主题03 叙事忆旧-2021年中考英语作文素材大全

主题3

——叙事忆旧

I.主题词汇

anunforgettableexperience（一次难忘的经历），havealotofmemories（有很多回忆），beina

goodmood（心情舒畅的），learn...from...,lookforwardtodoing,beproudof,inorderto,cometrue,

dosb.afavour,givesb.ahand,helpsb.withsth,withthehelpofsb.,takegoodcareofsb.,make

one'slifehappyandfulloflaughter（使某人的生活快乐并充满笑声），ThebestteacherthatIhave

everseenis...（我见到最好的老师是…）

II.常用句型

1.Themore...,themore...

2....isthebestwayto...

3.Inorderto...

4.Itiscommonknowledgethat...

5.Ioncehadanexperience...

6.Itisthemostunforgettableexperiencethathaseverhappenedinmylife.

7.Iamsurethat...

8.Memoryisakindoftreasure.

9....playsanimportantroleinourdailylife

10.Everyoneknows,“…"

11.Weshoulddo...soastodo...

m.模拟试题

Themostunforgettableexperienceinmymemory

a.Whathappenedtoyou?

b.Whenandwheredidithappen?

c.Whyisitunforgettable?

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要点分析：

1.可以写写你的经历（时间、人物、事件、结果）和你的感受。

2.仔细审题，确定时态（一般过去时为主），确定需要用的词组和句型。

3.为什么难忘？从你的经历中学到了什么（详写）？

4.切记不要偏题（如：不是“难忘的'’而写成其他的感受）。

写作思路：

1）你的经历（When,where,who,what,how...）

1.Ioncehadanexperience...

2.Itisthemostunforgettableexperiencethathaseverhappenedinmylife...

3.Threeyearsago,myparentsandIflewtoJapan.

4.MyclassmatesandIhadabirthdaypartyinMarchthisyear.

5.ThemostunforgettableexperienceinmymemorywasonedaymyclassmatesandIwenttothe

park.

6.LastsummerIwenttovisitmyunclebyair.

7.Iwillneverforgetthemilitarytraining.

8.Oneday,Inoticedamanwasstealingawoman'spurseonabus.

9.WcwenttoDisneyland.Itisanamazingamusementpark.

10.WegotupearlyinthemorningandwewereallveryexcitedbecausemyfamilyandIwenttothe

countrysidetohaveapicnic.

11.TherearealotofmemoriesinmyheartthatIcan'tforget.When1wastenyearsold,1travelled

byplanewithmyparents.

12.Asweallknow,everyonehassomethingspecialinhislife.IthinkIwillneverforgetmy14th

becauseonthatdaymyparentsgavememyfirstbirthdaypartyinahotel.

13.Ithinkmychildhoodwaswonderful,anditmademeknow:"Tobepatient.”

14.Itwasahappychildhoodthatwasfilledwithknowledgeandrelaxation.

15.WhenIopenthebookwhichisfullofphotos,IalwayslookbackonwhenIwassmall.It'sreally

themostvaluabletimethatIhave.Iwillneverforgetit.

H）你的感受

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I.Ithinkthisisthemostunforgettableexperienceinmymemory.

2.Thereweremanyinterestingthingsandmanyfamouscartooncharacters.Ihadawonderfullime

init.

3.Onthatday,IbegantofeelthatIhavethedutyformylife.AndImustbestronger.

4.IfeltthatIwasgrowingup,andIshouldberesponsibleformyself.

5.Howfrighteningandunforgettabletheexperiencewas!

6.1nevertookaplanebefore,so1wastooexcitedtofallasleepthewholenight.

7.It'sreallyanimportantdaytomeandI'llbekindtomyparentsallthetime.

8.Everyonehasadifferentchildhood.Itmaybewonderful,excitingorhard.1haveanunforgettable

childhood.

9.Childhoodisamemorywithoutpressurecompetitionandhypocrisy（虚伪）

10.Friendssharecommoninterests.Itisshownthattwopeoplebecomefriendseasilywhenthey

havesomesports,studyinginthesameschoolorlivinginthesameneighborhood.

Friendsmakesacrifices.Friendsmakesacrificesfbreachother.

Friendsneverrunawayfromdifficulties.Itisalwaysshownthattruefriendsalwaysstandupfor

theirfriendsintimesofdifficulties.

Understanding.Friendsunderstandeachotherwithoutevensayingaword.Asinglesmilecan

brightenupthefacesofallthefriends.

范文讲评

WhenIwasaGradeTwopupil,IlikedplayingthefirecrackerverymuchduringtheSpring

Festival.Butasayoungboy,Ididn'tknowhowtoplayitsafely.Anaccidenthappened.Oncethe

firecrackerwaslit,andmyfaceandfingerswereinjuredbythefire.Itwasnotveryserious,butIstill

absentfromschoolandstayedathospitalforabouttwomonths.1wastakengoodcareofbyiny批注[al]:因为absenl是形容词，所以应与be动词搭

配在一起使用，wasabsent.

parentsandnurses.Therefore,youcanhardlyknowthatbylookingatmyfaceandfingers.

Itwasasadandunforgettableexperienceinmylife.Sincethen,Ihaven'tdoneanythingifI

couldn'tknowthatitissafe.Ilearnsafetyfirst.批注[a2]:这句话中，安全是要“确保”的，所以把

know改为makesure更合理。

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修改稿

7.WhenIwasaGradeTwopupil,IlikedplayingthefirecrackerverymuchduringtheSpring

Festival.Butasayoungboy,Ididn'tknowhowtoplayitsafely.Anaccidenthappened.Oncethe

firecrackerwaslit,andmyfaceandfingerswereinjuredbythefire.Itwasnotveryserious,butI

wasstillabsentfromschoolandstayedathospitalforabouttwomonths.Iwastakengoodcareofby

myparentsandnurses.Therefore,youcanhardlyknowthatbylookingatmyfaceandfingers.

8.Itwasasadandunforgettableexperienceinmylife.Sincethen,Ihaven'tdoneanythingifI

couldn'tmakesurethatitissafe.Ilearnsafetyfirst.

范文选登

Passage1

WhenIwastwelve,myclassmatesandIhadafootballmatchinthepark.Allofuswereinterestedin

it.Westartedthematchatnineo'clock.Althoughwelostthismatch,wewerestillveryhappy.After

thematch,wewereverytired,sowewenttotheKFCtohavearest.Ithinkthisisthemost

unforgettableexperienceinmymemory.

Passage2

Threeyearsago,myparentsandIflewtoJapan.Isawitfromtheplane.Oh,itisabeautifulisland.

TherewewenttoDisneyland.Itisanamazingamusementpark.Thereweremanyinterestingthings

andmanyfamouscartooncharacters.1hadawonderfultimeinit.ThenwewenttoaJapanese

restaurant.Allthefoodwasdelicious.Wehadagoodtime!Thatismyunforgettableexperience.

Passage3

MyclassmatesandIhadabirthdaypartyinMarchthisyear.It'sourfourteenthbirthday.Atthe

countryside,wecelebratedourbirthdaytogether.Weateabigcakeandplayedwitheachother.I

cannotforgetitbecauseil'sverymeaningful.Onthatday,1begantofeelthatIhavethedutyformy

life,andImustbestronger.

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Passage4

ThemostunforgettableexperienceinmylifewasonedaymyclassmatesandIwenttothepark.We

wereallveryhappyandhadagoodtimethere.Butonourwaybackhome,wewalkedalongasmall

river.Jacksawsomesmallfishinit,sohetriedtocatchthem.Buthewassocarelessthathefellin

totheriver.Iquicklygavehimahandandsavedhim.Howfrighteningandunforgettablethe

experiencewas!

Passage5

LastSundaywasmybirthday.Mybirthdayisalwaysasweetexperiencefbrmeeveryyear.Sowas

thisone.WcgotupearlyinthemorningandwewereallveryexcitedbecausemyfamilyandIwent

tothecountrysidetohaveapicnic.Afterthat

myfatherdroveustothebrach.Thereweregoodviewsandthewindblewgently.Itwasvery

comfortable.Atnightwewentbackhome.AndMumcookednoodlescalledLongLifeNoodlesfbr

me.Itwasverydelicious.Ifeltihalwasgrowingup.andIshouldberesponsibleformyself.What

anunforgetableexperienced!

Passage6

LastsummerIwenttovisitmyunclebyair.Inevertookaplanebefore,soIwastooexcitedto

fallasleepthewholenight.Onthedayoftheflight,thecrewtookmefrommyparentstotheseat.

Luckily,myseatwasnearthewindow.WhenIsawthesky,Iwasveryhappy.ThenIsleptonthe

planeuntilitlanded.Howexcitingandunfbrgetlaleiheexperiencewas!

Passage7

TherearcalotofmemoriesinmyheartthatIcan'tforgrt.WhenIwastenyearsold,Itravelledby

planewithmyparents.Isawtheplanewashugeandbeautiful.Iwasexcitedtoseethehugeplane.

Afterafewminutes,Isatontheplane.Ifeltitwasflying.Isawthebeautifulblueskyandwhite

clouds.Thehousesandtheroadsweresmallerandsmaller.Theyweresobeautiful.Whatan

unforgettableandniceexperienceitwas!1reallylovedit.

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Passage8

Oneday,Inoticedamanwasstealingawoman'spurseonabus.IwasyoungandnotstrongsoI

didn'tknowwhatIshoulddo.Atthattimc,amanwhowasinfrontofthebuscaughthim.ThenI

phonedthepolice.Thepolicegotthereintime.Ofcourse,thethiefwastakenawaybythepolice.1

thinkthemanwasbrave.IwillbeabravemanlikehimwhenIgrowup.Howunforgettablethe

experiencewas!

Passage9

Iwillneverforgetthemilitarytrainingwehadinthesecondaryschool.Inordertolearnworkina

team,wehadafive-daytraining.Weweretiredfromstanding,runningandworking.Amongthe

students,IwasthemosttiredonebecauseIwasverynaughtyandtoldtorunover5circlesaround

theplaygroundinthosedays.ButintheendIunderstandthatworkingasasoldierisveryhardand

difficultbulfullofhonours.Weshouldlearnfromthesoldiers.

Passage10

There,realotofmemoriesinmymindwhichIwillneverforget.

ItwasMonday,andtheweatherwasalittlehot.Afterhavingsomanylessons,Iwentoutofthe

maingateofschoolwithmyfriends.Ilookedaroundtofindmyfather^car,butIfailed.What's

muchworse,IforgottotakemycellphonesoIcouldn'tcallmyparents.Unfortunately,Ididn'tthat

whileIwaswaitingfbrmyfatheranxiously,myfatherwaswaitingwithworry.Atlast,Icouldn't

bearitandItookataxitogethomeandmyfatherdrovehomealone.

Howunforgettabletheexperiencewas!Fromthisexperience,IlearnthatIshallbecareful.IfIam

careless,Iwillgetmyselfintotrouble.

范文链接

Passage1.Anunforgettablething

WhenIwasayoungchild,Iwastooshytotalktoanyone.Myclassmatesoftenlaughedatme.Iwas

sadbutcoulddonothing.Latersomethinghappened,anditchangedmylife.ItwasanEnglish

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speechcontest.Mymotheraskedmetotakepartinit.Whataterribleidea!ItmeantIhadtospeakin

frontofalltheteachersandstudentsofmyschool.Butmymothertoldme,'believeinyourself.'

AndItriedmybesttopractiseit.Withmymother'slove,Ididwellinthecontest.Since

then,everythinghaschanged.WhateverIdoanything,Ialwaystellmyself'nothingisimpossible.I

canmakeit/Ibecomemoreconfidentaftertheconcert.

Passage2.Amostexcitingmoment

Inmymemory,Ialwaysrememberthatday.ItwasMay9th,2OI2.AlltheGradeEightstudentsin

ourschoolwenttoChongqingIslandtocelebratethe14,hbirthday.Itwasthefirsttimethatwe

celebratedourbirthdaytogether.Allofuswereexcited.Wesandanddancedandplayedgamesat

theparty.Themostexcitingmomentwastoreadthelettersfromourschoolparents.Wewere

movedbecausesuddenlywerealizedweweretheartistswhopaintedourfuturewiththebrushof

loday.

Passage3.Adifferentchoice

Ithappenedinourclassroom.Onemorning,whenIenteredourclassroom.Ihappenedtoseeoneof

mybestfriendcopyinganotherstudent'shomework.Asanhoneststudent,Ishouldtellmyclass

teacheraboutit.Butheismybestfriend.HowcanIdothat?Itwasreallydifficultformetochoose.

Ithoughtalot.Atlast,Idecidedtotellmyteacheraboutit.Althoughmybestfrienddidn'ttalktome

forafewdays.1stillthinkhewillunderstandme.Becauseweallshouldbehonestpersons.

Passage4.Mychildhood

Childhoodusuallytakesupanimportantpartinone'slifetime.WhenIsawthepictureofmy

hometown,itwouldremindmeofmychildhood.

Ioftenplayedballgamesandclassinmychildhoodlikeotherchildren.ButthethingsIdidmost

wastohelpmymotherdosomehousework.Ihelpedhermopthefloorandcleanthefurniture.

Therefore,mymotherwouldnotbeverytired.Ienjoyeddoingitverymuch.BecauseofwhatIdid

inmychild,1becameagoodwarm-heartedchildandIamlovedbyalmosteverywherewhohas

receivedhelpfromme.IthinkI'vegotverygoodeducationinmychildhoodandIwashappy.

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Mychildhoodisapreciousmemory.Ilalsoletsmeknewhelpingotherswillmakeourlifehappy

andfulloflaughter.

Passage5.Myfirstmeetingwithaforeigner

OnedaywhenIwaswalkingonNanjingRoad,suddenlyaforeigneraskedmehowtogetto

No.lDepartmentStore.Iunderstoodwhathemeant,butIcouldn'texpressmyselfcorrectly.1could

onlysayafewwordsinbrokenEnglish.Atlasttheforeignerunderstoodandsaidwithasmile,

“You'dbetterlearnEnglishwellandspeakmoreEnglishFromthisexperience,Iknowhow

importantEnglishis.IwilldomybesttolearnEnglishwellsothatIcanspeakEnglishfluently.

Passage6.Onarainyday

Itwasawinterday.Iwaswaitingforabus.Suddenly,thrweatherbecamerainy.Therainwas

heavy.Luckily,ItookanumbrellawhenIlefthome.Butotherpeoplewhowerewaitingforthebus

didn'tdo.Ithoughtbeinghelpfulpeoplewasveryimportant.So1heldmyumbrellatoletthemget

onthebuswithoutgettingwet.Theyallthankedme.Ifeltwarmwithjoy.Thebussetoffagain,but

thewaterfrommyumbrelladrippedtothefloor.Ifeltverysorryaboutit.Atthatmoment,astudent

offeredmeaplasticbag.Ilookedathisfacewiththankfulness.Afterthatday,Iknewifwehelp

others,wewillbehelpedwhenwearcintrouble.

Passage7.Myweekend

AsaGradeNinestudent,myweekendisn'tasrelaxingandfreeasbefore.Ihavetodomy

homeworkandattendtheclass.ButIalsocandosomesports,watchTVandevenplaycomputer

gamessometimes.Ihavetimetotalkwithmyclassmates.Ienjoythelifelikethis.Tomakealong

storyshort,myweekendisbothbusyandhappy.

Passage8.ThefirsttimeIcookedfood

Aboutthreemonthsago,neithermyfathernormymotherwasathome.So1hadtocookfood

myselfItwasanunforgettableexperience.Icouldn'tcontrollotsofthings,suchashowmuchsaltI

shouldadd,howlongthefoodshouldbecookedandsoon.Tomakealongstoryshort,itwasvery

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terribleandthedishesweretheworstthatIeventasted.

Atthatmoment,Iknewmyparentsbothworkedhard.Soweshouldunderstandouparentsand

respectthehard-workingresultofourparents.

Passage9.AvisittotheGreatWall

Duringthewinterholidays,IvisitedtheGreatWallwithmyparents.Wetookatrainanditran

veryfast.WhenwearrivedattheGreatWall,weclimbedupmanysteps.Thereweremany

foreignersonthewayuptotheGreatWall.Whenwereachedthetop,wecouldseealltheviews

clearly.

Itwasreallygreat.IenjoyedmyjourneytotheGreatWallverymuch.Ihopetovisitthereagain

oneday.

真题在现

Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Anunforgettableexperience^^（以《一次难忘的经历》

为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。）初中生活即将结束，三年的初中生活一

定给你留下了很多难以忘怀的经历，请谈谈令你难忘、值得回忆的一次经历。

Phrasesforreference（以下短语仅供参考）

graduatefromameaningfulactivity

enjoyoneselfremember...forever

（注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

★审（Read）

从作文标题“Anunforgettableexperience”中可得知，主要的写作内容应为一次难忘的经历。

根据前几个章节的写作思路，接下来需要仔细阅读所给提示，但我中可们发现，提示中没有以

往非常清晰的框架指引性的问题,只出现了一些短语，如：graduatefrom,meaningfulactivity,

enjoyoneself,remember..forever.所以需要根据传统作文写作三大段l.what2.why3.conclusion,

推测出题千中隐含的三个问1.Whatisyourunforgettableexperience?2.Whydoyouthinkitis

unforgettable?3.Conclusion,于是可得出写作框架:1.我最难忘的经历是...2.难忘的原因是3.结论。

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★写(Write)

根据之前所讲写作步骤：作文题目一写作框架一添加素材一初稿,

即可进行如下书写步骤的拆解:

开篇：Myunforgettableexperienceis...

中间:Thereasonsare...

结尾：Fromtheexperience,I...

接下来，我们需要思考，涉及到校园生活类话题时，可以应用多少词汇及句式，才会使文

章的内容变得更加丰富。

★可用素材★

词汇大搜罗

▲名词：

1.activity2.care3.chance4.day

5.experience6.fact7.hand8.information

9.kind10.letter11.life12.1ove

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13.matter14.mother15.present16.school

17.shame18.student19.subject2O.lime21.year

▲动词：

1.become2,can3.enable4.forget

5.give6.go7.graduate8.grow

9.happenlO.have1l.help12.know

13.make14.must15.organize16.require

17.show18.speak19.study20.think21.write

▲形容词：

1.better2.good3.great4.high

5.most6.unforgettable7.whole

▲副词：

1.Fast2.loudly3.really4.usually

连接词及短语大搜罗

▲表转折

but,yet,however

▲表解释

asamatteroffact,infact,inthiscase

常见句型大搜罗

1.havestudiedin...我已经在..学习了

2.WhenIthinkabout...当我考虑到.

3.Duringourwholelife在我们的一生中

4.Makegooduseof..好好利用.

运用以上单词、连接词以及句式，就可以在己写出的文章框架（开篇、中间结尾）的中心句

的基础上，添加必要的写作素材，从而形成文章的初稿，如下：

初稿：

Anunforgettableexperience

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Timegoesfast,havestudiedinjuniorhighschoolfbrtwoyears,andwillgraduatefromitnext

year.WhenIthinkaboutwhathappenedtheseyears,Ireallycan'tforgetsomeexperiences,andthe

mostunforgettableonehappenedonlastMother'sDay.Onthatday,ourschoolorganizedanactivity

anditssubjectwastoshowlovetoourmothers.Allthestudentswererequiredtowritealetterto

theirmothersandmakeapresentbyhandfbrthem.Overourexpectation,everyonediditwithgreat

care.Asamatteroffact,weallknowthatmothersgiveuslife,butweareusuallytooshytoexpress

ourlove.Thisactivitymakesusspeakoutourloveloudly.Duringourwholelife,Wemusthave

someunforgettableexperienceswhichhelpusandenableustogrowup,andtherefore,wecould

makegooduseofeverychanceandmakeourselvesbetter.

★美（beautify）

根据之前所讲的写作步骤：初稿一包装句子

Step2

初槁I包装句子

在进行此步骤前，需要仔细阅读初稿中的每句句子，按照开篇中所讲美化文章的要点，则

可发现，文章在句式方面出现了如下问题：

初稿：

Anunforgettableexperience

l.Timegoesfast.2.1havesludiedinjuniorhighschoolfbr[woyears,and[willgraduatefrom

itnextyear.3.WhenIthinkaboulwhalhaDOunedIhesayears,Ireallycan'tfbrgetsomeexperiences、

4.andthemostunforgettableonehappenedonlastMother'sDay.Onthatday,ourschoolorganized

anactivity5.anditssubjectwastoshowlovetoourmothers.Allthestudentswererequiredtowrite

alettertotheirmothers6.andmakeapresentbyhandfordiem.7.Overourexpectation,everyonedid

itwithgreatcare.Asamaileroffact,weallknowthat8.mothersgiveuslife,butweareusuallytoo

shytoexpressourlove.9.Thisactivitymakesusspeakoulourloveloudly.Duringourwholelife,

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1().wemusthavesomeun