四校联考的读后续写-成长的烦恼+讲义 高考英语作文复习专项

01试题原题

第二节：读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

Inhighschool,Iwasastraight

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Astudent,amemberofmanyschoolclubs,andareceiverofmanyrewards.However,Ihadbeensubjectedto（受到......折磨）peerpressure.Wantingtobe“cool!”，Istartedgoingtopartiesanddrinking,drunkbeyondrecognition.Mylifetookaturnfortheworse.However,theexperienceinonesummerprogramtaughtmealesson:neverdosomethingyoubelieveiswrongjusttogaintheapprovalofothers.

InJune,Iworkedpart-timeatarestaurant.ThedaybeforeIleftfortheprogram,oneco-workerofferedmehisdriver’slicense,tellingmetohavefuninQuebecsincewetwoalmostlookedthesame.I’dseenfriendswalkintoliquor（酒）storeswithfakelicensesandcomeoutcarryingatwelve-packofbeer,smilingproudly.SoItookthelicense,butIpromisedmyselfthatIwouldn’tuseit.However,Ieasilygotcarriedaway.

Onthefirstnightoftheprogram,whilewalkingaround,mynewfriendsandIcameacrossaliquorstore.Kai

askedifanyonehadafakelicense.Aftereveryoneshookhishead,Iclearedmythroatanddeclared,

“IDo.”

Witheveryone’sadmirationandKai’stwentydollarsandinstruction,Iboldlyagreedtotakeonthetaskwithoutthinking.

Imanagedto

buyacaseofbeer.Theboyscheeredandgavemepatsontheback.“You’retheman,”

someonesaidto

me.Thepraiseboostedmyself-confidence.

Thelast

nighttherewasaparty.Afewofmyfriendsinsistedthatwedrinkbeforethedance.Theyaskedme,

the

“IDman”

tobuyalcohol.Toearntheiradmiration,Itookthecashandboughtwhattheywanted.Laterthatnight,

IwasenjoyingmyselfwhenKaisaidnervously,“Cristianisn’tokay.”

Worriedformyfriend,Iwenttoassessthesituation.Clearly,Cristianwasoverlydrunkandalmostunconscious.注意：1.

所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.

请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.

Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector'soffice.

02试题分析线索：astraight-AstudentsubjectedtopeerpressureWantingtobe“Cool”neverdosomethingthatyoubelieveiswrongjusttogaintheapprovalofothers.（主题句）“You’retheman,”someonesaidtome.Thepraiseboostedmyself-confidence.情节：Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.Cristian的情况（趴在地上；颤抖；流血）；我们的反应（恐惧，惊慌；叫911）；送医院抢救Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector’soffice.我的反应（羞愧，告诉真相）；我接受的惩罚；我的感悟（主题）二、翻译填空Version1:（下水文）Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.三个场景：Cristian的情况（趴在地上；颤抖；流血）；我们的反应（恐惧，惊慌；叫911）；送医院抢救①Hewas

falling

flatontheground,body

trembling,bloodflowing/oozing.(趴在地上，四肢抽搐，血往外流)②Thescenedid

shock

me./Thesightleftus

rooted

toground.(吓傻了)Kai

knelt

besideCristian,desperatelytryingtostopthebleeding,

exclaiming

inpanic,"Quick,call911!"Ittookamomentformeto

compose

myself,andIimmediatelydialedforhelp.(跪，喊道，冷静)③Theseconds

ticked

byworryingly.After

what

feltlike

forever,theemergencyworkersfinallyarrivedand

rushed

himtothenearbyhospital.Thatnight,weanxiouslypacedoutsidetheemergencyroom,only

breathing

asighofreliefwhenthedoctor

assured

usthatCristianwasoutofdanger.（滴答，很长时间，送，呼吸，确保）Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector’soffice.三个场景：我的反应（羞愧，告诉真相）；我接受的惩罚；我的感悟（主题）

①Withmyhead

bowed,cheeks

burning,I

stumbled

throughthewholesituation.IwaswellawarethatIwastheone

responsible

foreverything.（低着头，面红耳赤，结结巴巴地）②Theprogramdirector

cast

aserious

eye

atme,sayingthatIhadtowithdrawfromtheproject.IwishedIcouldfinda

hole

tohidein;I

deserved

thepunishment.（严厉看；钻地洞；罪有应得）③Walkingoutoftheoffice,Ifeltmyheart

sank

witheachstep,asifa

voice

insidewarnedme:compromisingmyvaluesunderpeerpressureforothers'approvalisnotjustfoolishbutcomeswithahigh

price!（心情沉重；内线的声音；代价）Version2:(官方）Suddenly,somethingwentwrong:Cristianfelltotheground.

①Hisfacewaspale,hisbodywaslimp(软弱的）,hiseyesrolledback,andhisbreathswerefrighteninglyslow.

②Panicspreadthroughtheroomaswerealizedtheseverityofthesituation.Wegatheredaroundhim,desperatelytryingtofigureoutwhattodonext.Quickly,someonecalled911andCristianwasrushedintothehospital.

③LaterIwastoldCristian’sconditionwasserious,butfortunatelyhedidn’tsufferanypermanentdamageasaresultoftimelyrescue.Thewholenightfoundmetossingandturning,uneasyaboutthemessIhadcaused.Thenextday,Iwascalledtotheprogramdirector’soffice.

①Iknewthattherewasnopointindenyingthetruth.SoIadmittedeverything.Likeacaughtcriminal,Iwasovercomewithguilt,droopingmyheadinshame.

②ThencamethepunishmentthatIlostthechancetojoinintheprogram,whichwaslessseverethanwhatI’dexpected.

③Backhome,IrealizedthatIcouldn’tcontinuedownthispathofseekingapprovalatanycost.ItwastimetoprioritizemyvaluesandIvowednottoletpeerpressurecloudmyjudgmentandleadmeastrayagain.三、必须掌握的短语检测1.清了清嗓子2.不加思索地接受了任务3.鼓励性地拍了拍我4.平扑在地上5.把我们吓得呆住了6.惊慌地大叫

7.使自己镇定下来8.担心地度过每一秒9.匆忙把他送到附近的医院10.松了口气11.低着头，脸颊发烫12.支支吾吾得告知整个情况13.严肃地看着我14.找个洞躲起来15.每走一步，我的心都跟着下沉16.内心的声音警告我17.他的眼睛翻白18.他的呼吸可怕地缓慢下来19.恐慌在房间里蔓延开来20.整夜我辗转反侧21.就像被抓住的罪犯22.充满内疚23.羞愧地低下头24.不要让同龄人的压力影响我的判断25.把我引入歧途Key:1.clearedmythroat2.takeonthetaskwithoutthinking3.gavemepatsontheback4.fallflatontheground5.leftusrootedtoground6.excl