2024届高考英语复习读后续写灾难故事类+勇敢少年和姐姐在火灾中救助老人

高考英语读后续写语篇练习灾难故事——勇敢少年和姐姐在火灾中救助老人1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Jackstillremembersthatonemorningwhenhewasonlytenyearsold.HewasathomewithhiseldersisterLily.Jackwasdoinghishomeworkwhenheheardraisedvoices.Atfirst,hethoughtnothingofitsincecustomers'voiceinthemotorcycleshopdirectlybelowtheirflatoftenbecameloud,buthesoonrealizedthistimeitwasdifferent.“Quick!Quick!Removethemotorcyclesfromtheshop.”someoneshouted.Thenathickburningsmellfilledtheair.WhenJackopenedthefrontdooroftheirflattoinvestigate,athickcloudofsmokegreetedhim.Themotorcycleshophadcaughtfireandpeoplewererunningandcrying.Lily,whohadbeenplayingtheviolininherroom,hurriedtothelivingroom.Theyrushedoutofthedoorandalongthecorridorthroughthesmoke.TheywereheadingtowardsthestairwayatthefarendofthecorridorwhenLilystoppedinhertrack.Sheturnedaroundandheadedbackthewaytheycame.Jackhadnoideawhatshewasdoing,buthefollowedher.4续写原文Lilyhadsuddenlyrememberedtheladyinher70swholivednextdoortothem,whotheycalledMakcik,Malayforauntie.LilybeganbangingonMakcik’sdoor,butgotnoanswer.Asthesmokethickenedaroundthem,Jackcouldseemanyoftheirneighbors—somestillintheirpyjamas—runningforsafety.Thethoughtoffearcrossedhismind.“Shemighthaverunforsafetylikeeveryoneelse!”Jackcried.However,Lilyrefusedtogiveup.“IknowMakcik'sstillinside.”ShesaidshewasfamiliarwithMakcik'sdailyroutineandwascertainshewouldstillbesleeping.Shepoundedthedoor.“Godownstairs.Gonow!Go!”5段首句Paragraph1：Justatthattime,Jacknoticedtheflamewasreachingup.Paragraph2：Luckily,alltheneighborswentdownstairsandanambulancecame.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者杰克十岁那年的一个早晨，他和姐姐莉莉在家，他们所在的公寓发生了火灾，他们正朝走廊尽头的楼梯走去，这时莉莉停下了脚步和杰克返回去叫醒住在他们隔壁的那位70多岁的老人。9续写思路分析Para1：Justatthattime,Jacknoticedtheflamewasreachingup.由第一段首句内容“就在那时，杰克注意到火焰正在蔓延。”可知，第一段可描写尽管很危险杰克和莉莉努力的去敲老人的门。10续写思路分析Para2：Luckily,alltheneighborswentdownstairsandanambulancecame.由第二段首句内容“幸运的是，所有的邻居都下楼了，救护车来了”可知，第二段可描写他们和邻居合力将老人救出。11续写思路分析续写线索火势严峻————二人并没有放弃敲门——门被推开——老人被送往医院12续写素材可用词汇：行为类阻止鼻孔吸到烟：shieldhernosefromthechokingsmoke/preventhernosefromthechokingsmoke取代：replace/taketheplaceof突然大哭起来：burstoutcrying/burstintotears情绪类快乐的：glad/pleased无意识的：unconscious/unaware13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1]hewascarrieddownstairsandthenrushedtothehospital,whereshefinallycametoherself.（由where引导的非限制性定语从句）[高分句型2]Timeseemedtostandstill,thoughtheywereprobablythereforonlytwoorthreeminutes.（though引导的让步状语从句）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Justatthattime,Jacknoticedtheflamewasreachingup.Frozenwithfear,hestoodrootedtothespot.Hecompre-hendedthegravityofthesituationandheldJane'shandtightly.Bothofthemwerecoughingandtheireyeswerestinging.Timeseemedtostandstill,thoughtheywereprobablythereforonlytwoorthreeminutes.JackbeggedLilytorunforsafetyasquicklyaspossible.Lilytriedtoshieldhernosefromthechokingsmokeandshookherhead.Shekeptpoundingagainstthedoor.Jackburstoutcrying.16范文呈现Luckily,alltheneighborswentdownstairsandanambulancecame.AsenseofstrengthimmediatelyreplacedthemountingfearandanxietyinLily'smind.ShetoldthemMs.Makcikmustbestillintheroom.Theyforcedthedooropenwithalltheirmight.Sureenough,Makcikwaslyinginbed,unconscious.Shewascarrieddownstairsandthenrushedtothehospital,whereshefinallycametoherself.PeopleintheneighborhoodfeltrelievedandLilyandJackwereveryhappy.17范文译文就在这时，杰克注意到火焰正在蔓延。他吓得僵住了，站在原地不动。他意识到形势的严重性，紧紧抓住简的手。他们两个都在咳嗽，眼睛刺痛。时间似乎静止不动，尽管他们可能只在那里呆了两三分钟。杰克恳求莉莉尽快逃命。莉莉试着用鼻子挡住呛人的烟，摇了摇头。她不停地敲门。杰克突然大哭起来。18范文译文幸运的是，所有的邻居都下了楼，救护车来了。一种力量感立刻取代了莉莉心中日益增