,youdanceandIwill

giveyoumyadvice.'1

Buthalfwaythroughthedancehestoppedherandsaid,"Fmsorryyou'renotgood

enough!"Onhearingthis,Bonnie*seyesopenedwideinshock.Itwassecondsbeforeshe

couldabsorbwhatwassaidtoher,"Notgoodenough?!"sheaskedindisbelief."Yes,not

goodenough."repliedtheleader.Boiledinshame（羞）andrage（怒），Bonnieranoutofthe

dressingroomasfastasherlegscouldcarryher.Theleader'swordswereahugeblowtoher

confidence.Despitebeingsosad,shedidn*tgiveupherdream.

注意：

1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

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Sixmonthslater,sheheardthatthesameballettroupewasperforminginhertownagain.

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Withinthreeyears,Bonniehadbecomeafamousballerinaasshewanted.

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

Sixmonthslater,sheheardthatthesameballettroupewasperforminginhertownagain.

Bittermemoriesoftheleader'sharshwordscamefloodingbacktoher.Thistimeshewas

determinedtofindoutwhytheleaderhadtoldhershewasnotgoodenoughwhenallher

teachersthoughtotherwise.Hereplied,tcItellthistoeverystudent.,,Sheangrilyshotback,

“You'veruinedmylife!,,Thenshegotafurthershock,4tIrememberyourgiftofrosesand

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howthethornshadprickedyourfingersbutyoucarriedonbravely.^^Hesaidifshedidnot

giveupsoeasily,itmightbeadifferentstory.

Withinthreeyears,Bonniehadbecomeafamousballerinaasshewanted.Guidedbythe

troupeleader,shesucceededinattainingtheleadingpositionintheSwanLake.Herelegant

appearanceandexcellentperformanceonthestagewassoamazingthatshegainedpower

overalltheaudiences.Despitebeingsofamous,Bonniestillfeltnervoussometimes.Butone

wordwouldalwayscalmherdown:"Ifyouwanttopickroses,don'tbeafraidofthethoms.^^

【解析】

【导语】

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Bonnie的梦想是成为一名伟大的芭蕾舞演员，一天，

她看到一则广告，说一个著名的芭蕾舞团将在她的家乡表演。她找到了团长，她勇敢地

走近他，递给他一束红玫瑰。激动之下，玫瑰的刺扎到了她的手，但她并没有太在意它

的痛，她向团长展示了自己的舞蹈才能。团长说她跳的不够好，在羞愧和愤怒中，Bonnie

飞快地跑出了更衣室。领导的话对她的信心是一个巨大的打击。尽管如此悲伤，她没有

放弃她的梦想。

【详解】

1.段落续写：

①.由第一段首句内容“六个月后，她听说那个芭蕾舞团又在她的镇上演出了“可知，第一

段可以继续写没有放弃梦想的Bonnie又去找团长，这次她决心要弄清楚为什么领导说

她不够好以及他们之间的对话。

②.由第二段首句内容“三年之内，Bonnie如愿以偿地成为了一名著名的芭蕾舞演员。”

可知，第二段可续写Bonnie成功后的状态和心理、情感变化。

2.续写线索：找到团长问清楚原因——获得了成功——有时会感到紧张——一句话激励

着她

3.词汇激活

行为类

①.下定决心做某事：bedeterminedtodosth/makeupone'smindtodosth

②.放弃：giveup/abandon

③.获得：gain/acquire/attain

情绪类

①.害怕的：afraid/frightened

②.紧张的：nervous/anxious

［点睛］

［高分句型l］.Herelegantappearanceandexcellentperformanceonthestagewassoamazing

thatshegainedpoweroveralltheaudiences.（运用了so...that弓|导的结果状语从句）

［高分句型2］.Ifyouwanttopickroses,don'tbeafraidofthethorns.（运用了if引导的条

件状语从句）

7.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Joyceisinthefourthgradeandhejoinedthenoisychildrenofhisclassasusual.

"Children!Silence!^^MangatMadamsuddenlyenteredtheclass.Sheannouncednextweek

wouldbemathweek."I'dlikeeachofyoutoworkonaproject.Youcoulddoitindividually

orinagroup."sheinstructed."Thetopicfortheprojectneedsapprovingtomorrowandithas

tobedisplayedatthemathweekexhibition.Thebestprojectwillbeawardedandthereis

alsoasurprisegiftfrommyside,“sheadded.

Joyce,whoisextremelygoodatmath,satinthecomerseatofthefirstbenchwithKaran,

anaverage.KaranaskedJoyceiftheycouldworkonthemathprojecttogether.Joycereplied

inapridefultone,€tHa-hayouwanttojoinme.IthinkIwilldotheprojectonmyown.^^

JoycewantedtogetawardedandthesurprisegiftallforhimselffromMangatMadam.

Afterdeep