Module12Writing课件英语九年级上册

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discussingwhatyoucandoaboutpollutionModule12SaveourworldLet'swatchavideo.WhatdoyouthinkofthevolunteersDoyouthinktheirjobismeaningfulDoyouwanttobesomeonelikethemLet'sdosometeststocheckifyoucanbea

volunteer.Test1Test2Test3Test4HowtobegreenDoyouknowthekindsofpollutionHowtodealwithproblemsAreyoucarefulTest1WhatkindsofpollutiondoyouknowWhatcausesthepollutionpollutionairpollutionwaterpollutionwastepollutionlightpollutionnoisepollutionTest1WhatkindsofpollutiondoyouknowWhatcausesthepollutionairpollutionwaterpollutionwastepollutionTheresomanycarsontheroads,theyusesomuch

andcausepollution.oilPollutionfromfactoriesspreadsovercitiesandvillages,itmakespeople

,andmayeven

them.Iftheriversare

,farmerscan'tusethewaterfortheircrops.illkillpollutedSomepeople

rubbishwithoutsorting（分类）it,it'sveryharmfultoourenvironment.throwawayTest2Doyourememberhowtobegreen(Unit2)Thethree“R”ReduceReuseRecycleReduceReuseRecyclemeans:means:means:uselessuseagainchangethingsintosomethingelseDonotordermorefoodthanyoucanfinish.Turnoffthelightwhenyoudon'tneedthem.Donotusepapercupsorpaperbags.It'sbettertousechinacupsandclothbags.Divideyourrubbishintoplastic,glass,paperandrubber.RevisesomeimportantsentencesinUnit2withthehelpofthepictures.Earthcansurvivewithoutus,butwecannotsurvivewithouther.地球不需要人类，但人类离不开地球。Toprotectourearthistoprotectourselves！保护地球就是保护我们自己！PossibleversionTrytowalkorrideabiketoschool.Weshouldplantmoretrees.It'sbettertoturnoffthetapswhenwedon'tneedwater.Donotthrowtherubbishintotheriverorthesea.Dividetherubbishbeforethrowingit.Takeyourownbagwhenshopping.Test4AreyoucarefulenoughOurenvironmentisveryimportantforourlives.Weneedfreshair,cleanwaterandsoon.Inthepast,thereweremanytreesaroundus,theairwasfreshandtheriverwasclean.Butnow,manypeoplecutdowntreesandthrowrubbisheverywhere.Airpollutionandwaterpollutionbecomeveryserious.Thegovernmenthastakensomepoliciesforthepollution,buttheenvironmentaroundusisstillterrible.Soweshoulddosomethingtoprotectourenvironment.First,weshouldplantmanytreestokeeptheairfresh.Second,wecanrideabikeorwalktoschoolandwork.Third,weshouldn'tthrowthedirtythingsintotheriver.Fourth,weshouldn'tusetheplasticbags.Atlast,wecanaskmorepeopletojoinus.Ifeveryonestartstodosomething,theworldwillbesaved.Q1:WhatweretheairandthewaterlikeinthepastQ2:WhydoairpollutionandwaterpollutionbecomeseriousnowQ3:WhohasdonesomethingforthepollutionQ4:HowmanysuggestionsdoesthewritermentionQ5:What'sthewriter’spurposeofwritingthepassageTheairwasfreshandtheriverwasclean.Becausemanypeoplecutdowntreesandthrowrubbisheverywhere.Five.Toaskpeopletoprotecttheenvironment.Thegovernment.Congratulations!!Now,youhavequalification（资格）tobeavolunteerofenvironmentalprotection（环保志愿者）！Youdidit!!Ineedyourhelp!!Writing:(15minutes)当今社会，人们的环保意识越来越强，但是污染环境的现象仍然不时发生，作为一名志愿者，请你就身边发生的污染事件来呼吁大家保护环境。（词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总数）内容包括：1.简单列举发生在你身边的污染现象(至少2种）;2.保护环境的措施（至少3点）;3.呼吁大家共同努力，保护环境，保护地球。时态：

一般现在时人称：

第一人称Tobeginwith,generallyspeaking,What’smore,what’sworse,infact,afterall,anyway,aboveall,atthesametime,ontheonehand,…ontheotherhand,…however,inaddition(to),aswellnotonly...butalso...过渡语：核心句型：可迁移句式/可直接或间接使用句式：1.Weareintherightplacetotalkaboutthat.2.However,canmoneyhelpsolvealltheseproblems3.Pollutionisourgreatenemy,andwehavetofightit.4.Pollutionisadangertoourhealth.5.It’snousetalkingaboutthingswecan’tdo.We'vegottothinkthingswecando.6.Everyclasscollectswastewhichcanberecycledorusedagain.7.Thoughpollutionisheavynow,Idon’tthinkit’shopeless.8.Ifeveryonestartstodosomethingnow,theworldwillbesaved.

9.It’sbettertousechinacupsandclothbagsbecausetheycanbeusedmanytimes.10.Divideyourrubbishintoplastic,glass,paperandrubber.11.Developarecyclingpolicyforthewholecommunity.12.Let’stryourbestto...13.Let’stakeactionsnow!14.Actionsaremoreimportantthanwords.当今社会，人们的环保意识越来越强，但是污染环境的现象仍然不时发生，作为一名志愿者，请你就身边发生的污染事件来呼吁大家保护环境。（词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总数）内容包括：1.简单列举发生在你身边的污染现象。(至少2种）2.保护环境的措施（至少3点）3.呼吁大家共同努力，保护环境，保护地球。Content.1First,second,then,what'smore,atlast....Donot.......Weshould......Tryto......It'sbetterto......Ifeveryone.......,ourearthwill........Let’s……写作方法指导（mind-map)BeginingBodyEndingNowadays,moreandmorepeoplehaverealisedtheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment,butthepollutionstillhappensaroundus.污染的现象Content.2措施............呼吁Readyourpassagealoud,thencheckitbyyourself.1.要点齐了吗？2.句子结构对了吗？3.句子连贯吗？4.单词都写对了吗？5.有没错误的语法？6.书写整洁吗？Checkbyyourself

Readandcheckhowmanypointsyoucanget.

内容（7分）语言:人称、时态、连贯（8分）合计

要点1（2分）要点2（3分）要点3（2分）个别错误（8分）少数错误（6-7分）一些错误（4-5分）较多错误（1-3分）15分自评

Readandcheckhowmanypointsyoucanget.showtime

人称：第一人称时态：一般现在时Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplehaverealisedtheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment,butthepollutionstillhappensaroundus.作文展评，小组讨论评分，作文满分15分Post-writing(8minutes)Ending结尾Body正文Beginning开头部分简单列举发生在你身边的污染现象（至少2种）12保护环境的措施（至少3点）.呼吁大家共同努力，保护环境，保护地球内容（7分）语言:人称、时态、连贯（8分）合计

要点1（2分）要点2（3分）要点3（2分）个别错误（8分）少数错误（6-7分）一些错误（4-5分）较多错误（1-3分）15分自评

Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplehaverealisedtheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment,butthepollutionstillhappensaroundusfromtimetotime.

Forexample,therearesomanycarsontheroadsandtheyuse

somuchoilthatcauseairpollution.Andsomepeoplethrowawayrubbisheverywhere,ontheroad,inthepark,andeveninthesea!

Inordertoprotecttheenvironmentfromgettingevenworse,wemustdosomethingtofightagainstthepollution.Firstofall,weshouldwalkorrideabiketoschoolandworkaspossibleaswecan,itcannotonlyavoidpollutingtheairbutalsokeepushealthy.Secondly,it’sbettertousechinacupsandclothbag