Module11+Unit3 外研版九年级英语全册

ModuletaskModule11PhotosUnit3--WritingcourseAsweknow,TonySmithhaswontheprizeforthesubjectHomeandAway.Besidesthisphoto,hetookmanyotherphotos,too.Inthisclass,wewillenjoymoreabouthisphotos.Let’sgo.02Pre-writingⅠMusicCityandPeopleHomeandAwayNatureriverseamountaingrassanimals…modernancientcrowdedquietbusy…noisysweetwonderfulrelaxingexcited…gettogetherliveabroadtravelabroadmisshome…FourSubjectsofphotosWarmingup!GuessingGame.Sheisa14-year-oldChineseplayer

who/thatwonagoldmedalinthe2020TokyoOlmpics.

Canyouguess?QuanHongchan2.Itisawarmovie

that/which

makesabox-office（票房）record(over3billion)duringthisNationalHoliday.Canyouguess?ChangJinhu3.ItisahotplaceinHuizhouthat/whicheveryonewouldliketogoswimminginsummer.Canyouguess?XunliaoBay4.Itisasmallmachine

that/whicheveryoneofallageslikestouseiteveryminute.Canyouguess?MobilePhoneSportWhatsubjectisit?NatureMovieMusicSubjectsofaphotocompetitionNatureScenerySportWhatsubjectsarethey?DisasterPetFoodWeddingInsectPhotoscanchangeaperson’slife.Doyouknowthisphoto?ItwastakenbyZhangXiuqingwhoisaveryfamousphotographer[fəˈtɒgrəfə]inChina.ThisphotowastakeninapoorvillageinGuangxiprovince[ˈprɒvɪns]in2003.Thisphotoshowsayoungwomanwithasmilewhoiscarryingtwinsonherback.Ilikethisphotoverymuch,becauseIsawherunyielding[ʌnˈjiːldɪŋ]optimism[ˈɒptɪˌmɪzəm]inthefaceofdifficulties.

ThePhotoIlikebest02Pre-writingⅡ

ReadWhilereadingInformationaboutthephotoswherewhenwhowhatwhyPre-writingⅡRead&Learn02ItwastakenbyZhangXiuqingin2003inapoorvillageinGuangxiprovinceItshowsayoungwomanwithasmilewhoiscarryingtwinsonherback..BecauseIsawherunyieldingoptimisminthefaceofdifficulties.Thisphoto________byMissChen.Itwasintheafternoon.It_______somestudentswho________________andateacher_____________________ontheplayground.whileothers______________Ilikethisphotoverymuch,becauseitshowsusa_________schoolaswellassome________students.Ilovemyschoolsomuch__________isagoodplacetostudyandlive.wastakenshows

arerunningistakingphotosofthemarecheering.beautiful

active

that/whichLookandsay.

Bettyismyfriend__________isveryunhappy.

who/thatBettyismyfriend.Bettyisveryunhappy.that/whichThisismypetdog.Italwayshelpsgivemetheshoes.Thisismypetdog_________alwayshelpsgivemetheshoes.Ilikethisphotobest.Becauseitshowsabraveboywho/thatprotecthisbabybrother.Ilikethisphotobest.Becauseitshowstheflowerswhich/thataresobeautiful.Chooseyourfavouritephototoaskandanswerinpairs)

1.---Whichphotodoyoulikebest?---Ilikethephotowhich/that…2.---Whatdoesitshow?---Itshowsthat…3.---Whydoyoulikeit?---Because…Thesubjectofthephoto___________Ilikeisaboutsport.Itshowsagirl__________________________.Hernameis______________.Shehasflowersandthemedalwhichprovehereffortsinherhands,Ilikethisphotobecause_______________________________________________________whowinsanolympicthat/whichgoldmedalQuanhongchanshehasamazedthewholeworld.will,shetrainssohardthatshehaswonmanymedals.will,shetrainssohardthatshehaswonmanymedals.ReportingtimeReportingtimeThesubjectofthephoto_________Ilikeisaboutscenery.Itshowsabeach____________________.Itsnameis_________.It’soneofthemostpopularplaces__________manypeoplevisititeverysummer.Ilikeitbeacuse_________________________________________________________________that\which

whichhasabeautifulsunsetXunliaoBaythat/which

Ibelievenomatterwhathappens,everydaycanendbeautifullyjustlikethisphoto.ThisphotoshowsmeandmyfamilywithsomeanimalsinAustralia.ItwastakenwhenwewenttoAustraliaonlittleholidaylastyear.Mymumanddadareatthefront,andthat’smeinthemiddle.Youcanseeagreyanimalinthetreenexttous.Itlookslikeabear.Itiscalledakoala.Ilikethisphotobecauseitremindsmeofapleasantholidayoverseaswithmyparents.Accordingtothephoto,IthinkIhaveahappyfamily.1.

Whatdoesthephotoshow?2.When

wasthephototaken?3.Where

iskoalainthephoto?4.

Why

doesthewriteryoulikeit?5.Whatdoesthewriterthink?ThisphotoshowshimandhisfamilywithsomeanimalsinAustralia.ItwastakenwhentheywenttoAustraliaonholidaylastyear.It’sinthetreenexttothem.Becauseitremindsthewriterofapleasantholidayoverseaswithhisparents.Answerthesequestions:①②③④Thewriterthinkshehasahappyfamily.⑤ThisphotoshowsmeandmyfamilywithsomeanimalsinAustralia.ItwastakenwhenwewenttoAustraliaonlittleholidaylastyear.Mymumanddadareatthefront,andthat’smeinthemiddle.Youcanseeagreyanimalinthetreenexttous.Itlookslikeabear.Itiscalledakoala.Ilikethisphotobecauseitremindsmeofapleasantholidayoverseaswithmyparents.

Accordingtothephoto,IthinkIhaveahappyfamily.Discussion:

HowtodescribeaphotoandtalksomethingaboutitPara.1描述照片细节Para.2我

喜欢这张照片的原因Para.3感想Whatdoesitshow?Whydoyoulikeit?Whatdoyouthinkofit?[写作步步高]现在的学生大部分都喜欢拍照,生活照，风景照等层出不穷。请以“MyFavouritePhoto”为题，描述其中一张你最喜欢的照片。词数80左右。内容包括：1.照片拍摄的日期,地点，人物；2.简要描述照片内容。3.表明自己是否喜欢摄影，并说明理由。写作训练Workseriously

思路点拨第一步：审题人称:_________时态:______________________第一人称一般过去时+一般现在时

Beginning开头部分EndingBody正文(说明照片拍摄的日期，地点，人物。参考句型：Ipaidavisitto…)Beginning开头部分Body正文Beginning开头部分EndingBody正文Beginning开头部分Myfavouritephoto(10minutes)

Ending

Body正文Beginning开头部分(表明自己是否喜欢摄影，并说明理由。参考句型:1.Ilovetakingphotosbecause…2.Accordingtothephoto…)(简要描述照片内容。参考句型：ThesubjectofthephotothatIlikebestis…2.Itshows…3.Thereis…)第二步：列提纲第三步：连句成篇

温馨提示：运用and,or,so,because,but,then等连接词将以上要点连成文章，并注意句型多样化。

查（checkbyyourself）Readyourpassagealoud,thencheckitbyyourself.1.要点齐了吗？2.句子结构对了吗？3.句子连贯吗？4.单词都写对了吗？5.有没错误的语法？6.书写整洁吗？朗读文章并检查是否符合以下要求showtime

展示（showyourpassage）

Beginning开头部分EndingBody正文(说明照片拍摄的日期，地点，人物。参考句型：Ipaidavisitto…)Beginning开头部分Body正文Beginning开头部分EndingBody正文Beginning开头部分Post-writing(10minutes)

时态2分

Ending

（6分）

Body正文（4分）Beginning开头部分（3分）(表明自己是否喜欢摄影，并说明理由。参考句型:1.Ilovetakingphotosbecause…2.Accordingtothephoto…)(简要描述照片内容。参考句型：ThesubjectofthephotothatIlikebestis…2.Itshows…3.Thereis…)作文展评，小组讨论评分，作文满分15分△内容分：7分1.照片拍摄的日期,地点，人物；(3分)2.简要描述照片内容。(2分)3.表明自己是否喜欢摄影，并说明理由。(2分)内容要点完整且词数符合写作要求的作文可以得7分，词数在70个以下的作文在内容分上酌情扣分。△语言分：8分第一档：8分要求：内容涵盖所有的要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑，只有个别语言错误。第二档：6—7分要求：内容涵盖绝大多数要点，表达清楚，意思连贯，符合逻辑，但有少量语言错误。第三档：4—5分要求：内容涵盖大部分要点，表达较为清楚,连贯，基本符合逻辑，但有一些语言错误。第四档：1—3分要求：内容涵盖部分要点，能写出少数正确句子，但整体表达不太连贯，且语言错误较多。