读后续写遇险类溺水幸得同伴救助讲义-高考英语一轮复习

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Thelittlecarwascrowdedwithkids:mybrothersandsisters.Wefought,debatedandcrie，makingmuchnoise.Beingpartofabigfamilywasreallystartingtoannoyme.Forexample,mybrothersandsistersknockedonthebathroomdoorallthetime.HowIwantedtobetheonlychildinmyfamily.

Asthecarrolleddownthesmallroad,mymumsaidcheerfully,“Thepoolisthreeminutesaway.You'llhavemuchtimetoswim.”Swimmingwasapeacefulactivity.Icouldfloatonmybackandlookatthesky.IcouldpretendIwastheonlypersonintheworld.Mumparkedthecarbesideasmallrowofothercars.

“Oneatatime,"sheyelledbeforethecardoorsopened.Nobodylistened.

Thecardoorsallflewopenatonce.Afterpushing,yellingandcrying,wecameout.Iquicklypulledoffmyjeans,Tshirt,socksandshoes,andfinallyputonmyswimsuit."Yeah!”

IyelledasIjumpedintothebignaturalpoolwithsmallstonesonitsfloor.Coldwaterstruckmyface.Iputmyheadunderthewater,whichshotupmynose.Afterstandingupagain,Idroppedbackwardintothewaterandbegantofloat.Thewatersataroundmyears,smoothandsilent.Thesunwarmedmyface.

Iwaslikealeaffloatinginalargepoolpeacefully.Everythingwassilentunderwater.Forthemoment,IfeltIwastheonlychildthere.Ididn'thavetosharethingslikesnackswithotherkids.Mystomachmadeanoiseatthethoughtoffood.Hadn'tMumpackedahugebagofchipsforoursnack?Istooduptowalktoshore.

Oh!Darksandywatersuddenlyfilledmymouthandcoveredmyhead.Therockygroundwasgone;Iwaspushedintothedeep,darkwater.Itriedtokicktothesurface.Asmyfacepeekedout(微露出)fromunderthewater,Itookadeepbreath.Itriedtoswimandleavethedeepwater.Butitdidn'twork.Ionlyknewhowtofloat.注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Thewaterclosedovermyheadagain.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Icouldfeelmybodymovingupwordasafamiliarhandstartedtopullmethroughthewater._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________读后续写题“3221”建模

【前文大意】本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了作者在一次和妈妈、兄弟姐妹外出游泳，险些溺水，幸运获救，作者从中感悟到与兄弟姐妹一起生活、成长是幸运、幸福的，改变了以前渴望自己是家里唯一的孩子的观念。一、阅读前文找“3”——Who?Whathappened?How?

1.阅读前文找“3（who,whanthappened,how）”，理解前文大意，留意前文高频词、伏笔句（续写时呼应，以增强故事情节发展与前文的融洽性），读完后找出冲突问题（通常在最后一段），提炼该故事主题关键词——同胞情之珍贵。本题的前文有2个冲突问题：（1）（第1段末句）HowIwantedtobe

theonlychildinmyfamily.（倒数第2段第3句）Forthemoment,IfeltIwas

theonlychild

there.（2）（最后1段末句）Itriedtoswimandleavethedeepwater.Butitdidn'twork.Ionlyknewhowtofloat.2.“22”两段续写各2个情节:

Thewaterclosedovermyheadagain.Plot1:我如何自救的心理和动作Plot2：我的兄弟姐妹发现了我，去找妈妈来救我。或者我的兄弟姐妹救了我。

Icouldfeelmybodymovingupwordasafamiliarhandstartedtopullmethroughthewater.Plot3：妈妈或者我的兄弟姐妹如何救我的描述。Plot4：我对妈妈和兄弟姐妹救我、照顾我表示感谢3.“1”文末点题:生长在有兄弟姐妹的家庭里是幸运的幸福的。参考范文欣赏学习续写情节如何合理融洽前文、回应前文伏笔，标注好词佳句，力求理解消化，努力模仿迁移运用。

Thewaterclosedovermyheadagain.

Withthesandywater

blurring

myvision

and

floodingintomymouth,

panic

setin.AlthoughItriedtofloatagain,Icouldhardlyfindmy

usualbalance.

Struggling

forlifeinthewater,Ifelt

mystrengthwasrapidly

givingout

andIwassinking

witheach

passing

second.“Help!Help!...”

Ishouted

atthetopofmyweak

voice.

Justas

I

wasaboutto

blackout

anddrown,Iheardmybrothersandsisters

screaming

forme

and

mysinkingwas

suddenly

stopped.(89words)

Icouldfeelmybodymovingupwardasafamiliarhandstartedtopullmethroughthewater.“Don'tworry,Tom.It'sgoingtobeOK.”Itwas

Jim,oneofmybrothers,

who

wasalways

annoying

mebutnow

makingeveryendeavour

toliftmeabovethewaterand

meanwhile

fortingme.Whenwewereeventually

pulledashore

byMumandtheother

siblings,I

hugged

Jim

tightly

and

criedout

inachokedvoice,

“Thankyoufor

riskingyourownlifetosaveme.”

Surrounded

bymyfamilyand

staringat

their

concerned

faces,Ifeltthe

previous

annoyance

withmybrothersandsisters

gavewayto

affection

for

each

oftheminasplitsecond,Beinginabigfamilyis

actually

fortunateand

how

blessed

Iam

togrowupwithmy

siblings

insteadofbeingtheonlychild.(126words)优秀作品

Thewaterclosedovermyheadagain.

Itriedmybesttopeekoutmyfaceagainandagain.Unluckily,Ifailed.Thewaterstruckmybodyandpouredintomythroatasifitwouldsqueezethebreathoutofme.Ifeltscaredandhelplessandsoonbecameoverwelmedandweak.HowIwishedthereweresomeonenoticingmydisappearanceandingforhelp.Luckily,mybrothersandsisterscameclosetome.Theywereanxiousandtensedbutcouldn'thelptosaveme.SoIcontainedmyburningscareandrunoutmylaststrenth,cryingout,"Bringamanhere."After.hearingthat,mybrothersandsistersranawayquckily.IcouldfeelmybodywassinkinglikeanicebergbutIcouldn'tdo

anythingbutwaitforhelp.Justatthatmoment,

Ifoundafigureswimmingtowardme.

Icouldfeelmybodymovingupwardasafamiliarhandstartedtopullmethroughthewater.

Itwasmymotherwholiftedmeupandmybrothersandsisterspulledmeontotheshore.MumpressedmyheartuntilIopenedmyeyes.Mybrothersandsistersletoutacry

ofrelief,“Shewokeup!”Mymomsweptme