山东省临沂市英语二模读后续写试题讲解讲义

（临沂市2023年英语二模考试题）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Theautomobileindustryisspendingbillionsonselfdrivingcars,justsowecansitinthebackseatlikesomehighpoweredcorporateexecutive.Butwhatifwequitelikedriving?Onholidayafewyearsago,Ispenthoursbeingtransportedontrains,busesandplanes.Then,finally,camethesectionoftheholidayduringwhichIhiredasetofwheels.Afterdecadesofmarriage,itwasnotoftenthatyoureceivedrealpraisefromyourpartner,butonthehighwaysofCreteplimentscamewitheverysuccessfulaction.“Oh,welldone!”saidJocasta,hervoicefullofadmiration,asInavigatedaroundaboutwithoutkillingusboth.Intotheroundabout(环岛)Iwent,slowingdownasweentered,thenspeedingupaswereturnedtothestraight.Really,itwaslikedrivinginaF1race.Weturnedright,thenrightagain,followingtheGPSnavigationsystem,andfoundourselvesinasmallCretantown.IspokestrictlytotheGPS:“Wedon’twanttobehere;wewantthehighway.”Itinstructedmetoturnrightoncemore.Witheveryturnthestreetnarrowed.Itwaslikebeinginamagicalshrinkingroom.Weretracted(缩回)thesidemirrors.Wetookanotherturn.Thenewroadwasevennarrower,thewallssocloseyoufeltpelledtoholdyourbreath.Anothercarappearedingtowardsusfromtheoppositedirection.Thedrivergestured,tellingmeIwouldhavetomakeway.Buthow?Ididn’thavethenervetobackupalongtheimpossiblynarrowroad.Therewasanarrowgarageopeningtooneside,asmallsidestreettotheother.IfIcouldsqueezethecarforwardintothegarage,Icouldthenbackintothesidestreet,allowingtheothercartopass.Localsarrived,standingonvarioussidesofthevehicle,helpfullyindicatingthatIhadacentimetretosparehereamillimetrethere.Therewerebrickwallsonbothsidesofthecar.TherewaszerochancethatIwouldn’tdamagethevehicle.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Alocalstoodatthebackofthevehicle,wavingmeon.Theothercarpassed.Onepossibleversion：A

local

stood

at

the

back

of

the

vehicle,

waving

me

on.

He

was

making

vigorous

'this

way,

this

way'

movements

with

his

arms.In

an

act

of

blind

trust,

I

followed

his

instructions,

creeping

backwards

and

forwards.The

car

wriggled

deep

into

the

garage

one

centimeter

at

a

time.

Through

countless

adjustments,

finally

the

car

lay

straight

in

the

garage!Then

with

the

instructions

of

all

the

locals,

turning

my

head

left

and

right

looking

back

hundreds

of

times,

I

backed

it

into

the

side

street.The

other

car

passed.

The

driver

gave

me

a

grateful

wave.

In

relief,

I

waved

back

to

her,

finding

my

hands

trembling.

Tired

out

and

all

sweaty,

I

lay

back

on

the

seat,

breathed

in

and

out

to

steady

my

nerves

for

a

while,

then

reluctantly

sat

straight.

Jocasta

swiveled

towards

me.

"You'

re

my

hero,"she

squeezed

my

hand

as

she

said.We

set

off

again.

I

acceleratedtowardsthehighway.Whowouldswapallthisforaselfdrivecar?答案解析：读后续写（一分析、二构思、三写作；时间地点加人物；环境动作加心理）一：分析原文本文以功能强大、舒适感强的自动驾驶汽车为线索展开，讲述了作者和妻子在外地度假，租了一辆自动驾驶汽车行驶，一开始汽车的智能导航得到了妻子的赞叹和钦佩，后来导航没有将他们带到想去的高速公路，而是越走越偏，最后带到了极其狭窄的小路，正巧对面来车，示意“我“让路，”我“只有一个选择：挤进旁边小车库，然后退回到小路，可是车和墙距离很近，挪车难度很大。在”我“着急时，热心的当地人来指挥，我如何能够在极其狭窄的道路中挪出，而不用擦伤我的车呢？二：分析情节结构按照冲突（conflict)→行动（action)→解决（resolution)的结构模式分析：本文的情节结构是我挪车遇到困难（冲突）→在当地人的指挥下，在妻子的鼓励下，在我自己的努力下（行动）→成功挪出，让对面车过去（解决）。原文展示了故事的“冲突”部分，续写两段分别为故事的“行动”和“解决”部分。在原文中，我详细描述了想要挪车需要做些什么（挪车流程）和面临的困难。该情节（Therewasanarrowgarageopeningtooneside,asmallsidestreettotheother.IfIcouldsqueezethecarforwardintothegarage,Icouldthenbackintothesidestreet,allowingtheothercartopass.)为我最终成功完成挪车埋下了伏笔。三、分析心理变化主人公的心理变化是故事的另一个情节线索。遇到困难前后，David有以下心理变化：satisfied(刚行驶时）→skeptical(导航导入小路时）→desperate(遇到绝境时）→hopeful(路人来帮忙时）→relieved(困难解决时）。续写两段的内容需围绕如何挪车和“我“的心理变化展开。四、分析人物根据原文和续写两段段首语可知，“我”和locals（当地人）是故事的主要人物，妻子和对车司机是次要人物。人物特点分析根据描述“我“心情的词：didn’thavethenerveto…,holdmybreath,killusboth.

可得知我遇到困难的焦虑心理。根据原文当地人热心帮助的描述helpful,indicate，可知后文当地人给了我一臂之力。

根据妻子赞美的词：befullofadmiration,可知困难克服后，妻子有可能赞叹我。根据原文开车、倒车动作,路况的词句（backup,squeezemycarintothegarage,giveway，backintothesidestreet,amagicalshrinkingroom,thebrickwall,backintothesidestreet,thenarrowgarage.）可以得知“我“挪车的过程和遇到的困难。在续写中，应根据主次人物的特点进行合理的人物刻画。“我“在前文中的提到了”Whatifwequitelikedriving?“说明”我“有可能喜欢开车，且开车技术不错，对自动驾驶技术持一定的怀疑态度。五、续写构思Step1构思续写两段情节根据故事的主题、情节、人物和环境分析，原文呈现了故事的“冲突”部分：我跟一辆车“狭路相逢”，不知道怎么退出。续写两段分别是故事的“行动”和“解决”部分：在locals的帮助下，”我“决定勇敢面对挑战（行动）→经过努力，”我“成功完成倒车（解决）。Step2构思续写首尾内容通过续写两段的段首句，可以确定每段故事的情节发展、场景和人物。Paragraph1:Alocalstoodatthebackofthevehicle,wavingmeon.根据第一段段首句可知，本段故事场景为狭窄道路，接下来“我”要在locals的帮助下，克服恐惧、把车倒入车库。Paragraph2:Theothercarpassed.根据第二段段首句可知，在第一段结尾处，我成功把车倒出。根据第二段段首句可知，本段故事场景为狭窄道路，对面车开过去，“我”和帮助“我”的当地人一起，接下来应该是司机感谢我，我松了一口气，又感谢当地人具体表现。Step3构思具体情节续写第一段具体情节构思：展开细节时，可以尝试回答如下问题并考虑多种可能性：a)HowdidIfeelinthiscriticalmoment?b)Whatwasmydecision?c)HowdidIsucceedinbackingupthecar?根据以上问题，续写第一段的具体情节可以是：“我”一