2025届高考英语复习读后续写误会故事类+下雨天误以为丢了伞

高考英语读后续写语篇练习误会故事——下雨天误以为丢了伞1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Itwasdark,coldandrainingonDecember24.Jameslefthisofficeandwalkedslowlyacrossthestreettotheparkingplace.Hewasverytired.Hetookouthiscarkeyandputdownhisumbrella.Heputthekeyintothelockandturnedit.Nothinghappened.Thedoorwouldnotopen.ThenJamesrealisedthatitwasthewrongcar.Hiscarwasred,butthisonewasdarkblue.“Ohdear!Imusthaveparkedinadifferentplacethismorning,”thoughthe.Puttinguphisumbrella,hesetofftolookforhiscar.Therainpoureddownandtheeveninggotcolderandcolder.Havingwalkedroundallthesidestreets,Jamesdidn’tfindhiscar.Hewasexhaustedandangry.“Someonemusthavestolenmycar,”hethought.“NowIshallhavetogotothepolicestationandreportit.”Thepolicemantherewasveryhelpful.HewrotedownadescriptionofJamescarandthentookhisaddressandtelephonenumber.AsJameswasleaving,thepolicemanwishedhimamerryChristmas.4续写原文“Christmas!”thoughtJames.“Ohno!I’veforgottenallaboutChristmas.Ihaven’tboughtmywifeapresentandnowalltheshopsareshut.WhatshallIdo?”Whenwaitingforthebus,hegotwetterandmoremiserable(难受的).Hehadnoumbrellaandtherainfloweddownintohiscollar.Hefeltlikeburstingintotears.WhenJamesgothome,hefoundhiswifestandingonachairandlookingforsomethinginaveryhighcupboard.“Whatareyoudoing,Jessica?”heasked.“ThebiggoldstarfortheChristmastree,”Jessicareplied.“Justamoment.I’llgointothegarage(车库)andfetchthestepladder(梯子)foryou,”saidJames.WhenJamessaw.thewell-decoratedChristmastreeandlotsofpresentsunderit,hefeltevenmoreunhappy.“Whatalovelytree!”hethoughtashewentdownstairs,“Ihaven’tevengotonepresentforJessica.I’velostmycarandI’mcompletelywet.Imusthavelostmyumbrella,too.”5段首句Paragraph1：AsJamesopenedthegaragedoor,hespottedsomething,frozeninamazement.Paragraph2：Pleasedtoknowhiscarwasthere,Jamesenteredtheroomwiththepresent.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了主人公James在圣诞节的时候误认为自己的车丢了，心情变得沮丧，没有给家人买圣诞礼物，天下着雨，雨伞也丢了，心情非常糟糕，浑身湿透的回到家里，后来发现车在车库里，警察也找到了丢失的伞，心情变好的故事。9续写思路分析Para1：AsJamesopenedthegaragedoor,hespottedsomething,frozeninamazement.由第一段首句内容“詹姆斯打开车库门，发现了什么东西，惊讶地僵住了。”可知，第一段可描写James发现自己的车在家里，也找到了给妻子的礼物，以及他的心情变化。10续写思路分析Para2：Pleasedtoknowhiscarwasthere,Jamesenteredtheroomwiththepresent.由第二段首句内容“詹姆斯很高兴知道他的车就在那里，他带着礼物进了房间。”可知，第二段可描写James愉快地和妻子在一起，警察找到了雨伞，James非常高兴，沐浴在圣诞节温暖的气氛中。11续写思路分析续写线索找到了车——发现了小猫——给妻子送礼物——警察找到了雨伞——高兴起来12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①冲上楼：rushupstairs/dashupstairs/goupstairshurriedly②.突然想起：strike/occurto/hit情绪类①.高兴：overjoyed/verydelighted/extremelyhappy13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1].Hesuddenlyrememberedthatitwouldn’tstartthismorningsohejusttookataxitowork.（运用了that引导宾语从句，so连接并列句式）[高分句型2].Puttingthephonedown,JamesgazedatJessica,joywellingupinsidehim.（运用了现在分词作状语，独立主格结构）[高分句型3].BathedinthewarmChristmasatmosphere,JameswalkedovertoJessicaandhuggedhertightly.（运用了过去分词作状语）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现AsJamesopenedthegaragedoor,hespottedsomething,frozeninamazement.Insidethegaragewashisredcar.Hesuddenlyrememberedthatitwouldn’tstartthismorningsohejusttookataxitowork.Jameswasoverjoyed.HewasjustabouttorushupstairsandtellJessicathegoodnewswhenheheard,“Meow!Meow!”Helookedinsidethecarandtheresatasmallkittenwithpointedearsandgreeneyes.James’eyesweregluedtothekittenforafewminutesandabrilliantideastruckhim.“ThisisforJessica.”Hepickedthekittenup.16范文呈现Pleasedtoknowhiscarwasthere,Jamesenteredtheroomwiththepresent.“Thisisyourpresent,”saidtoJessicahappily.“Oh,thankyou,darling.I’vealwayswantedakitten,”herfacelitup.Justthenthetelephonerang.Itwasthepoliceman.Jameswastoldthathiscarhadn’tbeenfoundbuthisumbrellawasgotinthepolicestation.Puttingthephonedown,JamesgazedatJessica,joywellingupinsidehim.BathedinthewarmChristmasatmosphere,JameswalkedovertoJessicaandhuggedhertightly.17范文译文当詹姆斯打开车库门时，他发现了什么东西，惊讶地僵住了。车库里是他的红色汽车。他突然想起来今天早上还没开始上班，就打车去上班了。詹姆斯喜出望外。他正要冲上楼告诉杰西卡这个好消息，这时他听到：“喵！喵！”他看了看车里，坐着一只尖耳朵和绿色眼睛的小猫。詹姆斯的眼睛盯着小猫看了几分钟，突然想到了一个绝妙的主意。“这是给杰西卡的。”他把小猫抱了起来。18范文译文很高兴知道他的车在那里，詹姆斯带着礼物走进了房间。“这是你的礼物，”杰西