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读后续写写作练习讲义（试题+参考范文+原文

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读后续写Doodlebuganddandelionbethebee:

试题呈现：

“BEESAREDYING!^^DoodlebugPinkleycried,thrustinghis

latestcopyofWorldoftheWeirdathissisterDandelion.His

favoritemagazinehadalotofstrangebutimportantcontent.This

monthitwasinsectsindanger.Thenumberofcertainbugs,

includingbees,wasfallingsharplyallovertheworld.

"It'sterrible!^^Dandelionreplied,afterreadingthearticle.They

weresittingontheoutdoorpatio（台）ofCoolYule'sIceCreamShop.

“Maybewecouldmakeabeeroofgarden,too-likeinthis

article,5,Doodlebugsuggested.Yulerecommendedmakingiton

thepatio,addingapollinator（传粉昆虫）gardenuptherewould

attractbees-andmorecustomers."Brilliant!”Everyoneelse

respondedinachorus.

Nowtheproblemwashowtogetthefunds.Dandelion

proposedraisingmoneybysettingupaboothneartheshop's

entrancetoalertpeopleandaskthemtodonate.Theplanwasago!

ThenextdaytheirfriendsBog,TomikoandIzzymet

DoodlebugandDandelioninsideYule's.Everyonewasexcited.

Theymadehandoutsexplaininghowthegardenwouldattract

pollinators,dosomethingtohelppreventflooding,andimprovethe

air.

“Weshouldhaveabeemascot（吉祥物）,"Izzysuggested.

DoodlebugrecalledtheoldbeecostumethathisMomworefor

Halloweenonce.Overtheenthusiasticuproar,Dandelion

shouted,“Andyou'llbethebee,Doodlebug!^^“WILL

NOT!”Doodlebugshotback."Toobig.Weneedtostuff

somegrownupintothatcostume."Butwho,then?Fortenmad

minutesthekidsdebatedloudly.

“Silence,youlittlenoisykids!”someonesuddenly

roared."I'mtryingtoreadaboutbeesindanger!”Thewholecrew

turnedinshock.TheresatDoodlebug'shorribleteacher,

Mrs.Noodleknocker.Doodlebughaddiscoveredlongagothatshe

wasaWorldoftheWeirdfan,butthatdidn'tmakeherany

nicer.^^Beesandbutterfliesneedhelp!”Mrs.Noodleknocker

cried."Butapersoncan'tevenworryaboutthempeacefully!,,

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Doodlebug'seyeswentwideasabrilliantideacametomind.

Thebeecampaignwasamassivesuccess.

参考范文：111+112

Doodlebugseyeswentwideasabrilliantideacametomind.

"THEBEE!"heexclaimedandpointedatMrs.Noodleknocker,only

tobegreetedwithaglare.Dandeliondetailedtheirplanandasked

hertobethebeemascot.Afterdigestingtheinformation,Mrs.

Noodleknockerhadherirritableexpressionsoftenedabit."Just

forgetit,"shesaid,turningbacktohermagazine."Onlyrealbees

matter.^^Tomikorespondedboldlythatthiswholeplanwasindeed

forrealbees."Please,lady?”Bogcoaxed,addingherfavormight

doublethefund.Mrs.Noodleknockerputdownthemagazine,atiny

smileglintingacrossherusuallymeanmouth.Ithadbeenalongtime

sinceanyonecalledheralady.Finally,shesnortedandgavein.

Thebeecampaignwasamassivesuccess!Onthedayof

fundraising,Mrs.Noodleknockerrockedthebeecostumeinallher

pollinatorglory.Insteadofthreateningpassers-bywithasting,the

groupdecidedafriendlybeewastherightwaytogo.Thefollowing

hourswitnessedthebeebuzzingaroundthebooth,armsandlegs

punchingandkicking.Wheneverherstrangeinsecteyeslandedon

someone,thevictimquicklyforkedovercash-evenwithoutbeing

stung.Sohilariousandinspiring!AfewweekslaterCoolYule'sbee

gardenbloomedspectacularly,attractingcustomersandgoodinsects

fromallaround.AndMrs.Noodleknockerwasalmostaniceperson

fromthenon.Itprovedthatbeingabeecouldbegoodforanyone.

原文阅读：

“BEESAREDYING!,,DoodlebugPinkleycried,thrusting

hislatestcopyofWorldoftheWeirdathissisterDandelion.His

favoritemagazinehadalotofstrangecontent.Butoccasionallyit

highlightedlessstrange,moreimportanttopics.Thismonthit

wasinsectsindanger.Thenumberofcertainbugs,includingbees,

wasfallingsharplyallovertheworld.

"It'sterrible!,5Dandelionreplied,afterreadingthearticle.

TheyweresittingontheoutdoorpatioofCoolYule'sIceCream

Shoppe,waitingfortheirorders."That'swhyMomandI

plantedmilkweedinthebackyard.Itprovidesfoodforbees

andbutterflies.

“Maybewecouldmakeabeeroofgarden,too—likeinthis

article,5,Doodlebugsuggested.

“Butwhere?^^

“How5boutrighthere?^^Yulesaidashesetdown

theiryummy-lookingbananafloat-boats.Hepointedto

thecoveredareaofthepatio."Apollinatorgardenuptherewould

attractbees——andmorecustomers.IfIgetthefunds,I'Hdoit!”

“Whatifweraisedthemoney?,,Dandelionasked."Wecould

setupaboothsomewheretoalertpeopleandaskthemtodonate!^^

Yulelovedtheidea,evenofferingtobuildtheboothnearthe

shop'sentrance.Theplanwasago!

ThenextdaytheirfriendsBog,Tomiko,andIzzyWishbones

metDoodlebugandDandelioninsideYule's.Everyone

wasexcited.Theymadehandoutsexplaininghowthegardenwould

attractpollinators,dosomethingtohelppreventflooding,and

improvetheair.

“Weshouldhaveabeemascot,“Izzysuggested.

“Yeah!”Doodlebugagreed.''Dandelion,whataboutthatoldbee

costumeMomworeforHalloweenonce?Itsstillintheattic.”

Overtheenthusiasticuproar,Dandelionshouted,"Andyou'llbe

thebee,

Doodlebug!^^

“WILLNOT!”Doodlebugshotback,cringingattheideaof

beingseeningiantbee-wear."Anyway,Iwon'tfit.Weneedtostuff

somegrownupintothatcostume.v

"Don'tlookatme,“Yulesaid,frombehindthecounter.4tToo

big.”

Butwho,then?Fortenmadminutesthekidsdebatedloudly

aboutwho'dbethebee.

“Silence,yousnivelingmunchkins!”someonesuddenlyroared.

"I'mtryingtoreadaboutbeesindanger!”Thewholecrewturned

inshocktoseewhohadyelledatthem.Thereinabigboothsat

Doodlebug'shorribleteacher,Mrs.Noodleknocker.Doodlebughad

discoveredlongagothatshewasaWorldoftheWeirdfan,butthat

didn'tmakeheranynicer.

“Beesandbutterfliesneedhelp!”Mrs.Noodleknockercried,

tryingtostraightenherscarycrookedglasses."Butapersoncan't

evenworryaboutitpeacefullywithallyourghastly,

eardrum-breakingbawIing!^^

Doodlebug'seyeswentwideasabrilliantideacameto

mind."THEBEE!”heexclaimed,pointingatMrs.

Noodleknocker."She'llbethebee!”

Histeacherglaredathim."Saywhat,smarty-pants?v

“Webadlyneedabee,Mrs.Noodleknocker,“Dandelionsaidin

hersweetestvoice."Wethoughtmaybeyou'dhelp.^^

Asthekidsdetailedtheirplan,Mrs.Noodleknockerscowled

likeshedidwheneveranybodyinclasscameupwiththeright

answer.

“Takeyourrattyoldbeecostume,shoveitinacloset,andlock

thedoor!”shesaid,turningbacktohermagazine."Onlyrealbees

，，

matter.

“Butthiswholeplanisforrealbees,“Tomikosaidboldly.

“Andbutterflies,too!”"Please,lady?”Bogcoaxed.uWith

amascotwe'llmaketwiceasmuchmoney."Mrs.

Noodleknockerputdownhermagazine.Atinysmileglinted

acrossherusuallymeanmouth.Ithadbeenalongtimesince

anyonecalledheralady.Finally,shesnortedandgavein.

Ondayoneoffundraising,Mrs.Noodleknockerrockeditin

allherpollinatorglory."Threatenthemwithastingiftheywon't

givemoney!nDoodlebugcoachedher.

“No,Doodlebug!”Dandelionsaid."Beesareourfriends.We

havefruitsandflowersandvegetablesbecauseofthem."She

turnedtoNoodleknocker."Justtrytobeafriendlybee,OK?Like,

buzzsoftly一”

“Butcarryabigstinger,“Bogjokedunderhisbreath.

Noonehadtoworry.Thebeebuzzedaroundtheboothwith

wickedglee,spindlyarmsandlegspunchingandkicking,wiry

antennaebouncing.Wheneverherstrangeinsecteyeslandedon

someonefrombehindthosepointyglasses,thevictimquickly

forkedovercashfortheRoofgarden—evenwithoutbeingstung.

Thebeecampaignwasamassivesuccess.Afewweekslater

CoolYule'sbeegardenbloomedspectacularly,attractingcustomers

andgoodinsectsfromallaround.AndMrs.Noodleknockerwas

almostanicepersonfortherestofthesummer.Whichprovedthat

beingabeecouldbegoodforanyone.

读后续写Upinlights：

试题呈现：

Forsome,puttingupChristmaslightsisaholidaychore.Butforthe

Pascuccifamily,itwasalwaysabigdayofcelebration.

EveryyearonthedayafterThanksgiving,Sara'sfather,Anthony

Pascucci,60,wokeupexcitedtostringlightsanddecoratethelawnofhis

homeanddidn'ttakethemdownuntilFebruary,beingtheonlyhouse

withChristmasdecorationsinthecommunity.AnthonyPascuccibelieved

thebrightnessofthelightscouldcounter（抵消）someofthedarknessof

thepastyearwithCOVID-19.

In2020,asineveryotheryear,AnthonyPascuccistrungcolorful

lightsallaroundtheirroofuntilitlookedasifsparklesweredripping

ontothehallway.Sara'sbrother,AnthonyJr.helpedwiththewiring,

whileSarahungornaments（装饰物）onthetreeinsidethehouseplaying

thesong“WhiteChristmas^^overandovertokeepeveryoneinthespirit.

Thewholeplacelookedlikeascenefromapop-upChristmasstorybook.

OnChristmasEve,thewholehousetwinkledwithlightsandgifts

werepiledunderthetree.Everyonewaslookingforwardtooverlystuffed

clams-atypicalItalianfeast.Butmostofall,theylookedforwardto

enjoyinganotherChristmastogetherasafamily.

However,Sarareceivedacallfromhercolleaguewhohadtested

positiveforCOVID-19.ThoughSaradidn'thaveanysymptomsshe

decidedtogettestedrightaway,aswellasthewholefamily.Whentheir

resultscamebacktheyalllearnedthattheyalsohadCOVID-19.Several

weekslateronearlyFebruary,AnthonyPascuccipassedawayafter

gettinglunginfections.

Inadditiontohelpingtoplanthefuneralforherfather,Sarahadto

tackleaseeminglyendlesslistofdifficultto-dos.Itwasalmosttoomuch

tobear.

Whenshereturnedtothehousefromthefuneral,thetwinkling

Christmaslightsbroughtherasparkofjoy.

Inthefollowingdays,moreandmorelightsreappearingon

neighbours5houses.

参考范文：95+104

Butwhenshereturnedtothehouseafterthefuneral,thetwinkling

Christmaslightsbroughtherasparkofjoy.Itwasthesweatylaborfor

Christmasdecorations;itwasthefamiliarsmelloftastyfood;itwasthe

remainingconnectionwithherbelovedone.Immersedinamixtureof

griefanddetermination,Sarawipedthetearsstreamingdowncheeks,

climbeduptheladderandtightenedtheloosestringsoflights,replacing

worn-outlightsandcleaningdustyones.PastastheChristmasDayhad

been,Saracontinuedherfamilytraditionjustasherfatherdid.When

someneighborspassedby,theystoppedtochatwithSaraasacomfort

andsomeeveninitiallyjoinedher.

Inthefollowingdays,moreandmoreChristmaslightswere

reappearingonneighbors'houses.NeverhadSaraexpectedsuchan

amazingscene.Standinginfrontofthehouse,Saragreetedneighbors

withexceedinggratitudeandinquiredaboutthelights.Themysteryhada

sweetexplanationthattheneighborshadgottogetheranddecided

collectivelytohangtheirlightsbackinhonorofAnthonyPascucci.Sara

wavedwithquiveringhandsandcried"Thankyou"tothosekindhearted

people,tearsgraduallyblurringhereyes.Undoubtedly,thekindness

neighborsbroughtwarmedSarainthisbittercoldwinterandthesupport

fromneighborswasanimportantreminderthatthebrightnessoflights

couldcounterthedarknessofsufferingslifethrewatus.

原文本阅读：

FORSOME,PUTTINGUPChristmaslightsisyetanotherholiday

chore.ButinthePascuccihousehold,itwasalwaysabigdayof

celebration.EveryyearonthedayafterThanksgiving,AnthonyPascucci,

thefamilypatriarch,wokeupexcitedtostringlightsanddecoratethe

lawnofhishomeinBethpage,NewYork.

Andwhywouldn'thebe?Itwasafamilyaffair.Startinginearly

November,Anthonyandhisoldersister,ConniePascucci,hadatradition

ofvisitinglocalstorestocheckoutnewdecorationsandtodreamuptheir

visionforthatyear'sextravaganza.

Anthony'sson,AnthonyJr.,anddaughter,Sara,sharedthehome,

andtheypitchedinaswell.AnthonyJr.helpedwiththewiring,while

Sarahungornamentsonthetreeinsidethehouse,playing'White

Christmas'overandovertokeepeveryoneinthespirit.

In2020,asineveryotheryear,AnthonySr.strungcolourfullights

allaroundtheirroofuntilitlookedasifsparklesweredrippingontothe

porch.Onthefrontlawn,heinflatedalargewhiteFrostytheSnowman

andaRudolphwithaglowingrednose.Thewholeplacelookedlikea

scenefromapop-upChristmasstorybook.

AnthonySr.,60,hadoutdonehimself,asifthebrightnessofthe

lightscouldcountersomeofthedarknessofthepastyear,with

COVID-19.

“Itwasjustsucharoughyearthathetriedhisbesttomakeitextra

special,Sarasays.

Whenher18-month-oldson,Robbie,sawthefinisheddisplay,he

ranaroundtheyard,pointingandgiggling.

OnChristmasEve,thewholehousetwinkledwithlights,andgifts

werepiledunderthetree.Everyonewaslookingforwardtoplattersof

crispyfriedcalamariandoverlystuffedclams-atypicalItalianfeast.

Butmostofall,theylookedforwardtoenjoyinganotherChristmas

togetherasafamily.

ThenConniegotacall:Someonesheworkedwithhadtested

positiveforCOVID-19.ThoughConniedidn'thaveanysymptoms,she

decidedtogettestedrightaway.Herrapidtestcamebackpositive.

AnthonySr.,AnthonyJr.,andSaradecidedtheyshouldallgettested

too.Whentheirresultscameback,theyalllearnedthattheyalsohad

COVID-19.Sadly,everyoneagreedtheirChristmascelebrationwould

havetobecanceled.

Atfirst,everyone'ssymptomsseemedmanageable.Butrightafter

thenewyear,on4January,AnthonySr.startedhavingtroublebreathing.

AnthonyJr.tookhimtothehospital,wherehewasadmitted.

Fivedayslater,Conniebeganfeelingweakandwouldn'teat.Sara

calledanambulanceforher,butConniediedbeforetheygottothe

hospital.Lessthanaweeklater,AnthonySr.passedaway.

Sarasaysthenextweeksweretheworstofherlife.Shefeltasifshe

wasinafog.Griefleftherdoubledoverinpain.Ontopofthat,“wewere

stillrecoveringfromCOVID-19ourselves,shesays.

Inadditiontohelpingtoplanfuneralsforherfatherandheraunt,

Sarahadtofigureoutthemortgage,transfertheutilitybills,andtacklea

seeminglyendlesslistofdifficulttodos.Andperhapshardestofall,she

hadtotrytoexplaintoheryoungsontheconceptofdeath.Itwasalmost

toomuchtotake.

Butwhenshepulleduptothehouseattheendofalongday,the

twinklingChristmaslightsbroughtherasparkofjoy.'Ttmadeushappy

toseethem,^^shesays.

Makingitevenmorepoignant,thelightswereoneofthelast

mementosSaraandAnthonyJr.hadoftheirbelovedfamilymembers

whentheywerestillaliveandhealthy.

“Icouldn'tbringmyselftoputthemaway,“Sarasays.Takingthe

lightsdownfeltlikeafinalactofclosuresheandherbrotherweren't

readytotake.Sotheykeptthemup.

OnedayinFebruary,Sarareceivedanenvelopeinthemail.Ithad

noreturnaddress.<4Ithoughtitcontainedmydad'sIDcard,^^shesays.

Shehadbeenwaitingtogetafewofherdad'sbelongingsbackfromthe

hospital.Instead,insidetheenvelopeshefoundananonymoustyped

note.

“TakeyourChristmaslightsdown!IfsValentine5sDay!!!"the

unsignedletterread.

Saralookedatthepaperinshock.Thenshegotangry."Wewere

alreadydealingwithsomuch,^^shesays.

Saracouldhavebottledupthatanger,butshedecidedtowriteabout

itinstead.4tIwantedtoremindpeoplethatweallhadatoughyear.Weall

havebeenthroughsomuchandpeopleshouldbealittlemorecaring

towardeachother,“shesays.

SheloggedontoalocalLongIslandMomsFacebookgroupand

sharedtheletter,addinganoteofherown:"ForanyoneintheBethpage

area-ifyouknowofapersonwhowoulddosomethingsoinsensitive

likethis,pleasepassalongmymessage.^^Sheendedthepostwiththis:

“Bekindtopeoplebecauseyouneverknowwhattheyaregoing

through.,5

OthersinthegroupralliedtoSara'sside.Herinboxquicklyfilled

withmessagesofsupport.Alocalnewsstationlearnedwhathad

happenedandranasegmentaboutit.Peoplefromallaroundthearea

startedsendingSaralettersandFacebookmessagesabouthowthey'dlost

relatives,too,andhowitwasespeciallytoughtoloselovedonesaround

theholidays.

Theprevailingsentimentfromfriendsoldandnew:Keepthe

Christmaslightsup.

“Iknowwhatitfeelsliketolosesomeoneandnotwanttoputtheir

thingsaway.Ifsveryhard,“onemantoldherwhenhestoppedbywith

roses.Neighbourssentmealsandcardsinsupport.Someoneevensetupa

GoFundMepagetohelpcoverthefuneralexpenses.

“Iwasn'texpectingthatmuchsupport,5,Sarasays."Buthavingit

helpedusgetthrougharoughtime,justknowingthatpeoplecould

relate.^^

Andthensomethingstrangebegantohappen.Sarawasdrivingback

fromworkonedaywhenshenoticedthatChristmaslightsand

decorationswereappearing-orreappearing-onneighbours9houses.In

mostcases,Sarahknewforafactthatthefamiliesinsidethesehouseshad

alreadytakendowntheirholidaylights.

Themysteryhadasweetexplanation:Herneighbourshadgotten

togetheranddecided,collectively,tohangtheirlightsbackupandturn

thembackoninhonourofAnthonySr.andConnie.

“Icouldn'tbelievethatsomeonewouldsendherthisletter,

neighbourKarenMcGuggarttoldtheWashingtonPost."Losingher

wonderfuldad,whomalltheneighboursloved,andherbeautifulaunt,

whowasalwayssmiling,issuchatragedy.We[were]heartbroken.

WhenMcGuggart'schildrenheardwhathadhappenedtoSara,they

wereoutraged.Theywentuptotheattictoretrievetheirboxof

Christmaslights,andthenthey-likedozensofothersintheir

neighbourhoodandsurroundingarea-gotouttheladderandsetabout

reinstallingtheirholidaylightsanddecorations.

“Toseethelightsandtheblocklitupagain,“