读后续写无辜的农民牵扯到谋杀案中讲义-高三英语二轮复习

读后续写原题目呈现：阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Afarmergrewsomevegetablesinhisgarden.Onedayhiswifewasillandhehadnomoney.Hehadtosellsomecabbagesandcarrotsinthemarket.Thenextmorninghetooktwobasketsofvegetablestotown.Butitwasraininghardthatafternoonandtherewerefewpeopleinthestreet.Whenhisvegetablesweresoldout,itwasdark.Heboughtsomemedicineandhurriedtohisvillage.Onhiswayhomehesawapersonlyingonthesnow.Heplacedhisbasketsonthegroundandwasgoingtohelpthepersontogetup.Atthattimehefounditwasadeadmanandtherewasmuchbloodonhisbody.Hewassoafraidthatheranawayquickly,withouttakingthebasketswithhim.Thenextafternoonthefarmerwassenttothepolicestation.Havingshownthebaskets,anofficerasked,“Aretheseyours”“Yes,sir.”thefarmeransweredtimidly（胆怯地）.“Haveyoukilledtheman”“No,no,sir.”thefarmersaidinahurry.“Whendidyouseethedeadman”“Aboutsevenlastevening.”“Didyouseewhokilledtheman?”“No,sir.”Theofficerbroughtoutaknifeandasked,“Haveyouseenityet?”“No,sir.”Theofficerbecameangryandtoldthepolicementobeathimupandsenthimintoprison.theofficerwantedtotrapthefarmerintotheconfession(供认),butthefarmerdidn’tadmithewasthemurderer.注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Theofficerwassoangrythatheaskedthepolicemantobeathimupagain._______________________________________________________________

Paragraph2:Thefarmerwaslucky.Afewdayslater,_____________________________________________________________第一步：阅读文章，get大意who：afarmer,policeofficerwhen:

atnight,andthenextdaywhat:thefarmersawadeadman,andtheofficerconsideredhimasthemurderer

where:onhiswayhomeandthepolicestationwhy:thefarmerlefthisbasketsbesidethebodyConclusion:Thefarmersawadeadmanandthepoliceofficerthoughthewasthemurdererandaskedthepolicementobeatthefarmerupagainandagain.

第二步：确定情节Beginning:thefarmer'swifeissick,sohewenttothemarkettosellvegetables.

Development:onhiswayhome,thefarmersawadeadmanwithmuchblood.Hewassoscaredthatheranawayandlefthisbasketsbesidethebody.

Climax:whenhearguedthathedidn'tdothat,thepoliceofficeraskedthepolicementobeathimupagainandagan.

Ending:tobecontinued.....第三步：根据给出的开头部分，来看续写内容para1：根据给出的开头部分，来看续写内容切入点：农夫的心理描写，被冤枉的痛苦以及希望帮自己辩解的迫切。para2：Thefarmerwaslucky.Afewdayslater,切入点：真凶是否找到了，是否需要增加人物或线索来引出真凶第四步：刻画细节冲突，增加人物促进故事发展细节冲突：动作描写，心理描写，语言描写，环境描写增加细节：证人出现，指出真凶第五步：可以用的表达方式形容词做状语:Desperateandfrightened,hetriedtotellpeoplethetruth,butnoonecouldhearhisvoice.现在分词作状语：ayoungmancametothepolicestationwithalotofjournalists,sayingthathesawthemurderer.强调句：Itwasthepoliceofficerwhokilledthemanonthesnow!定语从句：Thepoliceofficerwassentintoprisonandthepolicemanwhobeatupthefarmerwasfired,优秀范文：Theofficerwassoangrythatheaskedthepolicemantobeathimupagain.Thefarmerwasveryafraid,hethoughthewouldbesentencedtodeathbykillingpeople,buthedidn’t,hewasinnocent.Desperateandfrightened,hetriedtotellpeoplethetruth,butnoonecouldhearhisvoice.hehopedthatsomeonecouldeandsavehim.Thefarmerwaslucky.Afewdayslater,ayoungmancametothepolicestationwithalotofjournalists,sayingthathesawthemurderer.Itwasthepoliceofficerwhokilledthemanonthesnow!Hesawthepoliceofficeusedaknifekillingthemanlateintheevening.hewassofrightenedandranaway.Buttheyoungmanthoughtthefarmerwasinnocent.Sohetookthegreatcouragetoexposetherealcriminal.Aftertheinvestigation,theyoungmanwasright.Thepoliceofficerwassentintoprisonandthepolicemanwhobeatupthefarmerwasfired,andthebraveyoungmanwasregardedastheherobythevillagers下水文：Theofficerwassoangrythatheaskedthepolicemantobeathimupagain.

Blowsandkicksraineddownuponhim.

Makingafist,

thepoliceman

punched

thefarmer

heavilyonhisface.Thepoormanwasthrowntothegroundwithnosebleeding.Seizedbythefearofbeingframedupandsentencedtodeath,hecouldn'thelptremblingatthecorneroftheprison.Timidashewas,hestillinsistedthathewasdefinitelynot

themurderer.Unfortunately,noonebelievedinhim.Thefarmerwaslucky.Afewdayslater,ayoungmancametothepolicestationwithalotofjournalists,sayingthathesawthemurderer.Itwasthepoliceofficerwhokilledthemanonthesnow!Hesawthepoliceofficeusedaknifekillingthemanlateintheevening.hewassofrightenedandranaway.Buttheyoungmanthoughtthefarmerwasinnocent.Sohetoo