话题04 旅游探险-2023年新高考英语读后续写之十年高考真题微编微练

2023年新高考英语读后续写之十年高考真题微编微练

主题04旅游探险

【真题微编】

（2022•全国甲卷C）

AsGinniBazlintonreachedAntarctica,shefoundherselfgreetedbyagroupoflittleGentoopenguins（企鹅）

longingtosayhello.Thesegentle,lovelygatekeeperswelcomedherandkick-startedwhatwastobeatripGinni

wouldneverforget.

Eversinceherchildhood,Ginni,now71,hashadadeeplovefortravel.Throughouthercareer（职业）asa

professionaldancer,shetouredintheUK,butalwayslongedtoexplorefurtherWhensheretiredfromdancingand

hersonseventuallyflewthenest,shedecideditwastimetotaketheplunge.

AftertakingadegreeatChichesterUniversityinRelatedArts,Ginnibegantotraveltheworld,eventually

gettingworkteachingEnglishinJapanandChile.AnditwasinChileshediscoveredshecouldgetlast-minute

cheapdealsonshipsgoingtoAntarcticafromtheislandsoffTierradelFuego,thesouthernmosttipoftheSouth

Americanmainland.

“Ijustdecidedwantedtogo,“shesays.

InMarch2008,Ginniboardedashipwith48passengers.

故事解读:

本文为一篇说明文，主要介绍了71岁的GinniBalinton从小就对旅行有着深深的热爱，渴望探险，不

再跳舞和孩子们成家立业之后，她开始周游世界，并在2008年开始了前往南极洲的旅程。

范文赏析：

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*7justdecidedwantedtogo,“shesays."1hadnoideaaboutwhatTdfindthereandIwasn'tnervous,Ijust

wantedtodoit.AndIwantedtodoitaloneasIalwayspreferitthatway.”

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InMarch2008,Ginniboardedashipwith48passengers.She'dnevermetbefore,tobeginthejourney

towardsAntarctica.4Tromseeingthewildlifetowitnessingsunrises,thewholeexperiencewasamazing.Antarctica

leftanimpressiononmethatnootherplacehas,^^Ginnisays."IrememberthefirsttimeIsawahumpbackwhale;

itjustroseoutofthewaterlikesomeprehistoriccreatureandIthoughtitwassmilingatus.Youcouldstillhearthe

operaticsoundsitwasmakingunderwater."Therealizationthatthisisapreciousland,toberespectedbyhumans,

wasoneofthebiggestthingsthathithometoGinni.

【真题微练01】

（2014•江西卷・A）

Larrywasonanotherofhisunderwaterexpeditions（探险）butthistime,itwasdifferent.Hedecidedtotakehis

daughteralongwithhim.Shewasonlytenyearsold.Thiswouldbeherfirsttripwithherfatheronwhathehad

alwaysbeenfamousfor.

Larryfirstbegandivingwhenhewashisdaughter'sage.Similarly,hisfatherhadtakenhimalongononeof

hisexpeditions.Sincethen,hehadneverlookedback.Lanystartedoutbyrentingdivingsuitsfromthesmall

divingshopjustalongtheshore.Hehadhatedthem.Theywereeithertoobigortoosmall.Then,therewasthe

instructor.Hegavehimashortlessonbeforeallowinghimintothewaterwithhisfather.Hehadmadeanexception.

Larrywouldneverhavebeenabletogodownwithoutatleastfivehoursoftheoryandanothersimilarnumberof

hoursonpracticallessonswithaguide.Childrenhisagewerenotevenallowedtodive.

Afterthefirstexpedition,Larry'slaterdivingadventuresonlygotbetterandbetter.Therewasneveradull

moment.Inhisblackandbluesuitandwithanoxygentankfastenedonhisback,Larrydivedfromboatsintothe

middleoftheocean.Dangerousareasdidnotpreventhimfromcontinuinghissearch.Sometimes,hewaslimitedto

acageunderwaterbutthatdidnotbotherhim.Atleast,hewasstillabletotakephotographsoftheunderwater

creatures.

LanysfirstexpeditionwithouthisfatherwasintheCaymanIslands.

Larrylookedathisdaughter.

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Larry^sfirstexpeditionwithouthisfatherwasintheCaymanIslands.Therewerenumerousdivingspotsinthe

areaandLarrywasdeterminedtovisitallofthem.Foilunatelyforhim,amanofferedtotakehimaroundthe

differentspotsforfree.Larrydidnotevenknowwhatthetimewas,howmanyspotshedivedintoorhowmany

photographshehadtaken.ThedivingspotsaffordedsuchawidearrayoffishandseacreaturesthatLarrysawmore

thanthirtyvarietiesofcreatures.

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LarrylookedathisdaughtenShelookedasexcitedashehadbeenwhenhewasherage.Hehopedshewould

beabletocontinuethefamilytradition.Already,shelookedlikeshewasmuchbraverthanLarryhadbeenthen.This

wasthekeytoasuccessfulunderwaterexpedition.

【真题微练02】

（2013•江西卷・A）

Thelightfromthecampfirebrightenedthedarkness,butitcouldnotpreventthedampcoldofDennis*s

Swamp（沼泽地）creepingintotheirbones.Itwasastrangeplace.MartinandTomwishedthattheyhadnot

acceptedJack'sdare.Theylikedcamping,butnotnearthisswamp.

“So,"Martinaskedastheysatwatchingthehotcoals.uHowdidthisplacegetitsname?”

“Areyousureyouwanttohearit?Ifsascarystory,“warnedJack.

“Ofcourse!”criedoutTom."Iftherewereanythingtobescaredof,youwouldn'thavechosenthisplace!”

“OK,butdon*tsayIdidn'twarnyou,“saidJack,andhebeganhistale.

“Waybackintime,amancalledDennistriedtostartafarmhere.Hebuiltthatcottageovertheretolivein.In

thosedays,thearealookedquitedifferent-itwascoveredwithtalltreesandtheswampwasacrystal-clearriver.

Afterthreehardyears,Dennishadclearedseveralfieldsandplantedcrops.Hewassoproudofhissuccessthathe

refusedtolistentoadvice.”

“'Youareclearingtoomuchland',warnedoneoldman.'Thelandisalivingthing.Itwillhitbackatyouif

youabuseit.''SillyfboP,saidDennistohimself.'IfIclearmoreland,Icangrowmorecrops.Tilbecomewealthier.

He'sjustjealous!…

"Denniscontinuedtochopdowntrees.Smallanimalsthatreliedonthemforfoodandshelterweredestroyed.

Hewassoeagertoexpandhisfarmthathedidnotnoticetheriverflowingslowlytowardshisdoor.Hedidnot

noticesaltseepingtothesurfaceoftheland.Hedidnotnoticeswampplantschokingallthenativeplants.^^

（"Whathappened?”Martinasked.

（＜Whatastupidstory,nlaughedTorn.

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"Whathappened?”Martinasked.Itwasgrowingcolder.Hetrembled,twistinghisbodyclosertothefire.

“Thelandhitback-justastheoldmanwarned,“Jackshrugged."Dennisdisappeared.Oldfolksaroundhere

believethatswampplantsmovedupfromtheriveranddraggedhimunderwater.Hisbodywasneverfbund.^^

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ltWhatastupidstory,“laughedTom."Plantscant.Beforehehadfinishedspeaking,hescreamedand

fainted.Theothertwoboysjumpedupwithfright,staringatTom.Suddenly,theyburstoutlaughing.Somegreen

swampivyhadcoveredTom'sface.ItwasawhilebeforeTomcouldappreciatethejoke.

【真题微练03】

（2013辽宁卷・A）

Chinaisalandofbicycles.Atleastitwasbackin1992whenItraveledthecountry.Backtheneveryone

seemedtoberidingabicycle.Millionsofthem,allblack.Carswererare.Yetsincemyan*ivalinBeijinglastyear,

Fvefoundtheoppositeistrue.Therearemillionsofcars.However,peoplestillusetheirbicyclestogetaround.For

many,it'stheeasiestandcheapestwaytotraveltoday.Bicyclesalsocomeindifferentcolors—silver,green,red,

blue,yellow,whateveryouwant.

Itsfunwatchingpeoplebiking.

Myfirstridehomewasorderly.

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It'sfunwatchingpeoplebiking.Theyrushquicklythroughcrossroads,moveskillfullythroughtraffic,andride

evenonsidewalks.Bicyclesallowpeoplethefreedomtomoveaboutthatcarsjustcan'tprovide.Eagertobepartof

thisaspectofChineseculture,Idecidedtobuyabicycle.Greatweatheraccompaniedmygreatbuy.Iimmediately

jumpeduponmybicycleseatandstartedhome.

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Myfirstridehomewasorderly.Tobesafe,Istayedwitha"pack"ofbikerswhilecarsonthestreetscame

runningswiftlyoutofnowhereattimes.Ididn'twanttogethit.SoItooktheridecarefully.Crossingthestreetswas

thebiggestproblem.ltwasalotlikecrossingamajorhighwaybackintheUnitedStates.Thestreetsherewerewide,

socrossingtooktime,skillandalittlebitofluck.Ifinallymadeithome.Thefeelingonthebicyclewas

amazing.Theairhittingmyfaceandgoingthroughmyhairwaswonderful.IwassittingontopoftheworldasI

passedbyplacesandpeople.Bikingmademefeelalive.

【真题微练04】

（2012・上海卷・A）

PhilWhitehasjustreturnedfroman18,000-mile,around-the-worldbicycletrip.Whitehadtworeasonsfor

makingthisepicjourney.Firstofall,hewantedtousethetriptoraisemoneyforcharity,whichhedid.Heraised

£70,000fortheBritishcharity,Oxfam.White'ssecondreasonformakingthetripwastobreaktheworldrecord

andbecomethefastestpersontocyclearoundtheworld.Heisstillwaitingtofindoutifhehasbrokentherecord

ornot.

WhitesetofffromTrafalgarSquare,inLondon,on19thJune2004andwasback299dayslater.Hespent

morethan1,300hoursinthesaddle（车座）anddestroyedfoursetsoftyresandthreebikechains.Hehadthe

adventureofhislifecrossingEurope,theMiddleEast,India,Asia,Australia,NewZealandandtheAmericas.

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