高三英语基础写作课件

BasicWriting时间分配题型题量赋分时间（分钟）基础写作11510基础写作的命题特点：考生按所给的内容及要求，用5个规范的英语句子描述所给信息的全部内容，并组成连贯的短文。简而言之，考查考生整理信息和组词造句成文的能力。对于书面表达的要求：1.Coverallthelanguagepointsandgiveninformation.覆盖所有的语言要点

Avoidgrammarmistakesandwrongspelling应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性

3.coherent,tight上下文的连贯性

即有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。4.usethewordsproperly

语言的得体性5.Writeyourarticleclearly.6.Mindthenumberofyoursentences.Tomakethearticletight,gracefulandclear.Toavoidusingrepetitivewordsorexpressions.

表达时尽量用一些较高级的词汇，避免使用重复的词语，使语言不至于单纯和幼稚。也可以给文章增添亮点。

（2）Tousesometransitionalwords

恰当选用过渡词，使文章紧凑，流畅。

(3)Tousemoresentencepatternssuchasinvertedorder,emphasis,acompoundsentenceoraparticipleadverbial

适当使用多种句型，注意语言的丰富性，多样化，以变化多端的形式来表现丰富多彩的内容。Basicwritingskills

Waysofwritinggoodsentences方法一.一句多译

Assoonaswearrivedatthevillage,wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagers.Onarrivingatthevillage，wewerewarmly….

Themomentwearrivedatthevillage,wewere…Wewerewarmlywelcomedbythevillagersimmediatelywearrivedatthevillage.Nosooner

hadwearrivedatthevillagethanwe……Hardly

hadwearrivedatthevillagewhen

we….Usedifferentwaystodescribethepicture

方法一.一句多译

一…就受到欢迎AssoonasLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairport,theywerewarmlywelcomed.Onarrivingattheairport,LienChanandhiswife…LienChanandhiswifewerewarmlywelcomedthemoment/immediatelytheyarrivedattheairport.NosoonerhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportthantheywere…HardlyhadLienChanandhiswifearrivedattheairportwhentheywere…方法一.一句多译Practice

一句多译

这本书花了我300元。

Ispent300yuanonthebook.Ipaid300yuanforthebook.

Thepriceofthebookis300yuan.Itcostme300yuantobuythebook.Thebookcostme300yuan.

Practice

一句多译昨天下午他才来。Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.

Itwasyesterdayafternoonthathearrivedhere.Itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.

Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.

Rewritethesentences

方法二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档

（1）MostoftheartistswhohadbeeninvitedtothepartywerefromSouthAfrica.

MostoftheartistsinvitedtothepartywerefromSouthAfrica.

（2）Nowadaystheoldpeopleoftendomorningexercisesintheparkinorderthattheycouldkeephealthy.

Nowadaystheoldpeopleoftendomorningexercisesintheparktokeephealthy.

方法二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档Completethesentenceswithnon-predicate(非谓语动词)听到这个消息,他们变的很激动._________thenews,theygotexcited.2.尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错.__________________manytimes,hestillrepeatedthemistake.3.除非被邀请发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默.

Unless________tospeak,youshouldkeepsilentatthemeeting.Hearing

HavingbeentoldinvitedTranslatethefollowingsentencesbyusingnon-predicate(非谓语动词)1,面对困难时，他从不放弃。2，引入市场后，该产品大获成功。3，做完作业后，他回家了。Facedwith/Facingdifficulties,henevergivesup.Introducedtothemarket,theproductmadeagreatsuccess.

Havingfinishedhishomework,hereturnedhome.方法三.丰富的句式DescribethecharacterbyusingInvertedSentence(倒装句)Pooras/thoughhewas,hewashappy.方法三.丰富的句式SentencepatternsAreAlwaysUsefulThedogjumpedintotheriverandpulledthegirltothebank.Itwasthedogthatjumpedintotheriverandpulledthegirltosafety.ThesquareisneartheGreatWallHotel.NeartheGreatWallHotelisthesquare.YouwillhavetoworkhardforyearstospeakgoodEnglish.ItwilltakeyearsofhardworktospeakgoodEnglish.Ifailedintheexamagain.WhatdisappointedmemostwasthatIfailedintheexamagain.MissLiwillgiveusareportsoon.MissLi,whohasawideknowledgeofEnglish,willgiveusareportsoon.WealllikeJim.WealllikeJim,whoisalwaysreadytohelpothers.WealllikeJimbecauseofhishelpfulnessandkindness.

1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）2.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）What

surpriseshimisthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice

怎样使用较丰富的句式WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.

5.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.（使用状语从句）

6.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.

（用并列句）7．HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.

(使用倒装句)NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.

Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.Usedifferentwaystodescribeonesentence.Makesentencesbyusingnon-predicate.3.Sentencepatternsarealwaysuseful

Summaries:

Practice此四幅画描述了爱鸟周活动中李明某一天所经历的事，由此写一篇文章。要求：1必须使用5个句子表达图画内容。2将5个句子组成连贯的短文。步骤一审题narrationpasttensethethirdpersontimeorderwritingstyle:tense:person:order:caughtabirdfixedastringtoitagirllookformotherapolicecomforther步骤二要点sendherhomelostinthoughtsetthebirdfreefeelhappy步骤二要点步骤三.扩展成句，连句成篇1.Oneday,LiMingcaughtabirdandfixedastringtoit.

2.Hesawagirlcrylookingforhermumandapolice-mancomforther.3.ThepolicemansentthegirlhomeandLiMingwaslostinthought.4.LiMingsetthebirdfreeandfeltveryhappy.步骤四.仔细检查，认真修改①查是否遗漏要点，信息是否完整，尤其是：人物、地点、时间、发生什么事、如何发生、怎样进行等方面是否遗漏。②查体裁格式是否正确。③查句式使用是否科学得当。④查叙述的顺序是否颠倒。⑤查过渡词是否使用合理。⑥查时态、语态是否一致正确。⑦查书写和标点符号是否规范清晰。⑧查字数是否符合要求。Oneday,LiMingcaughtabirdandfixedastringtoit.Whenplayingwithit,hesawthegirlwhowascryingcouldn’tfindhermumandakindpolicemantriedtocomfortherandtoldherthathewouldsendherhome.

Seeingthemgooff,LiMingwasdeepinthought.Heheardthecryofthebirdandsuddenlythoughtthatthebirdmightbemissingitsmother.

So

heatoncesetthebirdfree,andthebirdflewhappilyintothesky.AssignmentPleasefinishthecompositionafterclass.全本小说/全本小说hoq473egk办法挣点钱就没法养家糊口了。现在呀只要有钱，让我背死人也干！”老实人说话就是这么实在。王希维一边说话，一边拿竹竿使劲搅动起来，污泥让他这么一搅动，恶臭味更浓烈了,几乎令人作呕。就在这时，五六个职工抬来一根粗重的铁杠走过来了。刁一德叫嚷道：“怎么这么臭!像茅厕，他妈的我都要吐了。”刁一德是花开啤酒单位的正式工，他高高的个子，人长得肥肥胖胖的，高兴时头总是昂着，像个长颈鹿一样；不高兴时，又像丧家犬一样，灰溜溜的，他长着一副扇风耳，嘴唇发白，一双乌溜溜的眼睛总好像在寻找着什么一样，眼睛提溜提溜转个不停。他的形象确实是有做汉奸的潜质。刁一德一只手抬着铁杠，另外一只手来回使劲地煽：“真臭！真臭！”然后，往地上狠狠地吐了口痰，说