应用文写作+分享比赛心得+讲义 高三英语一轮复习

题目：假定你是李华，上周参加了全市中学生英语口语大赛。请你写一封邮件给美国笔友Peter,与他分享参赛心得，内容包括:1.参赛过程;2.参赛收获。分析：这次写作的问题：1.写成了说明文，类似新闻报道，（请看后面的新闻报道，注意区别），不符合书信风格，很多同学千篇一律witness...，却忽略这是让你给对方写信；2.比赛过程的描写干巴巴的，句式单一，例如：First,Idid...;Then,Idid...之类。写参赛过程，两种思路：（1）时间顺序记录每一步做了什么；（2）参赛中的心情描写，类似读后续写的记叙。我们参考一些模考卷的考法分两种写法：一、时间顺序——考题链接：浙江Z20名校联盟第二次联考（做过的题目，请回忆）假定你是李华，上周末你参加了学校组织的市科技馆研学活动，请你在校英文论坛发表一篇帖子，分享此次经历，内容包括1.活动过程；2.个人感悟；3.期待评论。答案：AnUnforgettableTechExplorationTourLastweekendIparticipatedinafabuloustechexplorationtourinthecitysciencemuseumorganizedbyourschool.ItkickedoffwithanexhibitionofthehistoryofChinesescience,unfoldingtheawe-strikingwisdombehind.Whatfollowedwasahands-onexperience,whichuncoveredthesecretsofscience.Withalectureontheprospectofscience,thetourwasbroughttoanend.Notonlydidthetourinstillmewithasenseofprideinourscientificadvances,butitalsoplantedinmyheartaseedofscientificexploration.Anybodywhosharesthesamefeeling?Anticipatingyourcomments!提炼：LastweekendIparticipatedin...organizedby....Itkickedoffwith...,

非谓语结果.Whatfollowedwas...,which....With...,...wasbroughttoanend.Notonlydid...instillmewithasenseof...,butitalsoplantedinmyheartaseedof....【仿写填空】DearPeter,IcannotwaittosharemyexperienceinthehighschoolEnglishspeechcontestofthecitylastweek.

Itkickedoffwith___________________________,_____________________________________________.Whatfollowedwas_____________________________________________,which________________________________________________________.With_____________________________________________,___________________________________wasbroughttoanend.Notonlydid_______________________________________________________________________________,butitalso_________________________________________________________________________________________.Yourssincerely,LiHua【参考范文】DearPeter,

IcannotwaittosharemyexperienceinthehighschoolEnglishspeechcontestofthecitylastweek.Itkickedoffwithaprogramwherealltheparticipantswererequiredtogiveatwo-minutespeechonagiventopic.Whatfollowedwasarole-playactivity,whereIwasabletointeractwithstudentsfromdifferentschoolsandexchangeideaswiththem.Withthefinalround,apreparedspeechandaQ&Asession,thecontestwasbroughttoanend.NotonlydidthecontestinstillmewithasenseofconfidenceinmyEnglishspeakingabilities,butitalsoplantedinmyheartaseedofdeterminationtocontinuouslyimprovemylanguageskills.Intheend,Iwasawardedthesecondprize.Overall,thecontesthashelpedmegrowbothpersonallyandacademically.Bestwishes!Yourssincerely,LiHua二、侧重心理活动上台比赛，涉及到两个场景：紧张心情描写；比赛获奖后的观众以及我的心情描写。紧张：havebutterfliesinmystomach;_________withmynerves;fearseized/tookholdofme镇定：stayclamVersion1:DearPeter,How’severythinggoing?I’mwritingtosharemyexperienceinthehighschoolEnglishspeechcontestofthecitylastweek.FromthemomentIsteppedontothestagetodelivermyspeech,tothegroupdiscussionandrole-playactivity,andfinallytotheQ&Asessioninthefinalround,Iwasconstantlybattlingwithmynerves.However,Imanagedtostaycomposedandfocused,whichwasasignificantpersonalachievementforme.ThecontestinstilledinmeasenseofconfidenceinmyEnglishspeakingabilities,butitalsomademerealizetheimportanceofperseveranceanddetermination.Intheend,Iwasawardedthesecondprize.Itmademerealizethathardworkanddeterminationcantrulypayoff.Iamlookingforwardtoparticipatinginmoresucheventsinthefuture.Best,

LiHuaVersion2:【官方范文】DearPeter,How’severythinggoing?I’mwritingtosharemyexperienceinthehighschoolEnglishspeechcontestofthecitylastweek.Withweeksofpracticebeforehand,Iwalkedtothestageconfidentlyandhopefully.FearseizedmeforsomesecondsbeforeIrecoveredmyselfanddeliveredmyspeechfluently.Allmyeffortsfinallypaidoffwhentherecamethunderousapplause—Iwonthefirstprize.Thoughchallenging,thecontestturnedoutrewarding.Asthesayinggoes,youreapwhatyousow.Bestwishes!(83words)Yourssincerely,LiHua三、注意和新闻报道的区别（2024届江苏省镇江市高三英语期初统考）范文AnInter-schoolExchangeLastweekend,adelegationof10peoplefromoursisterschoolintheUKpaidavisittoourschool.

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